Kye Kye- so the lack of reviews for this is kind of hurting my heart, and I'm considering giving up on this. I love the favorites and the alerts I get, but I would like some real feedback even if its bad. Please tell me if it is terrible.
The first thing Naruto registered was the pain. That wasn't entirely true; it was more of a numb throb stiffie, all in all, not very pleasant. The second thing she noticed was that this wasn't her ceiling. This one was made of older wood and had water stains, and the wood was newer in some parts and more aged in others as if it had to be repaired often. The third thing she noticed was that she was lying on a very comfortable bed. Naruto hasn't been on a mattress since she woke up in this world. And while yes, she could make a bed with her wood release, she couldn't exactly make a mattress. The fourth thing she noticed was her boys sleeping in a dogpile on the floor in the corner. Yes, she said her boys cause they were hers, and anyone who tried to take them away from her would die a slow, painful death.
All across the oceans, Multiple people sneezed and got cold shivers racing down their spines.
Yea, she has only known them for a couple of days, but Naruto knows that she can trust these three with her life. Even though she died when she was sixteen years old in her last life, she didn't feel older than these boys at all. Her rebirth started her over, and her previous life felt like a very elaborate dream that she could remember with scary clarity. Oopsie off track again.
The FIfth and final thing Naruto noticed was the beautiful woman standing over her. The woman had dark green hair that was tied back with a bandana and green eyes. "I see you have woken up how are you feeling?"
Naruto stares at the woman "You are beautiful. Has anyone ever told you how pretty you are? Cause you are. I'm Naruto what's your name?"
The woman giggles and runs her fingers through Naruto's hair, causing the girl to purr. "My Name is Makino. The boys brought you here after you passed out from infection, and just so you know, I think you are pretty as well."
Naruto waves her hand in the air "Its to much trouble to be pretty at my age. Perverts like to come after you too often."
Makino lifts Naruto's head and places it in her lap, still running her fingers through the soft dual-colored locks. "Is that how you got here?"
The two females didn't notice two of the boys were awake when Naruto nodded her head "Yep Garp was called to the island I was living on because a lot of there men were killed by me. They all failed to mention that these men attacked me first and were trying to rape me. I don't take kindly to that kind of behavior, so I killed them."
Makino frowns, "You talk very casually about killing people."
Naruto closes her eyes "Makino, I've lived my entire life with the world hating me for things outside my control. In my life, it has always been kill or be killed."
"That's a sad way to live for one so young."
Naruto nods her head "I agree, but that's the way the world works sometimes. But I do have a bit of light in my life now."
Makino raises her eyebrow, "really, what's that?"
"Those three boys are my new light, and if anyone tries to hurt them, I'll end them," Naruto says, her eyes flashing red at the thought.
Makino gives Naruto a sad smile, and she looks over at the three in the corner these children have all had to grow up to fast.
Kye Kye- I know this is short, but I want to do a small-time skip after this if I decide to continue it. review, please
