Grammar
The grammar is pretty good in this stories. Maybe there were typos I missed, but I didn't see anything too nitpicky.
9/10
Plot
There are not many people willing to delve into the darker side of story writing. Especially not when it comes to Nazis. This story was a bold move, and I really like the fact that Writer207 has taken this risk.
I've always enjoyed the dark, heart-wrenching stories. This fanfic is definitely one of them.
9/10
OCS
There aren't any ocs in this story other than the narrator. But we don't get a lot of information about him, seeing as how he is simply there to tell the story. That being said, he is interesting, despite not having much info on him. I'm curious to see how things play out, and I look forward to seeing if we get any more information on him. Why is he telling us this story? What inspired him to do so?
6/10
Cannon Characters
I think the canon characters are beautifully done. Of course, these are our heroes Earth X versions, so of course, they are slightly different and more bigoted than our favorite peeps from Earths One and Thirty-eight, but that's just as well. They fit perfectly into their environment, and I love seeing the contrast. It's interesting to see how the way we're raised really does shape us.
If you're raised in a healthy home with a loving, encouraging family, you can become a superhero. If you're raised in a terrible environment that wants to destroy people for petty reasons...well you'll be a Nazi. Sadly.
8/10
Writing Style
There is a lot of emotional impact with this kind of stories, and I think Earth X really does this well. You can feel the characters' hurt and hopelessness. You can feel the urgency in the narrator's voice. The book is very detailed, and it has a unique journal entry kind of format. Not everyone can pull this style off.
9/10
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