Nice end
Nirestra lunged at Drake with a crystalline blade
"You think you can beat me?!" Drake yelled as he blocked the blade
"I don't know, but I will take you down before anyone can get hurt, tell me why Drake?" Nirestra asked as she glared at him though the blocked blades
"Skiadrum never deserved such power, only the strongest do, and him?! Ha he was the weakest in the village, why did he get it?" Drake yelled
"Because, he understood, you never did" Nirestra explained
"Heh, but, I am a true dragon, I have Acnologia's power, Chaos Shift!" Drake shouted as a force wave was shot out knocking Nirestra back, she steadied herself by spreading her wings, the membranes were already teared due to the fight
"Shadow Knight Lance!" Nirestra called as a black spear appeared in her left hand and she launched it, Drake was cut by the blade as it zoomed past him
"Chaos Shadow Dragon Spiral!" Drake yelled as a tundra of black magic was shot out, Nirestra covered herself as the black magic rained on her knocking her down
"Shadow Fire!" Nirestra shouted as her hair gained bright red highlights as a black flame assaulted Drake
"Dimensional Luna" Nirestra shouted as a swirl of color appeared in the sky Drake being sucked in and Niresta trying to get away
"I am not going down, because, your coming with me!" Drake yelled as he mimicked her magic and used shadow rope to grab her,
"Tokanica Roginkia" Nirestra chanted as the two vanished in a bright light
Months later….
Anna walked into her apartment the twins and others lived in the guild hall but she had too much to move in one night, it was two months after Nirestra's disappearance, Ash has been dimension jumping for the past month
"Nirey where are you?" Anna wondered holding a familiar opal pendent, Nirestra dropped it during the battle, the black accents started to fade
"Oh no" Anna gasped, with only one explaination: Nirestra was dying
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