Title: Rainbow Dash Versus Bullet Nose 1

Premise: MLP: FIM. Rainbow Dash is locked in a dog with my OC, Bullet Nose.

Date Posted: 12/17/12

Personal Comments: Bullet Nose is a Wonderbolt (formerly Canterlot Guard) that I've been developing for my story, The Adventures of Thunder Strike and Ink Blot, in which he is a close friend and ally of Thunder Strike. You could say that Bullet Nose is to Rainbow Dash what Thunder Strike is to Twilight Sparkle.

The idea for Bullet Nose sort of originated from Bane from The Dark Knight Rises, whom he is very similar to. He even wears a gas mask. He is just as good of a flyer as Rainbow Dash, despite being older, and is in some ways better.

Hey, have you seen the DKR Bane Outtakes? There's some really funny stuff in there! We got Bane trying to tell his men to eat more strawberries, making Mortal Kombat references, and best of all, there's a part where he raps in the stadium LMAO!


Rainbow flew through the clouds, zig-zagging back and forth, until she finally thought the attacker was confused enough. She zipped back towards where she left him, only to find that he had vanished.

Before she could slow down, he sprang out and collided with her. She managed to recover from the heavy blow and zipped back towards him, but he blocked her next punch.

After another minute of zipping through the clouds, trying to loose track of each other, Bullet Nose finally sprang out of one cloud and rammed into Rainbow. He clutched her throat, strangling her ever so slightly as they flew through the sky together.

"Ah, you think the sky is you ally?" he asked mockingly. "You merely adopted it. I was born in it. Raised by it. Molded by it. My hooves didn't touch the ground until I was fully-grown stallion. By then it was nothing to me but a hard surface!"

As he said those last words, he slammed Rainbow into the side of a mountain, making her grown in pain.

"The winds betray you," he continued, "because they belong to me!"