The Great Reckoning

by Hellfighter98

A young trainer has been dealt a stinging defeat when he was on the cusp of victory, and some of his friends have had enough. Joined only by the few who stayed loyal to him and his Pokemon, he sets out to prove to his detractors how wrong they were. OC x Harem. Based off of JTZ29's works, I highly recommend reading him if you like this story.

6. Chapter 4: The First to Fall

I'm back and I've brought with me Chapter 4. This chapter will contain the first lemon so here's to hoping I do well. Also, there will be a custom move in one of the battle scenes. With that out of the way, let's get back to the story.

Max (15)

2 Days into the Hoenn trip, Petalburg Woods

Andrew and his gang had been travelling for two days now, the blonde trainer deciding that Petalburg would be the first gym to be in his cross-hairs, and they were now deep in the Petalburg Woods. As the group enters a clearing to set up camp, Andrew spots someone, and his fists clench, turning his knuckles white. "Andrew, what's wrong?" asks Dawn. "Look ahead," Andrew manages to get out between gritted teeth. The bluenette follows his eyes and whispers, "Go easy on him". Andrew nods and barely manages to hide a sadistic grin. He steps forward and barks out, "Max Maple, I challenge you to a battle!" The black-haired boy whirls around and a smirk soon graces his face. "Well, well, well, look what the Delcatty dragged in, I didn't expect a weakling like you to return. And by the way, what's Dawn doing with a loser like you? Same goes for you Lucas, Barry, Rosa, and Leaf." Dawn and the others were insulted by this, "For your information Max," Dawn snapped, "Andrew here has done more since he left than you have since you started."

"Yeah, and I could beat a Machoke in arm-wrestling" retorted the younger boy, "I accept your challenge, prepare to lose though." Andrew simply smirked, "Your funeral Maxy." "Forget what I said earlier, kick his ass sweetie," said Dawn as she kissed Andrew on the cheek. Max saw this and became visibly angry, Andrew knew that Max had always had a bit of a crush on the bluenette, making the older trainer smirk even more, "You're actually dating this idiot? Fine then, I'll have to show you just how weak he really is." "Oh, it's not just her." Max was confused, so Andrew snapped his fingers together, "Oh girls", he said as Rosa, Leaf, Miette, and Giselle all proceeded to give him a peck on the cheek, "These lovely ladies are with me as well" Andrew said with a massive grin, while the girls blushed at his compliment. Max was in shock, Andrew may have been dense, but nowhere even close to Ash, no one could top the Pallet Town native in that regard, but he was still pretty damn dense, or so Max thought. Max eventually snapped out of it and vowed he would show all of them Andrew wasn't as strong as they thought.

"Ay Lucas, ref this one for me," said Andrew, while Lucas grinned and made his way to the center of the battle area. "One-on-six sound good to you Max? ALL six of your's versus one of mine?" asked Andrew. "What the hell's gotten into this moron? Whatever, he doesn't stand a chance against me." thought Max. "This battle between Max Maple of Petalburg City and Andrew Townsend of Sandgem Town will no commence. Trainers, send out your Pokemon." "Gallade, let's go!" yelled Max, as the green Pokemon materialized in front of him.

Giselle turned to Rosa confused, "Why is Andrew like this? I've never seen him act this way." "He never told you?" "Told me what?" Rosa proceeded to explain to Giselle the betrayal and by the end, Giselle was fuming, "How dare they try to make him quit." "Andrew, beat his ass!" she yelled to her boyfriend, "Looks like she found out", grinned Andrew, who winked at the brunette, causing her to put a hand over her racing heart.

"Time for you to see the error of your ways sunshine," said Andrew as he pulled out a Pokeball that dangled on a chain around his neck, "I promised this guy he'd get the first go at the traitors. Alright my friend, time for some shock and awe!" As the flash of light died down, Regigigas stood proudly, towering over Gallade and causing Max to step back in fear. Regigigas turned to Andrew and made a series of beeps, which Andrew interpreted to mean, "Really, the first traitor we run into is the puny one? Too easy." Thanks to Djaf, Andrew's Aura powers had grown substantially, and was now was able to understand his Pokemon much more clearly. "My thoughts exactly my friend, so let's make this quick." said Andrew.

"Gallade versus Regigigas, begin!" shouted Lucas as everyone prepared to watch Max get absolutely decked. "Andrew, I wish to fight him alone." said Regigigas. "Of course" said the older trainer, as he walked to the sidelines. "Too scared to battle?" asked Max, his confidence waning, "Nope, Regigigas here simply wanted to fight you alone, have fun pipsqueak." Whatever confidence Max had evaporated that instant, he had read about the Colossus Pokemon, and a voice in the back of his head began telling him just how screwed he was. Before Max could utter a word, Regigigas had charged Gallade and landed a devastating Focus Punch, sending the smaller Pokemon hurtling into a nearby tree. Max recalled the unconscious Pokemon, and sent out his next one, "Hariyama, you're up." The massive sumo-like Pokemon did his best to look intimidating, but Regigigas simply punched his own palm, causing the Fighting type's eyes to widen in fear.

"Hariyama versus Regigigas, begin!" yelled Lucas. Within seconds, the Colossal Pokemon barreled towards Hariyama and walloped him with a Zen Headbutt. Max was secretly grateful no one else was around to see the son of Norman Maple, widely considered one of the toughest Gym Leaders in Hoenn, get so thoroughly thrashed, especially after talking up a game as big as his. Max returned Hariyama and hung his head shamefully, "I forfeit" he mumbled, just loud enough for Andrew to hear. "What was that Maxy? Speak up a little" said Andrew, putting a hand to his ear, he was going to milk this for all it was worth. "I said I FORFEIT alright! I forfeit!" said Max through his tears. "That's what I thought you said, maybe now you'll think twice before backstabbing someone." Max then looked Andrew dead in the eye and said "I-I'm sorry."

Andrew was taken aback by this, he quickly scanned Max's aura and sure enough, there was guilt and shame. Yes, he wanted to grind Max into the dirt, but he wasn't heartless. He sighed and walked over to Max, everyone expecting him to slap or berate the younger trainer. But instead, to everyone's, including Max's, surprise, he put his hand on the younger boy's shoulder. "W-what?" asked the boy. "Max, I'm willing to bury the hatchet and give you a second chance, you're forgiven," said the older trainer, who was instantly hugged by Max, which he slowly returned.

Once Max had calmed down, Andrew looked down at him, "I wouldn't have done this if I knew you weren't truly sorry," said Andrew as his girls crowded around him. "Sooo, five girls huh?" asked Max jokingly, "Yeah, and probably more if my suspicions are true." The girls simply smiled at this, they wouldn't mind sharing him with other girls, as long as they truly loved him. "Well, I have to go and get ready for my next battle, see you in the Evergrande Conference." "That you will Max, that you will. And one more thing," Andrew said, causing Max to look at him curiously. Andrew's gaze soon became icy cold, "Do not make me regret this, I won't be so forgiving next time." Max shivered in fear and made a mental note that to anger Andrew in that way again would be akin to a death sentence.

A few hours later, the group reached the Petalburg Gym. "You guys ready to start this comeback tour?" Everyone nodded excitedly, when Andrew battled, it could become quite the spectacle. "Hey Mr. Maple!" "Why hello Andrew, it's been a while hasn't it? And please call me Norman, a friend of May's is a friend of our's" smiled the Gym leader. "So what brings you here Andrew?" "Well Norman, I'm trying my luck in the Hoenn League again and I figured your Gym would make a great warmup, so what do you say to a battle?" Norman frowned, "Sorry Andrew, the field took quite the pounding today, it's closed until tomorrow for repairs, but you and your friends are free to stay here for the night." Andrew's face faltered slightly, "Oh well, thank you Norman, it would be nice to sleep in an actual bed for once." They soon realized they would be quite packed, so Lucas, Georgia, Barry, and Bianca would stay at the Maples, while Andrew and the girls would spend the night in the Pokemon Center.

As Andrew and the girls were getting settled in, Andrew heard a knock on his room's door. He opened the door to find Dawn, she looked nervous for some reason. "Hey Dawn, what's up?" asked the blonde cheerfully. "C-can I come in?" "Of course you can." The two sat on the bed and stayed silent for a few seconds, when Andrew decided to break the silence, "Dawn, you alright? You seem a bit on edge." The bluenette smiled at her boyfriend, "Always looking out for me aren't you? That's one of the reasons I love you so much." Andrew simply smiled as the coordinator continued. "In fact," she said pushing him down onto the bed, "the reason I came here is because I wanted to show you just how much I love you." Andrew looked surprised, none of his girls had been this forward before, until he saw her eyes, they were hazy and he could only see one thing in them: lust. Andrew's face went red when he realized what his girlfriend wanted, "A-are you sure this is what you want?" he asked. Dawn simply nodded, "Yes, it is; I want, no, I need you."

Lemon ahead, skip if you want

Andrew needed no further words as he enveloped Dawn's lips in a fiery hot and passionate kiss., his tongue snaking its way into her mouth. The bluenette began to slowly rub her crotch against Andrew's right thigh as the boy directed his attention towards her neck, kissing and sucking as he went, eliciting pleasured moans from Dawn, who took off the muscle shirt Andrew wore as sleepwear. This was the first time she had been really able to get a good look at her boyfriend's body since he returned from Kalos, and she couldn't help but drool. He had grown taller, now towering over her and the others at 5'10, while Giselle, the tallest of the girls, was barely 5'7, with Dawn coming in at 5'5. His shoulders were broader, and while he wasn't muscle-bound, his body was toned to perfection, showing off his pecs and six pack. Little did she know, Andrew was doing the exact same thing, drinking in Dawn's body. She had grown in all the right places, giving her generous curves. He found himself drooling as he removed he black vest and pink skirt.

He then moved to her earlobe, lightly nibbling it, earning even more gasps and moans from the Twinleaf native. "Y-you've earned this" she said, her eyes half-lidded with lust, as she managed to reach around and unhook her bra. Andrew's eyes widened and centered in on the bluenette's luscious and plump C-cup breasts, earning a giggle from her as drool came out of his mouth. A rush of confidence overcame the bluenette as she felt her lover's member throb underneath his gym shorts. "You're so beautiful" whispered Andrew, earning a blush from Dawn as he took the orbs of flesh into his hands, enjoying the soft, squishy feeling, as he heard his girlfriend moan in pleasure, spurring Andrew on even more. He took the small pink nub on Dawn's right breast and placed it firmly between his teeth, causing her to squeal in pleasure. "D-don't stop Andrew" she said as she ran her hand through his blonde hair as he sucked the nipple like an infant, occasionally switching between the left and right nubs.

As Andrew came up to take a breath, Dawn whispered into his ear as seductively as she could, "My turn." as she slowly pulled down Andrew's shorts, revealing his boxers, a massive tent pitched under them. As she removed the final piece of clothing between her and her prize, Andrew's member sprung free, the boy sighing in relief as his tool was released.

Andrew swore he saw his Dawn's eyes light up upon seeing his member. "I-it's s-so big" she whispered excitedly; seeing pictures of one online was one thing, but this, this was something else, the beast attached to Andrew's crotch had to be at least 9 inches in length. Andrew smirked and whispered to her, "And tonight, it's all for you", causing Dawn to shiver. As she began to rub it, she heard Andrew gasp in pleasure; he was no stranger to sexual pleasure, but Dawn's delicate, soft hands were on a whole other level from his own, comparatively coarse, hand.

This gasp spurred Dawn on as she lowered her head onto her lover's shaft, eventually reaching the base, Andrew gripping the bed for dear life as his head flew back, "Holy shit that's good" he groaned, groaning even more as the bluenette moved one of her hands to his jewels, almost losing it right there. A few minutes later, he reached the point of no return, "Dawn, I'm gonna-" the bluenette simply waved him off as she continued her assault, the Sandgem native releasing a loud groan as he fired into his girlfriend's mouth. As she sat up, a few strands of his load dripped down onto her breasts from her mouth. "Dear Arceus that's hot" muttered Andrew as he watched his lover scoop up the remnants into her mouth, his member springing back to life, harder than tempered steel. He gently laid her down and whispered in a sultry voice, "Time for me to return the favor."

Andrew hooked his fingers around Dawn's drenched light blue panties and laid eyes on her glistening maidenhood. Andrew thanked his lucky stars he had read those adult magazines when no one was looking back in Kalos, and dove in. He immediately began tracing her folds with his tongue, causing Dawn to squeal in pleasure as she arched her back, "A-Andrew!". Andrew refused to let up, however, as he plunged two fingers into her folds. Dawn barely managed to hold back a pleasured scream, but what happened next blew her away. Andrew spotted a small nub at the top of her flower; recognizing this as her clit, he immediately began sucking it, causing Dawn to grab a pillow and let out a pleasured scream into it.

"D-don't, I'll go crazy!" whimpered the bluenette, but Andrew didn't listen and kept up the pressure. Less than a minute later, Dawn let out a screech into her pillow as she exploded, drenching Andrew's face in her juices. Andrew couldn't put a finger on the flavor, but it tasted nice nonetheless. He then climbed on top of a panting and blushing Dawn and gave her another searing hot kiss, with one of his hands caressing her right breast. He looked her straight in the eye and said, "We don't have to do this, I'll wait as long as you want to until you're ready." Dawn looked at her blonde-haired lover and smiled lovingly, "I've been ready for you for a long time Andrew" she said softly. Andrew smiled and gently kissed her again. He lined himself up with her slit and slowly began to push. "S-so big" Dawn gasped. Soon, Andrew stopped as he felt the bluenette's barrier, taking one last look as if to give one more chance to back out. She smiled and kissed him, whispering, "Please Andrew, take me, make me yours."

Andrew nodded and thrust forward, his shaft punching through his lover's barrier. The bluenette suppressed a scream as she kissed Andrew feverishly and tears sprang from her eyes, while the blonde stayed deathly still, seeing his girls in pain was something he hated with every fiber of his being. Eventually, the sharp pain went away and Dawn rolled her hips, moaning as she felt nothing but pleasure. She felt tears of joy springing up, she was so happy she was able to give her first time to the man of her dreams. She looked at Andrew and nodded, signalling he could start moving. Andrew complied and he slowly began to move in and out like a piston. Dawn was gripping the sheets for dear life as the pain was replaced with pure pleasure. "Faster Andrew, faster!" she yelped, to which Andrew complied and picked up the pace.

Within minutes, Dawn was reduced to an absolute wreck, her mind too fried with ecstasy for her to say anything other than the occasional moan, expletive, or Andrew's name. Likewise, Andrew was on cloud nine, her insides were gripping him like a vice, he never would have guessed sex would feel THIS good. A few minutes later, Andrew felt himself nearing the end of his rope. "D-Dawn, are you..." In spite of her pleasure-addled mind, the bluenette managed to say "N-no need to - fuck - worry, I'm on -shit- the pill" as Andrew continued to pound her like a jackhammer. Andrew nodded and a few thrusts later, groaned loudly as he unloaded into the bluenette, who in turn exploded over Andrew's crotch, moaning in ecstasy.

Andrew slowly pulled out of a panting Dawn, himself breathing heavily, leaving a trail of their mixed juices pouring out of his lover's slit, and collapsed onto Dawn. "That was incredible" squeaked the bluenette, "You said it" remarked Andrew, "I love you Dawn Berlitz." Dawn smiled as she cuddled up to her lover, "And I love you Andrew Townsend. In fact, I love you so much, I think I want to go another round with you" she said, her eyes still glazed over in lust. She grinned as she felt Andrew's tool rise to attention, "Looks like you want to as well." Andrew simply smirked and rolled on top of the bluenette, ready for Round Two.

Lemon End

Dawn's eyes fluttered open and looked up to see the sleeping form of her blonde-haired boyfriend. She smiled as the events of last night came rushing back, her first time was with the love of her life and she couldn't have been happier, "He was so good, he was gentle, but also aggressive" she thought. She simply laid there, cuddling with her boyfriend under the sheets, until she felt him shift. She smiled as his eyes fluttered open, his cadet blue orbs locking onto her sapphire eyes. "Good morning my beautiful Sapphire" he said softly, causing Dawn to blush at the nickname for her. "Last night was incredible" she said, "You were incredible" said Andrew, causing the bluenette to blush even blush even more.

"I'm so happy I was able to give you, the love of my life, my first time." Dawn said happily. Andrew gently grabbed her chin and made her look at him, "I'm happy I saved myself too. You were the first girl I fell in love with, the first one I kissed, it only seemed fair that you'd also be my first time," said Andrew softly. Dawn hugged Andrew tightly as tears of joy poured out of her eyes and kissed him with all the love she had, he had saved himself specifically for her. For a few minutes they just laid there, Andrew gently stroking Dawn's luscious blue hair, and Dawn snuggling into her lover's strong, muscular arms, relishing in how safe she felt in his embrace.

Eventually, they did get up, shower, together of course, and made their way to the cafeteria. There they met the rest of Andrew's girls, who looked at Dawn, who was hanging off Andrew's right arm, with knowing and jealous stares. They had agreed that Dawn should be the first to be with Andrew, since she was the first to capture his heart, but that didn't mean they couldn't be jealous of her. Dawn simply blushed and the girls quickly dragged her off to gossip about the previous night's events, causing Andrew to sweatdrop, but he couldn't help but chuckle as he saw their faces get redder and redder as Dawn recanted last night's events. Once everyone had eaten their fill, the six headed off to the Petalburg Gym to meet up with Lucas and the others. Lucas and Barry noticed the glow Andrew and Dawn seemed to have and quickly put two and two together, shooting Andrew knowing smirks. Andrew simply gave them a look that said "You know it".

"Good morning Norman, Caroline" Andrew said to the older man and woman. "Hello Andrew" they responded, Caroline giving Dawn a hug; due to the bluenette's close friendship with May, Dawn was like a second daughter to Caroline. "So Norman, you ready to battle?" asked Andrew. "Indeed I am, the battlefield's ready to go." "Then what are we waiting for? Norman Maple, I challenge you to a battle!"

A few minutes later, Andrew and Norman were facing each other on the battlefield, with Lucas as the referee, while the others were in the stands, Dawn in her cheerleader outfit, with Piplup and Buneary supporting. "This 3v3 battle between Andrew Townsend and Norman Maple will now commence." "Escavalier, sally out!" yelled Andrew as the armored Pokemon clashed his lances together in challenge. Norman had never seen this Pokemon before, but it looked powerful. "Slakoth, show your strength" and a sloth-like Pokemon the size of a Luxray appeared.

"Escavalier, use Signal Beam!" the Cavalry Pokemon complied and connected his lances at the tips, a white ball forming between them, a rainbow-colored beam quickly shooting out of the ball, hitting Slakoth. "Slakoth, use Flamethrower", the sloth nodded and unleashed a jet of flame, which the knight-like Pokemon quickly dodged. "Escavalier use Fell Stinger!" ordered Andrew, as Escavalier rammed into Slakoth, catapulting him into the wall, slightly denting it. When the dust cleared, Slakoth was shown to be out cold, while Escavalier glowed red, indicating his Attack had increased. "Slakoth is unable to battle, Escavalier wins."

Norman reached for his next Pokeball, "Alright Vigoroth you're up," he said as the evolved form of Slakoth began pounding his chest to assert his dominance, to which Escavalier again clashed together his lances. "Escavalier versus Vigoroth, battle begin!" "Vigoroth use Bulk Up!" Vigoroth began flexing, raising his stats, something Andrew wasn't about to let happen, "Escavalier use Drill Run quickly!" Escavalier charged the sloth], but Vigoroth finished before contact was made, "Vigoroth use Fire Punch!" Vigoroth cocked his fist back and slugged Escavalier in the face with a flaming fist, sending Escavalier skyward. "Use Shadow Claw as he comes down" ordered Norman. Vigoroth complied and sent the fainted Pokemon sprawling towards Andrew. "Escavalier return, you did well." "Alright Ptra, rain fire!" Andrew yelled as the orange bird let out a screech as he came out.

Again, Norman was surprised with a Pokemon he hadn't seen before. "Vigoroth versus Talonflame begin!" "Ptra, let's start simple, use Flamethrower" ordered Andrew. Ptra nodded and unleashed a torrent of flames at Vigoroth, burning the Normal-type in the process. Norman smirked, seeing an opening, "Vigoroth use Facade". Andrew's eyes widened, "Ptra get out there!" he yelled frantically, but Vigoroth was too fast, and he slammed into the bird, leaving him heavily damaged. "Gotta wrap this up quick", Andrew looked at Ptra sadly, "Alright Ptra, lets wrap this up, Convocation of Fire!" roared the blonde. Ptra let out a mighty screech, then shot towards Vigoroth, wreathed in fire. Norman had no time to react, and Ptra crashed into Vigoroth at breakneck speed, leaving both out of commission, "Both Pokemon are unable to battle, trainers call out your last Pokemon." "Slaking, let's end this" Norman said as the massive ape appeared on the battlefield. "Norman, is that the Vigoroth I faced the first time I battled here?"

"Yes, why?" asked Norman confused. "Good, because I got someone here who wants payback. Rapidash, lead the charge to victory!" cried Andrew as a majestic horse materialized in front of him. The Fire type immediately recognized his opponent and began snorting angrily, pawing at the ground. He had lost to Slaking the first time Andrew had battled in Petalburg, back when Slaking was a Vigoroth and Rapidash was a Ponyta, and now it was time for payback. "Slaking versus Rapidash, Begin!" yelled Lucas. "Slaking, use Hammer Arm" ordered Norman, and the massive ape Pokemon lumbered towards the fiery horse, who gracefully dodged. "Counter with High Horsepower" said Andrew; Rapidash grinned and as he jumped out of the way of the Hammer Arm, sent his rear hooves crashing into Slaking's chin, sending the larger Pokemon sprawling back, causing the entire Gym to shake. "Use Rest" commanded Norman, and Slaking closed his eyes, regaining a large amount of his health.

"Use Megahorn while Slaking's asleep, keep up the pressure", Rapidash nodded and hurtled towards Slaking, his horn glowing green. Slaking barely budged, even when the fiery horse rammed into it at over 100 MPH, only slightly wincing in pain, and woke up. "Slaking use Bulldoze" said Norman, and the Lazy Pokemon slammed its fist into the ground, causing a boulder to spring upwards and slam into Rapidash, doing heavy damage. "C'mon buddy, I believe in you, you have to get up." said Andrew. Rapidash responded with a neigh, looking at the megaring on Andrew's wrist. "You think it will work?" Rapidash neighed again, which Andrew took to mean "I am not losing to this guy again, it's worth a shot." "Alright buddy, if you say so, let's give it a whirl" said Andrew as he pressed the stone in the center of the bracelet. For a few seconds, nothing happened. Then suddenly, Rapidash was engulfed in a pink light, and when it died down, everyone had a look of shock on their face.

Rapidash didn't look very different, but he had sprouted wings on either side of him, his flames seemed more intense, and his horn was longer (A/N: imagine a flaming Pegasus). Everyone could feel the power coming off him. Rapidash reared upwards and whinnied, pawing the ground, ready for action. Norman was stunned, he had never seen a Pokemon mega evolve before, and this one looked powerful. "Alright Rapidash, let's end this. Show off your strength with Flare Blitz." Rapidash whinnied and sped forward at blistering speed, ramming into Slaking at full speed. Even though the massive ape-like Pokemon was waiting for him, he was by no means ready for him as Rapidash ducked underneath Slaking's right arm, which he had swung out to stop the charging horse, and rammed his head upwards, catapulting him into the wall. With a resounding thud, Slaking hit the wall and slumped down, clearly knocked out.

"Slaking is unable to battle, Rapidash wins!" said a still stunned Lucas. "Holy shit that was awesome" thought Andrew. He went over to his flaming destrier and congratulated him, "You were amazing my friend, excellent job." Rapidash neighed in appreciation and nuzzled his master, earning a laugh from the boy. Norman snapped out of his stupor and walked over the Andrew. "Well done Andrew, you gave me quite the fight. I haven't had fun like that in a while, here's your badge." But Andrew refused it, "I already have it Norman", Norman sheepishly scratched his head, he was so stunned by Rapidash's power that he must have forgotten Andrew had already beaten him once. As the two men shook hands, Andrew thanked Norman for the battle and his hospitality, "I must get going, I have places to be and battles to win. It was great to see you again. And if you see May, tell her we said hi". Norman smiled and watched with Caroline as Andrew and his group headed off to the next gym on Andrew's list.

And that wraps up Chapter 4. That took a while, I gotta say. Anyway, I hope I did well with the lemon, hell I'm probably adding another one in the next chapter. I hope I also did well with the battles. I hope you guys don't mind the custom mega-evolutions, but even if you don't, I have plans to add more. With that said, I'll see you guys later.

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Moves

Convocation of Fire: Flame Charge + Giga Impact