Grammar
The grammar was pretty okay for this story. I didn't see anything I care to nitpick at. Except for one instance in which the dialogue was back to back. Example: "Hi, Phineas." "Hello, Isabella."
But every other time the dialogue was done correctly, indenting whenever a new person spoke.
8/10
Plot
This was an interesting storyline. The ending was a nice touch. Though, I am confused as to what happened to Deadshot. Did he get away? Did they capture him? Will he be returning?
6/10
OC
There wasn't an Oc here.
N/A
Cannon Characters
The canon characters were pretty decent. At least, I didn't see anything too out of character for them.
8/10
Writing Style
M
y only criticism is the detail. There's a lot of dialogue, but not enough detail. Some descriptions describing the surroundings would help better visualize the scene, and some inward thoughts and feelings would help better connect with the characters. (Remember show don't just tell!)
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