Stardust

by Dragonfire prime

Stardust is the sister of Optimus Prime and Megatron. She chose Optimus over Megatron, which was Megatrons last straw. His Precious little sister chose his "perfect" brother over him! Now she followed him after the cube, only to get lost and shrunken into a human baby, adopted by the Witwicky's. This story is written with Jessica from Qoutev. WE DON'T OWN TRANSFORMERS

12. Again?

Once again, I have received a not so nice comment from a guest. I don't care if I get a negative comment, I only ask you have a account.

The Reveiw:

I tried to like this really i did. Its so cringey. And then authors notes in the middle of your story to comment like and subscribe to a youtube channel. That belongs on youtube not here. I mean one authors note about is fine but i feel like you go overboard. I feel like a middle schooler is writing this.

This story needs a complete rewrite. And its a shame because your summary is so good and i love your idea. I'm sorry if i ruin your day.

But I will ask you to read the WHOLE story before saying it needs a complete rewrite or that you feel I go overboard in regards to my channel, for its only in the sixth and seventh chapter. Twice, once in the end note and once when Star is mentioned to be going on youtube on the sixth chapter, than in the very last sentence in the end note of the seventh chapter. 2 out of 10 chapters have it, I wouldn't call that overboard.

As for the middle school student comment. If you will notice in the description or almost every other chapter, there are two authors for this story, and I try to not change my co-authors chapters to much, or else what is the point of having a co-author. We communicate but we are not in the same state so we cannot talk every time.

While on this topic. We started this story smack dab in the middle of our junior year of high school. For those who don't know, Junior year is when you start studying for the big tests called the S.A.T's taking place in the March/April months. Which can decide weather or not you get into the college you want. Besides that, I went to a trade school where we did a full regular high school year of work, in half the time. Than your trade work (Mine was Marketing, Management, and Entrepreneurship) and depending on your trade, you had more theory/book work then in your classes. In my trade we ran a store, learned to advertise, do financials, merchandising and all the good things that go into running a business.

So in short i did 4 times the work in 1 year. plus sports practice/games, planning and gathering fundraiser money, making sure everyone got there fundraiser items, planing and coordinating outfits, props, models,lights, sound, and voice overs for the DECA fashion show in march, while getting ready for two different competitions, one for DECA and one for SkillsUSA all in the same month each year. Then comes senior year, we here we did our big senior projects for academics and trades, finding colleges and applying, and worrying about getting my last math credit because of a stupid program called ALEKS. And even after all that I graduated with straight A's, Best in my marketing class and many more awards under my belt! One being one where only an art student and a music student gets at each school. 2 students for 1 school, and I get the art one!

Now we are in college, adjusting to not going to classes everyday, yet doing the same amount of work! SO If your gonna review negatively GET AN ACCOUNT , SIGN IN, AND USE YOUR PEN NAME or I'm just gonna assume you have not guts.

Bye!

-Dragonfire Prime