CHAPER ONE
Hi everybody. This is my first fanfiction please leave constuctive criticism so that I can improve further stories in the future. Any how please read on. Please note that I do not own Naruto in any form or way. Also not as a general that "" mean talking. '' mean thoughts. Also for any people who are gtting notificiation about a new chapter you don't have to reread it, I just fused my second and first chapter to make a longer chapter. Granted it is slightly better buttt... reread it and tell me if it is better.
This story almost starts like any other...almost.
Our story begins with one young boy named Naruto. A blonde 9 year old boy, his stormy blue eyes like whirlpools. Always smiling, so kind, so gentle. Do not be fooled they say. He is a DEMON they say. On a certain level they might be correct, for he is the jinchuriki of the nine tailed fox, the Kyuubi no Yoko. The very same demon who terrorised the village. The village of Konoha, also known as the village Hidden in the Leaves.
As the sun set on this normal day a solemn and grim feeling set apon our young hero. For as he stared at the village below him, the wind billowing around him, he noticed all the festivities going on. On this day the demonic fox, who terrorised the village, was defeated by the villages's very own 4th Hokage, who died heroically after saving the village. No one knows how he killed the beast, well at least the young ones don't know.
As Naruto stared down from his vantage point, up by the Hokage's monument, he felt a sense of longing. A feeling so full of want and need to be apart of something bigger. But he knows he can not do that because he would be beaten, even if the prospect of potential food is promising. Suddenly a huge growl ripped through the suffocating silence surrounding the boy. "Damn! I thought I could go another few days," Naruto thought gripping his stomach tightly. Sadly luck is for once not on his side.
He stood up and started dusting his clothes off. As he started walking the dirt road towards the village he sensed the presence of another living being. He didn't know how he knows just that since always he had the uncanny ability to sense people trying to hide. A person was following him. One might think that was bad. But instead it is much much worse, because as soon as the mobs show up this shadow does nothing. But Naruto did not mind because this is normal. He is...used to it.
After dodging some drunken bums, he made his way to the stands. He suddenly felt exposed and vulnerable. He kept walking. The feeling of unease never settling. He walked faster, passing all the villagers. They ALL had smiles on their faces. And before he knew it, there Naruto was in the middle of the town with nowhere to run. All exits blocked by people ALL of which where smiling. Naruto started breathing louder and quicker. A severe feeling of being cornered off was the only thing going through his 9 year old body. *BAM*
A sharp rock hits his head. Immediately pressing his hand against his head to see if there was blood. None, yet. He turned his head defiantly to his assulters only not to find one person but an entire mob, armed with an assortment of weapons, none of which where blunt. Naruto's eyes widened in fear and started backing up. The mob would have non of that. Almost immediatly 2 villagers set out and grabbed him tying him down to the ground, spread out like a angel. How ironic. They pinned him down further by nailing him to the ground with poles as thick as Naruto's arms. Drilling through both the stone underneath and the bones in his hands and feet. All Naruto felt was pain.
"Why?!", he screamed."Why are you doing this?" he sobbed. "Why don't you stop?".
By the end he was whispering incoherently. One of the braver (or stupider) villagers spoke with fury, "Why?! WHY?! YOU KNOW DAMN WHY YOU DEMON!". With each and every word he screamed, he carved a name, the carvings were immediatly regenerated over. instead of stopping he carved only harder.
Another "brave" villager spoke up,"You killed my entire family yet you left me alive! Each and every day I live in utter misery!"
With each word he carved a new name. This time around the regeneration happened more slowly. The left over injuries started to scar. "We might not be able to kill you, Demon. But we can still scar and maim you!" the "brave" villager said, smiling maliciously at the poor boy. A thought suddenly occurred. Naruto started to look around, well as much as a person can look around while still being nailed to the floor. 'There he is !' naruto thought and hope filled his body, but then he remembered that this...shadow would never help him. Naruto started to shout at him for not protecting him like good ANBU should.
As Naruto looked at the ANBU again he studied the body structure and physique of the man who was supposed to protect him even as the villagers were slowly carving more and more names in. Silver hair and a dog mask was the only way to recognise him. "One day I'll kill you... Dog!" Naruto promised himself.
No further thought occured for the rest of the evening. By the end Naruto was a husk of a boy, correction he was a husk of a human. He felt nothing for his body's nervous system was shocked to nothingness from all the overloaded pain. On this day Naruto was no more. On this day Konoha will have a set time left. It just doesn't know it yet...
THE NEXT DAY:KONOHA HOSPITAL.
Whiteness...burning whiteness. 'Great! This place again... Might as well reserve this bed for me. 'This bed belongs to DEMON!'. Ha!', Naruto thought bitterly. "I'm certain they are somehow keeping these walls whiter than some pedofile, just to cause instant blindness!".
Somewhere, somehow, mystical forces where working on a white as paper pedofile. "A-a-achoooo!". Said disgusting man sneezed. After killing the gaurds who saw him sneeze, he carried on working on an evil plan to rape children, I mean conquer Konoha.*que sarcastic jazz hands*
After been thrown out, Naruto walked almost robotically to his "apartment". From the bitter age of six he lived here. He has never once walked past it. For it was littered with filth and garbage. His building's wall only contained only a small amount of untarnished wall. The word demon was the most vocal. Home for Naruto carried no sentimental mening. As Naruto waded through the garbage surrounding his house, not caring if his skin was ripped apart by barbed wire which littered the normal garbage because he knew it would regenerate. He didn't care that his skin was being prickled by filthy needles injected him with poisons known to few, and less knew the antidotes and everytime he did this he became slowly immune to this poison and every poison classed below it.
Before unlocking the door he realised on the way to his apartment people were pointing and whispering. Let's not forget all the snickers. Naruto, the sad little man simply shrugged it off as a regular occurance.
Naruto entered his apartment and came to a halt. Naruto stared aghast at his mirror, long since broken thanks to a daring breaking and entering of his apartment. Naruto's mouth was open and silently screaming.
His skin was marred by dead peoples names. Hakura Okamino. Sakunda Kamatosuchi. The list went on. All over his body. Names of little to no meaning scarred his 9 year old body. Silently mourning the loss of his skin he wept.
All this sadness transformed to rage. A burning rage filled with the desire to rip, tear and KILL. His hatred was not targeted at the villagers. No, this hatred targetted himself. Slowly red chakra started to form just underneath his skin. His skin started to peel off in an excruciating manner. He started to scream. Any people surrounding the building left almost immediately. All knew this was no scream of a 9 year old. This was the scream of a DEMON. All the peeled off skin started to form tiny little balls. Each of them glowed with power. They all held the same marking, Ω. The greek letter omega. The last letter of the alphabet. Known in some circles as the mark of the Shinigami. Naruto, with skin still peeled off, muttered, "What...the...damn...hell !". This was the last thing thing he said for the evening.
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