My hero Conduit: announcement


Alright, I got back to reading this old story that's been dormant for one year and oh boy there's a lot of mistakes I made.

For instance, the OC convicts I made are poorly handled of how I depict them. Of what I remembered correctly, I suppose to create a conflict between Williams and Cole on how they approach them. Cole wanting them to be rehabilitated along suspecting mental manipulation was involved and Williams wants them to be detained away from the camp to do their obvious bloodthirsty nature. But that didn't work out after I think about it.

The campers I made are manipulated to show tiny hostility towards Deku. Like the twins being assholes, the girl acting kind of a dick, and more poor saps with their minds subtly tweaked. Williams notices the sudden gradual change of behavior and tries to convince Delsin that there is something wrong with the kids.

If you are wondering, All-Might's "daughter" is something I plan for. She is not what she said to be. But seeing how I wrote the OC characters, err, well let's change that up.

Its best for me if I rewrite the story a lot drastically and having a proofreader check if the idea floats or not. Unless the story takes too long or the plot is going nowhere, I might abandon it entirely.

So yeah, bye.