Just wanted to give a little edit on the story. The Freshman series seems like it's meant for the teen audience anyways so obviously I wanted to pretty much keep it in that section. There might be more "mature" detail, but this whole story is basically the same as what you see in the game but I'm just giving it more details. And, let's be honest, we're spending 20-30 diamonds and some of these are hardly even sex scenes lol.
I'm also hoping I can actually attract an audience because then I feel like I have no one telling me how I can make it more entertaining and then I just get writer's block...
I really hope I can get some reviews in, I'll answer any questions and maybe if I can get enough positive feedback, some trivia about specific facts I'm adding, along with the reason why I'm tweaking my character a bit. I already gave one reason why in chapter one, I really really love Anna Kendrick and when I played this series, my MC has dark hair and green eyes so I kind of want to give her the aesthetic that her character had in Pitch Perfect. I want a character that is very stand-offish when you're introduced to them, and slowly sheds that harsh exterior. The only thing I hate when they give a character this trait is they have the belief that "oh they find something that makes them happy in the end, right? Well let's make them completly open in the next part of the story." No. The importance of keeping that trait is I want her to remain a mystery to the audience. I want people to continue to want to know what's going on in her head. It's realistic, really.
I'll get to typing up chapter two and hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow at the latest. I hope I get some reviews so there are questions I can answer!