What Just Happened?

by ZmbMadragon

A blacksmith comes to the land of Equestria. This blacksmith however, knows things, and finds himself in a bit of a pickle. Why? WHY! He cannot utter profanities, and it is driving him mad! Well, lets see how he handles himself in the land of ponies and magic. Rated M due to descriptive gore. (Rewritten under the name Battlesmith in Equestria. Why?)

8. Important

Important announcement.

I am rewriting this story due to the pure fact that after rereading many times, it does not feel like something that I would write.

While I do like a good romance this one was touching on a number of cliches that was ruining it for me, and couple this with the fact that my OC was way too much of a John Doe with too few flaws that I didn't feel like writing it anymore. And so I plan to rewrite the story having it run a different direction than the one I was taking it in.

The skinny of my new revamped story is that, surprise, it's a human being transported to the My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic niverse. This human will become a pony yes, and he will be a blacksmith but he won't have a magic satchel or something like that, and his combative skill will not ly in the use of weapons but rather his fists.

Why fists? Anthro ponies of course.

I know. Very few people will like the story due to that detail and few more will like the fact that I am getting rid of this one and starting afresh, and I am sorry for that, but this story just wasn't going anywhere no matter how I tried to write it.

Again I am sorry for having to do this but I hope that the rewrite will meet some people's expectations.