first off, id like to say sorry for not updating sooner...i kinda promised my mom that id step back from the computer for a while since both she and my father have made a big stink about how im "addicted to the computer". anyways, my ankle is still sprained although im walking on it. i have senior pictures tomorrow...and i have the English AP test on monday...dear god, i had better pass this friggen test...stupid butterflies...anyways...what im getting at is, im not gonna be updating for a while...cause im going to be writing more in this stoyr on my computer.
onwards..
Chaper, the thirteenth Angelic Cafe
Elsewhere in Angel City
Vicky and Kaori had just stepped into the Angelic Café in the center of Angel City. The walls were painted a dark blue and the windows had black trim. Vicky couldn't help thinking that Angel City really didn't hold back when they went for the standard Human look. The God's Ledge, where heavenly souls first imported up the "long white tunnel toward the bright white light" was where the heavenly deities resided most of the time on official business and on other times they held residence in Angel City where a permanent residence could be made. Their reasons were because, in Angel City you could have any color scheme you wanted. For example: Death Deities could have their houses be black with red trim, love Deities could have their houses or apartments be red and green if they so wanted. On the God's Ledge though, in their corridors and their specialized rooms, they're workers had to wear and the color scheme had to be a color which was significant to the style of work done by said deities. For example: Death deities equal black, Love Deities equal red and pink and occasionally white. Regular Halls on the god's ledge were white, silver and gold, and every deity and/or person/ animal/ angel/worker must wear either gold, silver, or white clothes. The Clothes themselves consisted of gowns for the ladies, maids uniforms and butlers uniforms for the workers and jumper suits for the electricians, plumbers, and handyman angels.
Looking around at the interior of the Café, Vicky sighed, "Kaori, what have we gotten ourselves into?"
"I didn't get myself into anything." Replacing her staff into where ever it was before she had broughtit forth. Folding her purple wings across her back, she continued, "I was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. I just had a want to see my friend Alex." The water elemental Deity shook out her thigh length hair and motioned for a waitress to walk over.
"Hello, Kaori, Mistress Lady, what may I get for the two of you today?" the violet haired waitress asked as she took out a silver pad. The seal of the angels was on the top of her clean crisp sheet. Her little blue wings were neatly folded against her back. She looked at each of the Deities in silence with large expressive golden eyes.
"Your new here, aren't you?" Vicky asked, raising a silver eyebrow. She watched the Dark Fairy closely. The Fairy stiffened and glared at the Warrior Woman.
"Ill have you know…I've lived in Heaven for a lot longer then you have." the Dark Fairy replied, repeating her previous question with a forced smile pasted on her face.
"Well, how long have you lived in Heaven?" Vicky replied, her eyebrow still raised. Kaori watched the exchange and shook her head. Before the Dark Fairy could reply, Kaori replied for her.
"Why don't you try two-hundred years in heaven and 50 years on the God's Ledge, Vicky? She's older then you. And she's not new, she worked in the post office across the street for fifty years and has been working here for the past hundred and fifty years. Isn't that right, Aurora (1)?" Kaori turned to the dark Fairy, Aurora, and gave her a questioning look.
"Yes, that's right." Aurora smiled, and fidgeted, "Did you see me in the mail office across the street?"
"Yes, I saw you. I was newly born into heaven at the time. But, I'd never forget golden eyes, violet hair, and blue wings." Kaori said, giving her order to the Violet-haired Aurora. "How is your father Aurora? I haven't seen him in ages!"
Vicky raised a silver eyebrow, "Is he someone I should know?" She looked back and forth between the two heavenly entities.
"Mistress Lady, you don't know who my father is?" Aurora gasped and the whole café went dead silent.
"No, why? Who is he?" Vicky was confused, she'd never gotten this reaction out of anybody.
Kaori smiled and leaned across the table. "Do you by any chance know of the Aurora Borealis?"
"Yeah, why? They're the Northern Lights. What's that got to do with Aurora…here…" She stopped and looked at Aurora. "Please tell me that your father and yourself are not the same person and that your not the northern lights…"
Aurora looked pained, "I am NOT my father! My mother, brother, and father are the Northern Lights. They're named after me because I was the first born child of the Borealis'. I chose to live in heaven instead of having four borealis' on the team in the north." She huffed spread her small wings out straight behind her, " NOW, if you are quite finished insulting my family Warrior Woman, WHAT…would you like….to order?" Vicky quickly ordered her drink and watched as the pissed off fairy stalked off. She winced as the dark fairy walked around the counter top, poured the drinks and got the pastries, stalked back, slammed Vicky's drink on the table in front of her, the white hot chocolate sloshing over, and lightly placed Kaori double chocolate espresso in front of her along with the cherry ice cream. Turning to Kaori, Aurora politely said, "Enjoy." When she turned to leave, Kaori grabbed her wrist.
"She may not know a lot, and she may be just a bit young to fully understand heaven, but she is still the warrior woman. Treat her with a little more respect even if your not happy with doing so." Aurora nodded and walked off to another table.
-end 4 now-
(1)- I love this name!
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