Here is rewritten chapter 3, not else to say but just enjoy.


Warning: I do not own RWBY. Fictional events that I make are mine as well as my 3 OC's. I do not own Drake Maverick/Venom.


Having left the waterfall about thirty minutes ago, they have made their way along the forest to the nearest city where Kuzco lives. During that time, the three of them, four if you count Venom, have been having conversations with each other to pass the time. They all seem to get along with each other as they seem to have the same interest. Such as saving people from the monsters of their worlds. Drake, David, and Venom find out more about the world as it's full of Grimm creatures, and huntsmen and huntresses help them eliminate them. Grimm, are monsters inhabiting various parts of Remnant, which the heroes find out what they call Earth in this universe.

They are described as "creatures of destruction" that lack a soul; hence, they are unable to use Aura. They are also drawn to feelings of negativity - such as envy, sadness, loneliness, hatred, etc. Often congregating on the source of these emotions.

And because of them, they learned from Kuzco, who wants to be a huntsmen, that they have a school for them that teaches people how to defend their world. Huntsmen and Huntresses are licensed elite warriors dedicated to slaying the Creatures of Grimm and whose duty is to "uphold the peace" of their world.

To the heroes, it sounds a lot like what they do in their world, minus getting a license. And since Kuzco is willing to share this information, the three thought it is a great idea to tell them about their world. Such as them being heroes as they do what's best for the world, even if it means getting blood on them. After explaining what they do, Kuzco got teal excited as he agree the type of things in the world need to be put down even if everyone thinks it's not right.

"So, I have to ask." Kuzco says to David as they pass by more rocks. "Do you have your own symbiote or not? If not, do you have any types of powers?" The Faunus asks.

"To answer your first question, no I don't have my own symbiote." David tells him. "But yeah, I have these superpowers?" David answers.

"Really? What kind?" Kuzco asks.

"This will be fun to explain." Drake says with a smile.

"Might as well throw it all out there." David mutters to himself. "I'm not technically a human."

This got Kuzco in surprise as he didn't know if he heard David right. "What?"

"I'm actually an alien from outer space." David explains.

"But you look so….human." Kuzco said in this revelation.

"Yeah…..there are a lot of aliens in space as some can look human just like my species." David explains about him. "But back to my powers. I can blast fire out of my eyes." David says.

"Wait, what?!" Kuzco says in surprise that his new friend can actually do that. "Dang, man."

"I can hear a deer running just twenty miles from here. I can see through solid objects, I can run faster than the speed of sound-" David explains but Kuzco cuts him off.

"Wait, rewind. Expand on your whole see-through sold object powers." Kuzco asks. "Do you do that to every girl's body?" Kuzco asks with a smirk.

At this point, Drake and Venom couldn't take it anymore as they began to laugh uncontrollably. "Hahahahahaha!" The duo laugh when Kuzco asks if David pervs on girl's bodies.

"No, I don't do that kind of stuff." David tries to explain while Kuzco still has a smirk as if he didn't believe it or not.

"Yeah, but back when David first discovered it, he couldn't control it. Can't concentrate when it was towards girls." Venom adds to the story which made Kuzco smile even more at this revitalization.

"True, don't forget that he did X-ray a group of girls before in the girl's locker room as they changed clothes." Drake also added as Kuzco began to laugh at David's embarrassing stories.

This got the Kryptpnoian pissed off as he doesn't like too many people knowing about this as it's too private to share with anyone. "Dude! That is not cool! You promised you weren't going to tell anyone." David said with anger that his own brother would reveal this kind of info.

Drake was calming down from the laugh but still couldn't help but chuckle at this. "I'm sorry, but it's too funny not to share." Drake tries to apologize.

"So were they hot?" Kuzco asks with a smile.

After a moment of hesitation, he decided to be honest about this since it's alrighty out in the open "Yeah, they were." David admitted.

"Especially this one girl, who is actually his now, girlfriend." Venoms says out loud.

David quickly turns to the symbiote "Venom! Quit talking!" David yells at the symbiote.

Venom didn't like the ideas he wanted to have some more fun. "Nah, I rather talk. I'm a chatterbox." Venom says with a smile.

"Hahaha!" Kuzco laughs at their antics. "So I gotta know, what else do you have?"

"As I was saying, I freeze things or blow something far away. I also have unbreakable skin with near invulnerability. As well as super strength as I can leap tall buildings in a single bound. And that's about it." David finishes explaining to Kuzco which shocks him that the Kryptonian can do all sorts of things.

"Dude that is so cool. Your like literally OP." Kuzco said with fascination as he then got curious. "Can you fly?"

Drakes snorts at this "Haha, he wishes." Drake tells him.

David sighs at this. "He's right. I can fly but for some reason, I just can't seem to do it." David says.

"Maybe Kara was right. Kryptonian girls do mature faster than Kryptonian boys." Drake teases even more.

"You know, you can just fuck yourself." David tells him, with a playful glare.

"Sorry to disappoint you. Artemis is already doing that." Drake says with a smile.

"That's gross, Drake." Venom spoke as he turns to his host. "No one wants to hear about your sex life because it sure is not pretty." Venom says which offends Drake.

"Hey!" Drake says offended while Kuzco and David laugh. He then turns to them with a glare of his own. "This isn't funny!"

"It is kind of funny." Kuzco says as he leans on David for support as they begin to laugh too hard at what venom has just revealed.

But that soon was cut short when they all hear a fierce roar out of nowhere along with the ground slightly shaking.

"What the hell was that?" Drake ask.

Kuzco then began to smell the area around them as the heroes watches him do so.

David looks at Kuzco. "Are you smelling the area?" David asks if he is really doing that.

"Yeah, I have this enhance sense." Kuzco explains as he continues to smell.

Venom mutters to Drake. "And I thought David's ability to do that was weird."

David then proceeded to ask the million dollar question."What do we got?" David asks as he knows that they are in trouble with the amount of noise being heard.

"Beowolves." Kuzco answered as they hear more roaring noises coming closer.

"I'm sorry a what?' Drake asks if heard it correctly.

That's when they found the source of all the road as it came close to them. Right in front of them are a huge pack of beowolves coming towards them as they roar at them with anger.

These creatures seem to be large, dark, werewolf-like Creatures of Grimm. Consistently, beowolves stand on their hind legs, albeit with a slouch, and are extremely muscular. the bone-like mask with red markings characteristic of most Grimm, as well as the bone-like spikes protruding from their arms, back, and knees. Their hands and feet are also tipped with long, sharp, white claws. Lastly, they seem to be taller than the three as they stand up to eight feet tall.

Drake looks at his brother, with a bit of concern on his face."Ok, got any ideas, David?" Drake ask.

"To be hone-" David was immediately cut off with whatever he was going to say when Kuzco began yelling as he charges in at the creatures.

"AHHHHHH!" Kuzco screams as he pulls reach from his pockets and pulls out his dual sledgehammers. He continues to run blindingly as he began hitting the Grimms left and right with powerful forces. In return the time he hits them resulted in them getting turned to dust.

"You want some of this?!" Kuzco screams at the beowolves in front of him, who just growl in response. "Then you get a piece of this, motherfucker!"

With that response, Kuzco then turns his dual sledgehammers into dual shotguns in the palm of his hands. With the shotguns, Kuzco begins to blast them all over the place as the forest is starting to get hit by the chaos that Kuzco is causing. He then jumps over one Beowulf and starts blasting it until it turns to dust.


Meanwhile, the heroes could only watch as they were amazed at what Kuzco can do. "Damn. I did not see that coming." Venom said in surprise at the skills that Kuzco has.

"That is so cool." Drake says, then he turns to David. "Uh, David we might want to-"

David just cuts him off knowing that they should get in on this action as well. "Noted." David then turns to Venom. I think it's time to let the beast out."

Venom smiles at David for what he said "I couldn't agree more." Venom said as he forms around Drake's body in black.

With that, Venom stood seven ft tall, and six inches. Venom has a muscular but hulking figure. His head alone looked terrifying, with white jagged 'lenses' that resembled crooked 'C's' that it uses for eyes, and a mouth full of razor-sharp, monstrous teeth that looked ready to tear through flesh, along with a long serpent-like tongue that hangs out from its mouth. The creature's hands were ended with razor-sharp claws, and they seemed to be ready to tear through the army that stood before them, but the main thing that was noticed was the fact it has long white veins covering all of his body.

Venom just licks his lips with anticipation. "Time for some lunch." Venom says as he jumps high in the air.

Venom lands on the ground with his foot smashing into a couple of beowolves destroying them in the process. He easily grabs one of the beowolves that was coming towards him and bites it's head off. Unfortunately, it turns to dust before Venom could swallow it.

This didn't sit well with the Kylntar as he spoke. "Aw, man… What a rip off." Venom says in disappointment.

"Just focus on defeating them, Venom. We'll get food later." Drake tells him.

"Fine." Venom says still disappointed that he can't eat the Grimm creatures.


Meanwhile, David runs towards a group of beowolves and begins to punch them left and right as they were knocked into the trees. One tries to jump on David, but he just disintegrates it with his heat vision turning them to dust. Another tries to run towards David, but without looking just knocked back the creature with ease.

That's when David sensed more coming towards him as he saw a group of beowolves coming towards him. Knowing what his next attack should be, he takes a deep breath of air before realeasing frost spitting out. This causes every turn he makes, to freeze the beowolves in blocks of ice. Seeing that he got all of them David raises his hands up for a thunderclap that shattered the ice beowovles in sight.


Back with Kuzco, he shot another Beowolf in the head when he noticed the black and white symbiote in his form. This resulted in Kuzco being slightly scared and pretty much impressed with Venom as he is glad that they are friends.

"RRRRRRRROOOOOAAAAARRRR!" Venom roars as he shot tendrils at a couple of beowolves before colliding them together.

"Venom, I think it's time for a ring around a rosie." David calls out as he runs towards him.

"Let's do it!" Venom screams in excitement.

Venom grabs David's leg and begins to spin him round and round in circles as he punches them in sight. While that's happening another group of beowolves comes towards them and surrounds them. But before they can do anything, David uses his heat vision and burn them to dust as Venom swings him in a circle over and over again. As Venom let go of him, David flew in a direction and destroyed the enemies in his path before going through one of them.

Venom jumps in the air and begins to claw his way through each beowolves that's in his path. With that ending, there is no more beowolves insight as they were all killed. That is until they see an even bigger beowolf called an Alpha Beowolf. This creature is covered in more bone-like armor and spines than the typical specimen. It has a more angular skull, larger teeth, and sharp triangular ears.

David turns to Venom as they spotted the Alpha Beowolf coming toward them with rage.

"Do you want this or I should?" David asks Venom, already knowing the answer.

"Please, like you need to know." Venom says as lightly slaps David's shoulder. With a smirk

But before Venom can do anything, Kuzco stops him in his path. "Step aside, ladies. I'll show you how it's usually done here." Kuzco says with a smirk.

Kuzco preceded to run at super-speed and begins to shoot the Alpha Beowolf, but it does nothing as the bullets bounce off like they were nothing. Kuzco just glares at it as he changes his dual shotguns back to dual sledgehammers as gave the creature a right hook using his weapons. He jumps on the creature's back which surprises David, Drake, and Venom as the alpha beowulf tries tor each for him but with no avail. The Faunus then pulls his weapons to the side and slams them on each side of the alpha beowolf's head resulting in it's heading exploding.

"That was awesome." Drake says in excitement as Venom shrinks down and back into his host body but still forms on the shoulder.

"Never seen anything like." Venom says with a creepy smile.

"That's impressive." David tells Kuzco with a calm but serious demeanor.

"No, you guys are the cool ones." Kuzco spoke. " Especially the combo moves. Those are sick. Maybe we can form our own combos." Kuzco says liking the idea of cool special combo moves.

"Yeah, I might have some ideas on what we should do." Venom says. "But first can we please get something to eat. I'm starving here for the need of chocolate.."

"Yeah, my house is not too far." Kuzco says. "I have plenty of chocolates you can snack on."

"Great, I can eat about twenty hamburgers right now." David says nonchalantly.

"Hahahaha." Kuzco laughs, thinking that David was just joking, but stops when he sees David is serious.

"He's not joking." Drake tells the Fanus.

"Dang, did not expect you to eat that much." Kuzco says in surprise as they continue their walk.

Unknown to the teens, they were not alone as four individuals were watching them from a distance.

"Are we sure it's a wise decision to pull David and Drake out of their world?" An unknown person said.

"This seems like a bad idea to be honest." The second unknown person say.

"He's right, doing so will be catastrophic for their world. There will be an invasion coming to David and Drake's world very soon." A third person said agreeing with the first individual.

"Unfortunately yes it's necessary. If not then they would have lost a lot more heroes than they should of. Plus as you know that David and Drake have a destiny here when they meet Team RWBY and JNPR. Just like we changed it so David has Drake as a brother when they originally weren't going to be one. This way in this world, they'll find the happiness and the love that they both deserve." The fourth unknown person explains to his three friends

"I hope you're right about this." The second unknown person says as it revealed to be none other than Rowan a God of Destruction. He is six feet tall as he wears a traditional God of Destruction garb. He had no shirt but has different tattoos on him along with dark blue pants. Even more interesting is his head shaped like a dog, which is covered with fur like the rest of his body as well. Its face looks like a cross between a Husky and a German Shepherd with a mixture of black and white fur all around.

The fourth unknown person happens to be Clockworld, the master of time.

He is from Earth-14, the same world that David and Drake are from. He sees and knows all events that may or may not come to pass. He is a violet-cloaked ghost with a pale blue face and a scar across his left eye. A clock-like mechanism is embedded in his chest. He carries a time staff, which he uses often. Due to his time-based nature, his ghost body constantly switches from a child form to an adult form to an old form.

While the third unknown person is none other than Professor Paradox from Earth-14 as well.

Professor Paradox is a time-traveling professor who can travel anywhere in space or time, within reason. While he forgot his true name after centuries of being trapped in a separate reality, he now goes by the name "Professor Paradox" after taking a liking to be referred to as such. Professor Paradox wore a white lab coat over a white shirt with a brown vest and black tie, black pants, and black shoes. He also wore goggles with green lenses around his neck.

"If that's true then it's their Destiny to do this." The first unknown person says with concern.

The last person is Rowan's attendant and master Zadkiel, who is an angel. The Angels are life forms of extremely high status within the hierarchy of the multiverse. Their role is to guide and teach Gods of Destruction to master their destructive capabilities while also serving them as their personal attendants. Zadkiel is 5'9" as he appears as a humanoid with pale blue skin, white hair, and violet eyes. His clothing bears similarities to Zeno, while the patterns on his clothes resemble the Gods of Destruction he serves.


Well here is the last rewritten chapter. Hope you all like the fight scene as I did change it slightly to make it better than before. But in case you don't know Rowan and Zadkiel are my OC that is GoD and Angel as they are a part of the Dragon ball series that watches their universe. I would like to thank Stormwolf150 for getting me into that series and making my own own as I thought I introduce them here. Originally it was going to be David as the Spectre taking Rowman and Zadkiel's place but decided to get rid of him and introduce these two.

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