I want to thank all of you for the reviews and follows but before I go I wanted to say I corrected Marinette´s name and got a beta reader for the next chapters. The beta reader will be only for this story and I will introduce him or her next chapter.

Also, if my mistake on Marinette´s name bothers you. Please avoid my other stories since I do make that particular mistake many times since I prefer Marinete over Marinette, and I know it´s wrong but it´s my stories and I don't want to rewrite all my them just because of it. But for you sweet followers of this story, I not only correct but won´t make that mistake here.

Can I just ask if instead of comments just saying the mistakes made if I could get a review about the story itself and not just about my terrible writing? Just so I know if you actually like my story or not.

Adrien rejoiced thinking to himself this was his lucky day. Ladybug was just seen on the top of the Eiffel tower. Almost like she was waiting for him to ask her out, Adrien thought. He raced there with the hope and excitement only a young love could bring.

Despite the beautiful view, the only thing he could see was her.T he night light made her look so beautiful that he wondered how long could he keep admiring her like that. Before it got creepy and when he finally was sure his checks didn't flat outmatched her suit; he approached her carefully. Noticing how sad she looked. It didn´t match such beauty with so much sadness and it broke his heart.H e began to move even closer but she still didn´t react.

He eventually sat near her. Ladybug finally looked at him for a brief moment before sighing

"Hello Chat"

Then her gaze returned to the Parisian skyline.

"What´s wrong?"

He asked desperately wanting to know what was so clearly upsetting her. He had to know so he prayed that maybe she could for the first time ever; open to him.

But she without looking at him, stayed quiet for a moment struggling either or not to tell him but then noticed Chat began to look like he was leaving, disappointed that she was keeping like usual her distance. He got up, looked at her, grabbed his staff, turned around. she spoke

"I understand now how you feel. The boy I like asked my help to plan a date with another girl."

Chat quickly sat now even closer to her and placing gently his hand on hers asked

"That couldn't have been easy, my lady, so what did you do ?"

She then moved, coming closer to Chat before resting her head on his shoulder.

"I decided to help him. I just want him to be happy"

Chat grew a smile without his rival, that only meant one thing and before he himself could think about a better way to put it, he asked:

"Does that mean I have a chance? "

Ladybug got up, looked at him, grabbed her yo-yo and prepared to leave. DAM IT! He had blown it. All the advice Marinette had given him seemed blanked now. What could he do? He didn´t have the notes with him and he seemed to be failing once again without them. He desperately begged

"No, wait! Please"

His sobbing plea made her stop and glance at him trying to control the tears beginning to form in his eyes. Taking a long breath, he then began:

"I didn't mean that. I am sorry. I swear I didn't mean to sound like that. It's just I came here hoping to ask you out; show you how special you are and make you see that I could be the guy for you. I even went out and asked some advice on how to ask a girl out to a friend and then you tell me that the boy you want is in love with someone else and I just thought maybe this was my chance. But I am sorry because trust me when I say I know how it feels knowing the person you love loves someone else and I shouldn't be happy about it and I hate that he hurt you like that "

He finished staring at the view instead of her. His eyes couldn´t bear to watch her leave him like she always did. So, he watched the view instead. Seeing those people running to their loved ones, seeing romantic couples walk across gave him a certain melancholic feeling. The feeling of being alone in a city full of people. The feeling of everyone knowing him but not really knowing him at all. Everyone had someone except him. How could a city of love be so cruel to one of his heroes?

Ladybug pondered what to do? She could just leave but that would hurt Chat and she couldn´t do that to him. She understood how much it hurt. That's why she never gave him hope because that would only make it harder for him. She pushed him away so it wouldn´t hurt as much because she did care and worried about his feelings. She could tell he was speaking from the heart. So, she guarded her yo-yo back and sat again.

Chat breathed, his honesty had worked and that was something Marinette had told him, right? He wished she was there, so she could help him out. Maybe he wasn´t alone anymore. Ladybug placing her hand over his told him:

"I am sorry Chat. I never knew this hurt this much and I am sorry If I ever hurt you like this. "

Both stayed quiet. Each with their feelings inside.

Chat feeling sad that his lady was hurt. He wanted to do something to make it better, but she would never let him do it. She would never let him take her to date or the movies or even play video games, something he knew both shared interested in. Maybe Marinette´s charm wasn´t that lucky after all, he was using it, but he would probably still end up alone. There was nothing he or Marinette could ever do to change that.

Ladybug taught about how much Adrien asking for advice hurt her. How she wasn't the girl he wanted. How she could never be and how that´s probably how her partner Chat felt every day. He loved her so much he even asked advice on how to get a girl.

Suddenly Ladybug began laughing and Chat looked at her puzzled:

"What's so funny? "

"Just the idea of you, so romantic and expert of girls, going and asking someone for dating advice. It's funny that's all!"

She explained to him with a bright smile.

"I am glad I made you laugh. If you said yes, then maybe you could see just how perfect our dates could be. With her help and my amazing charm, it would be the best date ever "

"I'd like to see that "

Ladybug response came with a laugh, but Chat became serious

"Is that a yes? "

He waited for her response with hope. Ladybug normally would have said no at this point or come up with an excuse not to answer but her delay had to mean something. She was thinking about it. Every second she paused the more hope grew in his heart.

Ladybug taught of reasons to say no but she couldn't find any or maybe she didn´t want to find reasons not to. Adrien was moving on and so should she. She couldn't even talk to him so how would she go on dates with him. Plus, Chat was always there for her and him for some miraculous reason made her feel better. So, she pushed all her fears and reasons not to.

"I guess that a single date wouldn't hurt. I mean if A….the boy I love can date someone else then maybe I can try dating other people. Plus, after that promise of the perfect date, I want to see what you can do. "

The smile grew on Chat´s face as he heard her answer. Ladybug then realized what she had said. It down on her but before she could say something Chat excitement spoke:

"Yes! I promise you won't regret it. I have to go plan everything. So, at 8 next Friday can you do it then? I have a spot on my schedule just for you? "

Ladybug bubbled and Chat so happy left to plan their date. He took at her bubble and assumed that meant yes. Ladybug was left once again on the top of the Eiffel tower now with a new love problem.


Don´t know when the next chapter is coming since I still got to write it, send it to the beta reader. Don´t worry as soon as it is ready I will post it.