Review replies: From oldest to newest one!(chapter 3)
GuardianAngel1234567- Yeah guess I am one sneaky little author ;)
Momijifan Low-Ki- You have no idea. Thanks for reviewing!
Guest- Silly kitty indeed and the misunderstandings...well let me just say they're about to get larger.
Nymphaea Cerulea- Well I'm glad you enjoyed (and thought it was funny) Thanks!
MrPlatypus12345- Thanks for the tip and it was helpful (^_^)
LovePuppy25- I liked the story idea and thanks for the trick. (And dialogue is fun to work with.*sarcasm)
Guest- Well thank you and I am really glad you think it's funny.
KnightOwl247- I guess it is better,thanks for answering my question,and for enjoying it.
Guest- He is really oblivious.(painfully so.)
Florala- I was thinking of adding that but haven't decided when it might be mentioned.(Thanks for reviewing.)
Guest- yup as oblivious as one can get.
Milkchocolatehot64- Hmmm….interesting idea I can see that happening ;)
izzy- yeah and the sadder thing is that she doesn't even know she's a suspect(yet) ;). Anyways about the update, here it is and I update every week.
Sol- Gracias por revisar y estoy feliz de que pienses que es divertido. (Espero que lo escribí bien y si no lo escribí bien, pido disculpas por mis errores)
English translation:Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy you think it's fun. (I hope I wrote that well and if I did not write it right. I apologize for my mistakes)
gleamqueen- don't we all and I didn't mean to do that to you. And don't die on me yet,there's still a long way to go!
Nightmaster000- I'm delighted to hear that you enjoy the story and a dose of coincidences and misunderstanding coming right up.
Roger0326- Oh yes when he realizes he's been wrong about the whole thing well.. hilarious is the way to describe it.
Guest Sorta- Idiot indeed and for the sake of the story he doesn't know the villain's gender.
Chococat- I appreciate the ideas(love it!) And Adrien asking Plagg if he can sense kwamis and him responding will happen soon :) But the doll one I like it and coincidentally this chapter is called Familiar dolls.(So I used your idea. Thanks for your idea.)
Nightwing5- Thanks for the kind words! :)
Zucchini999- Thank you for answering my question I deeply appreciate it! Glad you like it so far.
Adrinette4life - Thanks for answering and a million thanks for the sweet words! :) Your review made my day so thanks!
Ladynoir1987 -I agree 100% with you! :) Thanks for the review!
Guest- About this being mentioned to Ladybug might come up but it has not been decided yet.
Cookiebook322- I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far!Also about the whole Plagg sensing a Kwami will be coming up very soon. :)
Guest - Thanks! It's really fun to write about how Adrien thinks Marinette is Hawkmoth. :)
mayuralover - Thanks for helping me out and answering my question! I'm glad you you liked the chapter!:)
Guest- Well here it is :)
Guest- The voodoo idea is this chapter. And I won't let her get akumatized.
Guest- I laughed because when you mentioned that I thought of it too. : )
(These took a long time to comment all on)
Shout out to my sis,Colorfuluniverse that helped me answer some of these and to Chococat(guest) for the idea of this chapter.
Chapter 4: Familiar Dolls..Wait? Is this voodoo?
Adrien smiled as he looked at the time on his phone. 4:40 P.M. He was early,which meant that Alya and Nino weren't there yet. Which meant Marinette wasn't prepared for his arrival either. He put his phone away just as he opened the front door of the bakery. He was greeted by the smell of baked goods and warmness.
"Hello Adrien it's nice to see you around here,again." warmly greeted Mrs. Dupain-Cheng. Adrien kindly smiled at her as he also greeted her.
"Hello Mrs. Dupain-Cheng. Is Marinette here?" he asked politely. Mrs Dupain-Cheng shook her head.
"Call me Sabine dear. And she's out on a quick errand,but you can wait in her room while she comes back." she suggested. This was the perfect opportunity to look in her room again. But he wasn't Chat Noir who would take this opportunity he was Adrien at the moment.
"I wouldn't want to intrude." he told her as she grabbed a plate of cookies.
"Oh you wouldn't be intruding dear. Plus..." she stopped as she looked around as she handed him the plate. "...she's been talking about you a lot recently." she told him as his mind tried to process what she said. But before he could comprehend what she meant,she left to attend a costumer.
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He walked up the steps remembering what Marinette's mother just told him. He shook his head. She been talking about me and recently. And it had been quite recent that he found out she was targeting him. Could her parents know what she was up to? Probably not.
He sighed as he reached her trapdoor. He opened the door and climbed in. Closing the trap door he stood there in her room. He looked at the plate of cookies in his hand. They smelled wonderful and probably tasted just as wonderful.
No bad Adrien he scolded himself. No time for cookies. You're here for a reason and it's not to eat cookies.
Right .Evidence first. He agreed with the logical part of his brain.
He hesitantly set the cookies off to the side. He peered around her room,but was surprised to find the walls...well empty. He walked over to where he saw his schedule last time he was there. Though when he looked up there was no string meaning there was no schedule either.
He wanted to slap himself. Of course she hid all of it. She wouldn't want him to suspect anything,she most likely came in during lunch to put it all away. He had a chance to see everything again and he now couldn't.
Well he thought. If she put away all the evidence. Then I'm going to have to find it. He scurried around her room trying to see if he could find something else. He opened a multiple drawers,but found no posters or schedule.
She hid them well. He thought as he continued looking.
He gave the room one more glance and in the corner of his eye he saw a doll .Well more like dolls of akumatized villains,Ladybug and Chat Noir. He made his way to where the dolls were located. He dropped down to his knees as he picked up the Lady Wifi doll. He had seen the dolls during the puppeteer akuma,but he never had a chance to look at them up close. He studied them and was shocked that their outfits were identical to the real ones. And from what he knew was that Marinette was nowhere near the 3 akumas. Nowhere near any, but the Evillustrator. But if she was it was only for a a few seconds and even then she wouldn't be able to see all the details of the suits.
And even the Ladyblog couldn't capture all the villain's suits details. He understood the Evillustrator because she had been with him for along time. Earning her enough time to see the details of his suits design. But Lady Wifi was Alya which meant the person who chased after the akumas took pictures,and videos. Couldn't because, she was the akuma. Rogercop,well he was sure that she didn't get enough time to his suit either. But here they were, identical suits and all.
Ladybug and himself he didn't question as much since they were seen and taken pictures of every time there was an akuma. Could it be possible that she knew how the suits exactly looked like because she had been there?
He took a deep breath and placed the dolls away to where they were. He stood up and was about to turn around when he spotted a small box right behind the dolls. He moved the Lady Wifi doll again in order to get to the box. He cautiously grabbed the box. He stared at it for a few seconds when finally he reached for the lid of the box.
He let the box fall and drop to the floor. His heart dropped as to what he saw inside of it. This…. it couldn't.. this couldn't be happening. Slightly terrified he picked up the box,heart racing.
His hands slightly shaking picked up the small doll inside the box. He turned the doll over to reveal that his fear was right. The doll was like the others in size. Though this one had pins and needles sticking out of it's body. There were tears in the doll's body and stuffing falling out of it's sides. He noticed that there was a needle directly where the heart of the doll was.
But the thing that terrified him the most was that the doll was...the doll was him. It was him with needles and pins stabbed into his doll body. It was him with the needles falling out of huge gaps.
Why? He thoughts asked why?
Just... why? He was startled out of his thoughts when his phone buzzed The alarm he set. He checked the time 4:55. Marinette was bound to be back any second. Quickly he placed the doll in the box,but not without taking a picture first. He heard Marinette scream for some unknown reason.
He shut the box close and hid it behind the dolls. He rapidly made a run for the desk chair,grabbing the plate of cookies in the process. He tried to look as normal as possible.
The trapdoor opened and blue eyes peeked into the room. Then two other pairs of eyes peeked into the room, Alya and Nino He thought. The three of them came in and he just smiled. Pretending that he didn't just witness the most terrifying thing he's seen.
"Hey guys." He awkwardly waved. Alya raised an eyebrow,Nino just looked at him and Marinette. Well she looked like her biggest secret had been exposed. And it probably was.
"Your mom let me up ." he told her. Alya and Nino just shrugged as they set their books aside. Marinette though was left there standing, until Alya told her to sit.
"So who's ready to study?" Alya asked. Adrien with a sick feeling in his stomach, nodded and opening his book to the homework page.
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After leaving the bakery he didn't waste time going back home and looking at the picture. His stomach churned as he observe the doll again. Though he really didn't need the picture because if he closed his eyes he could see the doll.
The way the sewing pins and needles poke into the Adrien doll. He suddenly felt the prickle of the needles and pins on his skin. The way the needle stabbed the doll in the heart made his heart hurt too. His eyes became large as he figured out why she had that doll
It was so obvious as to why she had a doll of him. So obvious a fool could see it. It just couldn't be for that reason. Could it?
She must be using that because she hated him. She must had stabbed and teared opened a doll that looked like him because she hated him. Of course he was stupid in thinking she would forgive for the gum incident. He just couldn't believe that Marinette had resorted to that just to control him.
He couldn't believe she was had resorted to...to...
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...voodoo. Marinette was voodooing him. And he didn't know what to do about it.
Thanks again to all who reviewed! And thanks to Chococat(guest) for the voodoo doll idea!
When I say that in italicized letters I meant voodoo. Plus sorry for any spelling grammar errors.
And if don't know what their review said then here it is(well the voodooo part):
Or maybe Marinette can be in the process of creating an Adrien doll, (just like she has a Chat Noir one), and since it's in the process of being made , it has a bunch of pins stabbed into it and stuffing falling out of it from unsewed gaps. Adrien jumps to the confusion that she made one and teared it open and stabbed it out of hate because she's targeting him or trying to control him with a voodoo doll it something.
Anyway,Hope you enjoyed! Review!
Until next time!
~Petaledroses