Title: Clopfic Ending On Crack

Premise: MLP: FIM. After Rarity and Twilight have spent a romantic night together, they recieve a visit from an unexpected guest. Crack. Implies sex, suicide, and rape.

Personal Comments: This is the original ending to a clop fic I wrote called Twilight's Toy. It got a lot of negative criticism though, so I fixed it up there and put the ending here.


Both mares done, Twilight crawled back on top of the bed, and lay down next to Rarity. Both were sweaty and still panting. They just lay beside each other, enjoying each other's heat.

After a few minutes, Rarity final spoke. "Does... doesn't that beat your research project?"

"By a landslide," Twilight answered, exhausted. "Just hope I didn't hurt you this time either."

"It's only for a few minutes, the goes right away. No worries," Rarity answered with a smile. "But so tomorrow night, may I be on top?"

"Sure," Twilight answered.

"Thank you," Rarity nodded. "Well then, good n-"

BANG!

Suddenly, before Rarity could finish her sentence, the door swung open with a bang, and in bounded a large ape-like creature with a big black hair-due and wearing a yellow Hawaiian shirt. Both mares nearly shrieked at the sight of the creature.

"Ey there, laddies," The ape exclaimed in a salty voice. "I heard downstairs you two were havin' some fun up here!"

"Gutt!" Rarity shrieked.

"Get the buck out of here!" Twilight shouted as she and Rarity prepared to zap the monkey with their magic.

But Gutt was faster. He whipped out a medalion, and zapped a beam at the two mares. Instantly, they were both tied up in rope (separatly), and a curse mark was placed on their tummies to stop their magic.

Unable to move, a terrible thought suddenly came to Twilight's mind.

"What did you do with Spike?" She demanded.

"Huh? The dragon?" Gutt repeated. His voice suddenly turned sympathetic. "Oh, him. Poor guy. My boys and I came in tonight and found him hanging on a rope ouside for some reason. Must've seen something really bad."

The two mares were suddenly taken by guilt as the news reached them.

"So now the rest of the crew is cooking his body up and eating him," Gutt continued. "Anyway, why don't the three of us have some fun now?"

He ripped off his shirt, exposing his black fur coat, and crawled up onto the bed with the two mares.

Their eyes widened in horror as the ape approached them. With one hand, he felt each of their smooth cheeks, already feeling an erection developing as he imagined what he was about to do.

The two mares started sweating and whimpering with fear.

"Ey," Gutt grinned. "I'm gonna enjoy this!"