Hello, I'm just writing this text to know your thoughts on my story.

I want to know your opinion on it, know if it is good and bad and if I need to change something.

In addition, I would like to know everyone's ideas : how do you want the story to unfold ? I intend to follow the original story of One Piece while incorporating new members into the crew of Luffy, to make the latter more powerful. In all, they will already be nineteen when Luffy goes to the New World! if you have any character ideas you want to incorporate, let me know. And also ideas to improve them (someone already suggested to me that Lucy eat a fruit of the devil, but I have no idea of the power that would be good for her).

I hope I can have answers, Thank you.