Title: Rainbow Dash Versus Bullet Nose 2

Premise: MLP: FIM. The second confrontation I came up with between Rainbow Dash and my OC Bullet Nose.

Date Posted: 12/17/12

Personal Comments: For info on Bullet Nose, see the previous chapter. In this chapter, let's say that Thunder Strike and his men have a plan that involves destroying Cloudsdale, so the mane six arrive on the scene to try and stop him.

Originally, Bullet Nose was his real name, but then after I saw Wreck-it Ralph, and with the incredible villain and that twist behind him, I thought of this new idea: To make him a former wonderbolt, one of the best ever. Can't decide which name I'd rather give him though: Turbo Blur or Black Blur. One of those...


Rainbow Dash could no longer hold in her rage. She leapt off and charged straight at Thunder Strike, ready to pound his face into the cloud.

Before she could reach him though, a new hard object smashed into her from the side.

The two went sprawling through the air, punching and kicking until they finally crashed into a new building, Rainbow pushed off and slammed into the wall. Even though they were fluffy clouds, it still hurt somewhat.

She looked up to see Bullet Nose facing her. She quickly hopped to her hooves as he spoke.

"So, you came to die with your city?"

"No. I came to stop you and your buddies!"

Nothing else to say, Bullet Nose charged at her, grappling her, and slamming her through the other wall as they started to brawl once again.


Finally, the two crashed into the mountain. The impact made the moutain shook, and the rock they were on loosened and started sliding down the cliffside.

Bullet Nose was crunched into a crevice. Rainbow was on top of him, and started punching his face in blind fury, not allowing him to get up.

She punched and punched, until finally, she knocked his mask right off. It rolled along the side of the rock, as Bullet faced her.

She recognized his face instantly, and stopped punching him. She could only gasp.

"You..." She gasped.

The pegasis grinned back at her. "That's right, Rainbow," He snickered. "It's me! Black Blur! The greatest flier ever! And I did NOT take over the wonderbolts to let you, those dumbass friends of yours, or that loose screw Soarin take it away from me now!"

He quickly reached up, did a wrestling maneuver to pin Rainbow under him. He then snapped her wing, making her yelp in pain, and then kicked her harder into the rocks as he propelled himself up into the air, leaving her to slide down on the rock.