Hey all, I just wanted to say that I have rewritten the first chapter and it a respectable 12,250 words. I changed my mind and I'm going to not only post it as I go but I'm going to add a little more of a description here.
This story is all about what I think would have happened if Marlene and Sirius got married alongside the Potters and Longbottoms. Along with that, I have changed it to make the characters react the way I think would have been the most logical given the circumstances. There are a lot of OCs, it's quite a bit analytical at the start in order for me to really get things going but I hope to make it flow a lot more naturally as time goes on. There will be chapters that are done in different points of view and some of the relationships may not make a lot of sense at first but they'll get to where I want them to be. There will be a little bit of bashing but it will be tasteful and not over the top. There will be death and I will warn you right now that not a single character is ever safe, they are all at risk because I refuse to accept how miraculous magic can be at healing some and not doing anything for others. If you spot something I missed then please PM or leave a review and I promise you I will get to it. I haven't gotten to planning out the end of the book but I know that I will be scrambling the cannon orders of events, first year will be more about setting up the way Hogwarts runs than having any sort of action. Second through seventh year will be full of several minor plots because the overall one doesn't really change much. The action will really begin around halfway through year three but everything is important (except for maybe the descriptions of the houses because I am really bad making it clear or interesting). Once again, please, I beg of you, leave a review or PM me with your thoughts. Good, bad or just to say I'm doing fine, reviews and messages will keep me on track as I try to really put a new-ish spin on this story.
