So...Uh idk if I'll ever continue the story. To tell the truth I'd like to but I'm just not very motivated (I feel really bad for not doing it XD I hate it when a fanfiction I like stops). Anyways, I'mma give some insight on this stuff by like reading the reviews and commenting on them, here we go I guess.

Guest: Can you please keep working on it? I noticed it was a long time since you've been here, but I really love the story!

Well..Maybe one day I will, when I'm more motivated, but right now a potato is probably more motivated about life then me.

Gai 185:

Yayyyyy! That's okay, man. As long as you fix up the grammar. And make Frisk a tad willing?

I always was planning to make it slowly turn into more romance, basically Frisk getting somewhat Stockholm Syndrome. So maybe if I continue it'll happen.

Guest:

Can you check your grammar here? I really think it would make this story more adorable.

As soon as I get properly motivated to write again, that will be one of the things I'll do.

Guest

oh man deppresion sucks well hope you get through it soon i had depression for 4 years it was not fun

Thank you. I hope I'll get through it soon too.

Guest:

Then they have sex all night frisk alllllllllllll fuck o yeah

Lol, I guess. Idk

thisissomuchcancer

WELP THAT WAS INTERESTING

Ikr, child porn is such an interesting thing. (I'm actually a child too so I think I'm allowed to write this?)

Blast

You now alot about sex! HAVE YOU EVER HAD ANY!?

I literally had 0 clue how sex worker when I wrote this, and I still barely know how it works. And no, I've never had sex, nor even had a partner. Lol,

imataco

OKAY OKAY! THIS TIME U TOOK IT TOO FAR! U DONT EXPLAIN HOW THEY DID THE 6 U JUST SAY "They had 6" AND DONE! EXPLAINING IT IS DISUSTING

Well honestly I created this fanfiction when I was first starting to get horny. So a smut had to come eventually, lol. Sorry if it offended you, but I did warn you.

Imataco

ITS AWESOME! I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT! though... why would toriel come? and the others stayed out? only toriel gets to die? also... is there a reason why chara loves frisk in the first place?

Thank you for the kind words. I was, and am a lazy writer so I didn't have time to write the other characters in. And yeah, Chara does have a reason. They're polar opposites. (Plus Chara is really dom and Frisk is pretty damn sub lol)

My name jeff

words like "sex" and "vagina" are a turn off for a lot of people, if you can, use the "hotter" terms for them like "fuck" and "pussy" and "cunt" and whatnot, refer to the "Undertail" fanfiction for influence, but otherwise really enjoying this

Back then I had barely watched porn or read fanfictions so I had no idea what I was doing XD plus idk I guess I'm a little uncomfortable writing such dirty words.

Lea

I don't read nots but the is so hood

Uh..Thanks?

The sex bath

"Chara can you just get away know just let me go away from your sex already!"come on frisk its going to be amazing"NO ITS NOT! *Chara pulls frisk tothe bathroom frisk tries to get away* hehehe to late frisk"*chara takes her close off and pants then underwear" no im not going to!"chara ties frisk to the ground then takes her top of thwn bottom then she does underwear*chara noooo pleses"you know i will kill evreyone if you dont do it!"*chara throws frisk into the bathtub then chara gets in*"lick me frisk!"*frisk starts to lick charas body"more more and FASTER" frisk gets tierd then sleeps*chara licks frisk then his peanuts*frisk sleep turns sexy very sexy*

Well uh..A+ for effort? (Honestly it amazes me someone wants this so badly they make it themselves)

Guest

Heres a cool idea for a boss. The name could be "The Lightning Chariot" The boss would cosist of two stages and would be mid HM. When you summon it it would start out in its regular stage with two pegisi with lightning particals comeing off. There would be the rider driving the chariot with a bow'n arrow fireing at you. The attacks could have a lightning charge where the driver uses a wip/reins to boost the lightning pegisi into the player. A lightning bolt attack where the two pegisi shot lightning at the player. and the secound stage. where one of the pegisi are killed by the player. Then the boss gets faster in a kind of eye of cuthulu style. The driver now throws lightning spears at the player instead of shooting a bow'n arrow. The drops in normal mode could be some throwables (Called Lightning Spears.) And a mount or a bow'n arrow. (And some sort of material if you wanted to) The mount could be either the lightning chariot with both or one lightning pegisi or just one lightning pegisi with wings that you could ride on a pretty fast speeds. Thanks for reading my suggestion.

I'm a little confused here? What do you think this is exactly?

Donald Trump

Kill yourself you stupid dumb fuck

Well, yeah I would but eh I have family so sorry. Oh btw, congratulations on becoming president.

DAGamesOfficial

This is cancer and I am disguisted with you

Lol, well yeah. I made this when I was like 14 and yeah it's cancer. I'm disgusted with myself too :D

Guest

It would be nicer if chara was not so controlling and if frisk actually liked her I was waiting for it but it never happened it dissapointed me so much so add on more plz also there are some spelling errors you should fix

These are all things I really wanted to do, and develop the characters but I just lost all determination so it never happened.

Sans

YOUR LAME! UNDERTALE FRISKY ENCOUNTERS HAS THOUSAND REVIEWS!

Okay, I have no idea what that has to do with my story, nor why you're screaming. Btw, it's you're.

348joey

The "Romance" and "Comfort" tags are misleading. The only applicable genre here is "Hurt".

Yeah, I only got to there in the story. I was really planning to make it become more romance and comfort. Sorry

348joey

And now rape. I feel like I should be offended by this, but I just keep getting this feeling of it being harmless. Maybe it's because it's just a cringey fanfic not meant to be taken seriously? I dunno.

Lol, well yeah. I was a horny little kid who just decided to write this.

348joey

You know, it's a good thing you made their genders clear. If the sexes were reversed here, it'd sound like Chara is a horrible person. But no, it's fine to force males to perform sexual acts for your amusement.

I actually am a male, and really submissive. So basically it's a fantasy of mine lol.

Foxy the fox

This story has gone from surprising to regretting in only 7 short chapters... But please continue, I guess?

I honestly rushed this so much because I wanted a sex scene. I should have had more build up and stuff like that.

Chrisk1212

I have depression too, i hope you can feel a little better know that im your bigest fan i only made an account to write this and follow you

Wow, uh Jesus it's weird to have a fan? Like uh...Wow? Okay thanks..I hope your depression won't stay forever.

Guest

You know oral sex isn't eating the girl out? It's actual sex, but in the vagina.

I didn't know it back then XD

Luca Lykos

Please don't, I read this entire story through and I just can feel the FBI outside my door. Please this is fucked up, stop writing this shit.

While I agree with you kinda I don't really care if it's fucked up or not lol.

Jacklvmage12

Im not going to lie, this story is a new one for me. I dont mean in the sence that I havent read it before, although thats true as well, but more because I havent really seen any Chara/Frisk ones. I congratulate you on writing an amazing story. If I had to judge it on a scale of 1-10 I would say its about 8.5. As for depression and whatnot, I know nothing about it but I can guess that its hard to deal with. I hope it eases up for you, if thats how it works. Either way, thank you for an amazing story once again and I hope things get better for you.

Thank you for those kind words.

Deadpool21r

hey you are getting way better at English now

Ikr, I probably could have written better if I tried but I just wanted to get to the smut part. Heh.

Waffle-San

I do not mean for you to take this as a flame, but so far this seems terribly awkward and while this is a good idea, it was not brought out to the best of it's potential.

I appreciate the criticism, and I agree. If I ever continue I want to make it more smooth, give more character to them, and stuff like that.

Guest

Are you going to continue this? I like it, I want to see more. Will Frisk eventually develop feelings for Chara, or will he always be trapped in this relationship? I don't mind the smut (and I'm guessing the next chapter will be another) but please try not to make this entire thing sex oriented. Maybe after the next chapter, lead it to a more calm envirement. Maybe Chara wants to take Frisk on a date to Waterfall? Anyway, I'll be awaiting more. Have a nice day )

I..Can't answer the first question honestly, but if I do I'll definitely focus more on character, and not just sex.

Toriel

What the fuck have these children been doing when I'm not home?

XD I laughed a lot at this comment.

Guest

You shouldn't rush it like that, you should take this story more slowly, otherwise is very weird to read. That's why the chapters are so short. Everything happens way too fast…

I can realize that now, but back then I wasn't nearly as educated on English nor literature.

I picked out the most interesting questions I found and answered them. I can't promise anything, but I will say this: It's not impossible that I will come back and write more.

Anyway, bye bye for now.