As per many reviews (some more or less hate comments but "shrug") and careful (or not so careful, wasn't really necessary) reviewing of my own content...
I've decided to rework nearly the entire story, grammatically I mean. The plotline itself will stay the same, no major changes will happen, but I will retell the story with much more adult and matured writing style, so everyone can enjoy it.
I do not usually ask for reviews, but I would like some of you to re-read my reworked first chapter and give me your thoughts.
I will keep you updated on what's going on with the story.
My new uploading schedule will go somewhat like this:
5 reworked chapters and one new chapter, repeat. This will continue until i've redone the story.
I'm aware this might frustrate some of you, but I cannot stand how bad my grammar is during the earlier chapters and I simply wasn't mature enough at the time to understand my shortcomings.
Have a good day.