Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter in any way shape or form all rights belong to one our Queen.
Time for reviews and for some reason they are all from the same first person.
Tsukikageshi: Jk has one story that's good. You really need to branch out. There are writers with amazing, well-written stories, even interconnected events and the world between series set in the same world. Might I suggest Anne McCaffrey?
If you think JK is queen... Trust me on this. Also... as much as I like harry potter I'm old enough to remember the scandals that were jk being an uppity bitch that made little school children cry for drawing 9 3/4 on there hopscotch. Among other things.
So... being a fan of the series doesn't oblige me to have a nice opinion about her. There's also the contradictions to the original stories. Like claiming Hermione isn't described in the book as having a skin color(her skin is described). The only time she ever came out with a legit bombshell was once before she had spent decades capitalizing on the same series and a decade declaring details instead of just writing another book. One time. And it was because someone asked. Dumbledore being gay, and that one had her book banned quite a few places. The initial response from governments and Christian churches was that if they weren't scandalized it was a popular fantasy novel, they were after and there were gatherings to burn piles of the books because of that.
Back then you could not simply come out and write that openly or confirm it at all. Dumbledore is literally more sparkly than Lockhart and despite being head of his house, he never sought duty to create a bloodborne ere. If you know anything about British aristocracy you know a sparkly old head of house with no wife, not so much as a romantic interest in any woman ever... generally it's not "talked about" but if you don't know he's gay... you're ignoring it. By her own world sitting the seats he does for his 'house' rather than his brother means he's head of house as that's what heads of house do, and as wizarding society works much like old British aristocracy... you can actually explain why a lot of the higher class hate him. He didn't even attempt to carry on his house, and that is essential, betrayal to his house, also... he's about as open as it gets. You really don't get any more shiny/sparkly, not in the entire series, as with Dumbledore. He's all but declaring himself without doing so and at that point, he's old enough people just leave him be. Hardly anyone still alive is even old enough to question him without it being disrespect anyway.
So with that, nobody was surprised. The stuff after... she started that crap and I was tuning her out. Didn't need it then. Don't need it now.
Seriously. It's on really good series... but there are more and better writers. I recommend every pern series books. Dragon riders of pern... although my introduction pern books are what I'll always favor. Probably because I was in a horrid family situation and related to the character. The harper hall trilogy comes to mind tho.
Seriously. As good as jk wrote One series, she's only ever really done the one. Anne has so much stuff interconnecting and sometimes you only understand a reference because you read them all again after the first time. It's all so much bigger than you realized, which makes it so much better just when you think that's not possible to do.
If you think jk is Queen, then by those standards Anne McCaffrey is a goddess of writing. And there are other writers like her. Not as many as I'd like but they do exist, and ever so humbly they blow blowhards like jk and Meyers out of the water without any intention or effort towards doing so.
So as fond as I am of harry potter, and always will be... read other stuff too.
Dragon riders of Pern(series)and Harper Hall(trilogy) I very much suggest. All the Pern books really. The Queens Own is good reading as well and the Sword of Truth series. The last two mentioned, the bad guys don't pull punches like kid villains and they tackle complex hard issues while telling their stories, so make sure you are ready to handle that before you read them. Amazing books and stories though.
Jk is not queen or god of writing etc, but yes her ego is definitely exactly that big. She is her own biggest fan. Seriously. Love harry potter, just don't limit yourself to just jk rowling.
Me: It was a joke I don't think Jk was a queen I just put it there as a joke for people to laugh at sorry if I offended you in any way
Tsukikageshi: I actually like the training times. it's a good expression of the fact his intentions are to study even if he's avoiding classmates and whatnot.
Me: Thank you but that was chapter two, not three
Tsukikageshi: I like your presentation of the gender thing. I'd imagine magic could... the question is why.
Me: I'm not telling right now
Tsukikageshi: Well... I do admit I wish your chapters were longer. Not sections of a chapter within a chapter... but otherwise it's an interesting concept and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat to see what happens next.
Me: Why thank you for the compliment but I'm really not the best at writing so when I think I wrote enough for an acceptable story or chapter I post it.
And I hope you don't mind but my spell checker was going crazy and I had to spell check what you wrote if I didn't know that It would have bothered me for the rest of me writing this chapter then I would have left it be.
This is a line break their name is Kate, say hello Kate
Dream
They were in a black void with nothing around to tell where they were, so picking a random direction they started walking hoping to find someone to tell them just what this strange place was and if possible help them find a way back to where they had been before they woke up here.
They had no clue as to how much time had passed from when they started walking to now but they had a feeling it had been awhile as their legs were killing them but when they went to sit down the wold started blurring and fading around them causing them to close their eyes if they didn't want to be sick from it.
Waiting a few moments they opened one of their eyes but not the other one just in case the wold was still blurring but instead of a back void they found themselves in space above a planet that had a green light coming from crack's in the planet itself. It looked as if it was going to explode any seconds now, they saw a few metal space pods coming from the planet and speeding away right before the planet exploded in a flash of green forcing them to close their eye's to shield from the light, opening them immediately they saw a green chunk of rock from what they assumed were pieces of the now dead planet hurling to the cylinder space pod, crashing into it and sending it off curse.
Staring in horror at the now dead planet the wold started blurring again making them close their eyes.
Unlike last time they decided to keep their eyes closed, they had no wish to see anything else like they just saw and had a feeling that if they opened their eyes they would see something much worse.
They didn't really have a choice when their eyes opened of their own accord when they heard someone yell "Frezza!" in anger causing them to snap their head in the direction the yell came from, what they saw took their breath away.
In front of them were hundreds of humanoid creatures fighting what looked like aliens the only reason they could tell that they were not humans was that they had tails, Monkey tails and humans did not have tails of any kind last that they knew. They were once again above a planet but this one was red with what looked like an atmosphere.
There was a giant spaceship above them with weird alien making what looked like a giant energy ball until it as big as the red planet. The strange creature threw the ball of energy at the Saiyans (They had heard one of the people with a monkeys tail call themselves that) and it started disintegrating them and the planet once it hit it, out of the corner of their eye they saw two space pods shooting away from the doomed planet and they felt hope that at least a few of the race had survived.
The wold stated to blur together again and this time when they closed their eyes they felt the tears they had been struggling to keep back, fall and they fell to their knees in the black void when they got there sobbing their eyes out because they understood those had to have been their parents home planets , their test had said that their father was a Saiyan and their mother a Kryptonian and if they had just seen the Saiyans planet be destroyed then the other planet must have been their mothers home.
They silently void to get vengeance against Frezza for killing their father cause they could tell somehow that their father had been on that planet when it was blown up, their mother's planet looked as if it was caused by natural sources meaning that they could not have revenge for her as well.
This is your new line break kate is out sick his name is Roger say hello Roger.
They woke in a panic calming down when they noticed that they were in, what looked like a hospital room. Getting up they started to look around, the bed they had been on was made out of a beautiful wood and there was a desk in the corner made of the same along with a few selves that held potions. as they were looking around they saw their reflection in a mirror on the wall causing them to freeze slightly before going to take a closer look.
Their short black hair that was always sticking up all over the place was now cascading down their back in black ringlets reaching their mid-back and was now silky smooth. Their eyes were now a Shade of green they had ever only seen in rare gemstones.
And they were also now a girl they thought looking in the mirror, they now had a body that girls would kill for. They had curves in all of the right places and some pretty decent looking boobs not too small and not too big as to cause back problems later on.
Then their eyes landed on her forehead and she let out a huge grin as the scar that only reminded her of all she had lost was now gone and her forehead was smooth with no sign it had ever had any scars.
Hearing a cough they jumped around not expecting it and they span around unknowingly to her, her hair had turned white in her shock. They stumbled a little from turning around so fast and caught the edge of the desk near her but the wood crumbled in her hand and she fell on her back while starring ar the desk in shock what the hell they thought.
Shaking their head the looked to where they had heard the cough that had caused them to fall and saw Grinlast looking as shocked as they felt.
"Well, miss potter you seem to be quite strong to have crushed that desk there." They said with a smirk once they had recovered from the shock of seeing the young woman crush a goblin-made desk with one hand.
"I am so sorry about that I have no clue how I did that." She said while looking at the crushed bit of desk that she had in her hand slightly confused at how she had done that.
"It's fine Miss Potter do not worry about that if you would like Gringotts can help you learn how to control that strength of yours But on another note what do you wish to be called by now?" Grinlast asked the young girl in front of her.
She frowned they hadn't even thought of what to go by but now that she was thinking about it she wanted to keep her middle name of Dive and her last name potter to honor both sets of parents but she was thinking of taking up a new first name, Thinking about it she decided she wanted to name herself Adriane Dive Potter, She liked that name and it was a name no one she knew had.
"I think I would like to call myself Adriane Dive Potter, Dive to honor my birth parents and Potter to honor the Potters for taking me in." The newly dubbed Adriane said to Grinlast who grinned. "Very good name Miss Potter it fits you if you don't mind me saying."
Adriane gave a shy smile to Grinlast "Thank you Grinlast you can still call me by my name if you would like." Grinlast was once again shocked by this Human in front of him (He didn't know about her being mostly alien) what was with them and shocking Grinlast and any other Goblin. but let out a smile at the offer.
Adriane is Latin for Women from Hadria, the Adriatic sea region. Also means dark one; A variant of Adria and Adriana
I am sorry I have not uploaded for the past few days I have had to entertain my cousins for the past few days and have not had the time to write this chapter.