Darkstar's Suffering

by StarlingCelani

This is my first story! Enjoy! "Darkstar's life was not a good one. It had it's good points, like anyone else's, but overall: she suffered. Darkstar was a tragic cat, she lost so much: She lost her parents and siblings, her kits, her happiness, her sanity, and finally her own life. All for Starclan's sick enjoyment. She was not good luck. Yet, little one, I miss her so much."

4. Update 3

Hi guys! I'm back to working on part two. I'm just sitting in my room with my laptop with headphones on listening to JubyPhonic. You guys should go check her out on Youtube, she makes English covers of Japanese songs. My favorites are Daughter of Evil, Mind Brand, and Even Kunoichi Want to Love. (Not sponsored… Although I wish she had sponsored me...) Since I'm still only in the pre-writing process I will give you guys a preview.

(Warning! There is a lot of Dark x Furze! If you don't like this ship then I advise skip it!)

"Darkpaw! Please talk to me, I don't even know what's wrong!" Furzepaw meows loudly to Darkpaw, who is sitting on a large rock. Darkpaw looks at Gorsepaw with tears in her eyes.

"Go away Furzepaw!" She yowled at her best friend.

"Please tell me Darkpaw." The golden tom meowed.

"Fine! But only if you come up here and sit with me…" Darkpaw mews sadly. Furzepaw jumps up onto the rock and sits close to his lonely friend.

"What's wrong Darkpaw?" Furzepaw asks sincerely. Just as he asked this though, the pretty gray and white shecat started bawling.

"Mistfall is so mean! She expects perfection from me when I'm the least perfect apprentice! Ashenpaw is never around and I miss her! Harepaw is so rude to you and I can't stand I just want to tear him apart limb by limb!" Darkpaw follows the last sentence with a feral snarl.

"Calm down Darkpaw," Furzepaw replies soothingly, "It's okay. Mistfall is just hard on you because she knows that you have great potential."

"Really?" Darkpaw mews.

This is the most vulnerable I've ever seen her. Furzepaw thinks. "Yes, and you are the most perfect cat I've ever met." He says as he brushes a tear off her cheek with his tail, then wraps it around her. "Also, we can visit Ashenpaw anytime (Note: anytime is a word right?) we want. And Harepaw doesn't get to me, so don't let him get to you. Okay?"

"Okay…"

"Let's go back to the apprentice den, it's already moonrise." Furzepaw gets up and walks to the apprentice den with Darkpaw following, when they get back to the den Furzepaw lays down. Darkpaw lays down next to him.

Like normal. Furzepaw thinks. But then, Darkpaw cuddles close to him, her head right near his. Her breath on his cheek.

That's not normal! Furzepaw internally panics.

(Ha Furzepaw! I freak out too when my crush even looks at me, which is a lot… we make eye contact a lot… A LOT!) Sorry that it was so long, I only wanted it to be a preview but it wasn't. More for you guys then! Bye everyone! Love you! ^.^