Ok So I realize some of you are mad I haven't updated. So i'm really busy with my first job yeah Mcdonalds sucks dick. Anyway I have several things in the works and I'm more tird and drained so might be a while.
Korra "Shut your yapper and get back to work then."
Lin "He could have you die in a chapter you know that right?"
Korra "Good point."
Anyway I am here to answer your comments. So lets begin with the oldest one.
We have a comment from fulcrum101
"Nice story. Keep it up."
Thanks fulcrum101 you actually had me jumping around for joy I had someone like my story.
Next is fanfic fan
"Man thank for this i wanted for an fanfic linxoc to so loooong i dont speaking ingles i'm sorry if i make mitake"
Well it's alright but thank you for the comment and thanks for enjoying it and for learning English just to enjoy my story. I think.
Next is fanfic fan
"Man this fic had plot or is only a love history"
Well I'm not sure what you mean really... Um next one!
next is from fulcrum101
"very good. A dream crushed by reality. Will he win her, or not?"
Ok so the one shot that your commenting on was actually not my idea but my sister read through my junk journal which is a journal I have for when I get to writing and well I wrote a crap piece of Tonrar and lin fighting and then making out and then... Well you know anyway she read it and after a very lengthy discussion about not looking at certain videos on the internet, She told me to turn it into a oneshot for valentines.
Now we have fulcrum101 again
"Will Tonrar and Lin get together? If so, please do so."
ok so um you do realize chapter three or chapter 6 "He what?" Is only day three of them knowing each other. If Tonrar puts the moves on her now what will that look like? Romeo and Juliet crap but Tonrar has eyes for another girl. You know who i'm talking to.
Korra (looks at Lin)
Lin (looks at Kyoshi)
Kyoshi (Looks to Zuko's Daughter) *oh yeah that's right ;D*
Zuko's Daughter "What?"
Next is Guest
"Man Tv in korra universe ?"
Yeah when I published it I hadn't really read it through and I banged my head on my wall for an hour thinking I was an idiot I think I updated it. Anyway um I meant radio so yeah thanks for that, whoever you are.
P.S. MAKE A PROFILE SO I CAN GIVE YOU CREDIT!
ok now here is fanfic fan
"Hey man i loved this i wanted a linxoc so much and the fact you show the male prostitucion is new in korrafic communitis but ¿The other character (korra , toph , mako etc) had a cameo"
Yeah I have no idea what you mean about the cameo anyway the maleprostitute was actually inspired by Rookie Blue. You know where the cute on with the black hair acts as a gay prostitute. You know which one i'm talking about.
Ok next is Firewolves16
"This is adorable. I love it. Can't wait to read more."
I know right? I mean I cried a lot of it but its like ugh! Cant wait! Also wait for chapter four!
Ok next and I think latest is Guest
"U gotta update this, I love the plot and it so romantic that lin falls in love with a former criminal."
Yeah thank you also who said Tonrar's a former criminal? ;)
Thank you for the reviews and the comments also here comes chapter four after this.
P.S. Chapter four is unfinished and will begin to mesh with the Legend of Korra Series Starting with episode three.
Peace out.