Woo hello everybody. Last chapter didn't get as many views as I wanted which makes me sad. The reviews count as my support guys. Anyway here you all go. I typed out of my ass again with this one.


Chapter 12: Training Revision

"Sorry Naruto-kun I didn't want to put you guys through that but it was my brother's and Azazel's idea. She looked at him apologetic as they walked through the halls with the gang all back together again. They had just fought with Tannin an hour ago and yet Naruto looked fine for the most part except the shading under his eyes was darker than usual and he looked tired... or lazy. She couldn't always be too sure with him.

"It's fine Ri-chan no one got hurt. Well no one got hurt that much. Plus I had a blast." She smiled before taking another look at him and noticed both his eyes were half lidded and violet with their spiral pupils showing. His fangs were more prominent and his horns were sticking out the front of his head. He was also giving off twice as much energy than he normally did passively making it so that his presence made those who didn't know him apprehensive.

"Naruto-kun why are you in that form? You aren't in a fight right now." He tilted his head at her confused as the others noticed his appearance too.

"Well we aren't in the human world right now so no reason for me to look like a human and no need to suppress myself. I assumed a human appearance for too long and that made my body become somewhat out of sync with my power and lowered my performance." Akeno who was walking on the opposite side of Rias had her eyes widen as did the others at that.

"You just fought a dragon king, a member of Lucifer-sama's Peerage and you are saying you weren't at your best?!"

"Well it's more so I didn't have as much control or stamina as I should have in that form. Since I will be staying out of my human form for the duration of this vacation my body will progressively become more adjusted. In other words I will get stronger just by looking like this. Why? You guys don't like my Demon form?" Rias shook her head and laughed lightly.

"No Naruto-kun you look great. If anything you looking the part will probably go over better with the guests than your human appearance would have. In other words I want you to show off." He smirked at her before rubbing his hand behind his head.

"I was going to do that anyway."

Naruto found it amusing how the hallway was lined with maids and butlers to greet them. It made the others who weren't used to it nervous but it didn't matter to him or his sisters either way... Well they didn't really grow up with that kind of treatment though the twins were exposed to it more but it still didn't bother them. As for Tama, he wasn't sure how much she was even paying attention. She was walking with them in her normal clothes but had a knapsack on her back that carried their egg along with other things.

'Kind of weird though how they all look like normal humans. I mean sure I know that many devils are identical to humans in almost every way but I'm kind of the odd one out here in terms of my appearance. Oh well I'm the Juubi so my horns and other traits are my pride.'

"Rias-oneesama! You're home!" Naruto blinked when they saw a little boy with short red hair and blue-green eyes run towards Rias before jumping to give her a hug. Rias giggled as she hugged the small boy.

"Ah Milicas! It's good to see you again you've grown a lot since I last saw you."

Naruto glanced over at the boy narrowing his eyes at him critically giving him a slightly threatening expression with his glowing violet eyes and dark shading. He didn't mean for it to look that way he was just more curious than anything.

"Hmm?" Rias picking up on Naruto's unasked question answered it for him.

"Oh everyone this is my brother's son and so my nephew. Why don't you say hello to the others Milicas?" She smiled as the boy stepped back and smiled to all of them.

"Hello everyone my name is Milicas Gremory. It's nice to meet you!" The girls gushed at him while Shio didn't react much as she looked at him bored and leaned over to her sister.

"Cute kid."

Milicas then turned his eyes to the man next to Rias and ran up to him with a bright look in his eyes.

"You're Naruto-oniisama aren't you?" Naruto's eyebrow rose as he looked down at the kid.

"Yeah?"

"Father said you were the one who gives me cousins!" Rias had a blush on her face as she looked away from the boy.

"Why would my brother say that...?"

Tama blinked owlishly at the boy before looking over at Rias. "Well he's not wrong."

"That's not the point!" The others laughed at the scene. The boy was clearly to innocent to actually know what he was saying. Naruto looked at the boy with an unreadable expression.

"Well he's not wrong." Rias glared at Naruto who basically echoed Tama while the twins snickered. The boy's eyes were shining in excitement at hearing that.

"Great! You look cooler in person than what I've heard about you. Are your horns real?"

Naruto stared at the boy for a moment as he towered over him. His body casting a shadow over the young devil making his glowing eyes all the more ominous. The sudden silence from Naruto made the others nervous as the boy just simply looked back up at him with his oblivious expression. Naruto continued to look into Milicas's youthful eyes before faster than the others could react his arm lashed out at the boy and the next second the boy found himself up on Naruto's shoulders. The boy blinked confused at suddenly finding himself elevated as Naruto started to walk forward the others behind him stunned along with the servants.

"You can hold onto them if you want." The boy slowly grabbed Naruto's horns before laughing.

"Is this what it's like to be tall?!"

As he played with Naruto's head forcing his hair to shadow his eyes Naruto gained a small almost unnoticeable smirk.

As the others watched them go off Rias looked dumbfounded before shaking her head and smiling. "Well they got along well. Let's not let them leave us behind now." They all went to catch up with Naruto as they continued to walk in her mansion. The found themselves standing in front of a door that was guarded by Grayfia. She looked at Naruto and Milicas on his shoulders for a second before she ignored it and let them all in.

Milicas quickly got off Naruto's shoulders before running into the room into the arms of a beautiful woman with long brown hair.

"Rias-oneesama and her friends are here!" As she ruffled the boy's hair she looked up at the group and smiled.

"Well hello everyone. I see Rias's little group of friends has grown since the last time I saw them."

The others bowed of varying degrees before the newer devils followed suit. Naruto and Rias however didn't feel the need to.

"It's been a while Venelana-san." Naruto gave the woman a smile too which she responded in kind before looking him over a bit.

"Hello Naruto-chan. My you've grown a bit since the last time we saw you. Flashing your horns around I see? Cute. I hope you have been taking good care of my daughter?"

His eye twitched at the cute comment. He grinned mischievously at the question before gaining a less suspicious expression.

"Yes I've taken good care of her. So good that she even comes whenever I tell her too." How it was said and how it sounded were two completely different things. The rest of the group choked as Rias looked at him shocked at him for having the audacity to say that.

"Naruto that's my mother right there!"

He blinked and tilted his head looking oblivious.

"What? But you are always there whenever I need you."

"That's not what you meant at all!" Venelana giggled and decided to play along.

"It's good to be someone Naruto can depend on sweetie."

"W-Well yes b-but."

Venelana put her hand to her cheek in response to her daughter getting flustered.

"But you shouldn't cum too him too often or else you won't be able to get any work done." The girls eyes widened, Rias's face turned red, Issei gained a nosebleed, and Naruto grinned. 'Best mom ever!'

"Oh she loves getting out of doing work that's for sure..."

Rias stumbled with her words as she looked at the two feeling betrayed. She looked back at her group who was laughing in hopes of gaining some kind of support.

"A-Are none of y-you going to stop them?!" Shio, Tama, and Tayuya just returned her with blank expressions.

"We are enjoying this." Rias then looked at her queen with a pleading expression but Akeno just looked away and pretended not to see her while Miso giggled at the interaction.

Feeling too embarrassed Rias fell to her knees and whined.

Asia looked around confused at the conversation. Wait I don't understand. What are they talking about?"

Xenovia shrugged before giving her own interpretation. "It sounds like Rias-buuchou is needy."

"Xenovia!" The knight flinched at incurring her king's wrath as she held her hands up in surrender. Milicas walked up to Naruto and pulled on his sleeve as he looked up at him innocently.

"Naruto-oniisama what do you mean? What did you do to get Rias-oneesama to come to wherever you are." Naruto's grin widened as he patted the young boy on the head.

"Well..." He was stopped by a cough from Venelana.

"Naruto! I would appreciate it if you didn't try to corrupt my grandson. At least not for a few more years."

"Very well."

"Now then I think we've messed with my daughter enough for now. Why don't you all join us for dinner. Oh and Naruto-chan we fixed food with you in mind this time."


Naruto's mouth watered as he stared at the massive spread of food in front of him. At his seat he had a devil hog of some kind that was 4 feet long and probably weighed 3 times that of a normal hog.

"This is fantastic!" His sisters' eyes were locked in on the beast as they went up to Naruto.

"Oniisama are you sure you can eat that all?"

"No you can't have any." Naruto looked over at them with a hog leg in his hand. His mouth was full and a big chunk of meat was already missing from said leg.

"What? But we didn't even ask you yet!"

"But you were going to." He said that as a statement and not a question as he rose an eyebrow at them and the looked anywhere other than him guilty. When they looked back they noticed the hog leg in his hand had already been picked clean and he was now chewing on the head like some kind of animal. Shio gained a tick mark as she yelled at him.

"Can you slow down and stop eating when we are talking to you!?"

"My my there's no need to fight over food. We have more boar's ready if you two have such an appetite as well. I thought young girls were more cautious of their figure?" The two blushed as they looked more reserved.

"M-Maybe just half a boar." The other's sweatdropped at Miso's request. 'That's still way more than a person should eat...'

After that everyone started to socialize lightly as they at. The food was delicious and Venelana watched in disturbed fascination at how the three youkai ate so much food. She wasn't sure where they even put it all. At least the two girls still showed they had manners. She gained a look of frustration as she couldn't tell how far Naruto's table manners went. Every time she looked back at him more and more sizable portions of meat were gone.

Lord Gremory smiled fondly at the sight of his new extended family enjoying their dinner. His eye's shifted to Naruto and he did a small double-take when he noticed the boar had been picked clean and it was missing some of the bones from it's skeleton.

"So Naruto I've noticed you've gotten a lot stronger lately. No doubt you've been hard at work."

Naruto looked at him with a large leg bone in his mouth before he bit down and snapped it like a toothpick making some of the others shiver.

"Yeah I have been and if I keep eating like this I'll get even stronger faster. Pretty sure I'm stronger than you already."

"Hahaha you might be my boy! By the way since you are courting my daughter I wouldn't mind if you started looking at me as your own father.

Naruto looked back at the remaining skeleton of his food before his tail shot out quicker than most could react and lashed out at it several times before not even a scrap was left. Only a few managed to catch a glimpse of razor shaft teeth coming from the tail. After that his tail pointed itself at the Gremory head and it split down the middle showing that it did in fact have a large row of teeth and it appeared to grin evilly at him.

Naruto looked back at him ominously making the man nervous.

"Yeah... That's not going to happen."

"Well you don't have to be so mean about it..."

His tail turned back into a more normal wolf-like one as it waved lazily in the air behind him.

"Oh that reminds me. In case you didn't know it, Rias is expecting." Lord Gremory did a spit-take as Venelana looked over at her daughter surprised. Rias blushed as she glared at Naruto.

"Naruto-kun I wanted to tell them!"

"Ah sorry you should have told me then."

Lord Gremory looked frozen for a moments making the others look at him weirdly before he suddenly stood up and held up his glass.

"This truly is a great day! Not only has my daughter returned home but she is pregnant with a child!" The servants and maids around them gave a round of applause as Rias looked embarrassed.

Venelana clapped her hands as she looked over at her daughter happily.

"I know devils usually aren't very fertile so this was years sooner than we ever expected."

"Mom you don't have to say that out loud!"

"Still though I guess this makes you officially betrothed to our daughter Naruto-kun?

They blinked when they saw Naruto eating into another boar. He looked at them like he had done nothing wrong.

"Of course. I look forward to raising my daughter with Ri-chan."

Venelana's smile widened at that while Rias just felt warm inside.

"Oh and it's a girl too?! I get to have my very own cute little granddaughter now. I am curious though Naruto-chan how did you react when you found out about her pregnancy? I hear often that a man would feel weak or even pass out?"

"Well... I got so happy and excited I destroyed half the school and did millions of dollars worth of property damage..." The two Gremory parents sweatdropped at that as that was a bit much.

"You did all that just from being overjoyed?" It's not exactly a bad thing but it wasn't extremely good either if it destroyed things. Tayuya added her two cents while she kept eating her own food.

"You should see him when he's aroused..."

At that there was the sound of multiple forks and knives falling onto the table and plates as Tama, Shio, Miso, and Akeno all looked dazed to varying degrees as Koneko and Raynare looked at them in jealousy. Rias couldn't take it anymore as she got up and walked off leaving her food.

"I've had enough of this!" Naruto grinned as she stormed off. 'Her mood swings are adorable.'

Issei stood up as well as he pointed at Naruto, jealous fury in his eyes. "Damnit senpai!"


"Ahh! You're too rough!"

Rias moaned heavily as Naruto pounded her from behind. They were in a bedroom on top of the god sized bed as he plowed into her. He had on a pokerface as he had her on her hands and knees shaking the bed. He grabbed onto the supple flesh of her ass as he continued to pound her. Naruto gave on sharp thrust burying himself in her making her squeak out before she looked back at him weakly.

"Y-You're gonna h-hurt the baby -eep!" She jumped a bit when she felt the sting of his hand hitting her ass.

"You don't seem too concerned about that with how you're moaning. I wonder if your parents can hear you?" She pushed her face into the bed to try to muffle her voice and Naruto grinned as he felt her insides change at the question.

"Did you just get tighter?" He gained a sadistic look as he started to thrust hard again hearing her sharp moans muffled by the bed.

"As long as I use my aura the baby will be fine. But that also makes things more sensitive for you Ri-chan." Her body quivered as his body became covered in his black aura. He started to keep up his pace sawing in and out of her without restraint as her juices fell down onto the bed. The bed started to rock as he didn't ease up on her, her body becoming a jiggling mass of flesh. Her strength left her as she had been forced to cum 4 times already.

"But it doesn't look like you are too concerned with that right now." If someone were to walk in on them right now it really would look like some beautiful fair maiden getting ravaged and raped by some shadowy demon. He was surprised how tight she still was considering things. Her eyes watered from Naruto pounding into her core hard.

She had hoped she would get used to him over time but while her stamina increased a little that just made him get rougher and go longer. Her body felt hyper sensitive as Naruto coated his body and therefore the massive girth of his that was inside of her with his aura. She fell down onto her breasts as her muscles went spastic unable to control herself from the extreme pleasure Naruto was giving her.

"A-Ah!"

Drool started to go down her chin as Naruto's thrust sped up. His his blurred as he approached his limit before he finally gave one last strong thrust and buried himself full inside of her and came. She came with him as that last act sent her over the edge of her ecstasy as her tongue lolled out and she saw spots in her vision. Naruto's warm seed pooled inside her quickly filling her. Naruto pulled out letting his last few spurts coat her ass as her sore folds dripped with his thick cream overflowing.

Her body was nothing but a quivering pool of flesh before she finally lost her will and past out unconscious.

Naruto let out a breath as he admired his woke.

"Ah got to love the bodies of supernatural women. No matter how much punishment they take their bodies still hold up nicely."

He was knocked out of his musing by a knock on his door as he got up to see who it was. He opened the door to see Miso in her pajamas. Her glossy spiked blonde hair fell down her shoulders and the small of her back. How it still looked so good even when she slept no doubt made many girls jealous. Actually it was a trait all 3 of the siblings shared as their hair was a bit more reactive and denser. Naruto was just glad that though his sisters had spiky hair as well theirs was a lot tamer than his was.

He looked down at his younger sister who looked somewhat disheveled in her loosely worn pajama's exposing one of her shoulders and a sizable amount of her cleavage.

She groggily rubbed her eye as she spoke, her fox ears twitching cutely.

"Oniisama can you keep it down? Some of us are trying to sleep..." Her voice died as her eyes focused and she saw Naruto standing in front of her naked in all his sculpted glory. Her eyes shifted down wide to his monstrous member standing at attention as if it was looking dead at her. Her eyes then shifted to his bed and widened even more upon seeing the state Rias was in. She then looked at her brother's face and broke eye contact a split second later as she felt suddenly very shy.

"I... Nevermind have a good night oniisama!" Before she could even turn away to leave she flinched when Naruto leaned his hand against the doorframe and locked her in place with his eyes. His wolf features emerged as his wolf tail went up an inch behind her blocking her from escaping as he stood there. He grinned slyly as she blushed.

"Now where are you running off to so fast Miso-chan? Didn't you want me to have a good night? Since you can't sleep let me help you with that."

Her ears drooped as she glanced to the side not able to meet his dominating presence as she gave off a really submissive aura. Naruto's grin widened when she spoke meekly.

"H-Hai oniichan..." Naruto would definitely be enjoying his time here. It was only a matter of time before Shio showed up wondering where her sister was and Naruto wasn't planning on letting her escape either.


"Everyone is off training huh?" Naruto watched as Issei ran for his life dodging the flame-throwing from Tannin as he scorched the earth.

"Are you sure you want to step up your training Naruto?" The question came from one of his familiars, the next in the Groudon line, Koa. She had her arms folded as she stood next to her sister Tsunami. Naruto nodded as he turned to her. Tsunami sighed as she walked away to give them their space to hash it out. Being a Kyogre she didn't prefer close combat fighting like her sister did as she was more about overwhelming ranged techniques.

Naruto slowly slipped into his stance as looked eyes with Koa. "Yes Koa-chan I want to increase my fighting stamina and to do that I need a real fight to help me advance faster." She smirked slightly showing off her sharklike teeth as she rolled her hand around lazily.

"Well if that's what you want I don't want to hear you crying then when I'm done with you."

Naruto gained a tick mark as he smirked at her. "I don't like being treated lightly, I'm going to be using my full strength."

"I would hope-." She stopped when Naruto was suddenly in her face. He threw out a quick punch at her but she brought up her arm quickly looking around his outstretched arm and stopping his fist before she used the same hand to grab his shirt and pull him in before delivering a sick headbutt to his forehead sending him stumbling back. The force of it was strong enough to send out a small shockwave.

"Ahh..." Naruto held his head as blood ran down it. The force behind it actually rattled his brain as he looked at Koa in disbelief.

"What anything goes right?"

"Hehehe well the goal was for you to try and counter each of my moves so I can adapt to it so I guess this works out."

Naruto clenched his fist before reeling it back as it built up power. Koa gained a small smile before she launched her own fist right at his. There was a brief flash as both fists made contact before the ground around them formed a 30 meter wide crater and the ground between them split after a delayed shockwave went out.

"I helped you refine your Juggernaut punch Naruto it's not going to work on me. Quake." Naruto's eyes widen when her arm started to vibrate as she actually pushed back against him before there was a crackled and his fist was knocked back sending him tumbling on the ground a sizable distance away before he popped onto his feet and skid to a stop. His arm was twitching and shook as it laid at his side limp.

"So to counter my punch you matched my strength and then you used that technique to cancel out the incoming distortion wave. Afterwards you continued it to overwhelm my attack and continue yours to knock me back."

She mockingly clapped her hands at that deduction. "You get an A for that analysis. Kind of not hard for me to do since I'm still physically stronger than you."

"So really what I need to do is revise my technique so that it can get to you. Well we have time to think of that later. Let's see how well an old favorite of mine still holds up." She looked confused but before she could ask him what it was he suddenly blurred to the side kicking up dust. She started seeing him appear all around her for a split second before vanishing again.

A cut appeared on her arm as something speed by her before it came back and slashed her along her back. Her eyes glanced from side to side trying to track him as more cuts appeared across her body.

"You aren't fast enough to hit me in my Spider Wolf stance?" Her eyes widened when she heard the voice in her ear as she swung her arm back to hit at the source only to hit an afterimage of Naruto before he reappeared 50 meters away.

Naruto smirked as he snapped his fingers and Koa's eyes widened as bindings suddenly appeared out of thin air around her and wrapped around her body like a cocoon. Koa blinked as she looked at her now restrained body.

"Well... I can't think of a counter for this other than brute force right now but you know binding me has no point if you don't have the physical strength to do any actual heavy damage to me."

"Yeah I figured that." Naruto dropped to all fours before his aura started to go off his body like smoke. His body turned completely black as his hair turned grey with grey fur going around his collar and down his chest and his eye sockets glowed violet. His wolf ears and tail sprouted as his horns lengthed and gave him an overall very intimidating appearance. "So let's see how you handle a strike from my Demon Wolf state."

He held out his hand showing it grow into giant claws before he stabbed it into the ground and dashed towards her tearing up the earth as he left a trail.

"Ah!" She flinched as the eerie appearance of Naruto made her react reflexively. Tsunami who had been patiently watching them from the sidelines had her senses go haywire as she felt what her sister was about to do.

"Koa wait-!" There was an explosion of of both massive and incredibly dense energy as Koa's body changed. Her eyes turned red as did her skin with a metallic sheen before glowing yellow tribal markings appeared over her body. As if she had momentarily lost her mind she roared out before stomping hard on the ground. A ripple went through the earth before it turned into a shockwave turning up rocks and boulders going outwards as Naruto ran into it. Caught completely off guard he ran into the upturned earth and lost his footing tumbling towards Koa.

The Groudon roared again as she flexed her arms and broke out of the black bindings and dashed right at the tumbling Naruto. She jabbed out at him hitting him in the stomach like a steel beam. He vomited blood before the force of the punch destroyed all the ground in a cone 50 meters out from her fist and Naruto went flying away like a bullet. His body hit a nearby small mountain 200 meters away and hit it with a heavy rumble as his impact left a massive crater in the side of it. The entire exchange from the moment Naruto ran at her to when he hit the mountain only took less than 7 seconds.

Naruto winced with one eye closed as he laid imbedded in the crater. He looked down and manage to see that despite him being in his demon wolf state and covered in his black aura like an armored skin his chest had been cracked through showing white light glowing through the seems.

"Gah... S-So a lost of balance... and u-uneven terrain r-ruins the Spider Wolf stance... I also n-need to increase my d-defense..." He went limp barely conscious as his body reverted back to his demon state showing his shirt had been destroyed and his chest was heavily bleeding. If he had not been in his combined form that hit might have killed him.

Off in the distance Issei looked at the damage that had just been caused and paled. He had seen Naruto get punched into that mountain and it scared him out of his mind. Tannin had also stopped his assault to look over at the commotion with wide eyes.

"I can't help but feel sympathetic towards the boy. Even I would have felt that blow." His eyes shifted to the two women who were with Naruto and his eyes widened a bit more as he got a familiar feeling from them. 'Dragons?!'

Koa suddenly had her eyes turn back to their normal yellow as the rest of her body reverted back as they widened in shock at what she just did.

"Shit sorry! I didn't mean to do that!"

She froze when she felt a menacing presence behind her. She shivered as she looked back to see her sister looking down on her darkly as she rose up her hand, water collecting around it.

"You used your Primal state... On Naruto-sama?"

"I-I said I was sorry!" The water above Tsunami's hand formed into a giant sphere that floated over Koa as she sweated.

"And I don't think Naruto-sama can hear you right now. So your screams shouldn't bother him. Water Pulse."

The water smashed down on Koa like a solid steel ball crushing her into the ground before it pulsed down on her and the ground around them was further destroyed turning into mud.


"..." Naruto deadpanned at Koa who was covered in mud and bruises as he sat down on a boulder. Tsunami had called up Audi to help her heal him after they pried him out of that mountain. He would probably have healed up on his own after a day or 2 but they figured he would rather want to be waken up so they did that after half an hour of him laying dazed. Now his chest was being bandaged by Nami along with his right eye already being bandaged and Audi had her hands up healing the damage to his head and diaphragm.

"I-I didn't mean to do that."

"You know you likely could have broke the bindings without transforming right?" She looked down embarrassed as she rubbed her arm.

"Sorry Naruto-sama I got startled and that got the better of my judgement. I accept any punishment you wish to give." Naruto sighed and closed his eyes as Audi finished healing him and Tsunami held his head to her breasts.

"Looks like Nami-chan already roughed you up anyway. Besides this the goal of this training was for you to counter my attacks so this is my fault for not avoiding your attack out of my own curiosity. Didn't think you would hit that hard though. Your embarrassment is a good enough punishment for me... for now."

The redhead nodded before she remembered something and looked up at him.

"Oh that reminds me. When you attacked while each had it's own little weak point I noticed something that all of them had in common."

Naruto rose an eyebrow as he tilted his head at her.

"Oh? What's that?"

"Well there is a notable pause when you transition between styles which most below my level wouldn't be able to act on but an Ultimate class devil and up would. Along with that each style misses a key quality. Your Spider Wolf style is great for subduing an enemy but it lacks the force needed to take one out and could be extremely more dangerous with the use of a weapon. Your Juggernaut style is very powerful but while you are a skilled fighter the Juggernaut style is a bit too direct for you. As long as the enemy can avoid the hit if they know it's coming it loses a lot of it's effectiveness. It also restrains your speed from what I saw when I helped you practice with it in the past. When we first started training months ago you I would say while you didn't have the speed or the power of the two styles you fought more freely and were a lot more dangerous because you were unpredictable. In other words what I think would be the best solution to your fighting styles..."

Naruto's eyes widened as he grinned. "Would be to merge or revise them!" He quickly stood and scooped Koa up making her squeak in surprise. Her eyes widened when Naruto suddenly mashed his lips against hers. Her voice was muffled as Naruto quickly dominated her mouth with his dextrous tongue not letting her collect her wits as he overwhelmed her. Her mind quickly hazed from the unexpected amount of passion he put into it that she quickly lost focus. After 30 seconds he ended the kiss and let go of her as she fell back to the ground on her knees, a blush crawling across her face.

"Why did you..."

"Eh just felt like it. Think of it as a thank you for the help." He heard a moan behind him and looked back to see Audi and Nami with bashful expressions. Naruto tilted his head at them confused.

"What?

Tsunami played with her dress awkwardly before looking at him. "Ano, could we also perhaps receive our thanks-?"

"I knew you would be going through some kind of rigorous training but I didn't expect you to be training with to dragonesses." Naruto and the others looked off to the side to see a tall young man walk out from behind a boulder. He had black hair and was fairly attractive with a muscular build comparable to Naruto's if not somewhat bigger in overall mass.

"Youkai Dragons. They are Youkai Dragons. Now who might you be?" Naruto walked up to him with his violet eyes showing a strong will as he grinned at the new arrival which was matched by said new arrival.

"I'm just a spectator. I was interested in seeing how far my cousins suitor had progressed since your fight with Riser." Naruto's eyebrow rose at that as he filled in the blanks quickly.

"Oh? You must be Sairaorg. And what do you think of my progress?" The man smirked as he crossed his arms.

"I have to say I'm impressed. You have an enormous amount of power... but your level of control is poor." Naruto felt like he had been stabbed by that comment. He couldn't fault it as it was accurate. He never really focused much on control when he stopped being human and when he wasn't using his weapons. Now that he thought about it he should have focused more on his control like Tama did or even his late father. Everything he had in his arsenal that took a great deal of control was pretty much all AoE attacks.

But he still didn't like a male mentioning his shortcomings like that especially not in front of women. It set off multiple triggers for him.


- Mindscape -

Deep inside the shattered planes of his mind the knocking of metal chains could be heard. If one were to reach the epicenter of the noise they would see the giant red egg that hard always been there. The chains that kept it tethered were all heavily cracked along with the shell of the egg. As if something had snapped a bolt of lightning suddenly went by horizontally striking the egg and destroying one of the chains. There was a rumble as chips of the shell fell off of the egg exposing a light as the egg started to periodically pulse with energy.


"Did you come here pick a fight?"

His face shadowed and his familiars suddenly felt scared as his shadow wavered into something else for a second before turning back to normal. Sairaorg looked impressed by the sudden oppressive aura.

"I just came here to give some friendly advice. You've got to be tougher than hell to be number one." Sairaorg stepped on the ground and there was a tremor as it split and started to crack the ground in Naruto's direction. Right when it was about to reach him Naruto swung his arm out as if batting it to the side as it was redirected rapidly to the side as it sped up before hitting a nearby boulder and exploding. Naruto raised his head showing one of his violet eyes had turned red.

"I don't need your advice." Sairaorg's eyes widened before he chuckled and walked away.

"Looks like I might have found a worthy rival."

They watched until Sairaorg disappeared before Naruto finally calmed down. Naruto sighed as his eye turned back to violet and he sweated a little. He heard the flapping of wings before someone touched down on a rock pillar behind him.

"Your disposition towards males always reminds me of dragons." Naruto didn't even have to look to know who it was just from their signature alone. His tired eyes glanced back to see Azazel looking down at them.

"Azazel... So how do I compare to that Bael?" Azazel laughed as he stroked his chin hair.

"Hahaha Sairaorg Bael, the Strongest Youth and your fiance's cousin. All his physical abilities whether it be strength, speed, defense, or combat are all off the charts. The guy doesn't really use ranged magic much just like you but it's more so because he worked almost entirely on his body and not just because he's to lazy to do it like you. If I were to put you two together really the only thing you outpace him in is speed by a little but as you are now he stomps you in every other category and likely would because he would not be one to underestimate you. Really the kid is borderline satan level in just his combat prowess. If he had inherited his clans trademark magic he could have very well replaced one of the existing Satans by this point."

Naruto nodded his head at this not deterred at all.

"You said as I am now. What if I gave the fight my own 100%?"

"Well that depends. I've never seen you go 100% but you have shown trouble going over 50% so the question is how long can you maintain your higher levels of performance? Because if you think Sairaorg isn't a stamina type you would be terribly wrong."

Naruto stood there frozen for a minute causing the fallen angel general to look at him in curiosity as his 3 familiars looked worried. They saw Naruto's body start to shake before he broke out in a sweat before he started full on laughing uncontrollably.

"Pfft hahahahahahahaha this is what I've been waiting for! Time to prepare for the next step!"

"Naruto-sama?"

"You said I needed to merge right Koa-chan? This training trip lasts a month right? I'll be done within 2 weeks." He held up his hand and willed his hand to grow into 5 giant claws. "Looks like staying in just my demon form isn't going to be enough."

'Kaa-san always said I could be anything I put my mind to, and to make my dreams a reality. Well now it's time to become a walking nightmare.'


AN: Tada. I wanted to get this out like 3 days ago but with family over for the holiday it kinda delayed me. Naruto wants to get strong was already training to be stronger than Tannin in his beast form and he wants to be stronger than his familiars but seeing someone who is close to his age who is stronger strikes home even hard. He will now be taking things completely seriously in his training which he hasn't done since he was human. Same thing would have happened if he ran into Kuroka. And since Kuroka will be showing up soon... Poor Kuroka...

Anyway see ya guys! Imma make sure to get to work on my drawings this week. Also here is a question for you guys.

Should I move up the Sairaorg fight to some time during the underworld trip or should i keep it to where it is in the Canon? I might make a poll for this too. Hell I might even add Kuroka to it i don't know yet.

Anyway give me many reviews!