Hello everyone that may or may not be reading this (its been like a year and a half)
but many people reviewed that the story ending was rushed and / or unfinished.
I'm sorry I rushed the ending, but honestly, while the story had a possibly refreshing plot and was probably the best fanfic I've ever written, I felt like it was being dragged on and on. I added so many extra details that I didn't plan properly for, and basically just wrote down whenever I came up with a cool idea. All the ideas built up and eventually it was too much. The story would have gone on for another 10 chapters, which would have been delayed due to an overseas trip I went on a few days after the uploading of the last chapter. I've come up with a few story ideas and have begun planning a new story which I may upload depending on whether or not the first few chapters come out as I want them to.
Overall, I'm sorry the ending was rushed, and that it took me so long to respond, that many people who may be following this have probably forgotten all about it. Towards the end of the story (chapter 24-29) I just lost the plot. I was writing with no plan on how to finish it and due to that mistake rushed the ending. My main error however, was just going to complex, to many different things happening that I myself couldn't keep track of.
Anyways, I'll make sure my next story (if there is one) is fully completed and not rushed, and if I am going away where I will be unable to write I will upload a chapter about it instead of finishing as fast as I can. Any upcoming stories will probably have a decent wait in between chapters due to school and work.
Thanks for reading to all those who enjoyed it, and once again, sorry for the rushed ending. (and the year and a half in which I forgot about the rushed ending and didn't respond).
- Godlypowers12