Author Notes:
I would just like to take the time to thank everyone for the amazing feedback to Danno's little girl. I have decided to write a story based on Ranno and the possibility of them getting back together. I have the first chapter up which is called 'To New Beginnings'. I hope anyone that has an interest in reading it really enjoys it.
Now, I don't mind negative reviews on my stories about things you think shouldn't be there or going in the wrong direction/character doing something out of character or any kind of technical pick up, however if you just don't like the ship I am writing about and you are just planning on writing a review solely to pick on the ship itself, then don't bother reading/reviewing because it is not going to make yourself happy reading something you don't like and it is not going to make me happy reading such a negative review picking on a ship I enjoy.
I had a nasty review just picking on the ship and making comment about hoping Rachel gets a terminal disease or gets killed in a horrible way and that has been a trigger for me because of recent personal events in my life. My Mom was just recently in the last two months diagnosed with breast cancer and I really was upset with it and disgusted that someone would write like that regardless if it was written about a character that is fictional. To wish a terminal illness on anyone even if it is not a real character is just going too far in my opinion.
I also wanted to thank you all individually all as well.
Stefrosacarnevale:
Thank you, I appreciate your words.
Sabine68:
Thank you so much, your words mean a lot to me especially considering you haven't seen the episode but still felt you were right there in the scene. I do enjoy seeing Danny and Rachel together, they have a very long and complicated history but that is why I find it so interesting.
SteveMcGarrettLover:
Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words. I am in fact going to continue this, I have created a new story for the Ranno ship called 'To New Beginnings' and to appease your McRoll ship, I have a story called 'Winds of Change' which is about the month that Steve was in Montana with Catherine Rollins.
Alex Lover:
Knowing that you aren't a big Danny fan and you still enjoyed it so much means a lot to me.
Thank you as well for your honest opinion on McRoll as well. Not everyone is going to agree on every single ship, so I appreciate your honesty there.
Guest 1:
I agree with you there that it needed a little more especially with how nothing more was said about the other girl's condition or him apologizing to Danny and Rachel about how he attacked them and their daughter without knowing the full circumstances because Grace was actually doing everything she could to look after and protect this girl. It is why I decided to bring Katie's Dad back for a simple scene where he is apologizes to Danny because I did feel that should have been in there.
It seemed like it from the end of the episode that they might do something with Ranno.I have written It from the perspective that Melissa broke up with Danny however like you I am looking forward to see what is going to happen with those two characters because we haven't seen Melissa since season seven.
Guest 2:
I am really saddened to read that your only take away from this story is all about Ranno when it was not even primarily about those two. It was hinted at, but not the primary reason for writing it. It was about Danny struggling with his emotions about the possibility of losing his daughter.
I would have messaged you privately to convey my feelings about this review but since you have decided to remain anonymous, then I can only hope you read this update. I am not going to address any of what your thoughts are about Ranno as you are entitled to your opinion as I am as well.
What I wanted to address with you was how you spoke about wishing a terminal disease or for her to die in a horrible way. As a daughter of a woman who was only very recently diagnosed with breast cancer and currently undergoing chemo, I was very offended and upset with your wording here.
I was thinking of deleting your review but I didn't want people to think I was someone that only keeps positive reviews and deletes any negative reviews so it will be remaining there, however please be more careful in future of what you say because you never know what someone else is going through and how your words might affect someone.
