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BornOnTheBreakOfDawn: Yes kankuro did take them- it's funny because he had his 'reasons' but you will find that out later hehe.
littletierra101 : hehe I know a lot of people were saying it was kankuro so now i can finally say yes yes it was. and i have no doubt they are going to get caught its just a matter by who
Camilla678 : HAHAHA don't you love me c:~ and yes he believes hes a good guy but that's not always the case. also wouldn't be surprise if he had binoculars either lmao. ALSO IT DEFF SMELLS LIKE THE OCEAN NEAR THIS BOY lmao jk jk
Papaleta : haha i think gaara and kankuro freak you out. every one of the sand siblings except temari XD! and you know naruto is alll about that drama lmao. It's nice to have them cute together now especially with how dark this story started out at first XD
jenuzumaki :oooo you are the first to point that out that is correct that shadow was kankuro :)! and some shit is going to deff go down.
kawaiihina : hehe im glad to be back :D! and you know i gotta get some fluff in especially with how dark this story started hahah we gotta make up for it :P
Novem86 : of course ^_^ thank you for supporting me
Guest chapter 13 . May 30 Wow! thank you for the quick update! watching out for more!: I hope this was quick enough for you :)
Mr Parker Will See You Now: Yes hes agressive and possesive with a dash of sweet its my fav naruto too hehe. And i love your name. not gonna lie the first thing i thought of was peter parker and then the crazy in love 50 shades of grey song playing LMAO
Cosmic Sky: Chapter 12: You are absolutely righ- their whole dynamic is going to be a hell of a lot of trouble and i dont want to spoil anything about hidan but you will see when he arrives hehe.
also i leave little hints about her relationship rubbing off on her lmao like her trying to enjoy life and be selfish is very important. she's putting her happiness first for once. in some ways that you will see in this chapter- it can be a little negative i guess depending on how you look at it lmao.
yes naruto truly loves hinata. he is very very obsessed with her but he cares about her deeply. (even though in the begining it was pretty muddy what he wanted lmao)- that's why we need more fluff to outshine that dark time hahaha.
Ch. 13: Gaara is kind of just a loss soul honestly. i think some people don't like him because they dont want him to get close to hinata lmao. and who doesn't like to tease our sweet honey bun.
With their dynamic hinata wants nothing more to live that dream and right now shes starting to get sloppy but they may come back to bite her. Naruto knows he cant have her the way he wants to but they both have to fight that urge- hinata can just do it better lmao.
also there is going to be A LOT in their journey lmao its going to be a crazy ride for sure.
I live for chaos!~ but the bottle gaara found was acutally Hinata's. it's the meds she was looking for that she thought naruto took. So im just gonna leave you with that info and you can concure what happened hehehe ~
also thanks for takning the time to write your review i really enjoyed seeing what you thought about the chapters and going forward what you think is gonna happen lmao. its fun to see what going through your mind as a reader. for me i know whats gonna happen so seeing your review helps me get an idea of how im portraying my story. so i really appreciate it :)!
Sunshine and butterflies…in a jar.
That's how Hinata would begin to describe her relationship. How she felt with her secret blonde fox.
It was a beautiful day- even when it was cloudy and rainy. It didn't matter.
As long as she got to see him- to talk to him. Even if it was indirectly or over text messages. It was enough to keep her going, to feel light-headed and infatuated as she was. She was unbelievably happy- yet she couldn't show it. Couldn't gush over it with any of her friends. Couldn't post cute things about her relationship.
No one could know.
Yet even then a part of her was fine with it.
As crazy as it was she found it to be… exciting?
When she walked around the classroom, she could feel his blue orbs on her. When she spoke to another student, wrote on the board, typed on her computer, whatever it was, she knew he was secretly watching her. It should have probably made her feel insecure but it was quite the opposite. It was like she was always on stage performing, and teasing at the same time.
It was like a game.
She'd avoid him at all cost and she knew he was fuming in his seat. When she didn't give him any attention he'd start to 'act out' in some way. Their little 'teacher vs student' spats was always quite fun.
Naruto- to her secret demise- was very mature but at the same time, he could be quite childish.
Any attention from her was good- even if it was 'negative'.
Honestly, she spoiled him too much.
He'd practically prance on her any chance he got- fed off of her very being like a hungry animal. Yet she allowed him to. Feeding on his presence just as much.
Equally obsessed with one another in their own way.
He was intoxicating. Sometimes she felt like she couldn't breathe and to her utmost horror, it was thrilling. The fear of getting caught always sat heavily within her stomach but it was so hard to deny this feeling. She'd push it away but come running back for it.
Naruto was her new drug- no- It was better than any drug.
Her eyes fluttered towards the blonde that was leaning back in his seat, texting away on his phone.
"Ahem." Hinata coughed lightly catching his attention- along with the rest of the class.
"Have you finished your work Uzumaki?" Hinata raised a taunting brow as he quickly put his phone away.
"Yes…"
"Really?"
"Ah- I'm working on it!"
The class chuckled as they all fell back into their task.
A soft smile touched Hinata's lip as she scanned the rest of her students.
After some time went by she slid her hand over to her phone, peaking at the message the blonde sent her.
He had been messaging her throughout class - she just had to fight the urge to not look. Sometimes he made her laugh and she had to hide it the best she could. Or he would be the naughty fox he was and make her red in the face.
Sexy Fox: what's the answer to number 12 you didn't teach us this missy :l
Sexy Fox: Sasuke won't help me give him detention
Sexy Fox: Dammit why are you so damn cute you're clearly the reason im going to fail
Hinata held back a snort. He said that all the time. She really didn't try to distract him with her looks- especially after that one time she wore a tight dress and red heels. The poor blonde was practically sweating in his seat.
Blowing up her phone, cursing her name for being a tease. Ultimately he excused himself to the bathroom, she had wondered if she had made him upset but when she received a picture from him she nearly fainted.
He had seemed to have taken care of himself and showed her the results which she caused. Her face was so red for the rest of the class that she had to blame it on allergies, 'sniffling' as she wiped her nose.
After that day she made sure to dress more conservatively.
Her phone dinged again with another message.
Sexy fox: scold me again and see what happens.
"Naruto!" The mere sound of his name always caught Hinata off guard. She set her phone down, sliding over to some papers she needed to grade.
"Hmm." The blonde mumbled.
Hinata looked up as the blonde rest his chin on his fist twirling his pencil around his fingers.
Ino looked rather annoyed, "When are we going to meet your girlfriend?"
Hinata felt her soul leave her body but kept her face as stoic as possible, 'reading' what was on the paper.
Naruto smirked trying his damn near hardest to not look at his said girlfriend, "I have no idea what you are talking about."
"Come on Naruto, there's rumors going on all around school! The hickies and always on your phone are more than enough though." Sakura vocalized. "You always give us the deets! What gives!"
"Alright alright. You got me I do have a girlfriend."
Sakura squealed as if she hit a gold mine, "Fucking knew it who who who!" Sakura bit her lip at how loud she might have been checking on Hinata.
Was she loud? Absolutely. However, she didn't want to scold her then she wouldn't be able to hear their conversation.
Seeing as she was busy Sakura and Ino felt as though they were fine, leaning over to begin the onslaught.
"Does she go to our school?" Ino questioned.
"No she lives out of town..."
"How long have you guys been dating?"
"Uh- a couple weeks-"
"Where did you meet her?"
The questions were hurled at him one after another. The blonde leaned back from their attack, "Wooah slow your roll..." Naruto chuckled nervously.
Sakura scoffed, "Naruto do you know how serious this is? When's the last time you had a girlfriend."
"Ouch Sakura- I've had plenty!" Naruto nearly hissed- biting his tongue. That was probably a poor choice of words... he can feel the daggers being thrown at him right now from across the room.
"No no no- flings are one thing. A girlfriend is different Naruto. You're doing that thing where you stare at your phone and text a lot and you start smiling and stuff and look all happy but the mushy-gushy kind! For a guy- that's serious." Ino finalized as if she solved the mystery.
Hinata didn't appreciate how observant the platinum blond was. The two girls were extremely nosey, it would probably be best for Naruto to play it cool.
"Yeah, that's because she's amazing."
Or not.
"Oh really? Why haven't we seen her then? Is she ugly?"
"Sakura- rude~ I bet she has a good personality?"
Naruto busted up laughing, "My girl is far from ugly, she's fucking gorgeous. Body? A thousand. Personality? Out of this world. She's hella sweet and smart... funny She's -. "
"We get it we get it." Ino and Sakura started laughing making the blonde pout.
Hinata felt her face heat up, she bit her tongue trying to steel herself. 'Don't blush don't blush.'
"Okay~ Then let's see a picture of her. We will be the judge of that."
"Yeah let's see miss perfect."
Naruto coughed nervously, "No. You are going to try to pick her apart you vultures."
"Ahhh come on! You have to invite her out with us sometime. We will play nice right Ino?"
"Ahuh! The next time she comes into town."
"Iiiii dunno. She's... shy."
Ino rolled her eyes, "A woman putting hickies on someone's neck is not shy. She's claiming you."
"Yeah, that's pretty scandalous."
"We are your best friends too, she should want to get to know us. Has she even met your boyfriend yet?"
"Leave me out of this." Sasuke grumbled leaning back in his seat with his eyes closed.
"Sasuke I'm very concerned about why you knew she was talking about you- but-" Sasuke flipped him off prompting a slapping fight between the blonde and black haired male, "-besides that-ack- asshole-" Naruto grumbled getting a harsh slap from Sasuke, "Why-why does she have to meet you so soon?"
"Cuz~ You like like this girl. She's important to you Naruto so that means she's important to us. You've never had an issue showing your latest conquest before?"
"Oooo is she an older woman?"
Naruto was shocked by how intuitive these two could be, they were eating up his words like hungry hungry hippo.
"Listen. When it gets extra serious I'll let you guys meet her okay? Just trying to feel it out first is that cool?"
The girls grumbled finding his answer to be more than unsatisfactory.
Naruto let go of a sigh returning back to his work.
Inwardly Hinata also sighed, she was afraid she'd have to interrupt but that would've been suspicious.
Returning to her actual work she glanced up catching Ino still staring at Naruto. She kept her eyes lowered as she watched the platinum blonde stare at the boy. She was leaned over with her hand on her chin, seemingly in thought.
Hinata bit the inside of her cheek, she found that slightly weird… Then Ino leaned over and quietly spoke to Naruto.
Hinata read their lips as they spoke softly.
'How's the sex?' She giggled as Naruto looked up with a grin.
'Wouldn't you like to know.' He whispered back.
Hinata bit down tasting the blood on her tongue. She hung her head down with her pen gripped tightly between her fingers. There was something about that moment that stabbed Hinata in the stomach. There was something weird about the exchange- she couldn't quite pinpoint it but it was… strange?
Hinata usually has good intuition, but something told her Ino was quite possible jealous? Hiding it behind giggles and fake kindness.
Hinata was good at reading people. Subtle expressions and movements that give away their true feelings. She lived with the Hyuga's- her eyes were trained for this sort of thing.
Even though Ino was probably saying she was 'happy' for Naruto she probably wasn't true. She was probably as Naruto would say 'praying on his downfall.'
Truthfully Hinata didn't know how to feel about this revelation. In a way, she felt almost betrayed as funny as that sounded. Here Ino is pretending to have Naruto's best interest in mind when really she's waiting on the sidelines to be tagged in.
She had no doubt in her mind that Ino was the type of girl who'd smile in front of her face and tell her if she needed anything to let her know- because she was like a 'sister' to Naruto. She'd lie through her teeth befriending her to get close just to sabotage it in some way.
Maybe she accidentally slips and says something that Naruto wouldn't like. Or she does some digging and finds she is not a good fit for him.
She would feign ignorance of being involved anyway- always the wallflower, kind Ino there for everyone- but in reality, she had an ultimatum.
The purple-haired girl wondered what was stopping her from actually trying to be Naruto's girlfriend. Did he see her as too much of a sister? Maybe she realized this and found it best for her to just stay by his side as his best friend/ sister.
In a way, she probably saw herself as better than any other girl Naruto would find- because she knows him best.
The more Hinata thought about this newfound enemy the more annoyed she got. Picking up her phone she silently texted Naruto.
Juicy Bunny: Didn't know you and wallflower had such a close relationship to be talking about your sex life. Did she ask for my cup size too? Maybe I should send her my tits.
After sending that message she felt almost guilty. What was wrong with her? Why did she feel so- vicious. Almost like her soul had taken on black ink. Hinata always felt as though she was a nice innocent young lady- but was she truly?
When it came to Naruto she almost felt possessed. Like when she went after Tayuya and befriended her so she could get the information she needed. Maybe she was no better than Ino.
Goodness, what was wrong with her.
She stood up to open the door knowing the bell was about to ring, she needed a breath of fresh air. "Have a good day." She hummed softly just as the bell rang. The class shuffled out one by one saying their goodbye.
When she saw the blonde hair whisk by she held her breath. His blue orbs captivated her as he smile deviously.
"Have a good day Ms. Hyuga."
"Stay out of trouble Uzumaki."
After the last of her students left she slid away from her door to walk inside her class. The sound of her phone ringing caught her ears as she made her way to her desk.
She didn't need to look at the caller ID to know who it was. She answered the phone and put it to her ear. It was silent on the other line and she could hear the distant sound of the students bustling to class. He must be tucked in some corner.
Why hasn't he said anything?
Hinata felt her face heat up in embarrassment- she knew he was smiling- she could fucking feel it. That stupid shit-eating smile made her legs weak. She compared it to a demon making a deal with an innocent little lamb- knowing she was signing her life away.
As wicked as it was enticing.
"Can I help you?" She muttered in as much sass as she could.
"What? I just wanted to ask what your text was about? It sounds to me like someone was jealous." His voice danced with mirth.
"She likes you."
"She's like a sister."
"Sister asking about your sex life?"
To her surprise, he started laughing, "No fuckin way. I could say the same about you and your 'brother'."
"N-not the same-"
"Very much the same."
Hinata sighed seeing her students trickling in.
"I have to go."
"You're so cute you know that."
"Bye."
The last thing she heard was Naruto snickering. Her face felt warm as she gathered herself for her next class. Maybe he was right- but Gaara didn't like her... did he? No not a chance! Yet Ino... Ino was a different story.
Hinata's mind kept wandering back to her platinum blond student, thinking about her standpoint. How she pretends to go after Sasuke but in reality, she probably has already given that up to Sakura. Maybe she still acts that way for fun? Maybe it's by mere conscious for her to play catty with the most popular boy in school.
As funny as it was Hinata was so wrapped around Ino that she had forgotten about Tayuya. It didn't register in her head until she heard the girl's sunken voice say, "Hello Ms. Hyuga."
Hinata smiled at the pink-haired girl as she too smiled softly- yet it didn't reach her eyes. Watching as she got to her seat, Hinata noticed the girl was a bit more slouchy.
As the class continued she kept her eye on her, she seemed like she was walking with a cloud over her head. Even her friends weren't picking on her much, trying to joke around and cheer her up.
The only reason she'd be behaving this way is if she heard that Naruto does in fact have a girlfriend and he confirmed it himself.
Gossipy Sakura and Ino could never keep their mouth shut. The news probably spread like wildfire.
She felt bad for the girl honestly.
Her phone vibrated as she dug out of her pocket, a text from her sexy fox.
Sexy Fox: People keep asking me about you
Juicy Bunny: what do you say?
Sexy fox: Your perfect.
Juicy Bunny: You're*
Sexy Fox: :l
Hinata began to giggle, covering it up with a hand as she slipped into her seat. Well not too bad- Naruto was her's anyway. They can find someone else.
Kankuro sat outside of his house with his bong between his legs. Staring at... not really anything.
He heard the soft hum of a vehicle pulling up in the driveway. His eyes didn't move, he already knew who it was.
He heard her heels tap upon his driveway, the door slammed shut.
"Hey!" She called to him.
Looking up he offered her a lopsided smile, "Hey sis."
Her eyes began to scan the house, she hummed lightly, "I think it's time for a power wash. Need me to call them up? I can set a time for them to come by."
"No it's fine I got it..." He drawled looking upon her truly. As if waking up.
His older sister looked too sophisticated standing in front of his broken house. Dressed in a black pencil skirt and a white blouse, a red blazer buttoned at the top and open at the bottom.
He looked at her luxury car next to his sports car. His throat grew tight. He'd like to think it was because of the weed making his tongue as heavy as leather- not the fact that Temari screamed success.
He was truly jealous- jealous that she was so put together, everything opposite of him. She made him realize how pathetic his life truly was.
Temari was always the mature one- and she had always believed in him. Allowing him to stay in her house for a cheap price. helping him when she can. She gave him quite the deal for staying, she should be charging him more but she didn't.
"How ya been?" She asked climbing the porch, she slid onto the seat next to him comfortably. She wasn't at all worried about how dirty the seat could be, despite the brand-name clothes she was wearing.
Her pristine skirt next to his dirty black jeans had his chest tight.
Where she was wealthy she never looked down on him. Never said how dirty he was. Never belittled him. In a way... he wished she did. He was such a disgrace and he knew she felt disappointed in him and what made it worse- she never truly told him.
She was honestly more of a parent to them than their father. As loving and nurturing as she was forgiving and understanding.
Kankuro shrugged bringing the bong to his lips. He flicked his lighter taking in a big hit. Pulling back he turned his head so he could blow it away from his sister.
"I have your money." He slid up pulling an envelope out of his pocket and holding it towards her. It was hard being in her presence- he wanted to be able to chit-chat with her, like before when they used to get high together. However, she grew up- he didn't.
"Thanks." Grabbing the envelope she sat it down in her lap, she looked as though something was bothering her.
"You alright?"
She nodded her head softly, slouching as she leaned back in her seat, it looked uncharacteristic with her outfit. "Yeah, work just got me stressed. Sometimes it's hard to just sit back and relax. Not having to put up a pretty front ya know."
Kankuro chuckled, "Sounds like you need a hit of this." He pointed his bong at her making her laugh.
"I would if I could. Wine is my only savior now."
"True." Kankuro took the silent moment to take a hit.
"How has Hina been?"
At the mention of her name he began coughing on his hit- the pain sharp as he hit his chest, "UH - ack- uh fine. I think she's fine- cough-." He got himself together looking towards his sister, her orbs pointed at Hinata's home. "Why are you asking me? Aren't you guys friends?"
Temari sighed, "Yes but that girl can be really going through it and no one will know. Especially after last time... I was just wondering... Has she seem different to you?"
Kankuro licked his lip thoughtfully. He knows why she's been acting differently. He's seen the hickies, but most importantly he saw the hooded man sneaking in and out of her house.
He wondered who he was and even thought to confront him.
"Hello?" Temari waved in front of his face bringing him back to reality.
"Yeah... I think... she's seeing someone."
Temari raised a brow, "Excuse me?" she then began to laugh as if that was not possible. "I would know. She'd tell me."
Kankuro couldn't help but stare at her with a raised brow.
She sat up swiftly, "Well? Why do you say that?"
"...Hmm..." He hummed, "I just know."
"Did you see him? What's his name?"
"Dunno. Never met him. Thought maybe you'd know."
Temari frowned looking back at Hinata's home. "Huh. Maybe... it's a fresh relationship..."
"Maybe."
Crossing her arms she mused over this new information, then she turned her head to look at him pointedly, "I heard you pissed off Gaara again."
Kankuro scoffed rolling his eyes, "Apparently it is engraved in his blood to hate me."
"Well, what did you do this time?"
"I couldn't even tell you. I don't know why he's mad at me. It's been going on for three weeks now. After I picked him up."
"Mhm..." Temari pushed on as if he had to have done something to piss his brother off. He could look at him wrong and the boy would sneer his way.
"I mean..." He scratched the back of his head thoughtfully. I left him for a moment but I was back within like thirty minutes... no way he's mad because of that."
"He picks you apart and you know that. Any wrongdoing you do it's like magnified for him. Maybe that's why he's mad at you, you left him."
Kankuro let out a sharp laugh, "For thirty minutes! Now he's ignoring my text messages- not answering the door when I come over- And the crazy thing is I try to get him to study- help him out in school. Yet now all of a sudden he says he didn't need a tutor anymore. He only went to fucking two- here I am trying to do good for him and- I fuck up ONCE and he's thrown me to the wolves. I just can't. The more I try the worse it gets. All because- because... because of that kid..."
Temari looked at him sadly, "Kankuro... I told you before... I think he liked that kid..."
"It's not my fault he died!"
Temari went silent, pressing her lips together. Kankuro's leg was bouncing- a stressful habit both her brothers do when they are agitated.
She wanted to say something- anything to make the situation better but she couldn't seem to find the proper words.
"...Can you please speak with him and apologize... I hate seeing the two of you fight..." Her broken tone made him want to cry- he hated her sometimes. Hated how she made him feel.
Kankuro hung his head down, "Sure."
Anything for his big sis. Truthfully that was the only reason Gaara put up with him- why they put up with each other- for Temari.
She was entirely too good for this family.
AUTHOR NOTE:
Just a little something about ino. I had a situation that explains what Hinata is referring to. I was new to this school and met a girl like Ino who was super bubbly and sweet. all that jazz- anyways I had started dating this guy who was both of our friends and she was like so happy for us congratulating us and always commenting on our pictures right? super supportive over our relationship. then one day one of my friends told me she actually hated me because she had liked this guy for a long time and I had NO IDEA. and my friend said everyone knew how much she liked him and I was like who da fuq is everyone because I wasn't here so I didn't know. so this girl was talking about me behind my back saying how I was ugly and didn't deserve my boyfriend and she said she hated me. after hearing about this I felt like ok there's no way that's true but I asked my bf and he was like yeah she used to like me so then I was wondering wow I wonder if she really did say those things about me. my friend who had told me was closer with me than her so I didn't have any reason to not believe her but it started to make sense. i started to think about everything she said to me and how she was so 'happy' but really she wasn't. it was on a diff level of hurt honestly. It really opened my eyes to her actions is all I'm gonna say.
anyways let me stop babbling hope you guys are doing well and please take the time to review :)
