Hiiiiiiiiii! Please read this I need the feedback because I'm writing a book. Goal on this chapter is 800 word let's see if I can do it.
Magnus P.O.V.
The pain was so intense I was curled up in a ball on the floor. Hearth was smirking and looked horrified at the same time he signed. You and Emerald have a connection and apparently you have more than just a crush on her. I know this sounds cheesy but it must be true love. But it also means Surt is hurting her somehow. I felt sick to my stomach that he was hurting her I'm going to kill him he has to die.
Emerald P.O.V
I woke up chained and my face was hurting my face burning. Fire dude was above me and I was scared. "Next time you want to brave don't. Next time I won't be so kind." "How was that kind ass hole?" He slapped me "Shut up." I was crying again. "Now don't cry little one. I'm gonna tell you a story. One day there was a idiot named Fray and he sat on Odin's throne and found out that he was in love with a frost giant. So he wanted her so badly that he gave away his sword so he then set Ragnork a few years ahead of its time. I was going to get his sword but his bratty Vanir-spawn got it first. So now instead of starting Ragnork. I'm stuck with you" He rolled his eyes. "If you weren't so annoying I would force you to marry me to put the brat threw more pain plus your human." My hands were aching and bloody from trying to get free. Surt laughs. "You're not gonna break away that easily Emerald. I'm gonna shorten your name I'm gonna call you Em.
Magnus P.O.V.
"We're connected. Cool." Sam rolled her eyes. "This is serious this hasn't happened in a very long time, and all you have to say is awesome. Ugh why did they have to choose you to save the world." I laughed. She's right this is serious you have something special which is even more of a reason to go find her. If she dies you die. "Well I've already died and I don't want to die again and I don't want Emerald to die either." "Neither do I she's the only one who can keep you in check. I don't get how she can stand you no offense Magnus." Sam laughs. Annabeth walks in. "What happened to you guys jeez." "well I'm gonna tell you a story I fell in love with a girl and created a bond with her. She is now on the hands of Surt. And he is hurting her and I can feel her pain. Now I'm gonna have to kill Surt for putting her in pain." "Wow so how do you plan on getting her back because I see no plans are being made." "How about this we just storm in. She wacked me upside the head. "Ouch, Annie." "I got one."
