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RockyVsCreed : thnx ALOT for your notice, I know of course the difference between week and weak but its the stupid autocorrrection I took care of that thing and edited the previous chapters

That chapter is the longest , it took me quite time.

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Chapter4 coma

Gray and lucy had stayed with natsu at porlyisca's house in the forest, their friends were just kicked out while they stayed to take care of him ,natsu was obviously in pain clunching his hand on the bed's sheet under him , trying to contain all of the misery he was in , his head is clouded and can't think clearly , he doesn't remember what happened or what is going to happen. He was just try moving on and going with what his friends and trusted ones tell him .he was just trying to live the second by second….

Porlyisca was looking to the boy who is barely staying alive, doing his best doing so. His deep wound was stitched there was an infection on one of burn wounds but it was slight , the fever will be controllable until he is able to be treated well. But what worries her is the dislocation of his shoulder and his bent elbow ,they have to be positioned to their right places before any problem happens, but she didn't want the dragon slayer to go through intense pain for along time earlier ,she was afraid that he might die out of stress , his heart is weak now.

"So now any body knows how to re line his dis located shoulder?" she said

"Me" said the raven "I can but why don't you do it ?"

"I want to do it with the elbow in the same time" he nodded he knew that she want him rest already.

"Hey ,boy can you hear me?" said to natsu

"Y..yes"

"We have to re-line your arm, it won't take more than seconds, it will hurt but only for a little . Do you want us to do it suddenly without your notice or do you want to give you a sign first?"

"I…guess s…sign..n f…irst.t "

"Ok then on three"

Porlyusica placed her hand on his elbow and gray on the shoulder to get ready.

"One … two ….three!"

"Arghhhhh"

"Shhhhh it's okay now its over natsu " said lucy. natsu was panting hard his eyes still shut shivering slightly .

Then suddenly the healer put a needle in his arm for the IV drip . Natsu jerked from that and clutching his teeth hard . After a bit he started to relax but his breathing was ragged from the fever and still in pain.

"You are fine now , we are done . You can try to sleep , I know it's tough but try ,you need a lot of rest"

She placed a wet cloth on his forehead and covered him up.

"Now it's night now , I am going to sleep , who will start watching over him?"

"Me" said both of them in the same time .

"Lucy go and rest now , you haven't slept for 2 days now"

"Same to you"

" please just you know mmm may want to …you know it's a man thing…" he didn't lie he felt that natsu need some space , and was avoid lucy present for now for some reason he don't know. Of course lucy knew that gray was trying to help natsu get some room away from her ,maybe he was feeling weak right now, so she didn't argue any more and let him be.

"Then its settled ,there is a bed in there , and you stripper if you notice any thing wrong come and get me I also need you to put ice in the water bowel next to you , and try to use your ice to relief his bruises and tensed muscles , and also the broken elbow and shoulder .It will help him feel better . But don't make your ice too cold so you dont shock him " said the healer and gray nodded ,trying to absorb all of the information , and did what he was told.

It was a matter of moments the both were alone in this room.

"T..thanks..s gray..y" said the pink headed dragon slayer.

"No need ,any body in that position would like to have some space with him self, just try to rest okay"

" no, not that" he said quickly

"Then for what?" he really didn't care but it seemed that he wanted to say something.

"f..or saving me from him , I…I was really desperate_" he then flinched in pain.

"Shhhh don't talk , rest you need it " ' desperate' gray thought ' what the hell did the bastard do to make him like that?!' Natsu won't break that easily.

He took deep breath and said " no need to thank a fairly tail member for helping there comrades right? "he said and then natsu nodded.

There was a silence when natsu started to talk again.

"Mmm g..gray?"

"Yes?, do you need something?"

"Can I …..".and his voice broke and there was tears in his eyes, his voice died down, but gray caught what he needed to say.

"Of Corse natsu you can cry…." He gave natsu a pat on the head while natsu sobbed in silence.

Next day lucy was sitting by Natsu taking care if him after a hard time trying to convince gray to take a break , macarov had came to visit the boy and know better about his condition and about what happened ,he came with freed, erza., levy and wendy , they were actually aware that natsu was in bad shape, but what they saw was way far from their expectations.

Natsu was on the bed covered in bandages, eyes shut tight, in pain and fever symptoms was an obvious thing .

Everyone was stunned by the sight , natsu was awake no body actually would expect him to fall asleep with the pain he was in, all the moans, groans, thrashing were things he couldn't control , it just slipped out of him after great effort trying to hold it all in.

The master was anything but happy with the situation, if he like or want anything to happen was anything but to watch on of his children in this pain , he couldn't bear it. He went to Porlyusica to ask he about his situation , the were alone in a room,

"tell me about him ,tell me about what had you figured out"he said calmly

" he isn't really good, the big wound by his side was made by knife , more than one stab actually , it's not a live threatening position , it was carefully made to cause him pain without killing him , the wounds and the burns says he was brutally tortured for some reason, his heart is weak , his magic flow is unstable as if its trying to abuse something…., I examined a blood sample from him last night , of coarse he is suffering a bit from anemia due to blood loss ,but the issue was a virus I had found , it is artificial but its seems he had been infected with it for about 40 days , so I don't think it was this time he was captured 2 weeks ago right? , but it just makes influenza symptoms it doesn't make a real damage, but I am amazed that no one had noticed it, the symptoms appeares after three to seven days from the date of infection, he must tried to keep it from you, he must be already worn out. I will able to take care of all of that after the poison is totally out of his system , I can't give him any medicine right now. To tell the truth the boy is really strong , mentally and physically , to endure all of that , that was amazing, although after this he time for his mind to get over this. "

The master was totally ready to rip the man who did this to him apart . He went to were every one was there followed by the healer who went to check up one the boy finding gajeel there where he doesn't look very good .

When she went to check up on him but something was wrong, 'is it his heart again?, no , ititsomething else...it's….'

"Wendy !, I need you now , can you stabilize his magic flow?, it's disturbed and that's dangerous!"she shout

"Yes I can"

"Good but don't put too much force just do it enough to stabilize him"

"Yes!" and then she did what she was told , she started gathering her magic power and concentrating it and let it flow through natsu's body showing green light.

It was a matter of time when natsu's face started to relax " Natsu-san is stable again" said the young girl, the tension in the room and sighs of relief can be heard.

"But I wander what caused this instability ? Was it because the unti magical cuffs? Can it do something like that?" said wendy.

"No That is not enough do it" said the old healer with a concern on her face,

" his magic had been sucked " said gajeel

" I see , that's why " said Porlyusica

There was a tense silence while the healer was checking on natsu .

"I…. I am , l…lucy" said a hoarse voice

" wh.. For what ?"

" I was – late for your rent" then she remembered that natsu went on that mission to get her money for her rent.

"No need to apologize for this ,you idiot. Just get rest" said lucy

"We are the one who need to apologize for you , you were tortured to protect us , don't you?" said the iron dragon slayer

"Y..you would d..do the s..same don't you—" he stopped gritting his teeth out of pain when lucy calmed him down .

"Now everyone the boy needs rest , get out of here and let him sleep, bur wendy will stay so she would help me with him" Porlyusica said.

Then they all went out of the house and macarov called gajeel out ,"there is something you need to tell me?"

Y..yes , I found at that cell a lacrima recording what was happening"

" so why didn't you tell me , bring it to my office I 'll wait for you in my office in the guild." Then both took off


Three days had passed , the poison was out . Then natsu went in to a coma after relief and lack of sleep, Porlyusica said that it's a healthy reaction to help his body healing process, so, she will wait until he wakes up to do the rest so he will be stable enough…..but they were really worried, no body dared to watch the recording right now, they were more afraid of his mental health more than his physical one, but they know that they will see it soon enough.


That is it!

There is a little announcement, this fanfiction will be monthly updated ,because I'll be really busy . BBut of course I ll update Sooner if I can , I actually find joy in updating ,so , see you soon.

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