Stardust

by Dragonfire prime

Stardust is the sister of Optimus Prime and Megatron. She chose Optimus over Megatron, which was Megatrons last straw. His Precious little sister chose his "perfect" brother over him! Now she followed him after the cube, only to get lost and shrunken into a human baby, adopted by the Witwicky's. This story is written with Jessica from Qoutev. WE DON'T OWN TRANSFORMERS

4. EVERYONE READ THIS IF WANT YOU UPDATE

Ok. So, I just got this review from a Guest on my story STARDUST,this is it.

I'm not sure what to think about this. There were parts where I laughed because it was funny and some parts where I cringed. Ever heard of "cuteness overload" before? Too much of it is not good.
I'd advice you to try and write in paragraphs and not in one wall o text with one free line in between. That way you can add drama and suspense to your story. It generally makes it more alive.

This goes for ALL my stories

For one, this chapter , chapter 2, is SUPPOSE to be cuteness overload. She's an innocent kid, who loves her big brother unquestionably. Second, I do not write in paragraphs because ALWAYS does something to my chapters, causing a whole bunch of NONSENSE to be placed in between, EACH AND EVERY SENTENCE. To me it is easier to fix the mistake when it is like I do, though i DO sometimes write a paragraph or two.

So, I would be great full if, one: SIGN IN TO YOUR ACCOUNT, or if you don't have one, MAKE ONE, if your going to complain about something. TWO: If you don't like how i write, DON'T READ IT!

Thank you

Dragonfire Prime