So, I was thinking... looking at this story, I may want to rewrite it... I don't know why, but I just do.
So, I'm taking into account your thoughts about it. What do you want changed... what do you want altered, or what do you want added in? I already know of a few things that I want changed, but I want to know what your main gripes of this story was that you want to get changed/altered? Or was there something that I missed out on completely and you want added in?
