Disclaimer: I do not own PJO, all rights go to Rick Riordan. Guys, I have a problem; I don't know where my humor came from - apparently people thought Chapter 8 was funny and stuff. I don't know if this chapter will be even near as funny as the last was, but I hope you enjoy either way.
I will add the review responses later on, I don't have the time to do so currently - but I will get it done. HAHA, I'M GONNA DO IT NOW
FalledOneAka X or Mr. X: good 2 have u back
Good to be back, or actually that was a few months ago - shit. Well, it was still good to be back.
True Wielder of Riptide: I loved the description of the Exterior of the new cabin though I do wish that you included a bit more detail on the exterior. I also loved that you had Percy, Nico, and Bianca allow the hunters right by because they helped them at the school was nice and showed loyalty to the hunters, ps Nico just going back to slashing a tree so nonchalantly was just priceless.
I love this fanfiction and can't wait for the next chapter
Sincerely,
True Wielder of Riptide
Okay, I am slightly confused, but I will succeed in responding. I was putting together the cabin off of the top of my head, so that is why it doesn't go into that much of detail - it's hard to come up with that stuff anyways. I usually always write certain occurrences for reasons to come, so I appreciate you noticing it. And for the humor part, I was in a good mood - probably never gonna be in that mood again, I swear I was laughing while writing that part myself. Thank you for your review ~ FindADifferentUsername
fuscia2: IDEA! How about HESTIA ends up with Percy? She doesn't have to be it from the beginning, but it'd be pretty freakin' cool. you can PM me if you want to know how I'd make that happen with her maiden vow.
I'm gonna keep this in here anyways, you know what I talked to you about in the PM. I'm not gonna say anything here since only you and I know about it.
NoTearsFalling: Wait... you actually wrote all those comments out before? I'm so so sorry, but I am laughing so hard at that...
Percy, Bianca, and Nico hanging out in the woods... *clutches stomach and rolls on the floor laughing* And that last sentence! Ha, ha, ha! Oh man, I can't breath from laughing so much! XD
Just so you know, if Bianca dies (or Zoë), there will be an angry mob coming for you.
Hey, take your time. Sickness is not something to take lightly, even if it's minor. Take your time to recover. I hope you get better. As for your family problems, I hope they get fixed too.
My vote for Zoë still stands. I would be fine with Thalia too, but that's it. See, as much as I like the other characters, I have reasons. Even though Hemera is an immortal too, I feel like she would be more of a sister character to Percy. As for Bianca, I feel as if she would be a sisterly character too, with scolding Nico and Percy and all that. Artemis, well as much as I like the pairing, I feel like that is just too cliche and over done.
I hope you liked the super log review! :D You are doing a fabulous job, and I can't wait for more.
~NoTears
To your first sentence, I am glad that my pain and suffering amuses you. Next! When I am in a really good more or anything I'm usually pretty funny if I do say so myself *cough* ego *cough*, sadly I have never been in such a good mood as that since. And I know about the sickness stuff, and I appreciate it, man am I coming off as rude. I agree with you about the Pertemis pairing and everything, it really is getting overused a tad bit, that's why I am not really leaning to that pairing, for your other reasons I completely see how you get that from this story, but my mind is pairing prone - nothing is impossible - I could make him into a freaking dragon! Lastly, I loved the super log review - it was fantastic, I really appreciated it. Thank ya, now moving onto the next one.
inblindingdarkness: I like PercyxBianca for this fic.
This is a really good story, and I love the length of your chapters.
When will Percy start getting his memories back?
I'd like to see Marcus severely injured (after something he did which makes it a totally fair punishment) but not actually killed, just humiliated and humbled. Yeah.
And no harem, pretty please, unless you really, really want it or all of the readers do.
Marcus so deserved that faceplant, I really liked it. I like how the campers would have probably won if it weren't for that. I also like how Percy, Bianca, and Nico didn't really care.
I feel like you're consciously or unconsciously setting up PercyxBianca. I'm not complaining, just wondering if you're doing it on purpose.
I really don't like Perlia or Percabeth for this fic. They're not bad ships in my mind, they just have no place here. Pertemis and Perzoe are a bit more feasible, and also good ships, but it would take some extremely crazy coincidences for Percy to ever spend enough time with Artemis for Pertemis to happen. Also, Zoë was knocked off of a cliff, so we won't be seeing her for a while. Not a lot of time for a relationship to develop, although if we do end up with Perzoe, the dreams about Hercules's jerkness may bring Percy around. PercyxHemera would be fine, it's just that I haven't gotten to know her character yet. That would be more feasible when Percy regains his memories, but right now he's a bit more like canon, and so it's weird for him to be paired with the Primordial of day. If you do end up with PercyxBianca or any ship except Hemera, please make them have a committed relationship before you start introducing Percy's old memories. When you do, I think they would come best in the form of demigod dreams- slowly, in bits and pieces, at least at first. That way the shift in Percy's knowledge occurs slowly enough to give Bianca- or any other character except Hemera- time to adapt and fit his changes into the relationship. If you need any clarification on what I mean, feel free to PM me.
Also, Posiedon is a jacka** in this story. Feel free to guilt him, give him a tongue-lashing, or beat him up. He deserves it.
So yeah. I'm curious about what's going to happen with Aurora and Chaos when they find out, but I don't have any specific questions.
I'm sorry if this takes you a long time to read and respond to. I really like this fic, though, so I wanted to let you know. Keep writing, you're awesome.
Where do I start? Okay, the questions part I guess; you will just have to wait and see, trust me it will not be too far away. As for the Marcus thing, yeah, I can see how a few people want him to be killed - but I might get carried away and have to make this M rated. My mind needs to stay on a leash, if I let that leash go... you don't wanna know I have already deleted things because of it. And of course he deserved the face plant, it was my main intent most of the chapter, okay, that's a lie, but it was up there. I've been reading over the story and have noticed myself leaning towards the pairing offhandedly, but to be fair, I fell in love with the ship as soon as I saw it and thought they were perfect, hope that helped a bit - most likely didn't. I agree with all the pairing stuff but am a little caught off guard by the Zoë falling off a cliff part, I swear I made Percy save her, I remembered to write that didn't I? For the Hemera part I will most likely have Percy dating someone else before Hemera or have it so things happen and I can really introduce her character and all, you get it right? And I was planning on doing the memories part, to be honest, like building up the relationship and everything so don't worry about that. And I was never really fond of Poseidon in the first place, even in the original series, so expect for me to make him a jackass and everything. I SEE THE ENDING! Your whole thing about Aurora and Chaos will get messed up after reading this chapter, I promise that. And you are right, this took me a shit ton of time to respond to, but it's fine, I would rather do a ton of these than just sit back and leave your questions and everything unanswered. Thank you for your extremely long review, now onto the next one. Oh, yeah, I appreciate your review.
Guest: Nice chapter keep up the good work
Thank ya, and I will.
(Your name's not workin') A K Assassin: Hemera is a good choice as I think it would look original. As he is a primordial so he should be with her... By the way will you include Gian waar in this as you made gaea good.
I'm still thinking on the whole Gaint War thing, to do that it would require a lot of thought and planning put into it, or for me it would, I most likely won't but if I think of a way to make it plausible I will try to do it. Thank you for your review good sir/ madame.
StarCarnage: That was good but I thought percy would just used his powers to stop the fight because that would have been cool. Also I vote for thalia or harem.
See, I'm trying to keep it so that no one knows that he's Poseidon's son, and if I'm just completely misinterpreting this review then why would I want to stop Thalia beating the shit out of Marcus. Yeah, that seems like a good response. Thank you for your review and I just now noticed that you voted for harem, people want Percy to be in a harem more him with Thalia, I'm feeling bad for her character now.
Am I done? I'm done, that is all the reviews, bar the pairing based ones where that is it. Now, I will not but up the votes currenty since I am grounded and will not have enough time to tally it all up and edit and everything. Now I hope you enjoy this chapter.
[Edited 12/21/2018] Had to take a break from editing to focus on a research paper, lol, kill me.
"But Chiron, it's different: he didn't pee his pants - no, he shit them! Can't we just burn them?" Lee, the Apollo cabin counselor, argued with Chiron.
"Lee, if you burn that boy's pants it will give off an even worse stench than before," Chiron responded back. Lee's eyes widened as he noticeably paled.
"S-so I have t-to clean them?" He stuttered. Chiron nodded his head. "Can't I just wait till it's someone else's turn for laundry?" He asked.
"Lee..." Chiron let it hang there, watching as Lee sighed in defeat and stalked out of the Big House.
"Now onto the prophecy dilemma," Chiron said, turning to the rest of the counselors, Zoë and the now awake Phoebe, Nico, Bianca, and I. We were all stood around a ping pong table in the big house to discuss the prophecy which the spirit of Delphi had spoken. I was leaned over and had my forehead resting against it in boredom.
"Of course, I will go and save the goddess for you guys. Yes, I know, how noble of me-" I cut Marcus off.
"May I please stab him, at least once?" I asked raising my head off of the ping pong table to look at Chiron.
"No, Perseus, you may not," Chiron replied. I looked back down in defeat and mumbled, "Dammit."
"First let us decide who will go on the quest and then what the prophecy means," Chiron continued.
Zoë spoke up first, "Phoebe, I, and a couple other Huntresses will go and save our Lady-" Zoë was cut off by Thalia.
"Campers and Hunters combined prevail, Zoë. So it has to be made up of both Hunters and Campers." Thalia stated with a glare directed at Zoë.
"She is right, Lieutenant. The prophecy states it clearly: both Campers and Hunters must work together to succeed in this quest." Chiron agreed.
"I will be leading so I will pick who I want to go," Marcus cut in, his irrelevance showing as there was an immediate uproar of "What!?", "Who said that!?", and "The hell you are!" when he had said it.
"Quiet!" Chiron yelled silencing everyone down as everyone's eyes snapped to him once more.
"The prophecy was given to Zoë, dipshit. Therefore, she is the leader, not you." I said, glaring at him and watching him flinch in response.
"Perseus is right. Zoë, you are the quest leader so you will get to choose the hunters and campers that will accompany you," Chiron elaborated.
Zoë nodded her head, saying, "I will inform you when I decide who will come. I need some time to think about it." Chiron nodded in approval, "Very well. Onto the prophecy meaning then.
Five shall go west to the goddess in chains,
One shall be lost in the land without rain,
The bane of Olympus shows the trail,
Campers and Hunters combined prevail,
The Titan's curse must one withstand,
And one shall perish by a parent's hand,"
Chiron paused before continuing, stroking his beard, "'Five shall go west to the goddess in chains' we know that five people will be going on the quest and they will be decided later on,"
"...and that we will be going west." I added on, "Where exactly: we have no clue currently - but we will find it, though, people like us always do, somehow." Nico stared at me, trying to fight a grin off of his face. I spared a curious look at him before focusing back on the topic at hand.
"'One shall be lost in the land without rain,'" Thalia repeated, the room quieting down as she did.
"Prophecies tend to have double meanings, children. It does not necessarily mean that someone will die." Chiron said, trying to reassure everyone.
My eyes narrowed at Chiron, "No one said that someone would die - you guys just jump to the worst case scenario automatically. Have some good-natured optimism, people." I say, looking around as people sneered and glared at me. Nothing's going to work out if they go into it in the wrong mindset. It's the truth.
"Besides that," Thalia glares at me, "whoever goes on this quest will go through someplace where it doesn't rain and will have to be careful - at least it's a clue for where they will be going," Thalia said.
"Desert or barren land most likely," Annabeth offers. I nodded along. "Maybe going through the other lines will help us find out the destination," She adds on.
"Good point. Now, 'The bane of Olympus shows the trail', I have a few ideas in mind, but they are most likely to be wrong." Chiron said.
"I can't think of any of Olympus' banes, and apparently it will show us a trail - but to what exactly?" Zoë said/questioned.
People were stumped at this one, Chiron included. I thought hard, staring down at the table and having the sudden image of a cow pop into my head. I strained, trying to go through all the lessons Ananke and Gaea had taught me, trying to remember what the cow meant. I propped my head up in thought while everyone else was talking aloud, discussing this line and possibilities.
My brow furrowed. I knew what it was, I just didn't at the same time. It was right on the tip of my tongue and I was starting to get frustrated.
"A bane to Olympus...well, whatever it is, the questers are gonna meet them - or it - there," The Demeter cabin counselor said. I think her name was Katie Gardner. All the while everyone was working together and trying to figure out all of the parts of the prophecy, Marcus stood by silently.
"You got anything to say about all this?" I asked while nodding my head toward Marcus with an eyebrow slightly raised.
He turned red and cleared his throat, not expecting the question. "Well, due to me not leading, as you obviously all do not appreciate my generosity, I will not participate in any way." He turned his sights on Zoë, "Even if you beg for me to help and protect you in this quest, Zoë." He said that all with his chest puffed out and sending a look to Zoë with a sly smirk, running his gaze up and down her body.
I'm not gonna lie: I gagged and had to stop myself from immediately turning away. It happened in slow motion in my eyes and it was like I was forced to look at it even longer. The same could be said for Zoë, except she showed no hesitation and she punched Marcus. Chiron conveniently looked away at the exact moment, pretending he hadn't seen it and adjusting his sweater vest as he cleared his throat, a bewildered look on his face.
Annabeth glared at Zoë while trying to pick Marcus' unconscious body up off the floor. Let me say this, a direct hit to the side of the head with the flat of my blade couldn't knock the asshole out, but one punch from Zoë was able to. Note to self: never get on the receiving end of a punch from her. Don't know if I'll ever get back up.
I shook my head, letting out a deep breath and hearing Nico quietly whisper, "Bianca, why did we come here?"
"I don't know, Nico." Was Bianca's only response as she seemed to stare off with an unsure face.
"I'm going to have nightmares of this moment," Nico said, a frown on his face as he refused to look in Marcus' direction.
"Your childhood innocence has been ruined," I say, shrugging. "Was about time, man," I add, putting a somewhat supportive hand on his shoulder.
Nico gave me a bewildered look. "You're only four years older than me. Where'd yours go?"
"Eh, when I was, like, three - four years old, tops," I responded nonchalantly.
Nico's eyebrows scrunched up more along with Bianca's as she turned to look at me. The noise in the room had reached a peak as most people were now off topic, arguing, and voices were raising trying to speak over each other. "How did -" He was cut off as someone's body crashed onto the table, sliding off the other side of it.
"Can everyone shut up so that we can figure out what this damn prophecy means?!" Thalia yelled, the room immediately quieting.
I looked over the table and saw the body of Connor Stoll sprawled across the ground, groaning slightly while not even trying to move from his position.
"You threw Connor," I stated bluntly, breaking the silence.
"Yeah! You threw my brother!" Travis said with more excitement in his voice than anger.
"Thalia, although I do not approve of how you went about handling the situation, thank you for quieting everyone down," Chiron said. She nodded, crossing her arms.
"Let's... just move on to the next line," Chiron said with a slight sigh, pinching the bridge of his nose. "We've already covered everything up to 'Campers and Hunters combined prevail,' so 'The Titan's curse must one withstand,' and 'One shall perish by parent's hand,' are all we have left to discuss," Chiron stated. The last line brought silence to the room.
"So... anyone have any ideas as to which Titan has a curse, out of basically every Titan, that we must withstand?" I asked. There was some murmuring that went across the room and I remembered the flashes of scenes that went through my head when the Oracle had opened its mouth and the green mist poured out: Artemis chained up, with her hands raised as if holding something - she looked in a lot of pain as well. I was broken out of my train of thought by someone asking me a question.
"-come up with anything?" Chiron asked with his hands on the table staring at me.
I blinked a few time and shook my head, "Ahm, no, I haven't - not yet, at least." I responded. He gave me a questioning look and moved on to other people. Bianca and Nico gave me questioning looks as well, but I waved them off and went back into deep thought.
I went through every lesson Mom and Gaea had taught me up until this point about the Titans and who got what. I could practically hear the ding as I remembered a lesson from when I was 12.
"I'm an idiot," I murmured with my head in my hands. Atlas was cursed with the weight of the sky, Artemis was holding something up that I couldn't see, chained, and under what looked like a lot struggle. How did I not put it together before? Especially since Atlas was - or is Kronos's General.
Not being able to decide if I was really smart or stupid, I glanced off to Zoë. I knew she was a daughter of Atlas from her looks and aura. I let out a sigh through my nose, keeping it all to myself and making a note to talk to her about it alone if I ever got the chance.
"Well, no one seems to know anything - and even I can't quite figure out who the Titan is. So let's go onto the next line to not waste any more time and allow everyone to think more on it." Chiron stated, drawing everyone together again. "The final line states 'One shall perish by a parent's hand,'" He didn't carry on after saying that, instead, allowing everything to stay silent as everyone looked around the room, the tension thickening.
"Welp, I give whoever is going on the quest my greatest sympathy - PEACE OUT!" Travis said as he half ran half sprinted out the door, carrying his brother over his shoulder. A lot of people just stared at the door in shock while Katie ran out to talk to him.
"This is what happens when you don't ease people into stuff like this without reassuring them, Chiron," I say, sighing and crossing my arms over my chest.
"I have to agree with you, Perseus, it wasn't one of the wisest decisions I have ever made," Chiron said nodding.
"So, what now?" I ask, looking around the table. The last line had taken everyone's voices away from them. Sure, I had a pretty good idea who it is - but I doubt that I'm actually able to intervene in this without being questioned more than I want to be.
"Zoë, would you like for us to end the meeting and continue with the people of your choice on the quest later on?" Chiron asked.
"Yes, Chiron, that would be appreciated," Zoë said, bowing her head slightly at Chiron and then walking out with Phoebe following close behind.
"It's settled, the chosen quest members will meet up, later on, to discuss the prophecy before leaving," Chiron said, addressing everyone in the room.
"Well, then, this was a waste of time," Marcus said, aggravatedly, standing near the door. He had apparently woken back up and was now glaring at Chiron, his nose and part of his cheek was swollen and bruising.
I shook my head, quickly walking toward the door and roughly shouldering Marcus out of the way, giving him a passing glare. Bianca and Nico caught up to me soon after, Bianca coming to walk right beside me as I made my way back to the cabin.
"What was that, Percy?" she asked.
"Justice, duh," I said, shrugging my shoulder and stepping up onto the steps of the cabin before opening the door.
"A bit much, don't you think?"
"Not really," I replied. Bianca gave me a weird look before ushering Nico into the cabin.
"So... am I gonna have to wait for you to learn Mythomagic, or what?" Nico asked once everyone was inside.
"I'm pretty sure we'll have plenty of time in the morning, Nico," I said while plopping down onto the couch.
Nico pouted, "But, what if Zoë picks you to go on the quest?" I squeezed my eyes shut. Dear gods.
"He's got a point, Percy," Bianca said, agreeing with him and moving my legs so that she could sit down.
"Yeah, you saved her. You can be her knight in-" My eyes snapped open and I sat up, staring right into Nico's. His eyes widened and he shut up immediately.
"If Lady Artemis heard one word of that, you and I would goners. And there's no way in hell would that ever happen, she's a Hunter of Artemis, and I'm not interested in disrespecting that kind of oath," I said, lying back down.
"Number one women respecter, right here," Bianca said jokingly.
"Shut up." I said, laughing slightly and raising myself up off the couch. "We can finish this conversation in the morning, I'm going to sleep," I said, stretching and walking toward the hallway.
They both nodded at me, "Night, Percy - and remember Mythomagic!" Nico said. I smiled and got up off the couch.
I smiled, turning my head my head to respond, "Yeah, you too, Nico. G'Night, Bianca, hopefully, no nightmares for the two of you. I'm not so sure for me..." I mumbled the last bit, opening the door to my room.
I heard a faint "Good night," when walking in then closed the door, changing into pajamas and then flopping down into my bed face first. I mumbled a small prayer to Chronos and Ananke then fell asleep.
All I could see was white. And it wasn't that it was bright or light, it was white. The plainness of it was unsettling me, making me anxious and internally panic a small bit, but I didn't understand why.
I turned around, trying to find anything else to explain what this place was or why I was seeing it.
I quickly backpedaled, though, as I caught sight of the girl who had been standing behind me. She stood in stark contrast with the environment if you could even call it that.
She had bronze skin, long, dark brown hair, and deep red eyes that were almost crimson in color. They had a fierceness to them that you could probably see from miles away. Her hair was parted to the side, covering a small portion of her face while the rest framed it. She had on a white coat very similar to a tailcoat, with the lapels being black, a black dress shirt, a crimson red vest and tie, and black pants which didn't look like dress pants, along with black combat boots. She had the sleeves of the coat pushed up, providing a contrast between the rest of her appearance which seemed perfect. She gave off an aura of royalty by the look on her face and how she held herself, back straight and shoulders pushed back the slightest bit.
I stared at her just as she did me, watching as a smile - no, it had a bit of mischief to it, her grin slighted crooked like my own - appeared on her stern, royal, and strikingly attractive face, her red eyes brightening.
"It's been a while," she said, her voice was almost melodious, dripping in a charm which you could tell was second nature to her.
I swallowed audibly, feeling my anxiety grow. "Who are you? If I may ask."
She nodded slowly, "Aurora," she answered, her crooked grin turning into a small smile.
My stomach dropped and my eyes widened. Dream or not, I was in danger. I could feel my heart rate pick up. "What do you need?" I asked.
Her smile widened. "I don't need anything, Perseus," she said, shaking her head slighting. She held a kind smile, confusing me greatly. "I j-" her head jerked to the side and she took a quick breath through her nose. It was as if her image flickered in and out for a split second. She breathed in and out, wincing with a grimace on her face. She looked back at me and my eyes quickly stared at her own. They weren't just crimson red, anymore, it was as if white cracks were spreading toward her pupil from the outside of her iris.
"Fuck," she said, sobering up and meeting my gaze. "I don't have much time, Perseus," she took a shuddering breath in, obviously struggling from something. "Just know, the plan worked." her head jerked again and she let out a hiss of pain. Her image kept flickering in and out.
"What do you mean? What plan?" I asked, eyes wide in panic and confusion.
I never got an answer, though, as she disappeared.
I sat up straight in bed, covered in sweat. I tried to steady my breathing and beating heart while throwing my sheets off of myself, looking out the window in my room and saw that it was still dark out.
"I'm not gonna be getting any more sleep after that," I cursed, not angry but confused and upset. I took off my shirt and threw it to the side, way too hot to care. I ran my hands through my hair, trying to calm myself down and shaking my head. "I am in some deep shit," I said to myself, getting off of my bed and picking Revenge off of my bedside table, quickly putting it back onto my left wrist out of muscle memory. I headed toward the kitchen, being careful to keep my noise down to the minimum as I ran my right hand across the wall, savoring the cool touch.
I entered the kitchen and went straight to the fridge, pulling out a bottle of water and opening it as I pushed aside the curtain which covered the single window above the kitchen sink. I could just barely see the first light of dawn. I was about to take a sip while looking out when I heard a voice.
"What are you doing?"
I jumped, cursing quietly and dropping my water bottle which spilled onto the floor. "Aw, come on!" I whisper yelled to myself.
Bianca flushed red then quickly turned away. "Sorry,"
"It's fine," I said, sighing and getting a couple of paper towels to clean it up. "I was just trying to get a drink," I said, responding to her earlier question. "What are you doing up?"
She still held a light pink blush on her cheeks as she stared down at me, playing with the hem of her oversized t-shirt. "You aren't the quietest," she answered.
"My bad," I said, finishing wiping up the water and getting ready to stand back up.
"What was it?"
"Huh?" I paused, looking up at her from my crouched position.
"What made you wake up?" she clarified, adding on, "I imagine people like us don't randomly wake up at the crack of dawn for no reason." she had a point.
I bit the inside of my cheek, standing up to go and throw the paper towels away. "Nightmare. I wasn't as lucky with the whole 'Goodnight' thing," I answered.
"Do you want to talk about it?" She asked, a comforting calmness in her voice which reminded me of Hemera for a split second. I took a deep breath, scratching the back of my neck and getting another water bottle from the fridge.
"I haven't quite gotten over it yet," I admitted, turning to her once I had gotten the water. "I'll talk to you about it when I'm ready to."
She was looking down and nodded.
"You should probably go back to sleep, still have around two to three hours before we all have to get up." I said sending her a smile. She looked back up at me and returned it.
"Will you go back to sleep if I do?" she asked.
"I promise I'll try," I responded.
"Fine, and I'm sorry about your water," she said.
"It's okay, now go back to sleep. And no sneaking up on people." I told her, nodding back to the hallway.
"Okay, okay," She said with a smile, heading back down the to her room.
I looked away as heard her door shut and let out a breath I had didn't notice I had been holding in.
"What am I gonna do?" I asked under my breath, bracing myself against the counter.
I will add the pairing thingy in later, too. Woo, go me! Hey, at least I actually put out a chapter. Nvm, I only got to review responses - pairing will have to wait a lil longer.
And I am done, I did half of this at night on my phone, very tired. So I am sorry for grammar and spelling mistakes and everything. I hope people will understand the change in Percy's mood after the whole snapping incident.
This chapter wasn't really meant to be funny, more to really start out the story's conflict and everything. I hope people can deal with the lack of humor, but I am actually really satisfied with how the ended and am actually prepared to write the next chapter if I get a chance.
Other than the pairing and all, which you get the basic gist of, that is all for now. Leave you pairing choices in the review box (or you can vote on the poll located on my profile), what you thought of the chapter would be appreciated. And that's all for now, bye.
~FindADifferentUsername