A/N: Long time no write my friends, I know it's been awhile, but I'll hophope you'll forgive me. A little update on everything: I recently graduated High school about a month after the last update, but my grades in alot of my classes were not great so I literally stressed myself on school and worry that I might fail to the point I almost couldn't attend my own graduation due to being sick (thank the almighty Pepto Bismol for it's divine blessing) and for the next month couldn't because I felt nauseous and could barely sleep due to my fever and felt honest to God uncomfortable in my own skin. That's what happens when you stress yourself out to the point you kill your own immune system.
Now your thinking "okay that's fine, but what about the other 9 months?"
Well to be honest I have been writing on the site, just not The Einzbern's hero.
I haven't posted any new stories cause...well you may think with how well TEH is doing my confidence would be going through the roof, and in some ways it has, but not by much. If anyone has read anything else I've written on this site you can see the difference in my writing style and while I'm glad TEH is different, I don't want to be a one-hit wonder. I'm honestly a little frighten of how they'll do.
However recently I've been giving ideas to different one shot stories and the authors are liking my ideas so I'll try to post a new story eventually. You never know until you try right?
The Einzbern's Hero
Chapter 3
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Archer was honestly suprised at the sudden turn of events, first Saber and Lancer were fighting with Archer planning to take out the green armored servant as soon as the opportunity presented itself, next a huge broad servant, rider-class if the giant chariot was any indication, with red hair pushed back exposing his forehead, and he was wearing Greek styled bronze armor appeared. Revealing to everyone that he was Iskander, a king from ancient Greece commonly known as Alexander the Great.
'I thought he would be alot smaller than that, then again it's not the first time the history books got something wrong.' Archer looked at Saber and than quickly back to Rider.
The red bowman then notice that someone else was in the chariot with Rider. A boy who looked like a dwarf compared to the Servant, he had long black hair that was parted and reached down to his chin. He was wearing a sweater vest along with what appeared to be a dress shit under the vest along with a tie. Archer guessed that this was Rider's Master.
Archer was a bit shocked when Rider announced that Lancer and Saber join under him so he may obtain the grail. Archer thought that plan was crazy and so dod Lancer and Saber as they voiced their opinions.
"I'm afraid I must decline, I have promised the grail to my newly appointed lord." Lancer told Rider. "I would not break my vow, even for a king such as yourself Rider!"
Saber seem to agree with him. "I too will decline your offer Rider as I desire the grail for my own purposes." She told him. "And as the King of Britain, it would be a grave insult if I bowed before another ruler, even one as famous as you."
This time Archer literally faced palmed.
'Is everyone just telling each other who they are?'
Rider stared at Saber with a smile.
"Ho ho! It's surprising to know that the King of Knights was a little girl." He said with a giant sized smile plastered on his face.
Saber didn't seem to like that comment as she grabbed her blade and pointed it at Rider.
"Would you like a taste of this 'little girl's' blade, King of Conquerors?" She said, her voice dripping with venom.
All he did at the threat was sigh and say: "Negotiations have failed." His master on the other hand…
"Rider! What are you doing you idiot?" The boy yelled at his servant only to get flicked in the forehead by him.
Suddenly a booming voice entered everyone's ears.
"So you are the one who stole my artifact, Waver Velvet." The voice said as everyone in the vicinity froze, but only one shook in terror.
Archer stared at Rider's master when his name was revealed, another small memory appeared in his mind, it involved a mage with a permanent scowl and...video games?
"Oh no." The boy who was identified as Waver Velvet shook in terror.
"To think that you had the audacity to steal what's rightfully mine and enter the war yourself." The voice boomed with its words seething as it continued. "I admire your courage, so...should I show you 'boy', how magi truly kill each other."
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As the voice continued its rant, Kiritsugu Emiya and his partner Maiya Hisau were looking for its owner, who they believed was the master of Lancer: Kayneth El-Melloi Archibald.
Just like Irisviel predicted, her husband had arrived the same time they did, if not a couple minutes earlier. They had been watching the entire fight between Lancer and Saber, waiting for a master to poke his head out and one did, the master of Rider: the boy called Waver Velvet.
Kiritsugu couldn't help but grimace mentally to himself as he pointed his rifle at the master of Rider. He detested having to kill children, no matter how necessary certain situations made it. He made the necessary adjustments to the rifle and his position as he prepared toto take his shot.
That was until something caught the corner of his eye. This time what he saw shocked him for a good minute.
The servant Assassin, standing atop one of the cranes near the crate that Kiritsugu was on.
So how was he here? It was impossible, Kiritsugu had witness the Shadowy servants death at the hands of the golden servant. Different possibilities crossed through his mind.
Only one possible answer crossed Kiritsugu's mind: Assassin was never killed in the first placed. Which also meant that Assassin's master tricked them all. This revelation sent a cold wave of terror through Kiritsugu.
Assassin's Master Kirei Kotomine was a wild card in the Magus Killer's mind. The ex-executioners very involvement in the grail war baffled him. Kiritsugu could not figure what the man could gain by parparticipating.
The man's past was shrouded in mystery. He had become an executioner of the church at a young age, accomplishing many within their without so much as a sign he quit. He than was married and fathered a child with his wife. Than She dies and he drops, leaving the child with his wife's parents.
This man than suddenly pops up and becomes Tokomi Tohsaka's apprentice.
"Maiya, its Assassin." Kiritsugu said, his voice betraying the nervousness he felt by the servants presence.
"What, but I thought you said Assassin was dead?" Maiya said with confusion.
"I know, but-" He started, but that's when Kayneth began to speak.
After listening to most of his rant, Kiritsugu spoke to Maiya again through his headset.
"Maiya, I don't have a shot at Kayneth, what about you?" He asked her.
"No, no clear sh-?!" Suddenly an explosion from two sides happened at once. One from Kayneth's side another atop a random container.
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While Kiritsugu didn't have a clear shot at Kayneth, Archer did.
Archer admitted to himself that he shouldn't have fired off that shot. He should have let the master of lancer kill the kid and it would have made his job easier. He told himself that he had to take the shot, that another opening like this wouldn't come again. At least that's what he told himself.
Not only that, the parallels he was drawing to the kid next to Rider and himself in his own Grail War were reminding him that he had been so similar once, young, foolish, and dragged into something so far beyond him it wasn't even funny. So while he may have given up on saving without killing under Alaya's orders, he can still work differently as he is now out of Alaya's full grasp, if only for the duration of the war.
Archer wondered if that was the moment before he realized that his ideal was a sham that it was truly just a curse. Shaking his head out of such thoughts, he arched his bow and nocked a reinforced arrow aimed straight at Kayneth's head.
Unfortunately that was when a huge wall of black smashed straight into him as he fired the arrow , causing the arrow to hit a couple meters from the master of Lancer's position.
Picking himself from the crater he was smashed into Archer couldn't help but sigh at the circumstances once more.
"Ow! What the hell just hit me?" He said rubbing his neck.
'Archer! Are you ok, we heard a loud crash come from where you were scouting at.' Irisviel said through their mental link panic etched in her tone.
Archer frowned a little.
'No worries master I'm okay, just a little-'He began before a roar was heard and as he looked he saw man covered head to toe in black armor. Archer could feel the madness radiating off him.
'Archer!?'
'Master I think I found Berserker, permission to engage.' He said more as a statement than a question.
'Yes, stay alive Archer, pull out if you need to.' Irisviel commanded.
'Understood Master.' Archer said before he projected Kanshou and Bakuya and charged the black knight.
Facing off against Berserker, Archer tossed both of his swords at the mad knight, hoping for him to deflect them so he could catch him in surprise with another immediate attack. That didn't work as Berserker caught the swords and then turned into some sort of enchanted weapon. Archer looked over them with his magic and quickly looked away, his head spinning from the confusion of looking at the now blackened blades. Returning his attention to the other member of this fight, he brought forth his twin dao once more and prepared to fight.
Jumping back as far as he could, Archer summoned his bow and traced 3 arrows and fired them individually. One strucked the ground right next to Berserker and caused him to take a look at the object. Archer than launched the second arrow with the third one right behind. Berserker having seen this caught both arrows.
This caused Archer to smirk as the arrow that struck the ground exploded right next the Black knight. Then, as if causing a Domino effect, the other two arrows Berserker was holding exploded in his hand causing him to stagger a bit backwards. Archer took this opportunity to launch himself right behind Berserker and traced Kanchou and Bakuya and aim right at the servant's neck.
Unfortunately the attack missed as the mad servant ducked as if he knew what Archer was going to do before he did. This led Archer to pthe conclusion that the servant's master was watching them.
Archer didn't have time to ponder this further as the black knight tore one of the container doors off it's hinges and held it for a second, causing the black mist to swirl around the rectangular door before flinging it at Archer like a frisbee with the speed of a fighter jet.
Archer ducked and silently thanked his amplified abilities that the throne has given him. He ducked once more as this time Berserker took the other door and was swinging it at him.
Archer realised he had to get some distance between him and the enemy or else he wouldn't be seeing the end to his plan.
Jumping back as far as he could he he threw kanshou and bakuya and prepared to summon a couple of explosive swords to strike the mad servant with.
However before he could do anything he felt something, as though another piece of him had shown up in the same place. It was somewhere away from him, but he knew exactly where this anomaly was. The sensation was similar to the way servants sensed each other when in close proximity, but this felt stronger like as long he was in the right range he could tell where this thing was and what it was doing at the same time.
Before he could process this information he felt something else, like a small whisper in the back of his mind.
"Save me!"
He than felt a pull as the grail bent time and space to send him where he was most needed.
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As Irisviel was done speaking to Archer, the master of Lancer had had enough.
"Lancer! What are you doing don't just stand there! Kill the boy!" His voice boomed, but was a bit shaken, the blast had rattled him up a bit.
"But Master, he is but a child, let me fight his servant instead, it would be the honorable course of action." Lancer pleaded with his master to reconsider.
Waver cowered in the chariot, before Rider patted him back and gave him a thumbs ups, before looking towards the smoke topped container that Kayneth was currently standing on.
"Master of Lancer! Do not take me so lightly to think that I will allow you to hurt this boy in my care so easily!" Rider shouted.
Before Kayneth could retort back, a shower of gold appeared atop one of the light posts, revealing the golden servant that supposedly killed Assassin.
"Hoh? So these fools who call themselves kings in my presence have the gall to continue this farce? Pathetic, mongrels such as yourselves should be erased from the King's sight." The golden servant declared.
"Whoa, whoa calm down! No need to get all angry now. If you are a king then why not name yourself?" Rider asked. Unfortunately that only seemed to piss him off more.
"It figures that mongrels like you cannot discern the true nature of the King who exists above you all. My interest in you all has long since expired, stains in the King's garden." The servant replied as numerous golden portals opened up at once each holding a certain weapon inside.
"I've had enough! Lancer by this command seal I command you to kill Waver Velvet!" Kayneth said as a piece of his sigil disappeared.
Lancer with no choice quickly lunged at Rider's chariot and towards the shrieking teenager, taking Rider by surprise. Fortunately Saber saw him and rushed just in time for her blade to meet his spears.
Good news: Lancer didn't kill Waver. Bad news: Lancer tried to kill Waver.
"A cowardly strike, snake!" Rider yelled as he prepared to charge at Kayneth for his command. However, Archer's weapons were still waiting, and they had run out of patience. Blasting out of the golden portals like rays of light, the weapons swiftly moved to cut down the enemy Servants in the way.
Luckily Rider managed to move the chariot out of the way and Saber and Lancer's battle took them away from the range of the weapons as well.
Irisviel couldn't move fast enough.
At that moment the world seemed to stopped for Kiritsugu, Maiya, and Saber.
With only her last moments Irisviel shut her eyes tightly and began to visit the most important memories of her life: The day she met Kiritsugu, The days he spent teaching her what it meant to be human, The day she realized she loved him and the moment he returned those, the day Illya was born, and the moments they shared as a family.
Archer harsh words from the beach repeated themselves in her head. Their was so much she wanted to say to her husband, things she never got to thank him for.
"Save me!"
One of the sigils on her hand glowed and then faded as a rush of wind was felt and suddenly a familiar voice began to chant in her mind.
'Judging the concept of creation.'
'Hypothesizing the basic structure.'
'Duplicating the composition material.'
'Imitating the skill of its making.'
'Sympathizing with the experience of its growth.'
'Reproducing the accumulated years.'
'Excelling every manufacturing process.'
"Trace on!"
Irisviel opened her eyes, ready for death, only to see Archer deflecting each and every weapon flying at them with incredible speed. Everytime their weapons clashed they would both shatter. Archer would than replace the weapon as fast as it was destroyed.
The battle between swords continued for a good minute before the rain of weapons stopped, and there stood her servant, Archer with two large, broken and cracked, swords. They then disappeared in a mist of mana. Archer turned around, his face having a trail of blood that was from a cut on his forehead where one of the weapons struck him, and patted her on the head.
"Jeez what a reckless master I have." Archer smiled.
Irisviel suddenly had tears streaming from her eyes as she latched onto Archer and sobbed for a second.
All Archer could do was give a small smile and sigh as he pulled her arms off him and turned around and stared at the golden servant.
"Tch, damn first a Berserker that can enchant whatever it touches and now Gilgamesh, with all the perks of the Archer class." He muttered.
"Oh? So there is one of you worthy of being called a hero. Tell me, Faker, why do you rely on those pathetic copies of yours?" Gilgamesh asked with genuine curiosity to this newcomer who had managed to stop some of his great treasures.
"Just because it's a copy doesn't mean that there's a rule saying it has to be weaker, King of Heroes." Archer replied, revealing the true identity of Gilgamesh to all of the present Servants.
Both Saber and Lancer's eyes grew wide, Rider made a big grin with a: "Ho Ho!", and well even though he wasn't in plain sight, Archer was sure Kiritsugu was getting over his shock right about now.
"Oh so you know of me mongrel, interesting. That at least puts you up above the dogs that could not recognize their true king." Gilgamesh said putting on an arrogant smile, as the portals began to grow. However the smile vanished as Gilgamesh felt something as through there was a barely felt string connecting him and this fake. That did not please the king one bit, in fact it offended him.
"It seems Faker, that there is something connecting you and I. That is unacceptable, I will have to rectify this mistake."
Archer knew exactly what Gilgamesh was talking about, the feeling he felt during his fight with Berserker. The feeling was stronger than ever now and Archer could tell what Gilgamesh was doing to the smallest detail, like the fact he is currently clenching his jaw and is feeling very irritated at the moment.
Archer wondered if this was due to the fact that they were summoned through the same class and if Gilgamesh could feel what he was feeling.
However he knew he couldn't dwell on this at the moment and knew he had to get his Master outta the line of fire quick or this would get very messy and he couldn't rely on Saber at the moment. As he was thinking of a plan, he felt a sensation heading towards them quickly. Smirking a bit, Archer turned to his Master.
"Archer w-what are yo-Eeeeh!" Irisviel squealed as he picked her up by the shoulders and moved her outta one of the containers way.
Archer then proceeded to look at his invisible watch.
"3...2...1"
"Mongrel, what do you think you're playing at-!?" Gilgamesh was again interrupted, but this time by a crazed monster bursting out of a container, landing in the spot Archer moved Iri, and lunged straight for Gilgamesh.
"Stay on the ground where you belong, mad dog." Gilgamesh scorned Berserker by blasting him with his treasury, knocking Berserker back and stopping his attack.
"Right on schedule."
As Berserker was trying to kill Gilgamesh, Lancer suddenly stopped trying to kill Waver. He tilted his head to the side like he was listening to something.
"Very well." Lancer said. He then turned towards Saber and said: "Forgive me Saber, but it seems I must go now my master wishes for us to leave, but I hope that you and I get a chance to finish our duel before the war is over."
Lancer disappeared in a mist of blue light.
Archer walked up to Saber.
"That was close huh?" He said as he managed to get in a breath of relief that no true injuries had come from Lancer's Gae Buidhe or Gae Dearg. Saber didn't get a chance to answer as they were interrupted by Berserker swinging a giant metal pole between them.
Archer noticed that Berserker wasn't taking any more swings at him, only at Saber.
"Saber! Watch out, whatever he touches is turned into a noble phantasm." he yelled. He then noticed something else. "Wait if Berserker's there, then where's-!"
Archer pjumped out of the way as six different kind of weapons embedded themselves right where he used to be standing. Once he landed, standing on the bent streetlight was Gilgamesh, who was forced to jump off as the pole bent and snapped from the weight being exerted after taking heavy damage.
Gilgamesh grit his teeth as he glared at the mass of Servants in front of him. "You dare..." he began in a deathly calm voice, "You fools dare to force me, who belongs in the Heavens, to share this Earth with you!" The King of Heroes was incensed, as a near complete wall of golden light appeared behind him.
Gritting his teeth Archer projected Kanshou and Bakuya once more, except this time they were upgraded as tinges of black began to act like a mist around the blades.
"Alright 'King of Mongrels', let's dance." Archer charged right at Gilgamesh.
"You dare insult me, the King! There will be nothing left of you once I'm done!" More weapons flew at him at ridiculous speeds for any ordinary human.
The enchanted Kanshou and Bakuya lasted for about sixty seconds against the barrage before breaking. He began tracing swords and other weapons that the Gate of Babylon kept shooting at him.
"You dare create forgeries of my treasures? No death is too good for you, I will make you suffer over a thousand times you pathetic faker!" Gilgamesh opened a small portal to grab one of his swords to charge at Archer, but before he could the red servant charged directly at his gold counterpart and using his own projections to deflect the weapons flying at him slashed at Gilgamesh's face causing a good size cut to appear on his cheek. This sent The King of heroes off the edge.
"You dare! You dare harm your king's face! When I'm through with you, you'll beg for death like the dirty mongrel you are!" He said as the portal behind him nearly engulfed the entire area. Before he could unleash hell upon Archer, he stopped and appeared to be thinking, before a scary look appeared on his face. Eventually he relaxed and his face turned into a scowl instead.
"Damn you Tokiomi, we will have words once I get back." He growled He then turned to Archer. "Don't die yet Faker, only I have the right to punish you for harming the king and stealing his treasure." And with that the King of Heroes disappeared in a golden mist, just as he appeared.
Archer breathed a sigh of relief and fell to his knees, weary but still focused.
"That was a close one, anymore and I would have been a red paint stain on the ground." Archer looked up to the sky and said. "Wonder how Saber's doing?"
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Saber wasn't having any fun with her new playmate as he keep swinging an enchanted pair of swords at her. This stunned Saber as she expected Excalibur to slice through the swords like butter, but no matter how hard she swung she couldn't break it.
That wasn't the only thing that bothered her about Berserker. Despite her sword being covered by invisible air, the mad servant somehow knew the length of her blade.
Saber couldn't dwell on it for too long as Berserker swung the swords at her head again.
"!" Berserker missed as a huge crater opened up near where Saber's head once was. He looked around to see that Saber had went missing as a big gush of wind hit him from behind as he looked and saw Saber's sword halfway to his neck. Berserker raised his swords to block, only for them to fly away and shatter, leaving him stumbling, with Saber's foot sending him flying.
Panting Saber dropped on one knee, this was starting to wear her down, and this servant could keep with everything she did. He knew her fighting style inside and out.
Could...could this servant be one of her…
"Saber! Look out!" Irisviel shouted at her as she came from behind one of the containers.
Saber couldn't even turn around before Berserker was already on her, swinging an enchanted light post. She dodged at the last second before bringing up Excalibur and blocking the second swing. Their weapons clashed with Saber chopping off a piece of the light post every swing, before she had completely destroyed the makeshift weapon. Berserker, now weaponless, charged righttowards her, grabbing her breast plate and began repeatedly punching saber and only stopped when Rider's chariot smashed right into him and sent him flying into one of containers.
However the black knight got right back up and jumped out of the container, and began to roar in rage.
"Come Berserker if you think you can take both me and Saber together." Rider said taking out his sword and Saber getting off her knee and readying herself for another fight.
Berserker charged at the duo, only to be stopped as 3 arrows slammed into him, stopping his charge with an explosive burst.
Everyone's head snapped to where the arrows came from and saw Archer holding his black bow.
"Make that three." He said coolly.
Berserker roared at them, prepared to kill all of them.
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A mysterious figure in the shadows gritted his teeth in frustration. A command spell glowed on his back hand and disappeared.
"Berserker return." He said, before coughing up blood and dragging himself away.
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Berserker disappeared in another roar of rage.
Rider turned to Archer.
"And who is our new friend here." The King of Conquerors asked with a grin on his face.
Archer only smirked.
"Sorry, I don't give my name on a first date." He said before walking up to Irisviel.
"Hmm than allow me to be more blunt join me as my subordinate and help me achieve the grail." Rider said with a large grin on his face.
Archer turned his own back to him and made a mental note to think on it before he did anything and walked up to Irisviel.
"Master, you should leave with Saber, I'm going on a little...errand." And with that Archer dematerialized and left.
Irisviel and Saber blinked and looked at each other. Rider just sighed and muttered another "negotiations failed." before smiling and turned to his master.
"Haha! Oh this will be an interesting war indeed, what do you think boy?" Rider asked Waver.
"Hmm?" Rider picked his master up by the collar of his shirt only to find the boy out cold. All he could do was sigh.
"I wish he would toughen up a bit. Well then till we meet again King of Knights." Lightning flashed as Rider and Waver flew off.
Irisviel sighed and walked with Saber to the car that pulled up outside the docks. It had been a long day.
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Kiritsugu had been watching the entire time, but he still couldn't believe it.
Archer was a magus.
His wife's servant was a magus.
Something else he couldn't believe, was the magecraft he used was the most basic of the basics, reinforcement and projection and he turned them into deadly weapons.
Magi really didn't use reinforcement, because of its risk of blowing up in your face if done wrong. Projection or Gradation air, wasn't used due to its limit of only creating something for as long as the caster put mana into it.
"Alright Archer I'll get the truth out of you soon." And with that Kiritsugu headed back to the Einzbern's hideout in Fuyuki.
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Kirei Kotomine walked into his room after watching the battle in the docks, he as well as the other masters were shocked to find there was an eighth servant in this war. After seeing the Einzbern woman's hand glow and the mysterious servant appear, he concluded that he was her servant and not Saber.
Which meant that the Magus Killer had tricked all of the other masters. This made Kirei even more curious about the man, maybe he does have the answers he seeks.
Before Kirei could think anymore blue mist entered his room and before him appeared the mysterious servant.
His steel eyes gazed into Kirei's and a harsh smirk made its way with onto his face.
"Kirei Kotomine." He said.
"What is it you want." Kirei demanded, thinking of using a command seal, preparing to flee.
His smile only grew more disturbing.
"Let's make a deal."
A/N: How'd you guys like this chapter I actually enjoyed it. I hope Irisviel didn't come across too OOC but I want to give her some character development. Also it seems Archer has some new abilities tying into the fact he and Gil are sharing a class together, but is this shared class thing a two-way street? Kiritsugu seems to now be drooling for answers about our Wrought iron hero. Also will Archer become Kirei's new 'the devil you know' rather than Gil?
Find out on the next The Einzbern's hero Z! (the only time I'll do something like this.)
So another reason I didn't post on TEH specifically. I kinda got burned out on Fate, buy the last update I was listening to so many Fate OST, Watching Deen/stay night and unlimited budget works, not to mention playing Extella, Extra, and Grand Order. So burned out in fact I haven't watch the Heavens feel movie, Apocryphal, Oath by snow, or Cooking with the Emiya family. I don't even know if I wanna preorder Extella Link when it's released dates announced.
Also...well I kinda upset myself as well. So when I first got Grand Order On my first summons I got EMIYA I was so happy you have no Idea! Not to mention I got Lancer Cu, Medusa, Meda, Hassan of the cursed arm, and Sasaki Kojirou, I was only missing Artoria Saber, and Artoria Alter and Hercules outta the original fate servants. Not mention I finished three singularities and Ascended EMIYA, Cu, and Meda and a couple other servants. Plus I was level 40, not to mention I had Saber Lily!
Now for those of you who knows what's coming...WHY DID NO ONE WARN ME THAT THIS HAPPENS! For those you who don't look at my tale as a warning.
No one told me you had to write your ID number down if you wanted to uninstall the darn game so you could save your progress.!
I lost everything, not to mention everything was half AP for the first week, so to get back to lvl 40 would take a hell of a lot longer!
I got Lancer Cu, Meda, and Medusa back and Sasaki Kojirou, plus I got Hercules and Saber alter. However I'm still Missing Hassan of the cursed arm, Saber Artoria, and EMIYA dammit! however I'm still on the first singularity. So I threw fit and only began playing again recently.
So heed my tale of woe newcomers and lock your damn account.
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I hope you guys know that during the hiatus I never stopped reading reviews for what it's worth.
BrawlBroMario: Who said I gave up, this story will surpass From Fake dreams if I have anything to say about it. (Maybe)
Storm0719: No te preocupes, no renuncié a esta historia, lo siento si esto parece estar roto. Escribí esto como un traductor de Google.
Doren1: I've toyed around with that Idea, but who knows maybe this story will end more tragically I have been known to change my mind on endings of my stories.
Guest: Wait am I the arrogant Author-san I like to believe I'm the cool creator of this awesome story. Anyway I loved your review really neat to read.
Guest-kun: I hope this wasn't to fast or slow for you. I'm glad you like my writing style.
StoryReiter: If you're eager to see the dream cycle than hopefully you won't be disappointed I'm actually really looking forward to writingthat scene next.
dilian9112: Don't we all *sigh* don't we all.
HikarinoTenshi-san: Yeah not even EMIYA's poker face can stand the might of Broskander. :D
fareyaHW: Well it wasn't soon, but here you are my friend.
Not logged in: Yes who doesn't enjoy Archer thr chef reviewer, he's only one notch below Gordon Ramsey.
Blinded in bolthole: Well I'm glad you enjoyed it I fine getting Archer's knowledge of other weapons history down hard because I gotta go look that up as well. I never thought my own story would make me learn.
I love how Shirou stole the spotlight from his poor (not yet is) sister Illya in Fate/KL. I always felt that if Shirou wasn't in stay night Run could've taken his place MC, but the moment he comes back she would be dropped to important side character/heroine again. That manga proved it, guess that's the power of a protag for you.
Anywho guys I hope you enjoyed this chapter and hopefully the next won't be so long.
seeya