For those who are Reading this story and commenting that it needed to be redone, well i've been thinking about rewriting the entire story anyway. My own personal reason, is because it doesn't work into the other three. I've been wanting to explore Harry's relationship with Susan in it. my only problem was how to address that relationship in the Phoenix Secret. yeah i know that some of those are wondering about the love scenes between each character, i'm planning on changing most of them.
Just in case you know, i only write these stories for fun. i don't take my writing seriously.