Torn 7

I am going to warn readers again this is my interpretation of Eric and in this story he is not a nice guy (so far he isn't). Eric is an asshole. Again you have been warned. If it triggers any feeling my suggestion is to STOP reading. That is all.


Walking into the training room for the day you almost stopped short when you saw Eric and Four standing side by side. Heat rose to your face as you reflected on the orgasms both men have provided to you. Both their eyes found yours as you shuffled in with the rest of the initiates. You looked at Four and then Eric. You almost smiled at the satisfaction of seeing a bandage around Eric's middle finger. You were glad that you had cause pain to him this time even though the bite probably didn't even faze him one bit. Four began telling everyone the training schedule for the day.
"I saw him last night by your bed." Jen whispered to you. "What did he want?"
"I was going to tell you later. He wants me to get my clit pierced." You whispered back.
"Initiate! Are we boring you?" Four shouted to you. You snapped your head in his direction embarrassed to be called out.
"No sir."
"20 laps!" He shouted his eyes reflecting anger towards you.
"But-"
"30 laps! You want to keep going?" Four asked angrily. You shook your head as you started your laps. You knew this was Four getting back at you for going to see Four as you ran past both men you looked at Eric and saw a small smile play on his lips. Asshole!

During training Eric and Four were both short with you and you started to think you imagined everything that happened between you three. You were heading back to the dorm to get ready for dinner when Eric passed you and made a point to look down at your nether regions before looking back up at you with his eyebrow raised. Eric was making a point to let you know to follow through with what he told you to do last night.
"Can you go with me to the tattoo parlor now?" You asked your best friend. Jen's eyes widen.
"You are going to do it?"
"Yes. " You shuddered at the thought of what Eric would do if you did not.

"Ok. Take a deep breath." The tattoo artist instructed. You squeezed Jen's hand as the artist quickly and efficiently pierced your clit with a barbell hood piercing.
"Fuck!" You gasped as a sharp pain coursed through your body and tears welled into your eyes.
"Are you ok?" Jen whispered. You nodded your head yes. The artist gave you a paper with instructions and the first thing you noticed was no oral sex for two weeks. You don't know why but that upset you.
You were tender and sensitive below and you and Jen had to take your time on the way back to the headquarters. As luck would have it as soon as you turned the corner to head to the dorms you both ran into Eric. Eric looked you up and down and noticed the discomfort on your face.
"Get lost!" he snapped at Jen. Jen was about to protest until Eric shot her a look that caused her to back down and shuffle off.
"Don't talk to her that way!" You snapped.
Eric ignored you, grabbed your hand and jerked you in a quiet stairwell. Eric pushed you up against the wall as his lips came crashing down on yours. Your first kiss with Eric you thought as you sucked on his hungry tongue. Eric took his knee and parted your legs, causing it to brush against your swollen clit and a gasp escaped your mouth, which Eric swallowed with his mouth.
"You a little sensitive down there?" He asked as he nipped your neck, pressing his knee harder on you causing you to shudder. "I asked you a question initiate."
"Yes." You moaned as Eric lapped at your neck. You yelped as Eric lifted you up and wrapped your legs around his waist. Eric pushed his pelvis against yours and rubbed up against your new piercing just right. You found yourself trembling, holding onto Eric tight and moaning his name as he slowly began to dry hump you.
"I can't wait to be inside you." Eric moaned against your neck just before he took a hard bite down on your tender flesh. Eric's bite was hard enough to send spasms through your body but not hard enough to break flesh and you found an orgasm pending as he continued to rub against your sensitive flesh. Eric felt your nails claw at him through his t-shirt and knew you were about to come so he increased his tempo against you. Eric lips covered your mouth as a breathless screeched escaped your mouth as you came. Eric was hard as rock against you and he contemplated taking you right then in the stairway. He shook his head no as he wanted you in his apartment for your first time. After the first time it was fair game. He would take you anywhere he damn well pleased.
Eric's fingers found their way into your pants as you rode the wave of your orgasm.
"I want to feel your piercing." Eric nodded his head in satisfaction when he felt your barbell hood piercing.
"You did good." He rewarded as he licked his fingers of your sweet and salty juices. "Remember what I said I don't want you anywhere near Four." He warned before disappearing down the hall.


Your eyes flew open and you quickly sat up as you were finally done with your last fear simulation in front of Jeanine and other leaders. You quickly looked for Four and Eric. They were both not paying attention to your simulation. Your heart sunk as they had been ignoring you the past two weeks. You didn't know what you did to deserved to be ignored. You did as Eric had asked and got your piercing. You knew why Four was mad so you tried to stay out of his way but it seemed his anger for you swelled more and more each time he saw you. Four helped you out the chair.
"You did good." He told you flatly.
"Can we talk?" You whispered to him quickly looking over at Eric who was talking to Jeanine.
"There is nothing to talk about." Four snapped.
"Yes there is. You are pissed at me."
"You made your choice."
"I had no choice Four." You whispered to him. You did not want to lose Four. Just before Four could respond Eric called the next initiate effectively breaking up your conversation with Four.

You started to sweat as you sat in front of Max, Four and Eric. You were a nervous wreck wanting to know what your final rankings were. All three pairs of eyes looked at you causing you to squirm in your seat.
"Y/N we here at Dauntless would like to welcome you to our faction. You have ranked number two." Max informed you. You held back your smile.
"Thank you sir." You said looking only at Max. If Four and Eric wanted to ignore you, you could ignore them just as easily.
"We have decided you will best serve this faction as a leader. You will start out at the bottom of leadership and hopefully work your way up." Eric told you. You did not acknowledge him but kept your gaze on Max. You could feel anger radiate off Eric but he was keeping himself in check in front of Max. You had a feeling he would not let the disrespect you just showed him go.
"You are dismiss Y/N. Leader Greg will show you your new living quarters as well as your cubicle where you would be working. Again, welcome to Dauntless. Make us proud." You nodded at Max and felt the heat of Eric's and Four's gaze as you walked out the door. Jen was waiting next and you both hi-five each other as you passed one another.


You and Jen squealed as you both ran around your new apartment. You both were roommates in a small two-bedroom apartment and you both were even sharing cubicles as Jen was also along with Charles chosen for leadership. It was going to be so nice to have your own room and a soft bed. You both had only a small bag of belongings so you both were moved in an settled in record time.
"Charles and Mike are right next door." Jen said giddy. Her and Charles had become close the past couple of weeks and you envied your friend and her stable relationship.
"Has either Four or Eric said anything to you lately?" Jen asked as you both busied yourself in the kitchen making dinner. You both were in tank tops and boy shorts and it felt great to be so free.
"Not one peep. I can see why Four would be angry at me because I went to see Eric but Eric I don't understand. I chose him so why is he mad at me. I even got my clit pierced for him for God's sake. I am beginning to believe him bringing me to orgasm in the stairwell was a figment of my imagination."
"Well be happy that neither one of them are bothering you. We are Dauntless!" Jen gave you a tight hug as you both laughed at both of your happiness.
You looked in the mirror and smiled as you noticed your bruising were finally fading. You pulled your hair up and sighed with happiness. You were Dauntless, You were a leader, your best friend shared and apartment with you and your bruises were finally fading. Life was good. Pulling your hair in a ponytail to crawl in your bed for the night you heard a knock at the door. You wondered who that could be. It was getting pretty late. Maybe it was Charles to come see Jen. Jen knocked on the bathroom door and when you opened it and saw her face you knew instantly it was Eric.
"He's looking for you." Her voice was a little hoarse. You frowned as you walked to the front door and found Eric in your kitchen. You knew he took it upon himself to let himself in.
"What do you want?" You asked stopping a few feet away from him keeping your distance.
"Come with me." He ordered looking at you in your t-shirt and boy shorts.
"What for?"
Eric rolled his eyes. "I am still your superior Y/N. Now come with me."
"Let me get dress." You started to head back to your room.
"You are fine the way you are."
"Eric I'm not walking through the halls in my sleepwear."
"I am right below you. We don't have far to go." He told you sternly looking at you daring you to challenge him.
"Fine!" You sighed and followed him out your apartment.
"Where is Raven?" You asked as Eric opened his door.
"Out." Was all Eric offered. Eric shut the door and turned to look at you.
"Where were you when I showed up a couple of weeks ago?"
"Take off your shirt." Eric demanded ignoring your question. You stood in front of Eric and slowly took off your shirt. It was happening.
Your nipples were already hard with anticipation. Eric's eyes roamed all over your body taking you in as he imagines the things he would do to you tonight. Eric pushed you against the wall in his dining room and grabbed a nipple in his mouth. Your fingers rubbed through his hair as he licked nipped your breast, lifted the underside of one of your breast and bit down causing you to groan. The way you were moaning and squirming against the wall Eric figured he could bring you to release by just feasting on your breast. Eric took a nipple in his mouth, pinched, and flicked at the other nipple with his index finger and thumb and had you moaning his name. You felt yourself become wet as he continued his feast on your breast. Between the pinching with his fingers, licks, sucks and careful bites you exploded with and orgasm and your body fell into Eric's arms. You could not believe you just had an orgasm from just the touching of your breast. Eric let you ride out your wave against his hard body but when he felt your body had calm down he took you over to the kitchen table, turned you around to where your back faced him and slammed your body on his table. Your head bounced off the table giving you a instant headache. Eric tore your boy shorts off and you could hear your favorite pair ripping apart.
"Eric!" You gasped as he threw your shorts across the room. He pushed your body up against the table and you frowned as your stomach pressed hard against the edge of the table. You heard your breathing as Eric was quiet standing behind you and you felt heat rise to your ass as Eric gazed at your plump ass standing up ready for him.
Eric got on his knees and you felt Eric's warm tongue lap at your butt cheeks causing you to squirm just before you let out a yelp when Eric clamped down on your butt. Pain and pleasure coursed through your body as Eric would lick and kiss your bottom and then bite down hard when you least expected it. Your fingers clawed at his table as your nipples strained against the wooden table. Eric grabbed your hips tightly and pulled you down where your ass was hanging off the table. Eric placed his head between your legs and a spasm coursed through your legs when Eric's tongue reached under you and licked your clit.
"Wider." Eric murmured against your clit just before he sucked the hood piercing in his mouth causing a low moan to escape your lips. Eric's tongue flicked back and forth on your piercing causing your legs to become weak. The piercing rubbing up against your clit with Eric's warm tongue felt better than anything you have felt before. It was sending little tremors through your body.
"Stay still." Eric said as he inserted two fingers inside you causing juices to spill down your thigh.
"I can't." You whined. Eric slapped you hard on the ass shocking you.
"I said keep still."
You whined a little as you tried your best to lock your legs into place. You held onto the sides of the table with a death grip as Eric continued to thrust his fingers inside you and play with your piercing with his tongue and teeth. Eric's fingers found the wall of your pussy and started to massage your g-spot.
"Oh my God!" you moaned and squirmed under him. Eric took his other hand and slapped your ass again and you knew to be still. It was hard as you felt your rising orgasm from the stimulation of your g-spot and his tongue still on your clit. You squeezed your eyes shut and tried your best not to thrash about as an orgasm seized your body. You felt juices squirt out of you into Eric's mouth and he lapped up every drop. Before you realized it, Eric had pulled from under you and turned you around to look at him. He took off his shoes, pants and t-shirt and you gasped as you sat naked on his kitchen table at his overwhelming sexy body. You knew he would not have an ounce of fat on him and he did not disappoint. His body was amazing and as he walked up to you, stood between your legs you found your hands rubbing all over him. You sighed as you felt his muscles ripple underneath your touch. Eric let out a soft moan when your fingernail grazed a nipple. You were about to lean over and put his nipple in your mouth when he grabbed your arms, turned you around and slammed you back down on the table. You felt Eric's cock slap against your ass cheeks and you arched up instinctively to him. Eric had wanted you for a long time. Ever since he saw Four talking to you, he became intrigued by you and as he had gotten to know you he craved you more and more so he wasted no time in plunging into you. He pulled back, with one swift thrust pushed in your pristine tunnel, and broke through your innocence. You screamed like a banshee as you felt a pop and pain gripped your body. Eric did not waste time for your body to adjust he just started pounding in you. He literally was ripping through you and you began to cry. It hurt so bad it was indescribable. You gripped the sides of the table again and were in tears as Eric fucked you from behind. You watched as your tear drops fell on the table and Eric pulled your ponytail causing you to arch up.
"You. Are. Mine. And. Mine. Alone." He growled in your ear and thrusted in you hard with each word.
"Say it!" he demanded in your ear before biting your earlobe sending more pain throughout your body. "Say you are mine!"
"I'm yours. I'm yours Eric!" You nearly screamed as his thrust quicken. Eric slammed you back down on the table and gripped your sides and as he pounded in you, his nails clawed at your back drawing blood while his other hand found your clit. Oh God! You thought as he assaulted your clit and you began to feel the familiar mounting pressure. The pain of his thrust began to slowly subside as you became wetter and he began to glide in and out of you. You could feel Eric swell inside you and you had a feeling this was a sign that he was about to come. His thrusts quicken and became more forceful and you began to squirm under him as he pulled on your piercing. After a few more thrusts Eric came and came so hard he bit down on your right shoulder so hard he broke skin and caused you to scream again but surprisingly with pleasure as an orgasm ripped through you at the same time. Eric fell on top of your back, you felt him lick and kiss at the places on your shoulder, and back that were bleeding. After a few moments of stillness he abruptly pulled out of you and disappeared to his bed room. You slowly lifted off the table wincing in pain. You could feel the stickiness of your juices and his cum seeping down your thighs. Eric returned and handed you one of his lounge pants and looked you over. You were already starting to welt at the places he bit and scratched at. He started to get hard again looking at you standing in front of him naked.
"Get on the couch and open your legs." He barked. Not wanting to disappoint him, you did as you were told. Eric wasted no time and plunged in you with such force he moved the couch causing pain to sear through you. You were already wet with your juices and his cum and he began to pound in you with little regard to your cries. You made the mistake and tried to push him off as you were still not use to his size, only to have him grab your wrist and pin them above your head. He bit down on your neck and drew blood again. You cried harder as he mercilessly fucked you. He was hurting you and the pain tore at every fiber of your body as the tip of his dick hit your cervix. Could you ever get use to him ravishing you this way?
"Eric it hurts!" You told him between your cries.
"You are Dauntless you can take it. You will take it!" He growled at you.
You were Dauntless and you vow to take all Eric had to offer. Eric's fingers found your clit and piercing and pulled and flicked on it as he continued to pound in you. You were finally feeling pleasure and you felt an intense orgasm approaching. Just as your orgasm hit you watched Eric as his body tensed and his face contoured as he came squirting several more loads in you. Eric fell onto you and you found yourself caressing his back. He just tore you in half so why were you laying under him caressing him as if he was a gentle lover. Eric groaned as he got up.
"You need to go now." He told you as he watched you get up off the couch and put on his pants. You didn't argue and looked for your t-shirt.
"Take some pain meds and wear a pad." He told you as you pulled on your shirt.
"Pad?" You asked wondering what HE could mean by that.
"Don't act stupid Y/N. A sanitary napkin. You will need to wear one the next few days and take the pain meds every four hours." He instructed.
You nodded , sucked your breath in to prepare for the pain and opened his door and walked out. You instinctively looked over at Four's door. It was closed and you sighed with relief and rushed to the stairwell to get to your apartment. Once safely in the stairwell you leaned against the wall and sighed. Eric just took your virginity. You knew he would be rough and rough he was. Your hand went up to one of the places on your neck he bit and you felt blood. You shuddered as you thought of the orgasms he sent you through. It was exhilarating. You felt a sharp pain in your core and knew you needed to get some pain meds. Sucking in your breath you slowly climbed the stairs to your apartment.