Well here is the next chapter. I hope you enjoy! Please help me out by giving my a description of Dewdrop. Also, OC's are still open for the other Three clans. Please leave me a review, with constructive feedback. This will help me to be a better writer and to encourage me to continue on with my story. I have great plans for the three litter mates so please stay tuned!
Thunderclan:
Leader: Greenstar
Deputy: Applefrost: reddish tom with white paws
Medicine Cat: Dewdrop: ? (Fan ideas would be nice)
-Grasspaw
Warriors:
Lionshine Brighlent golden tom: Mate: Dandelionpuff: Black, white, and grey she-cat
Ambereyes Mate: Bluelight
Bluelight: Grey she-cat Mate: Ambereyes: golden tom with amber colored eyes
-Oakpaw
Goldenfern Golden She-cat: Mate: Beavertail: Brown tom
Spikepelt Black tom with brown stripes: Mate: NONE
-Mapplepaw
Bevertail Pure brown tom: Mate Goldenfern: Golden she-cat
-Deerpaw
Apprentices:
Grasspaw: Calico Tom
Oakpaw: Blue-grey Tom
Mapplepaw: Reddish-ginger She-cat
Deerpaw: Dappled tom
Queens:
Dandelionpuff: Mate: Lionshine
-Fawnkit, Jupiterkit, Thornkit
Esther: cream colored she-cat: Mate: Unknown kittypet
-Bumblekit, Eaglekit, Brookkit, Stormkit
Elders:
Squirlflight:
Leafpool:
Jayfeather-
Cats outside of the clans:
Scar: She-cat with a large scar that runs from the top of her left eye down to her cheek
Brown tortoiseshell
Mate (Leopard): Dappled tom with golden fur and white spots
Kit: Hawk: Brown and Black tom
Fawnkit looked towards the elder with confusion. Why is he staring at me like that? She wondered. As Fawnkit and Jayfeather continued to stare at one anthother, Thornkit, Leafpool, and Squirlflight padded into the elders den. Her gaze turned from one of confusion to one of defiance. I can stare at you all day Jayfeather. This is a battle of wills. Fawnkit declared to herself.
"Are you coming Jayfeather?" Squirflight called and after a moment added, "Fawnkit hurry up."
Fawnkit gave one final glare towards Jayfeather before turning towards the den and heading after her littermate.
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Jayfeather shook his head as if coming out of a trance and Jayfeather's eyes grew wide before he turned on his heal and raced across the clearing to the clift and began to climb up the slope leading to the leaders den.
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Fawnkit entered the dark den and took a moment to allow her eyes to adjust.
"What story are you going to tell us?" she said as she padding over and sat next to her littermates on a pile of moss.
Before Squirrelflight could answer comotion came from outside of the den. A voice called, "Grasspaw! Get me some more cobweb! Quickly, Jupiterkit needs it now!"
Squirrelflight curled herself around the kits and said, "Let me tell you a story about the Great Battle. It was a war between the good and the bad, between the light and the dark of this world and the next. There were three, kin of Firestar's kin who held a great power in their paws. Firestar was a great leader, who was the one before Bramblestar. And Bramblestar was the leader before Greenstar."
Thorkit's eyes grew wide and he said, "I once heard Dandelionpuff describe Firestar as a large ginger tom with a mane like a lion. And that he alone was a great descendant of Lionclan?"
Leafpool purred, "Not exactly little one. Yes Firestar was a ginger tom, and he may have seemed larger than life to some, but really he was just a normal cat that cared for all of the clans. He lost his last life in the Great Battle protecting what he held the most dear. Although he was not born in the clans, he had the purest heart and truly held the warrior spirit. Your mother may have been referring to the time in the old forest when Firestar combined Windclan and Thunderclan to fight Tigerclan. Firestar named the short term alliance Lionclan in order to combat the evil Tigerstar. But that is a story for another time. Now please be quiet and let Squirrelflight tell you the story of the Great Battle."
Thornkit and Fawnkit snuggled closer to Squirrelflight eager to hear the story.
Squirrelflight dipped her head closer to the kits and began the story in a quiet voice, "Once there was a time when the barrier between this world and the next was at its weakest. Normal warriors and apprentices could in their sleep visit their ancestors. But it was the most evil of the all. These cats were preyed on because they were unsatisfied with their lives in the clans."
Movement stirred outside of the den. A moment later Dewdrop popped his head in. "Fawnkit, Thornkit come here please. I need to talk to you about your brother," he murmured with a hint of sadness in his voice. The two kits scrambled over Squirrelflight's belly and walked over to Dewdrop. He lead them out into the clearing.
Dandelionpuff was sitting outside of the nursery with Lionshine resting his head on hers their eyes filled with sorrow.
"What's going on?" asked Thornkit, fear edging his mew. Dewdrop dipped his head so that his eyes could be level with the kits. "Jupiterkit has greencough. He also seems to have a stomach bug that is causing him to vomit blood and causing him seizures. During his last seizure Jupiterkit fell out of his nest and landed on a thorn that ripped his belly causing it to bleed."
Fawnkit let out a little squeak! "Is he going to be alright?" she asked with a trembling voice.
"Listen I don't want you to be scared, but for now your brother will have to be moved to the medicine den. I will do everything I can for him. Please head back to nursery your parents are waiting for you."
The two kits nodded their heads and raced across the clearing to the nursery.
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