Hey everyone. I have another new story out! I know I still have two others, but I really wanted to this because I have so many ideas swarming around my head for this story. I wanted to make the first chapter and see how it does. I will then go back to my other two. So don't expect this one to update often. Hope you like it. This is also inspired by some of the other fanfics where the Louds are superheroes. Specifically, Lincoln and Ronnie being the heroes. Also, I do not own the Loud House or any other show on or mentioned in this story.
Edit: I finally have come back to write this story and after quickly reviewing the chapters... yikes. I knew I used to make a lot of spelling mistakes, (still do) but I did not realize it was this bad. So, I am updating this story. Fixing the spelling mistakes and I have decided to merge the first two chapters together since I write longer chapters now. I'm sorry I haven't updated this in a while.
Side note: Not much has changed in this chapter other than the original two now being combined. I would still recommend reading for a refresher just because it was so long ago, I wrote this. The second chapter will have some more major changes.
Part 1
A young figure can be seen jumping from rooftop to rooftop in the middle of the night. He looks to be no more than twelve. He is wearing a red, green, and yellow jump suit with a black cape. (It is yellow in the inside) He has a yellow belt around his waist and is carrying a staff. His hair is black, and he has buck teeth. He also has a mask over his eyes.
"Well, everything looks good so far." The boy said. He then pulled out a black and yellow talkie with a capitol T on it. He pressed the button on the side to talk to the other person. "Find anything interesting Ronnie?" He asked his best friend/girlfriend.
"Nothing worth mentioning." A voice said on the other side. "I was hoping that our first mission would be more interesting."
"Same here. On the other side at least, that means crime is pretty low in Royal Woods." He spoke.
"Only you Lame-O would still try to be optimistic when your board."
"Hey! I'll have you know that jumping from roof to roof as Robin is pretty cool."
"True. And flying around as Starfire is kind of awesome." Suddenly a bell went off in the distance. It was an alarm bell...the types used at banks when being robbed. "What is that?" Ronnie asked not hearing it as well since she was so far away. She mostly heard it through the communicator.
"I think your wish just came true. Get to the bank as fast as you can." He told her.
"Alright Mimicker. Don't have too much fun without me." Ronnie Anne said before hanging up. Lincoln A.K.A. the Mimicker then started running towards the sound of the bell jumping the roofs but also barley making a sound. In the back of his mind, he couldn't help but think about how he was like a ninja. He got to the edge of the last building where the bell was now almost too loud to listen too. He looked at the bank to see that the front doors, which are made of glass, were broken into a million pieces. There were also two unmarked black vans with no windows aside from the front. 'Well now I know how the bell went off. Whoever is robbing this place must be an idiot.' Mimicker thought. Who would just break into a bank like this and think they could get away quietly? Even if he and Ronnie A.K.A. Miss. Mimicker weren't here to stop them the police would certainly have stopped them before they got out of the building.
"Let's do this." Mimicker said to himself. He jumped down the building landing on his feet with ease. Maybe a cat doesn't always land on its feet, but Robin does. Surprisingly there was no people around. Lincoln assumed it's because it's almost midnight and didn't want to risk being seen by the people who are robbing this place. He ran to the doors extending the staff and grabbing some smoke bombs from his belt. 'Got to make a memorable appearance.' He thought. As soon as he got inside, he could hear at least four voices at the other side.
"Hurry up you idiots! The police will be here any minute. A loud commanding voice said.
"Trying boss. There's just a lot of money here in the front alone. We are going to be filthy rich!" Another said.
"Yeah. Good thing the other two are getting the back." A third voice, a woman's this time, said.
"I think we should be going. Don't want to chance our luck." A fourth said. Also, a woman's voice. They all had semi-automatic rifles. They all wore black clothing with beanies over their faces.
'Six altogether. I think I can handle that.' Mimicker thought. He had been as quiet as a mouse none of them noticing him yet. He quickly threw the smoke bombs which filled the room in seconds.
"What's going on!?" The leader asked. He could barely see a few feet in front of him.
"Do you think the police are already here?!" One of the women asked. The four of them all had stopped what they were doing their guns at the ready. Suddenly the second guy thought he saw someone move through the smoke.
"Over there!" He said firing his gun. After a few shots he stopped.
"Missed me!" A voice, a child's voice to be exact, said.
"Was that a kid's voice?" The other women asked.
"Hey, I'm a preteen thank you very much." Mimicker said.
"Over there!" She said following his voice.
"Not even close." Mimicker taunted.
"Just shoot everywhere!" The boss said.
They then all shot in every direction by now in a circle. The guns were louder than the alarm. When they were they done there was just silence. "I think we got the kid." The leader said. "Grab what money we have and let's get out of here." But before they could take a step the voice spoke again. And it was much closer this time.
"Wow. You guys are worse than Stormtroopers. Never thought I see the day." Suddenly the boss was hit in the head by a metal staff making him loose balance. The others looked behind them to see a small figure before it suddenly went in the air.
'Grappling hooks are awesome. I see way Batman and Robin like them.' He thought. Mimicker then grabbed a bird-a-rang and threw it at the second guy. It opened up into a large net that completely engulfed him.
"Get me out of this thing!" He yelled. The two women stood back-to-back looking around when suddenly something hit their feet causing both to fall on top of each other. Mimicker then grabbed their guns and threw them across the room out of reach.
The first woman quickly got up and tried to punch the kid only to for him to grab her wrist and twist her arm behind her back. He then tossed her over the counter knocking her out.
"Two down two to go." Mimicker said. The other woman got up and tried to kick at the boy but he grabbed her foot before twisting it causing her whole body to spin before falling again. Mimicker turned around to see that the boss regained his senses and now had his gun pointed at Mimicker.
"Looks like you're out of luck kid." He smirked.
"The name is Mimicker by the way. Not kid."
"Well then I guess those will be your final words." He said firing the gun. Mimicker had his staff out and was using it to deflect any bullets that would hit him while the rest went around. The leader kept firing before suddenly the gun was out of ammo.
"Not already!" He yelled. He then reached for a handgun, but the Mimicker knocked out of his hand before using the staff to spin his body and kick the older man in the face! He fell to the floor unconscious.
"Now for the last two." Mimicker said. He could hear the sirens and thought he should hurry.
"Hold it right there boy." An older man's voice said behind him. Mimicker froze on the spot.
"Turn around with your hands up." He commanded. Mimicker playing along did as he was told. He saw two more men both with their guns pointed at him. They were dressed the same as the others. He would have tried to move but they were close enough he didn't want to risk it.
"Drop the metal stick and surrender." The other man said.
"Alright." The boy said, he seemed a little to calm for the robbers liking, dropping his staff. 'These guys are idiots. Metal stick? If they didn't have the guns pointed right at my face they probably wouldn't be standing.' Mimicker thought.
"I said surer-wait you're giving up?" The man said surprised.
"Yep. But I don't think she will." He said vaguely. Pointing his finger behind them.
"Huh?" Both men said. They turned around to see a small girl about the boy's age with dark skin. She had long dark red hair and wearing all purple clothes. Her arms, from the elbow up, and midsection were uncovered but the rest were protected by some piece of armor. She was also floating above the air high enough that she was eye level with the two men.
"Don't mess with my boyfriend." she said before hitting them both on the sides of the head making them hit each other. This knocked them out instantly.
"Took you long enough." Lincoln said with grin.
"Sorry. I'm not used to going through the town flying. And you could have at least saved me a couple more guys to for me to kick but." Miss Mimicker said sarcastically.
"I'll keep that in mind. Now how about we get out of here before the police arrive." Miss Mimicker nodded before grabbing her boyfriend and flying out the building right before the cars showed up. By now the gas was all but gone because of the damaged doors.
The two young heroes watched from the rooftop as the police got the already defeated crooks in the cars driving them off. They were off course confused how they were defeated and why one of them was tied up in a net, but hey never look a gift horse in the mouth.
"Ready to go back home? Mimicker asked.
"Yep. I don't know about you but I'm exhausted. I'm glad this summer or we would both be sleeping in class if we had it." Miss. Mimicker said.
"Same here. Too bad school starts in two weeks." Lincoln said sad that the summer was almost over. It was Friday night technically Saturday morning at this point. Which means that it is now July thirtieth. School starts on Augast sixteenth, a Tuesday. See you later Nie-Nie." He said walking away. Suddenly a green energy blast hit the top of the roof next to his foot making him freeze on the spot. He slowly turned around to see Miss Mimicker's eyes and fist glowing green and she was a few feet off the ground.
"I told you to never call me that!" She Yelled. Lincoln was almost sure he could see her cheeks blushing.
"Right right. Sorry." 'Note to self. Do not make Ronnie Anne angry.' He thought. Ronnie quickly calmed down coming back down to the ground.
"I'm just messing with you Lame-O." This calmed Mimicker down a bit. "But seriously if you do call me that it's when we are alone. Otherwise, I will give you another black eye. Got it?" She said obviously faking the threat.
"Got it!" Lincoln said quickly.
"All right. See you later Lame-O." With that the two went to their separate homes.
(At the Santiago household)
Miss. Mimicker flew to a familiar building flying to the side of the house where her room was. She quietly opened the window and flew in closing just as before. When she landed on the ground there was a small flash of light that surrounded her. When it disappeared, it showed Ronnie Anne in her purple sweater and jeans. Her hair turned to its normal black as well.
"I still can't get over the fact that we actually change into the costume of the person we mimic." Ronnie said. It made it a lot easier than having to come up with her own. True it didn't change her face but it changes things like the hair so her identity will be safe.
"Good thing for Linc too. Too many people would recognize him for the white hair." She said to herself. "I can't believe it's been a month since we got these powers." She said thinking about the time they got them. Her thoughts were interrupted however when she heard footsteps. Panicking she climbed into bed and acted like she was asleep. Which wasn't very hard seeing how she was actually tired.
Her door opened slowly whoever it was trying to be quiet. Her back was to the door so she couldn't tell if it was Bobby or her Mom.
"Uh. I could have sworn I heard Nie-Nie talking." Bobby said to himself. He thought he heard his little sister. He himself just came back from one of his jobs. Seeing that Ronnie was asleep he thought he must be more tired than he thought. He said good night to his sister even though he thought she was asleep and closed the door.
"I wish I could tell him. But I have to keep the two of them safe." Ronnie whispered to herself.
(At the Loud House)
Mimicker reached his home jumping from Mr. Grouch's roof and through the window in the former linen closet or otherwise known as his room. Since he his super skinny and the window spins it was like an acrobat trick. When he landed in the middle of his room there was a flash of light like what happened to Ronnie and it showed Lincoln in his orange shirt, jeans and of course his white hair.
"That was amazing!" Lincoln whispered/yelled. He still had some adrenaline and while he was excited that their first patrol was a success though he would be lying if he said he wasn't scared for his life when fighting those guys.
"I hope I don't always fight people with guns. I think next time I should use someone like Superman." Lincoln then looked at the reader to talk to them.
"So, I know you must be confused. Probably have a lot of questions, right?" He said with a small chuckle. "Well, I can answer some of those now. You see it started a month from today...my birthday to be exact.
Flash back to a month ago
It started like any other day. It was sunny outside, and everything seemed to be normal. Well except for one thing.
"Where is everyone?" Lincoln asked standing in the hallway. He was super excited today because today was his birthday. He was now twelve years old. And a lot has happened in the year. Lily was now two and half years old and could talk in full sentences. She likes to copy what others say and will try to do Luna's British accent every now and then. She also really likes to paint and has become better at chess. Lisa, now five, is pretty much the same. She is a little taller but still short. She had been working on a new invention that not even Lily her roommate knew anything about though. The twins, now seven, both still do their respective hobbies. They were a little taller as well almost at Lucy's height when she was eight. Lucy was of course nine now and seemed to only get better at sneaking up on people. While she still keeps mostly to herself, she is a little more open to her family and everyone made sure to not forget her or ignore her in events. They had been doing that since the whole incident where she tried to curse them. True the spell book didn't work but it did make all of them realize how often she would be ignored. Lisa actually got Lucy a new poem book with a lock on it. It was awkward between the two being the ones to show the least emotions.
Lynn, now fourteen, has become even stronger and is still in all of her sports. She has gotten better about bragging but still needed some work. She still uses Lincoln has a training partner which he felt would get worse with being older now. She had also grown a little but was still much shorter than the next sister. Luan, now fifteen, has gotten more popular on her website and her puns are just as bad as normal. Lincoln wandered how bad April fools will be. Luna had grown a lot at sixteen. She was now almost taller than Leni when she was at her age. She had a driving permit and has only gotten louder as a rock star. Her hair was still in her short pixie cut. A major change for her was that she final came open about her feelings for Sam, her girlfriend. Everyone was happy for her and didn't think any different about her. Although Luan wondered why she was nervous in the first place. Lincoln had a best friend who had two dads and they all got along fine with the McBride's. Nevertheless, Luna felt relieved and actually agreed with Luan a little. Leni was still the same sweet person at age seventeen. She had become more of an expert in fashion making more dresses. She also tried to make clothes for boys which Lincoln helped with a lot. She actually has a driving license but is not allowed to drive alone needing either their parents, Luna or Lori with her. Lori, now eighteen, is now almost as tall as their mother. She has graduated High School and will soon start looking for a college. Depending on where she goes, she might not live in the house for much longer. No one in the family, including Lori, was looking forward to that.
And then there was Lincoln. He a few inches taller almost as tall as Lynn. She was sometimes jealous that her younger brother by two years was almost as tall as her. Much like the rest he hasn't changed much. He is still into video games and comics. He has yet to find his 'passion' like his sisters. While he likes to do art and he and Clyde sometimes make more comics for the fun of it he still felt like it wasn't the same.
Lincoln was almost scared from how quiet the house was. Aside from the bad luck incident, which the whole family agreed to never talk about, he has never been at the house by himself. He went to the bathroom first having just getting up. He was glad there wasn't a line. After doing his business he decided to go downstairs to find his parents. He still didn't see anyone in the living room. There was however a not on the table.
'Dear Lincoln,
Your mother and I are sad to say we had to go to work early today, and your sisters had something to do at the mall. Sorry we weren't here when you woke up. We plan on doing your birthday party later tonight. We will miss most of the day, but your sisters should be back soon. Have a great birthday. We are so excited that your twelve years old now! Happy Birthday!
Love Mom and Dad.
P.S. I made a special breakfast in the kitchen. I made sure none of your sisters ate it.'
When Lincoln finished reading the letter he was of course upset. He shouldn't be surprised that his parents had to go to work. They had to do it before on some of the sister's birthdays was upset that all of his sisters went to the mall. 'Did they forget what today was?' He thought. Then again, they could be getting him something last minute from all of them. He hoped that was the case. If there was one rule in this house aside from not to go in Lori and Leni's room, it was that nobody, with the exception of Leni at times, forgets a Loud's birthday. Leni even remembered them more often than the others would expect.
Lincoln then decided to go to the kitchen to find his breakfast surprise. He went through the dining room noticing unlike living room and hallway the lights were off. 'Strange.' He thought. The family was not known for turning lights off throughout the house with the exception of going to bed. It was even weirder that this and the kitchen lights were off. Lincoln reached for the light switch and turned it on only to get the best surprise of his life!
"SURPRISE!" He heard several voices yell. He was so scared he jumped a couple feet in the air impressing Lynn. "Happy Birthday Lincoln!"
'Another scare like that and I might faint.' He thought. When Lincoln looked around, he saw that all of his family, Clyde, Bobby, Rusty, Rocky, Liam, Zach, and Ronnie Anne were all here. Including his parents. They were all around the table with a giant cake in the middle. It was chocolate, his favorite much like the sisters. All of Lincoln's family and friends expected him to yell in excitement. Instead after looking at everything, he noticed something or rather someone was missing.
"Where's Lucy?" He asked. Before anyone could say anything, a voice spoke from behind.
"Surprise!" Lucy said in her monotone voice. That broke the wall for Lincoln has he jumped in the air again before falling on the ground unconscious. Lincoln had gotten better at sensing Lucy's presence but with all the shock he had not noticed her. Which she was hoping for this time. Although maybe they should have toned it down a little.
"I think we went a little overboard guys." Lily said. The note was a part of a prank Luan came up with. Along with the scare of course. She wanted to make this a birthday he wouldn't forget. Five minutes later Lincoln woke up with all of his sisters making sure he was okay trying to doctor him. His friends just stood back and watched trying not to laugh. The parents eventually told the girls to calm down and to get the party started. The party was a blast. Lincoln got a lot of presents most consisting of new comics or games. Lynn got him an orange sweater that she said could be used for workouts. Luna had played music singing some of Lincoln's favorite SMOOCH songs. Leni gave him some small versions of his clothes, doll sized to be exact. He looked at her confused.
As if she knew she looked at Lincoln smiling. "There for Bun-Bun. Now you too can look like twins!" She said not realizing that his friends heard this. Clyde was the only one who knew what she was talking about. Not even Ronnie Anne knew about Bun-Bun, his stuffed rabbit. Lincoln blushed but thankfully none of them questioned it. Although he suspected Ronnie would later.
After the party all of my friends except Ronnie left. Clyde had to be home by three or four and the others could only be around the sisters' antics for so long. Ronnie and I decided to go to my room to look at my new games and comics when…. Well, I'll let the flashback explain.
"That was so awesome! Lincoln said as he and Ronnie went up the stairs.
"Sure was. Hope you liked your present." She said. Ronnie got him the newest Ace Savvy comic.
"I love it. Thanks, Nie-Nie." He whispered that last part. It got him a punch in the arm and Ronnie saying, "Never call me that again." Although he thought she seemed almost nervous and…. was she blushing? Before the two got to his room they were stopped by Lisa.
"Greetings elder brother and future sister-in-law." Lisa said.
"What was that last part?" Ronnie asked trying not to blush.
"Nothing!" Lisa said quickly. She then turned to Lincoln. "I was actually about to come get you dear brother. I have something to show you. Ronnie Anne can join if she wants."
"What is it?" Lincoln asked. He was of course hesitant knowing full well what this usually meant.
"Well telling you would ruin the surprise. But to not give it away it's your present from me." She said walking to her room. Ronnie looked at Lincoln with a questioning look.
"Do you think we should go?" She asked. Although she hasn't seen it yet Lincoln has told her about the many times Lisa used her siblings as subjects.
"Well, it is her gift to me. I don't want to be rude." Lincoln replied. "I mean what's the worst that can happen?"
Famous last words.
"Alright your call." The two went to Lisa and Lily's room where they could see a sheet covering what's probably Lisa's latest invention. Lisa got their attention before pulling the sheet back.
"Behold!" She yelled. Under the sheet was a giant machine with three tubes tall enough for even Lori could fit in it. There's buttons, axles, and lights all over. To the two preteens it looks like something from a sci-fi movie.
"This looks awesome Lisa! What do you think Ronnie...Ronnie?" Lincoln looked at his friend and saw that she was staring at the machine in awe. This was the first time Ronnie Anne has seen one of Lisa's inventions. Lincoln pinched Ronnie in the arm knocking her out of her trance. She glared at him rubbing her arm. She made a mental not to get him later.
"What does it do?" She asked. She was even more interested than before.
"Well theatrically it is a device that can give you superpowers." Lisa said. "I know how much you brother thought it would quote 'Awesome' unquote, to have superpowers. Especially when going into fights with Lynn." Lincoln just nodded now in a similar state that Ronnie was in a minute ago. Ronnie pinched him, a little harder than what he did, to get his attention.
"Ow." He gave a glare to Ronnie.
"Now were even." She said with a smirk. Ignoring her comment Lincoln turned to Lisa.
"How does it work?" He asked.
"Simple. You just place an object like video game or comic in the center tube and it gives you the ability to use powers of those characters."
"So, it's like a mimicking machine?" Lincoln asked.
"In a way yes. I hope you like your gift. Once you try it of course." Lisa said with a little smirk.
"Wait...you said theatrically. What happens if it doesn't do what it should?" Ronnie asked.
"Don't worry. I made as safe as possible. At worse he may feel a small electric shock but nothing major."
"Fair enough. Also, I want to try it." She said not wanting to pass this up.
"I know the perfect comic too." Lincoln said running to his room. He came back with a very familiar comic.
"Isn't that the comic you and Clyde made for that contest?" Ronnie asked.
"Yep...well it's not the original. Just a copy. The original is at Clyde's for obvious reasons."
"So, you want to try to be Ace Savvy? What about me?"
"Well, all of my sisters are in the book. But to save the trouble I think you would like Lynn's. She basically has super strength and can take a couple hits." Lincoln said.
"Sounds good to me."
"Excellent. Now elder brother if you would so kindly put the comic in the middle and then you two each get in one of the other tubes." Lisa said. They did as instructed getting in. The doors closed as Lisa got the machine ready. "Okay. Now I'm starting the procedure. Now is your last time to leave." Lisa warned.
"Just get it one with!" Ronnie yelled through the glass. Lincoln just gave her a thumbs up.
"Very well." Lisa said. She pressed a few buttons before pulling a lever at the side. It started to warm up making a humming sound.
"Lincoln! Lincoln where are you? I need to show you something!" Lily yelled for her brother. The two-year-old walked in waving a picture in her hand. She also had a box of crayons. When she saw what her brother and future sister-in-law as the others said, were doing she turned to Lisa. "Lisa! You aren't allowed to do experiments on us remember!" She scolded.
"Do not worry younger sister unit. This is Lincoln's day of birth gift." She explained. She saw the confusion on Lily face and corrected herself. "It's his birthday present. And both him and Ronnie Anne voluntarily wanted to do this."
"Okay. But I'm still going to tell mom! She ran as fast as her legs could not realizing that a crayon jumped out of the open box landing on a button marked reverse. Lisa was about to chase Lily when she saw the crayon hit the button.
"Oh no!" She panicked. The machine started to sputter and make other strange noises. Lincoln and Ronnie were both screaming banging on glass. They saw and heard what was happening and knew they had to get out.
"Why did I even put a reverse switch on there?" Lisa asked to herself. She was trying to stop her invention, but it seemed to have malfunctioned. Lisa saw smoke coming out from her invention. She panicked and went to the other side of the room. She quickly took cover behind a small bunker that she made for things like this. Not a second later there was a loud explosion and the room was almost filled to the brim with smoke! Lisa pulled out a gas mask and quickly pulled it on.
'Please be okay. Please be okay!' She internally thought. She was scared to find what might have happened to her brother and his friend. She somehow survived countless chemical explosions so surely, they are okay. Right?
When Lisa got to where her invention was there was nothing but smoke and broken parts. She noticed that somehow the comic book was still in one piece. She looked around a little more and then realized something else.
"Where are Lincoln and Ronnie Anne?!" She did not see them anywhere. Before she knew what she was doing Lisa fell to her knees and started crying. Slowly at first but it started to pick up. 'What happened to them?' She thought knowing she would not be able to talk right now.
(Unknown place)
"Ugggg. W-what happened?" Lincoln asked. He looked around noticing that he was in the middle of what looked like a city. He heard a voice groan next to him and saw a familiar person.
"Ronnie?" He asked. It looked like her, but she looked different. Her hair is brown like Lynn's, and she had the white and red color costume of...the Strong Suit? She even had the head band on top.
"Yeah, it's me." She replied trying to regain her senses. She noticed that he seemed confused. "What's wrong?" She asked.
"You said you wanted to be Strong Suit, right?" He asked somewhat hesitantly.
"Yeah. Why?" Lincoln pointed to the window of one of the buildings. Ronnie turned around and couldn't believe her eyes! She looked almost like the Strong Suit from Lincoln's comic. The only difference was the height and her skin color. But she had the costume and even her hair had changed to Lynn's. She was pretty sure she gained some muscles as well.
She turned back to Lincoln and noticed he seemed different too now that she has all of her senses back. "Hey Linc. You may want to come look too." Lincoln walked over and couldn't believe his eyes as well! Lincoln had a black mask, red cape, and everything else that...
"I'm Ace Savvy!" He yelled going into his fan-boy mode.
"Yeah, cool but how!?" Ronnie asked. She was more worried about where they were.
Lincoln thought for a moment a look of excitement but also fear about what he said next. "Well...I think were inside the comic book."
Edit: This was originally the ending of chapter one, but I have now decided to merge the first two chapters.
Part 2
"What do you mean inside the comic book?!" Ronnie asked in disbelieve.
"I mean Lisa's machine somehow transported us here. I look just like the Ace Savvy character, and you're dressed up as Strong Suit! And I recognize this city."
"You actually recognize the city?" She asked.
"One Clyde and I drew it and two, what can I say I'm a comic nerd." He replied. Ronnie noticed that Lincoln seemed to be holding back some excitement.
"You actually find this fun, don't you?" She asked raising an eyebrow.
"YES! I've always wanted to be Ace Savvy! And being in a comic book his super awesome." He said not being able to hold his excitement.
"Okay, while I think this is cool as well, I'm more worried about How WE GET HOME!" Ronnie said yelling that last part. Lincoln suddenly froze with realization and started to panic.
"Oh my gosh you're right! We don't even know how to get out. Lisa may not be able to the machine! She probably doesn't even know what happened!"
'I had to make him panic.' Ronnie thought. "Lincoln."
"We could be stuck her for the rest of our lives!"
"Lincoln." Ronnie said with a little more force.
"We won't get to see our families ever again!"
"LINCOLN!" Ronnie yelled grabbing the boy. She almost feel over on top of him not realizing how strong she was. "Calm down. You're starting to sound like Clyde." She said with a small smirk as he began to breathe easier.
"Sorry. I just got really scared for a second." He then chuckled before realizing that Ronnie was still holding in the air. "Can you put me down now?" He asked.
"Oh sorry." Ronnie said gently putting him down. "So, what do we do now?"
"I guess we try to find a way out. Look around the city. We should both have walkies-talkies if we get separated." Lincoln said pulling his out of his belt. Ronnie found one in her pocket.
"Found mine."
"Alright. I guess we should try to figure where to look." The two then began to walk around the city. It was dark and quiet, and no one was in site. They had walked for a while when Ronnie decided to start a conversation.
"Why are there so few people?" Ronnie asked.
"Clyde and I had to Rush through this and didn't want to worry about drawing more people than what we needed. Plus, most comics seem to have the cities appear empty in the middle of the night."
"So, what happens in this again? I know you fight Wild Card Willy A.K.A Principal Huggins. But what else?"
"Well, if I remember correctly, we found Wild Card by catching some of his henchmen that were robbing a bank. I think it was One-Eyed Jack, Ace Savvy, and... Strong Suit." He said starting to remember what was going to happen.
"So where is Clyde?"
"Strong Suit! You know you're supposed to use our superhero names when out on missions!" A voice said form behind. Both Lincoln and Ronnie Turned around in fighting stances both wandering how they did that. They calmed down when they saw it was Clyde. Or One-Eyed Jack as he is called.
"Ummmm...Sorry One-Eyed Jack. I just said it without realizing it." Ronnie said. But then she noticed something. 'Can he not tell that I'm not Strong Suit?' She thought. Sure, she had the costume but looked nothing like Lynn. Lincoln happened to be playing the character based off himself so it would be easy to think he was Ace.
"It's fine. Just don't do it again." One-Eyed Jack said. "By the way Ace, I think I may have a lead on where Wild Card is."
"Oh…... Really, where?" Lincoln asked trying to play his part.
"Well Eight of Spades (Lucy) said she heard some of his henchmen are going to rob one of the banks. If we get them, we can find Wild Card." He said proudly.
"Good job Jack. Do we know when they're going to strike?"
"I would think it would be an-" But before Jack could finish an alarm in the not so far distance went off. "….. second now." He finished.
"Let's go deal some justice." Linc…. Ace said. Pulling out the some of his cards. 'Hey, I did it right for once.' He thought. One-Eyed Jack ran ahead but Ron…Strong Suit stopped Ace before he could go.
"Are you seriously going to go fight a bunch of criminals Lin-Ace?" She asked.
"We have to find a way out. Maybe by completing the story we can leave. Besides the criminals are not that dangerous. It should be easy."
"I swear Lynn is starting to get to you." She said.
"You do know you're almost as bad right?" Ace joked.
"Well let's go then. Don't want Jack to have all the fun." Strong Suit then started to run ahead with Ace surprisingly keeping up.
"Wow. I didn't think you could run so fast."
"I usually can't. It must be because I'm Ace." Ace replied back.
"I guess that means we have powers while in the comic book." Strong Suit said. They had made sure to whisper so Jack couldn't hear them. Well...as well as they could while running.
"Lisa will be happy to hear that." Lincoln said. Not long after all three got to the end of the panel. Jack kept running going into the next but Ace And Strong Suit stopped confused as to how and why they could see the different panels as if they were reading the book. They both looked up noticing the panels of the city. "This is weird." Ace said looking at the reader.
"Yeah. I think we are basically breaking the fourth wall." Strong Suit said. "Let me try something." She went to the edge of the panel and stuck her hand threw it. Her hand appeared in the other, but her arm couldn't be seen in the small space in between.
"Creepy." Was all Ace could say before they continued.
They soon got to the bank where one of the crooks was standing at the doors on lookout.
"So, what's the plan Ace?" Jack asked.
"Oh...ummmm I-I- I thought you had a plan?" Ace said caught off guard.
"You are the leader. And the planner for that matter. This should be easy for you." Jack said with a confused look.
"R-right. Sorry. I'm just a little distracted."
"Real smooth." Strong Suit whispered.
Glaring at Strong Suit, Ace continued. "Well, we could take out the guard and then ambush the rest. When we capture them, we can get them to tell us where Wild Card is. It is never easy to tell where he will be. He is always wild and random."
"I don't know if that was intentionally or not, but you sound too much like The Joker." (Luan) Jack Said. Ace just inwardly groaned to himself. 'Oh great.' He thought.
"Focus you two." Strong Suit said.
"Sorry." They said before getting back to the situation at hand. Ace looked trying to remember how this happened. "I got it. Strong Suit, you distract the guards while Jack and I go in and take care of the rest."
"Good plan Ace." Jack said without hesitation.
"I'm in." Strong Suit said. She thought it would have been better for her and Lincoln/Ace to stay together but knew he was trying to go along with the comic. She then ran ahead grabbing a rock to throw at the guard. She threw as hard as she could hitting the man in the stomach. "Over here you big idiot." She yelled getting closer.
"Ahh!" He exclaimed the rock causing the wind to be knocked out of him. He looked up to see none other than Strong Suit of the Full House Gang. He quickly reached up to a mic in his ear.
"The Full House Gang is here. But so far its only Strong Suit." He spoke. Although it was muffled Strong Suit could have sworn a voice said something about reinforcements.
'Oh great.' She thought. Suddenly five more men came out looking almost the same as the first one. Thankfully none had any weapons aside from their fist. "This will be fun. Although I'm not sure if it will be a challenge." She said cockily. She was trying to reassure herself since these guys were all big and looked stronger than the average person. She remembered that her power is super strength however and figured she could handle it.
Ace and Jack ran behind them running into the bank. "We made it." Jack said.
"That seemed a little too easy." Ace said. While this was going on he couldn't help but feel that he was forgetting something. Jack nodded but they continued anyways. When they got to the center of the main room, they noticed that the place looked empty.
"Did all of them go off to fight Strong Suit?" Jack asked.
Suddenly without warning two bags went over both of their heads from behind them! Before they could react, they were tied up together their backs against each other.
'Oh riiiiiiight. This whole thing was a trap to get me and Jack.' Ace thought. 'How did I forget that?!' He thought. His favorite part was the end so he kind of forgot some of it.
"They trapped us!" Jack said stating the obvious.
"Take them to the van!" A voice yelled. "And don't worry about Strong Suit. These two are all we need."
'That must be Wild Card. Dang it. Even in the summer I can't get away from the principle.' He thought.
"Yes sir." Two other voices said. Suddenly the two boys were picked up and taken to a van behind the bank.
(Outside the bank)
Strong Suit for the most part had been doing fine. She got hit a couple times but only one had phased her and that's because it was a direct hit to the face. She had thought that she would be able to fight like the character but apparently aside from a few instincts that she couldn't tell were hers are Strong Suits she was having to fight at her best ability. It was like having to make a dinner from scratch.
"I didn't think this would be so hard." She said out loud. Right now, she had only three left having knocked out the other half. Unfortunately, she herself was running out of energy.
"What's wrong girly? Did we break a nail?" One of them teased.
This for some reason angered Strong Suit more than she thought it would. She glared at the man making him take a step back. "No you didn't. I wouldn't even care if you did. But I hate being called girly." She then charged at the man trying to hit him with her head. Sadly, she forgot about the other two. One of them grabbed her headband right as she ran past him. She was running so fast that the other had to help hold her. The band was made by the Eleven of Hearts (Leni) and with some help from Card Counter (Lisa) It was unbreakable. Even so it still slowed down Strong Suit To where she was just running in place right in front of the guy she was charging! She stopped running in place and smiled nervously.
"...Um hi." She said not sure what to do. The man just smiled before punching her as hard as he could causing her to fly back to the two holding the headband. She flew past them stretching the band the other way. The men holding let go of it making go back to Strong Suit so fast it made her do back a few more feet.
"Owww." She groaned. She was honestly surprised she was still conscious...just barley.
Suddenly a van pulled out form the back of the bank stopping next to the men that were still standing. The side door opened letting them in. Strong Suit looked up in time to see that Ace and Jack tied up in the van as well.
"Linc...oln." She said before passing out.
(Unknown time later)
"W-where am I?" Strong Suit said. Trying to get her senses back since she just woke up.
"It's okay sis. You passed out." A similar voice said. She looked up to see none other than High Card (Lori) next to her. They were actually in the Loud's Van. She was in the passenger seat with High Card of course driving. She could hear voices of the rest of Lincoln's sisters behind her.
"Dudes she's awake." Night Club (Luna) said.
"Shes okay!" Queen of Diamonds (Lola) and Royal Flush (Lana) said together.
"Our fellow sister awakes." Eight of Spades (Lucy) said.
"Enjoy your knock out? Hahahaha. Get it? Knock instead of nap." Joker (Luan)
"Yay." Eleven of Hearts (Leni) said.
"I don't see why you all were so worried. I told you she would be fine." Card Counter (Lisa) said.
"Poo Poo." Deuce (Lily) said.
'Why isn't there a character based of me?' Strong Suit thought. "Where are Lin-I mean Ace and One-eyed Jack?" She asked.
"We were hoping you could tell us." High card said.
"The last thing I remember was seeing the robbers get away in a van. I-" Her eyes suddenly went wide in realization. "They were kidnapped!"
"They will pay!" Queen of Diamonds said. The rest voiced similar agreements.
"How long was I out?" Strong Suit asked.
From the time we find you at least an hour." Card Counter told her.
"What?!" She yelled. She could her anger rising. "They are going to pay." She said.
"Just make sure they don't pay with the money that just stole." Eleven said as a matter of fact. This got a bunch of looks from everyone in the van. "What? If they pay with the stolen money, then we can't keep it." She explained as if it was obvious.
"When Ace can he'll use his cards to call us. For now, we'll just keep searching." High Card told them ignoring Eleven's statement.
(Unknown Area: Around the same time)
Ace and Jack had no idea where they were. They didn't know how long they had been in the car the bags over their heads making it impossible to see.
'I thought we would get to the warehouse sooner.' Ace thought. He wanted to pull the cards out but knew they only track where they were laid. And if one of the henchmen saw them, they could easily destroy them before they would be found.
"Ace can't you think of anything?" Jack asked. Ace had actually been thinking of many plans but nothing that would work. Lincoln knew he made Ace a quick thinker and strategist, but he didn't think he would be this good. He also noticed that he was actually getting a little calmer about the whole thing. As of this had been done a hundred times to him before.
"Nothing that would work right now. Let's wait until we get to the ware-ever they are taking us." He said. He couldn't let Jack now he wasn't from this comic book. Or that he wasn't from a comic book period.
Suddenly the car stopped causing the two boys to slide on the floor of the back.
"Lets go." Wild Card said. Ace and Jack were then picked up being carried into a building. Based on the smell Ace figured they were at the docks.
"Tie them up. My new pets are getting hungry and its almost feeding time." Wild Card told his men. Jack didn't like the sound of that and even Ace (Who knew what would happen) seemed scared out of his mind.
'Why did I make him an actual good villain?' He thought. He moved his hands a little feeling the tools for victory slowly falling into them. Ace smirked gaining some confidence come back.
(In Vanzilla: Somewhere in the City)
"We've been searching forever! Where are they?" Royal Flush complained.
"It's been thirty minutes Since Strong Suit woke up fellow sister. It has not been that long." Card Counter told her blankly.
"That's still too long for me." She huffed. Many of the others silently agreed, including Card Counter.
"Maybe he's at the music shop dudes. That would be a rock-in hide out for villains." Night Club said.
"We are not going to the music store." Eight said in a sinister voice that scared almost everyone in the van.
"Uhhhh...Just kidding?" Night Club said. The others then started to come up with ideas for where their leader and twelfth member could be. Just then Strong Suit realized something.
'It's the docks!' She thought. She suddenly remembered it. She couldn't have said anything sooner but now she could without being suspicious.
"The docks!" She yelled a little too loud. Everyone in the van looked at her minus High Card since she was driving.
"What makes you say that?" Queen of Diamonds asked.
"It's really a guess but I can almost feel that's where he is. Plus, that would actually make a good hideout." Strong Suit said. She wasn't lying either. She really did feel like that's where Lincoln his. Even before she remembered for sure. Maybe it wasn't memory that told her.
"Well, its actually one of the closer places. It may not be a bad place to look." High Card said. Just then a ringing went off in the van. High Card then reached over and pressed a button opening a panel that showed a GPS screen come up. It showed where the van was and ten small blinking dots at another location.
"Ace used the cards." High Card said taking a quick look at the screen. "Looks like Strong Suit was right. They're at the docks."
"Well then let's go!" Strong Suit said happy they found Lincoln.
In a few seconds they crashed through the whole front building of a warehouse. High Card turned the car to the side. She then pressed a button that opened the side door showing the others. Strong Suit would have gasped if she didn't already know what to expect. Still...seeing her boyfriend hanging over a shark tank was pretty scary.
"Grab them!" Wild Card yelled hiding behind one of his men.
'I forgot how much of a coward he his.' Ace thought.
The Full House Gang, The Loud siblings, (I know that's been used but it was at the end of the episode. I think it was supposed to be a way of the show saying that's the name of the team) got out getting their own targets. Eleven of Hearts saved Ace and Jack easily getting ride of the chains holding them over the shark tank. The rest quickly fought of the henchmen.
'There they are.' Strong Suit thought. She was looking at two of the men. They were two of the ones that defeated her last time. 'Time for some payback.' She told herself. She quickly ran towards the two who now had fear in their eyes. This time neither had time to move before being hit by Strong Suit being sent flying into a pile of other henchmen next to Card Counter.
"Fifty-two pick up." She cheered. She just felt like that was something Lynn would say. She didn't remember if that is what she says.
The rest of the fight went smoothly. Wild Card tried to run off but was stopped by Royal Flush and The Joker. Jack and Ace tied him up finishing the battle. Although Strong Suit wondered how Night Club got those speakers here. And set up so quickly.
"Willy why do you always have to play dirty cards?" Ace said. This was the part he memorized the most. He then pulled of the bandana Willy used to cover his face from the nose down
"I'm not an evil guy. He pleaded. "I was just dealt a bad hand."
'These puns are worse than Luan's.' Strong Suit thought. '…...Then again that's probably where Lincoln got them from.' She realized.
"As a lonely kid the only game I knew was solitaire." He said sounding regretful. "So, I guess it's of to jail for me." He said thinking he knew the answer.
"I have a better idea." Ace said.
(Somewhere in the city)
A woman on a motor bike speeds down the road when Ace and Jack quickly jump down. They had tried to jump her but her bike was too fast. Which is what Ace expected.
"The Old Maid (Scoots) is making off with the jackpot!" Jack yelled.
"You'll never catch me, Savvy." She said thinking she won.
"Oh, I wouldn't be so sure." Ace said chuckling to himself. "Cause we got a new card to play."
Just then Wild Card Willy came out ready for action. "Time to deal out some justice." He spoke.
(Unknown)
"I won't lie that ending seems a little too fast if you ask me." Ronnie said. After The Old Maid was caught, her and Lincoln found a place to talk in private. Sadly, they were still in the comic So getting out by finishing the story was out.
"Clyde and I had about a minute to make. How we did it that fast I still don't know." Lincoln said.
"Why wasn't I a character?" Ronnie asked half-jokingly.
"...I couldn't think of something good enough for you?" Lincoln tried. Ronnie just stared at him as if saying 'Really?'
"Well to be honest it was mainly because I didn't want my sisters to get suspicious that at the time, I had a crush on you." He explained.
"I would make a bigger deal about it just to mess with you but right now we still need to figure out how to get home."
"I know but...is it just me or do you almost feel natural here now? I mean I can actually do some things I could never do." Lincoln said.
"I know what you mean. Ever since we got here I noticed I've started to act not only like Strong Suit but even Lynn."
"Technically they are the same person but I get what you mean."
"Anyways...I feel like I'm basically getting more used to it. The powers and the personality."
"Well maybe we can ask Lisa about it. When we get home that is." Lincoln said. The two thought for what felt like an eternity neither one able to come up with something.
"This is getting ridiculous. Couldn't we just ask this comics Lisa to help us?" Ronnie asked.
"We could but let's save that for a last resort. We don't need the characters finding out they aren't real. Just imagine what that would do to them." Lincoln said.
"Do you really think I care about that at this point Lincoln!?" Ronnie yelled walking towards Lincoln her anger taking over. "At this point I just want to get out of here, out of this costume, I just want to leave!" She yelled throwing her arm at him. If it wasn't for his new reflexes Lincoln was sure he would be unconscious. Even then her hand missed him by an inch causing him to fall.
Lincoln had a look in his eyes that Ronnie couldn't read at first. She then thought it was fear from her attack which caused her to calm down.
"...Linc, I-I'm sorry. I don't know what came over me. Are you okay?" She looked at Lincoln, but he was still staring at something in wonder. "Linc? Are seriously giving me the silent treatment?" She asked not sure what to think.
Lincoln just pointed his finger at something behind Ronnie. She turned around and then had a look similar to Lincoln.
Right there, was a small swirling purple portal. They both knew that was not there.
"Where did it come from?" Ronnie asked.
"I-It just appeared after you swung your arm." Lincoln said getting out of his shock. Ronnie then held her arm strait out before swinging it to the right towards her. The moment she finished the portal suddenly closed as if it wasn't even there. She swung her arm out and made it appear again.
"Do you think it leads back home?" Lincoln asked.
"I guess there's only one way to find out." Ronnie said with a smirk. She jumped threw the portal leaving a shocked Lincoln. He just shrugged his shoulders and followed soon after. The portal closed again to the quiet city.
(Loud House: Lisa's room.)
'What happened to them?' Lisa thought. She couldn't believe what had happened. One minute she was giving Lincoln his birthday present and now both him and Ronnie were possibly gone forever!
'No! Don't think that!' She yelled to herself in her head.
"What happened in here?!" Lori asked. Explosions in the house were a normal occurrence but this was bigger than usual. It didn't help that Lisa seemed to be actually upset about this.
"I-*sniff*-don't know-*sniff*- exactly." Lisa said trying to calm down her tears.
At the sound of crying the rest of the sisters came running. All just like Lori were surprised to see Lisa showing actual emotions.
"Are you okay Lisa?" Lucy asked. Lisa calmed herself down and looked at her siblings. She noticed that Lily was there, but she has yet to say anything. She was wondering if she should tell the truth or lie. She had noticed that the comic was in one piece. No burn marks or tears. She figured Lincoln and Ronnie were alive, but the question was where they were.
"Um...yeah, I'm fine. I was just working on my present for Lincoln. Sadly, it exploded before I could finish testing it. I think it overheated." She said with a forced smile. Technically she didn't lie. Just bent the truth.
While Lucy's face was unreadable the others all had looks that said they didn't know whether to trust her or not. With the exception of Lily who had a disproving glare towards her elder sister. She was trying to get their mom when the explosion happened, so she ran back up reaching the top of the stairs when everyone else came out. Even though she's the youngest Lily could sometimes be more responsible than many of the other siblings sometimes acting as a voice of reason. Many are sure she got it from Lincoln, Lori, and of course their mom. They also think that having Lisa as a roommate is what makes her so mature at times but also still like the kid she is.
"Don't worry Lis. I'm sure you will be able to fix it." Luna said kneeling down to the genius giving her a hug. To her surprise Lisa hugged back. The best her little arms would allow her anyways.
"Hey. The worst that will happen is it blowing up in your face!" Luan said. Many of the sisters glared at her while the others groaned.
"One not the time and two that wasn't you best pun." Lucy said.
"Sorry guys I don't make the jokes. I just deliver the message." Luan said winking at the reader. Crickets could be heard in the background.
"That didn't even make since." Lola said.
"And what was with the wink. Who were you winking at?" Lana asked.
"Oh, you'll find out one day." Luan said.
"Anyways...I wonder where Lincoln and Ronnie Anne are? They should have been out here by now." Lily said still looking at Lisa.
"Oh-umm...I think I overheard that they were going to the park...yeah the park." Lisa lied again. Lily was about say something when Leni squealed.
"Like, OMG! Linky took Ronnie at the park?! He could be, like, totes asking her out. We have to find them!" She said having her famous shipping smile. Everyone knew when that smiled appeared there was no talking Leni out of her goal. And the others, minus Lily agreed. They all ran down to the family van Vanzilla leaving the two youngest alone.
"So mind telling me what actually happened?!" Lily yelled.
"W-well after one of your crayons it a button on the machine it suddenly overheated and... well you know the rest."
Lily's anger was quickly replaced with quilt when Lisa mentioned that.
"Oh my gosh your right! This is all my fault!" Lily said getting teary eyed.
"No younger sibli-Lily it's not your fault. I don't even know what I was thinking putting a reverse switch on that thing. Plus, I think Lincoln and Ronnie are fine. If the comic book survived that then I'm sure they are well. The only question is where they went."
"Thanks Lisa." Lily said smirking a little that Lisa actually owned up to her mistake. "How about I help you clean up our room and see if we can find out what happened to our brother." Lisa agreed and soon they started to pick up some of the metal putting it in a pile for scrap. Lisa then activated a robot she made that cleans up class and small pieces of ruble. It also got the metal that was too heavy for the two young girls alone.
They finished in less than half an hour with only a few things like window and walls dirty from the smoke.
Lisa picked up the comic from the table where she moved it out of the way.
"I'm almost certain this piece of fiction has the answers we need. I just don't know what to do."
Lily was about to say something when there was a sudden purple flash. Lisa dropped the comic and right above it a portal appeared. The next thing they knew Ronnie Anne flew out followed soon by Lincoln.
"Lincoln, Ronnie! You're okay!" Lisa said running up to the two.
"Yay!" Lily yelled.
"Hey Lisa. Boy, do we have a story to tell you."
"Do tell but first, what are you wearing?" Lincoln and Ronnie then noticed that they both were still in the costumes. They both knew they had to tell Lisa everything and Lily would not leave until everything was explained.
"Well..." Ronnie said.
(After telling Lisa and Lily their adventure)
"So, you both actually have superpowers and can now possibly go in and out of comic books to mimic the abilities of the character you take. Not only that but you went through the whole story of your book?"
"Pretty much." Lincoln said. "How long were we gone anyways?"
"Well, I would say no more than thirty to forty-five minutes." Lisa said.
"It felt like we were gone for hours." Ronnie said.
"Perhaps time moves differently in the comic book than in the real world." Lily suggested.
"She takes way too much after you Lisa." Lincoln said.
"Hey!"
"While I do have many questions, I suggest you two get rid of the suits before our siblings get home."
"Good idea Lisa except I don't have any other clothes." Ronnie said.
"Well maybe the costumes are just over our clothes. I mean I doubt they just disappeared." Lincoln reasoned.
"True." Lincoln then went to his room while Ronnie went to the bathroom.
"Alright let's make this quick." Lincoln said talking to himself. He tried to pull off the costume, but it wouldn't budge. Not even the gloves!
"Come on you awesome but stupid suit." Lincoln said. "I just want my normal clothes back." Right after he said that there was a bright flash and the next thing he knew he was back in his normal clothes. He came out of his room seeing Ronnie Anne come out of the bathroom in her normal clothes as well.
"So, you found out too?" He asked.
"Yep."
"I wonder what else we can do?" Lincoln asked walking into Lisa and Lily's room. "So far we can make portal's and change our clothes just by willing it."
"That is what I plan to help you find out." Lisa said with a smirk. She is now in her lab coat and wearing goggles.
(End Flashback)
"After that Lisa helped us find an abandoned warehouse to practice our abilities. So far, I can be Ace, or Robin and Ronnie can be Strong Suit or Starfire. We have the same weaknesses as the heroes we mimic, can only do one hero at a time, and the more powerful the move or more we switch the more power we use. We can only go for so long before wearing out. Ronnie almost passed out one time from pushing herself too hard. We still don't know the complete extent of our powers either." Lincoln explained.
"We also apparently picked up some abilities that we can use without using our powers. I'm a little stronger than before and react faster to things like surprise attacked from Lynn. I'm also usually a lot more aware of my surroundings. The same goes for Ronnie as well. And aside from Lisa and Lily no one else knows about our powers. And we made Lily promise not to tell anyone. Off course it was not long before we decided to use our powers for good. What else would we do?"
"I feel like that took a lot longer than it should have." He said to himself. "Well, I'm going to bed. Hero needs his sleep after all." Lincoln said getting in bed.
I'm sorry this took so long to come out. I was working at this at the same time as the newest chapter of Loud Hearts and well life basically got in the way. My job, the new Kingdom Hearts Trailers, which Oh my gosh they really hyped it up, and near the end I had a little bit of writers' block. Which is why the ending was a little forced and rushed.
Lincoln's comment at the end was my little joke about this being late.
What will await our heroes next? You will find out.
Lincoln: And now the reviews.
WordFighter: Glad you like it. Don't worry I put limits to their powers. While they will only grow stronger there will still be obstacles for them.
1: Thank you and same for you as WordFighter. I hinted little at your idea in this chapter. Thank you for that by the way. I like the example you gave as well. Although I might change the idea of that weakness a little.
The Keeper of Worlds: Thank you.
Sorry the ending for this chapter is rushed. I wanted to get this done so I can continue on my Triplets story which will be my next main focus. And Loud Hearts because of the new trailers. But Triplets comes first. Have a good week everyone.
Edit: So as you can see I tried to fix all the grammatical mistakes I could find and also changed a couple things. For example, I made it where there is still two weeks of summer left instead of just a couple days. So that we can have some more summer adventures before the school year starts. I am so glad to be working on this story again. Especially now that I have a more thought-out plot.