Hey guys, gals and pals!
Special thanks to Hollyspeckle ! I hope you like this chapter! :)
Just a warning, there is some heavy subject matter in this chapter.
Shinykit was mad. She was really mad. Really, really, REALLY mad. She was just about to be apprenticed! Then GleamingEyes came rushing into camp with news of EmoClan. Just her luck.
"What's wrong dear?" asked a voice behind her.
Shinykit wheeled around. "What do you want, PrettyFace?" She grumbled. PrettyFace gave her a soft smile. "I just wanted too see how you are doing," she mewed. Shinykit kit sighed and turned away. "Fine."
"I don't think so," said PrettyFace. Shinykit flicked her tail, "I don't need pity." "It's not pity, Shinykit," said PrettyFace. "Tell me what's wrong." Finally, after a few moments of hot silence, Shinykit caved. "I just want to be an apprentice!" she meowed, "I just want to be good enough!" Silence. Then, "Why don't you think you're good enough?"
"Because of Rainbowpaw," she whispered. "What?" asked PrettyFace kindly. Shinykit turned around. "Because of Rainbowpaw!" she cried. "I'm always being compared to her! Shinykit, why can't you be more like your sister?' 'Shinykit, you should work harder to be an apprentice!'" Shinykit sobbed, " 'Shinykit, your sister is so MUCH BETTER THAN YOU!" She screamed the last few words and crumpled to the ground, crying. PrettyFace padded over to the shiny golden kit, and wrapped herself around her. "Shhh, I know, I know. I'm here. I love you."
That's when Shinykit realized that PrettyFace was more of a mother to her than SilveryStar.
. . .
The EmoClan cats eyes widened. They stared at SilveryStar.
"Who are you, and what are you doing on my territory?" SilveryStar asked, her normally too cheerful voice dripped with menace. Gloompaw shifted nervously. DarkSoul growled. "See? You little rat, you got us caught!" he snarled. SilveryStar lashed her tail. "I asked a question. I expect to be answered." she meowed. DarkSoul glared at the silver molly, but refused to talk. "I-I'm Gloompaw," the apprentice whispered. Her voice barely audible. "This... this is Dark!-" DarkSoul lashed out and cuffed her hard over the back of her head.
"Shut up!" he barked. Rainbowpaw grimaced. Lightpaw covered her eyes. She did not have the stomach to watch this apprentice get beat.
. . .
Gloompaw cowered. Her head throbbed from the blow she had received. The frightening silver molly was glowering at DarkSoul. She knew he would attack. She knew he would kill. Weather that was her or the silver molly, she did not know.
. . .
SilveryStar watched the unfortunate apprentice. She noticed the way she crouched, fearing the wrath of her mentor. She noticed the little scars and thin pelt. The tom across from her narrowed his eyes, and leaped for her heart.
Oh wow. That took a dark turn.
It's becoming less and less of a spoof fanfic now.