I am just shocked to read the reviews...

Aditya(shocked): tu...tum?...

Abhijeet(angrily): yeh kis se baat ho raha tha?

Aditya(scared): kisise bhi to nahin...

Abhijeet: achcha tumhari darling tumhara koi nahin lagti...naam kya hain us kismatwali ladki ka?...

Aditya(with hesitation): Rhia...Rhia Dubey...

Abhijeet(sternly): hmmm...achcha naam hain...(with naughtiness)...kab mila rahe ho mujhe apne bahu se?...jeth ka aashirwaad to lena hi chahiye...haina?...

Aditya jumped on him and said...

Aditya: tum...mazak ke bhi had hoti hain...

Abhijeet: aain!...is mein kaunsi mazak?...tum to usse pyar karte ho...haina?...(Aditya blushed)...achcha achcha sharmao mat...bolo kab mila rahe ho?...aur yeh mujhse kyun chapaya ja raha tha?...

Aditya: mujhe laga tha ke tum gussa ho jaoge...aur phir pitayi kar karke mujhe mar hi doge...

Abhijeet: pitayi to hogi...itni badi baat mujhse chupaya kyun?...mere bahu ke bare mein...(he picked up a pillow and hit Aditya with it)...bolo...

Aditya picked up another pillow and hit Abhijeet with it and said...

Aditya: khabardar jo aiyanda Rhia ko bahu kaha to...

Abhijeet(laughed): kahunga...hazar baar kahunga...lakh baar kahunga...BAHU...BAHU...BAHU...

Aditya again hit him with the pillow...Abhijeet too counter attacked...soon they got engaged in a pillow fighting...with loud happy screams...

Abhishek and Avni's joint photograph was smiling on the wall...

Two weeks later

Abhijeet and Aditya were sitting in a restuarant...waiting for Rhia to arrive... Abhijeet asked to his twin...

Abhijeet: waise karti kya hain tumhari yeh mehbooba?...

Aditya: bhaiya...tumhe maine baarbaar kaha hu ki use mere mehbooba mat kaha karo...woh to bas mere...

Abhijeet(completed): khas dost hain...haina?...

Aditya undestood that his twin brother was teasing him...he said in same tone...

Aditya: haan haan bohot khas...

Both the brothers bursted out in loud laugh...the rest people in the restuarant were starring at them due to their similar appearence...

Abhijeet and Aditya were sipping their cold coffee when they heard a middle aged man was saying to his companion...

The man: dekhlo in dono ko...jab shadi karega tab ek patni se hi dono ka hi kaam chal jayega...aur baap maa ke paise bhi bach jate hain...ek ke kapde dusre ko pehnao to koi problem hi nahin hoga...paise bhi bach jate hain kitna...Faida hi faida...bohot hi faideman rishta hain yeh judwaa bachche...

Abhijeet could not tolerate anymore...he straightly marched to their table...and shouted in anger...

Abhijeet: sale...aise aankhe phad phadke kya dekh rahe ho tumlog?...judwaa bhai dekhe nahin ho kabhi?...aur kya kaha tumlogo ne?...rishton ki keemat?...faideman rishta haan?...humlog rishte ke liye taraste hain...aur yahan tumlog rishton ka profit ya loss calculate kar rahe ho?...

The man: jo sach tha wahin to kaha...agar zyada phat phat kiya na to yahin zinda gad dunga yahin...

Abhijeet: gadke dikha...agar gad saka to gadke dikha...

Both of them stood up simultaneously...Abhijeet slapped the right one and hit the left one's neck with his fist...both of them fell on the plates from which they were having food...

Abhijeet picked up one's fork and stabbed it in...the man screamed in pain...

The man: aaah!...

Abhijeet: cheekhta kyun hain re?...tere hath mein thodi na ghausaya hain?

The man opened his eyes and discovered that the fork was there stabbed on the table...he did the greatest mistake now by considered that his opponent's target was not perfect...he stood up and tried to punch his nose...

Abhijeet bent to avoid the punch and kicked his abdomen...he hit another jaw with his elbow...now both were defeated soldier...both only joined their palms before him...Abhijeet said...

Abhijeet: kabhi rishton ka aapman mat karna aur unka sauda to kabhi nahin...sachche rishte ke kabhi koi keemat nahin hota...

He returned to his table...Aditya put his hand on his shoulder and said...

Aditya: calm down bhaiya...itna gussa kyun ho gaye aap?...

Abhijeet(in chewing tone): main sab seh sakta hu bhai...sirf apne rishton ki insult nahin...

Aditya patted his back and only sighed...he knew how sensitive his elder brother was towards his relations...

Rhia entered the restuarant in smart steps...she is a modern and beautiful lady clad in a three quarter jeans and butter yellow top with a long plait behind...she came in front of the brothers' table and was puzzled...she said in confused tone...

Rhia: tum dono mein se Aditya kaun hain?...

Aditya: Rhia Aditya main hu...

Abhijeet(with naughty smile): nahin nahin Rhia Aditya main hu...

Aditya(shocked): bhaiya...

Abhijeet: kya bhaiya...yeh kaisa mazak hain?...bhaiya to tum ho...

Aditya: bhaiya please...

Rhia: yeh kaisa ghatiya mazak hain?...ja rahi hu main...(turned to leave)...

Abhijeet(with hurry): are are Rhia...ruk jao behna!...Aditya to yeh hain...main to iska twin elder brother hu...Abhijeet...

Rhia: nice to meet you Abhijeet...

Abhijeet: same to you...are khadi kyun ho?...baitho na...

Rhia sat down...and looked at the twin brothers with sharp eyes...she said...

Rhia: achcha...bohot achcha...ab aap dono bataiye...aap mein se bada kaun hain...aur Aditya tum Abhijeet se mile kaise?

Aditya: kismat se itne din door rahe...kismat ne hi milwa diya...

Abhijeet: pura pandrah minute ka bada hu main...

Aditya: isliye ghar mein inhi ka raaj chalta hain...tab lagta hain ki bhagwan tumne mujhe...

Abhijeet(with excitement): duniya mein kyun bheja?

Aditya: jee nahin pandrah minute pehle kyun bheja?...judwaa mein to jo pehle paida hota hain woh chota hota hain...to main kyun nahin woh?...

Abhijeet: woh beta rote nahin na...jo ho gaya use hum kabhi badal to nahin sakte na?...achche bachche rote nahin...

Aditya(cutely): bhaiyaaa!...

Rhia was silently watching the pure love between the twins...she was happy to get such loving,caring and understanding family member like Abhijeet...now she said...

Rhia: ok ok bas bas...Aditya tum Abhijeet ko bhaiya kyun kehte ho?...bas pandrah minute ki hi to bade haina yeh?...

Abhijeet: yeh thoda sanskaari hain...(seeing Aditya's fiery glance corrected himself)...matlab maine hi inhe kaha hain...

Rhia(shook her head): very bad...this is not fair...aaj kal to ek do saal ki chote bade bhi naam se bulate hain...yahan to sirf pandrah minute ka diffrence hain...

Abhijeet(saluted her): jo hukum begam sahiba...aap hi bol dijiye ke hume kya naam use karna chahiye...kahin yeh to nahin?...(with tease)...woh ji sunte ho?...

Trio bursted out in laughter...Rhia controlled it with difficulty and said...

Rhia: no way...Abhijeet tum Aditya ko 'Adi' bolo aur Aditya tum Abhijeet ko 'Abhi' bulao...how is it?

Abhijeet got lost in memories...Abhi?...a name very close to his heart...some lines echoed his his mind...

Abhi...

Shopping karwao na Abhi...

Abhi dekho aisa kuch bhi nahin hain...

Tum mere Abhi nahin balki ek dhokebaaz ho...

Abhijeet shivered remembering the last line and closed his eyes...Aditya immediately put his hand on his shoulder...Abhijeet grabbed that hand tightly...

After a few minutes he calmed down...Rhia said in worried tone...

Rhia: are you ok?...sorry agar main kuch galat bol diya to...

Abhijeet: no it is ok...bas mere past ke kuch dard bhari yaadein yaad aa gaya tha...

Rhia(with concern): are you alright now?...

Abhijeet(with sweet smile): yeah sure...but Aditya you can't call me Abhi...please...

Aditya: then can I call you Jeet?...

Abhijeet: yes certainly...(in mind)...us naam pe to sirf tera haq tha na yaar...dekh apne bhai...judwaa bhai ko bhi us naam se mujhe bulane ka haq nahin diya main...(to Rhia)...tum kya karti ho Rhia?...

Rhia: mere papa ka ek assylum hain...main wahan ka doctor hu...roz do ghante wahan baithti hu...phir apni clinic mein...

Abhijeet: that's nice...

At that time a group of men burst entered the restuarant and encircled their table...Aditya with horror recognised the leader as Bhaiji...Bhaiji said in cruel tone...

Bhaiji: Aditya Srivastav aur Abhijeet Srivastav...judwaa bhai...duniya mein aaye the ek saath...jayenge bhi ek saath...aaj...(looking at Rhia)...are yeh khoobsurat chidiya kaun hain?...

Rhia(in firm tone): can not you talk politely?...you uncultured brute...

Bhaiji(super angry): humko angrezi pasand nahin...

Abhijeet(with smirk): aata to pasand hota na?...padhai likhai to pasand hain nahin...pasand hain to bus gundagardi...anpadh gawar zaleem...

Bhaiji grabbed Rhia's hand...Abhijeet was about to stand but Rhia signalled him to be quiet and said firmly...

Rhia: hath chod mera...

Bhaiji: agar nahin choda to?...

Rhia: dekhega kya karungi?

Bhaiji: haan haan dikha dikha...cheekhne ke alawa kar bhi kya sakti hain?...kamzor aurat jaat haina?...

Rhia,all of a sudden,hit his shoulder joint with her free hand's fist and next moment with a small jump,kicked his abdomen...

This incident was followed by a series of incidents...Bhaiji fell down on ground and looked at her with such an expression as if he was watching the eighth wonder of world...Abhijeet whose facial expression was hard now softened it and smiled...Aditya who had coffee cup in hand spilit half of it on the table...the rest men in Bhaiji's team looked at each other's face...Rhia said...

Rhia(in teasing smile): aur ladna hain kisiko?...

One man attacked him with a rod...Rhia bent to avoid that attack and punched his abdomen...and next moment gave a back kick on a second's abdomen...a third tried to punch her...she held the hand...twisted it and spattered him on floor by rotating him from above her head...next moment punched a fourth's nose...and with a jump kicked Bhaiji's face again...

All the men,all of a sudden,rushed out of the restuarant...Rhia sat down again...Aditya stammered...

Aditya: t...tum...i...i...itni...

Rhia: is tarah huglao mat...main karate ka state champion hu...In jaiso ko harane mein mujhe paanch minute bhi nahin lagta...

Aditya(scared): hey bhagwan bhachale mujhe...

Rhia(astronished): kyun?...kya hua?...

Aditya: jis ghar mein do do karate experts rahenge mere saath...wahan mera kya haal hone wala hain wahin soch raha tha...

Abhijeet: nahin yeh style mein socho...(dramatically)...ab tera kya hoga Kalia sorry Aditya?...

Three of them bursted into laughter burst...

ONE MONTH LATER

Abhijeet and Aditya entered in Dubey Mental Assylum...Rhia was showing them the patients admitted there...the treatment procedure...Abhijeet was feeling numerous stings in his heart as he too experience of living in assylum...

Rhia stopped before a cell in which only one patient was present...she pointed towards the patient who was sitting aside and said...

Rhia: yeh humare hospital ke sabse strange patient hain...yeh humesha shant hi rehte hain...inka yaaddash ja chuka hain puri tarah...par inhe beech beech mein bohot panic attack aata hain...tab violent ho jate hain bohot zyada...otherwise he is a loving person...

In the meantime...the person with long hairs and beard came and stood in front of the gate of the cell...he looked at the twin brothers and forwarded his hand with a polite...

Patient: khush raho beta...

Aditya held the hand he had forwarded with sympathy...Abhijeet was only starring towards him...all of a sudden he closed his eyes and fell unconscious...

End of the chapter

kya hua hain Abhijeet ko?...achanak behosh kyun ho gaya woh?...tabiyat theek haina?...koi beemari to nahin hua?...ya phir...us patient se kuch relation hain kya is ghatna ka?...janne ke liye stay tuned...

Rhia kaise lagi surprise?long review please...

I am just shocked to read the reviews...bechara Aditya...woh apni mehbooba se baat kar raha tha aur aaplog use villain thehraye...hehe...

dear guest: maine aapke wish puri kar di...

Jinlogo ne mere os pe review kiye thanks to them...but missed some of my regular reviewers like Zebadi,Anam Abhi's fan,Shambhavi,Dhara etc a lot and was happy to see new reviewers...thank you...

Dear guest reviewer: no Abhijeet is not always perfect...none and noting can be cent percent perfect...but he was not all alone guilty...others were wrong too...

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