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Teams:
Blue Diamonds: Jacob, Leia, Mary, Nicolle, Orlando, Selina, Spencer.
Green Emeralds: Alieli, Ambrose, Edna, Franc, Leo, Max, Philly, Thomas.
Orange Quartz: Ally, Barb, Jose, Kairi, Kevin, Ryan, Toxa.
Purple Amethysts: Juliett, Luna, Rolando, Sara, Scott, Stephanie.
Red Rubies: Alvaro, Kiran, Larson, Phil, Polly, Randell, Tabby, Vanessa.
Yellow Ambars: Ana, Clayton, Darcel, Denis, Faith, Miko, Stella, Warren.
''Last time in Total Drama School Challenge...'', said Rowan, while the camera showed the entrance of the Bracafost Who Watowimo ''...our 46 students had to compete in a 'frozen challenge', hehe, ok, the teams had to found the flag of the enemy teams, and take it to their bases. There were winner teams, like the Red Rubies, and loser teams like the Purple Amethysts, cof cof, again. Nick created a bad plan, and Chip wanted to save Jacob, and it causes their eliminations'', narrated Rowan, while the images of the last episode was showed
''Today, the teams will compete in the darkness, uuhh'', said Rowan, this time in a dark room with a flashlight that he had under his head to have a more frightening look ''who will win?, who will be eliminated?, and who will found one idol?, discover here, in...
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INTRO
*The music starts with three cameras coming out of a tree, in the middle of a soccer field and inside a wall, the camera passes quickly inside the office of Rowan that read some papers, and then leave the office*
Dear Mom and Dad, I'm doin' fine,
*the camera traveled inside of the pool (a very large one)*
You guys are on my mind,
*the bubles fill the view*
You asked me what I wanted to be,
*Ryan was swimming with a black swimsuit along, with Kairi who wears an skull bikini top and black bottoms, suddenly a shark and a whale appear, attracting both, but was Spencer with a projection machine, then, another boat with Thomas and Max hit him,
And now I think the answer is pain to see,
*Jose was near and start to scoff them, but Frenchie was aside him and pushed him into the water, and Frenchie scoff him*
I wanna be famous,
*Inside a classroom, Randell was rolling a globe, nearly Toxa, Ally and Barb singing and Denis and Kevin seeing them, the camera goes to an olympic stadium where Scott and Brandon go to have a race*
I wanna live close to the sun
*Miko was seeing a soccer match between Franc, Ambroise, Leo, Philly and Orlando, Jacob, Chip, Nicolle, in the steps, Kiran and Larson was seeing the game with indifference, Phil was commenting the game and Darcel was supporting the teams*
Go pack your bags, 'cause I've already won,
*Many guys were giving things to Selina, Mary and Leia, Edna give a book, and, Ana and Stella gave food, the last 2 were competing for who have the best food*
Everything to prove, nothing in my way,
*Nick, Vanessa, Faith and Clayton only watched this with confusion*
I'll get there one day,
*In the cafeteria Lucas and Gina was cooking the food, while Vanessa and Tabby were talking, and Warren and Polly were pulsing, with Alvaro seeing*
Cause, I wanna be famous!
*Finally Polly won, and Alvaro kissed her in the cheek, making Polly blush*
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na!
*Rolando, Sara, Alieli and Stephanie was in a Math class, Stephanie doesn't understand anything, Rolando passes a letter to Sara and Alieli was writing a poem*
I wanna be, I wanna be, I wanna be famous!
Juliett and Luna was seeing the sunset, Luna touch the hand of Juliett and they going to kiss but it's cutted because Scott and Brandon crash with them.
I wanna be, I wanna be, I wanna be famous!
At the end, all the contestants are eating a candy and whistling the song, and a voice and the screen say:
TOTAL DRAMA SCHOOL CHALLENGE
Two passed from the elimination of Nick and Chip, and the only person that was sad for the elimination of one of them was Jacob...
''(sigh), Chip is out, now, I am so lonely'', he was lone in his room, because Spencer and Orlando had already gotten up earlier. But in one moment, Orlando enter the room, he sat on his bed, and bit his chocolate bar
''Hey Jacob, why so lone?'', asked the chocolate brother
''Because I have not made friends in the game, well, none without counting Chip, and now he isn't here'', answer Jacob
''Don't feel bad for him, he voted himself so, that you would continue and win'', said Orlando, he had the mouth full of chocolate
''I don't know if that is better or worse, because I don't have any friends in the game, and I'm sure that if our team lose, you will vote off me'', said Jacob, Orlando was thinking for a little time
''We can be friends...'', said Orlando, Jacob was surprised for that
''What?...''
''Friends, yeah, people who are there in the good and bad'', said Orlando
''I know what is be friends, but I thinked that you are the kind of person works alone'', said Jacob
''Me too, but I haven't found any idol ín the time that we are here, I need... an ally, also I'm starting to feel lonely'', said Orlando, when he finished his chocolate bar
''So, do you want to be my friend?'', said Orlando, getting up from his bed and offering his hand to Jacob
''Mm... okay!'', said Jacob, he was thinking for a little moment, but finally, he accepted the handshake, and they leave the room
CONFESSIONAL START:
Jacob: Orlando seems like a good guy, well, really I'm desperate, but he's not a bad guy eh?
Orlando FIVE DAYS without find the black or the blue idol, hmp, I have two theories, or no one have found them, or someone have found them, I don't think that someone have them, but... I have to take a caution
CONFESSIONAL END
In the cafeteria, the Purple Amethysts was having a little conversation...
''Ok, I will say the obvious thing, we don't need a leader, hereinafter, if someone has an idea, he or she can share it, but the others aren't bound to follow it'', said Scott, most of the team nodded
''What?, but that is anarchy, and that isn't good!'', exclaimed Stephanie
''It's necessary for the team Stephanie, we will not win if we continue with other plan'', said Rolando
''Yeah, it seems that the leadership position of this team is cursed'', said Sara, everyone laughed with this commentary, everyone less one...
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Stephanie: I'm worry, it isn't a good plan!
CONFESSIONAL END
In the Green Emeralds' table, the males was laughing for a joke said by Franc
''Uh?, of what are they laughing?'', asked Max
''Yeah, because I don't understand'', said Philly
''Men...'', said Edna, while she and Alieli was reading a book
The Red Rubies was enjoying their food, winned by the last challenge
''This is delicious!'', said Kiran
''Yeah, I hope we win all the remaining challenges of the season'', said Tabby
''It would be good and all, but it's 0% probable'', said Phil
In this time, all the teams enjoyed their breakfast, also their lunch. The day was very quiet, practically, all the day was like that, because Rowan doesn't appear that day. He appears in the night
''Sorry for the wait guys'', said Lucas
''Go to the projection room right now'', said Gina
''Ugh... FINALLY!'', said Selina
It was the 22:00, many students want to sleep, but no do a challenge, he was next to Fembra
''Oh, a Math challenge, interesting...'', said Nicolle
''Students, sorry for the wait, but this challenge have to be played in the night'', said Rowan
''Why?'', asked Nicolle
''You will discover it'', said Fembra, then, she threw a smoke grenade, that stunned everyone, except she and Rowan because they use masks
Leia was waking up in the middle of a dark room. She had a small lantern at her side, she seemed not scare, because her face, only showed seriousness
''W-what... what happened?'', she still coughed a little, but managed to fully recover consciousness ''We were in that room, suddenly, Rowan and that dude threw us a gas and...''
She noticed the small lantern
''What is this?...'', she noticed also, a piece of paper stuck to the lantern, near that paper, were another paper, but now with a number, it was the number 3, that was written in green. ''Interesting...'', she turn on the lantern and started reading the note:
Welcome to your third challenge, my dear students. I hope the darkness doesn't affect you, and that sleep doesn't affect you neither. Ok, basically the challenge is this: All of you are in one place of the Academia, most are completely alone, others will be lucky to have a partner. Near tis note, you will find a paper with a number with the color of your team, it will be vital for the challenge. To win, you have to steal these numbers to the other students, when you do this, you must to go to the projection room, there, you will find six boxes with the symbol of your teams, put your numbers there, and the team that steal more numbers (obviously, it's worth a 5 more than four 1s). The team and the second team who have the less points, will eliminate someone. Now, these are the rules:
1. All the contestants must to have their numbers (those that you found near this note), ALL THE TIME. The unic form that this doesn't happen, is if other student steal that number. In that case, that contestant, will be eliminate of the challenge, and is totally forbidden to recover that numbe or steal another. If he/she do that, he/she will be disqualifed of the season
2. You can only steal numbers to a maximum THREE STUDENTS, after that, you have to put the numbers in the box, if you steal the number to fourth student, you will be disqualifed of the challenge. Those numbers will be for the first student who find them
3. If you steal a student who has more than one number, his/her own number, and all the numbers that he/she has, will be pass to you
4. The student who do the most points of the 5th/6th teams, will have inmunity
5. The strongest members of each team (Orlando, Thomas, Barb, Scott, Polly and Warren), will start with 10 points everyone. So, they are your major objetives
6. The small advantage of the Red Rubies is that they have night vision glasses. The small disadvantage of the Green Emeralds and the Purple Amethysts, is that all of their members (except Thomas and Scott) will start with the number one (that means they are totally obligated to get numbers)
This challenge will end at the midnight and at the 1:00 will be the elimination ceremony. Lucas and Gina will be in the projection room taking care of the boxes, so, you don't worry if another team steal your numbers. GOOD LUCK. You will need it.
When Faith had finished reading the note, she was very very scared, she take her number (the number 5), and start the challenge, her legs and arms were shaking, she even thought about staying still
''T-this is-s a great idea!, if you stay still, no one can steal your number'', she only was talking to herself, well, in these challenges, be afraid of the dark isn't a good idea
''Come on Faith, you are better than this!, if my team looks at me like this, they will not hesitate to eliminate me'', she wants to regain confidence in herself, then, she stand up and continue
Near that place, Scott was searching a contestant to steal his number, after all, he has the number 10, so, it makes him a clear objetive, but he isn't afraid, he has experience in darkness
''Ok, if I was someone else where would I be?'', but he noticed about something interesting, another person was with him...
''If I was someone else where would I be?'', Faith was searching others, but she was talking very high, Scott hid behing a pole, because he heard the voice of the girl, he was waiting the best moment to attack
''I only say, if my team lose, I can join in the alliance of Clayton and...'', she couldn't react when the guy attacked her
''FAITH HAS BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE CHALLENGE'', Rowan said by an intercom
''Wait... what!?'', the girl exclaimed, but she only see her own number in the right of the Athletic Gamer
CONFESSIONAL START:
Faith: I only thinked that... if my team lose, I can join in the alliance of Clayton and Miko, they are the most intelligent people in the team, but, It was only the plan B, now... I NEED IT!
Scott: Don't blame me, but I am tired of losing!, I want to win for only, one team, like other teams, and... this was part of the challenge, I don't cause the elimination of Faith, no?
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''I want to know... Why Rowan put us in the same place?!'', said Ana, because she was with Stella, her enemy, she had the number 1, and Stella had the number 7
''And you question that to me?, I also want to know the reason!'', said Stella
At the start of the challenge, Rowan and Fembra put them together for a strange reason. In all the challenge, they were more interested to fight between them than focus on the challenge
''ANA AND STELLA HAVE BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE CHALLENGE'', said Rowan by the intercom
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Kairi: It was easy, remember, when you go in the sea, don't fight with your teammates, trust me, you will need that energy to fight with your captain
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''Ok Fembra, let's recap, what students have been eliminated from the challenge?'', asked Rowan in his office
''Well... Ambrose stole the number 1 and 10 to Jacob and Orlando, Franc, the number 1 to Juliett, Spencer the numbers 4, 3 and 6 to Denis, Larson and Max respectively, Scott, the numbers 5 and 7 to Faith and Vanessa, Kairi, stole the numbers 1 and 7 to Ana and Stella, Darcel the number 2 from Kiran and finally Miko stole the number 4 from Phil'', said Fembra
''Wow there are some numbers'', said the host
''No problems to me'', said the math teacher, then, they continue seeing the show
CONFESSIONAL START:
Ambrose: Haha, it was very easy, you should have seen their faces when I steal them
Juliett: I hope my team doesn't lose again
Denis: Ahm... go Yellow Ambars?
Vanessa: Argh!... my enemy win me again!
Darcel: Pass time with Clayton is incredible!, he is the first person who really
Kiran: Darcel stole me?, nooooo...!
Clayton: I am starting to understand Kiran, that number was mine!
Phil: I don't understand how a clown stole me, well... not a clown, but yes a guy who has green and a blue eyes
Sara: The darkness is not my best strenght, but is not a problem (she closed her eyes, she began to tremble and open the eyes), excuse me... (she left the confessional very fast)
CONFESSIONAL END
''ALLY HAS BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE CHALLENGE'', said Rowan by the intercom
''Well... at least if my team loses I'm safe'', he said with absolute confidence, in the challenge, he had not stolen anything, but he still has his number with him
''But I need to steal a number...'', when he said this, Mary (who was behind him) took advantage and attacked him
''RYAN HAS BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE GAME'', said Rowan by the intercom
''Ehh..?!''
CONFESSIONAL START:
Mary: (adorable laugh) upsi...
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Thomas were walking over a field, intenting find another person
''LEO HAS BEEN ELIMINATED'', said Rowan by the intercom
When Thomas heard this, he said: ''Oh no... my team are losing members very speed, I need to do something''
Warren was walking there
''Hey, Thomas...''
''Oh, Warren...''
''So, we will fight?'', asked Warren
''Yeah...'', said Thomas, and they started to fight, intenting steal the number of the other
Polly and Alvaro were near, they don't steal a number, but this is their opportunity to catch 'fat fish'. And when Thomas and Warren continue fighting Alvaro and Polly approaches this and stole their 20 points
''THOMAS AND WARREN HAVE BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE CHALLENGE'', said Rowan by the intercom
Alvaro and Polly clasped their hands
CONFESSIONAL START:
Alvaro: Maybe at the end, Ambrose stole my numbers, but it doesn't matters, well... I don't know why, but, when I am with Polly, I feels... different
Polly: To be honest, I would rather have been alone
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Alieli and Edna were in a long corridor, they had a small participation in the challenge, but they still have their numbers with them
''It is silent... too silent'', said Alieli, when Randell and Toxa appeared in front of them
''Uh?, you were there all the time?'', asked Randell
''Yeah, I also was waiting for you'', said Toxa, then, she stole the number to Randell
''RANDELL HAS BEEN ELIMINATED FROM THE CHALLENGE'', said Rowan by the intercom
Seeing this, Alieli and Edna ran as fast as they could
''Hey!, come back here!'', said Toxa, then, she ran too to catch them
''Ok, Kevin, Barbara and Luna are going to the boxes to put their numbers'', said Rowan in his office
''Yeah, it's time to end the challenge'', said Fembra
''What?''
''Yeah, it's 00:00'', said Fembra, Rowan looked at his clock
''Oh damn...'', he was ready to speak by the intercom
''All of the contestants, have to go to the projection room, the challenge has ended''
When everyone was in the projection room, Lucas and Gina started with the count of the points, it passed a lot of minutes, but finally they wrote the results in a paper and gave it to Rowan
''Ok students, like you, I am very tired, so, I only will say the positions...'', said the host with a particular exhaustion ''...the Green Emeralds won the challenge!'', the Green Emeralds celebrated for their first victory
''The Blue Diamonds are second''
''The Purple Ametthysts are third'', the team were happy for their first no-defeat
CONFESSIONAL START:
Stephanie: Matbe the anarchy is a good option
Luna: With less members, better performance!
CONFESSIONAL END
''The Red Rubies are fourth''
''The Yellow Ambars are fifth, so, you have to eliminate someone'', the Yellow Ambars were very unhappy for this
CONFESSIONAL START:
Faith: Oh no!, My plan has to work
CONFESSIONAL END
''The same with you Orange Quartz, you are sixth, you have 1 hour to think about who will be eliminated'', said Rowan, he leaved the room
Clayton and Miko was talking near a brick wall
''So, Faith will be eliminated no?'', asked Miko
''Obviously...'', said Clayton, but unexpectedly, Faith came the place
''Guys, I need your help, please!'', she said, Clayton and Miko exchanged looks
''I will join in your alliance!, think it, you will have an extra vote, insured!''
CONFESSIONAL START:
Clayton: Interesting...
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''Okay...'', said Clayton
''Eh?... are you sure?'', asked Miko
''No, but it's an insured extra vote...''
''Ugh... ok'', said a disappointed Miko
''Great!, and for who we will vote?'', said Faith
''Vote... (censored)'', said Clayton
''Uh?, why?'', asked Faith
''Only vote (censored)!, you will enter the alliance, yes or no?'', said Clayton, Faith only nodded worried
''Good, Miko convince Denis to vote for (censored)'', said Clayton, Miko raised his thumb
''So, you will not vote me, yeah?'', asked Ally to her alliance
''Obviously no...'', said Barb
''But with our votes will not be enough, you have to convince Kairi to vote Ryan'', said Toxa
''I will try...'', said Ally, then, she leave the room
''You will vote Ally no?'', asked Ryan to his friends
''She was the first eliminated, so yes'', said Kevin
''With our votes won't be enough, you have to convince Kairi to vote Ally, the girls probably are making an alliance to vote you'', said Jose
''I will try'', said Ryan, then, she leaved
CONFESSIONAL START:
Kairi: Both, Ally and Ryan talk me to vote for the other, argh, and I thinked that today was going a quiet day
CONFESSIONAL END
London, United Kingdom. 1:00
In the projection room, there was the third elimination ceremony of the season, but the second time where the Orange Quartz have to eliminate someone, the first for the Yellow Ambars and the first where the Purple Amethysts weren't there. Many of them were nervious, others were angry or confident. No one were totally sure for who would be eliminated in that night, everyone of the contestants decided their election. Finally, Rowan, Lucas and Gina came to the room, with thirteen diplomas in their hands
''Orange Quartz... welcome to your second elimination ceremony, as you know, there are seven of you, but Lucas and Gina only have six diplomas for you, so... one of you will be eliminate...'', explained Rowan ''...as I said, the person who win the most points, will have inmunity, and that person is: Kairi!'', Lucas gave the diploma to the pirate, because she did the most points in the challenge, but she was nervious for the situation of her teammates
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''Uhm... well, it was funny guys, good luck for all of you'', said Ally to her ex-teammates, then, she leave the room very sad
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Kairi: Ugh... I am feeling bad right now
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''Ok, that was all for this time'', said Rowan, then, he looked to the other team ''Yellow Ambars, welcome to your first elimination ceremony, I am sure that you know the rules. If you receive a diploma, you are in, but if you don't receive one, you are out'', said Rowan, the guys only were seeing, but the girls were very nervious, then, Lucas take one of the diplomas of his hand ''Clayton, you did the most points of your team, so, you receive the first diploma'', Lucas gave the diploma to Clayton, he only smiled and see the elimination ceremony
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''Uh?, why my team eliminate me?, Did I make something bad?'', asked Darcel, but no one of the team answered
''Uhm... okay!, sixth eliminated isn't bad now, isn't it?, good luck friends!'', then, she go to her sister ''I will be rooting for you Kiran!'', she said, Kiran only rolled her eyes, when Darcel was leaving the room
Ally and Darcel were in the bus of shame, then, the bus went, with the fifth and sixth eliminated contestants of the season inside. When the bus were far enough, Rowan was in the entrance, ready for end the show
''This was another incredible, and dramatic episode, two students less, there are 42. We are closer to reaching the final and increasing the drama, because one villian finally made his masterful move. Will the Green Emeralds or the Red Rubies lose one day?, Are there anyone in the Blue Diamonds who doesn't want only win?, Are the Purple Amethysts going to improve?, Will Barb and Toxa continue with their alliance now, without Ally?, Why Clayton wanted to eliminate Darcel?, discover it, the next time in...
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VOTES:
ORANGE QUARTZ:
Ryan: 3 (Ally, Barb, Toxa)
Ally: 4 (Jose, Kairi, Kevin, Ryan)
YELLOW AMBARS:
Ana: 1 (Stella)
Stella: 1 (Ana)
Faith: 2 (Darcel, Warren)
Darcel: 4 (Clayton, Denis, Faith, Miko)
Teams:
Blue Diamonds: Jacob, Leia, Mary, Nicolle, Orlando, Selina, Spencer.
Green Emeralds: Alieli, Ambrose, Edna, Franc, Leo, Max, Philly, Thomas.
Orange Quartz: Barb, Jose, Kairi, Kevin, Ryan, Toxa.
Purple Amethysts: Juliett, Luna, Rolando, Sara, Scott, Stephanie.
Red Rubies: Alvaro, Kiran, Larson, Phil, Polly, Randell, Tabby, Vanessa.
Yellow Ambars: Ana, Clayton, Denis, Faith, Miko, Stella, Warren.
ELIMINATED:
43. Darcel
44. Ally
45. Chip
46. Nick
47. Frenchie
48. Brandon
Reason:
44. Ally Gasperino (The Over the Top DJ): Ally is a good character, I am sure of that, but if I analyze the other characters of Orlando Butler, she falls short. I want to creat plots for every contestant of the show (some may have more weight in the plot than others, but it's the same), and find a great plot for her was a hard work, for now, Ally fulfiled her role in this story, I promise that if I do a second season (or returns), she will have more leadership. Good Bye Ally!
43. Darcel Kirkland (The Artist): Uf... believe in me, this elimination literally broke my heart, but well... someone have to be eliminated, in this case, that was Darcel, I only will say the same that I said with Ally, she can return for a second season, or in this same season, I don't even know, but right now, she is no necessary for the story. Vaarwel Darcel!
And this is the fifth chapter!. I want to do it long, because... ok, THE NEXT WEEK WILL BE NO CHAPTER, this friday, I will have a very important exam, and I don't have time to write, sorry, and for that, I wrote this chapter with many plots that the season will have, and I will give you interesting questions, nothing more to say right now, only review the chapter, favorite/follow the story, PM if you want to change anything of your characters, or... if you want to give me ideas
Questions of the chapter:
1. What do you think about the elimination?
2. What do you think about Total DramaRama?
3. What do you think about Total Drama (in general, all the seasons, TDI, TDA, TDWT, TDROTI, TDAS, TDPI, TDRR, you can give me a short opinion of everyone)?
4. Who do you think, will be the next eliminated?
DinoKea: Ok, I am doing a great job with the eliminations. This eliminations make sense too?. I update every week, but, my story isn't necessary short. Wow, you guessed one elimination, my respects. Yeah, I have the example of Owen and Cameron, who won but no one expected that in the start of the season
xxPrincxssxx: Hehe, now, the Purple Amethysts don't lose, and is because they don't have a leader. Yeah, all of the contestants need their small great time. Ok, you are the second person who say Ambrose, he has certain reputation. Haha, don't worry, Sara is still inside
Zoryan El Muerto: Interesting... I am with you, the quality is first. Mm... Ambrose and Rolando will have problems if they don't change their game
Annoyingalarmclock: Hey, happy to see you in the reviews. Ok you are in half-half. Ok, no one are worring for the words, I am good for that
Beastboycoolman15: I'm glad that you take it well. Ok, everyone are saying that Ambrose or Orlando, very interesting. Also, thanks for the plot idea, it's very interesting too
King Pessimist: Don't worry, I know that you are reading the story. Ok, I asked you elimination and you talked also about Scott, I like it! (it makes a more complete review). The chapters are having around 7000-8000 words, and I am comfort with that. In this chapter appears a new villian and no one said him, imagine, with the time we will have more villians still!. Well, tecnically, you guessed the elimination of Darcel, so, congratulations! (also you seem have a better english than me)
Josh Spicer: The story needed it. Yeah, a lot of wildcards that slowly are appearing. Well!, I am liking to write with those characters!
Candela Monsoon: Oh, sorry, you didn't like 3 of the 4 eliminations, let's see with these. I like the chapters that minimum pass, the 5000 words. Thanks, I will try!