Write: a Phanfiction

by dils.whisk

"You know, as much as I'd love to be rich, I don't think I'll ever believe money can buy happiness." "And why is that?" "Well, I can barely pay for my groceries but I still ended up with you, didn't I?" Or in which Dan is an aspiring writer with money troubles and Phil is a wealthy artist. Triggers: night terrors, mild anxiety, mentions of murder

11. Editing Results

I have finished editing! Here's a list of what changed:

1. The first day of this story takes place April 17th

2. The bills are due may 29th

3. Dan owes 1,500 pounds fro not paying rent for the past three months, plus an additional fine of 400

4. I combined chapters 4&5 so now they are just one big chapter.

5. The friend who gave Phil a ride when he was stuck at Dan's house is now named Al, not Chris

6. Plus a bunch of grammar/spelling mistakes have been corrected, and I added/removed sentences for clarity. ?

Not gonna lie, I do feel like it might be best just to reread what has already been written? I mean if you have a great memory then don't worry about it.

Otherwise, my updates have been slow and I've edited so if you want to make sure you know everything then go for it.

Updates will be more frequent from now on!