Hi guys!

I wanted to let you know I am back, and hopefully with some better writing!

I do want to mention after re-reading these chapters I am disappointed in how I portrayed an abusive kind of relationship. I was not intending to make "fell" sans appear to be hurting someone he loves, I was intending to show a sadistic personality driven by self-interest. I do NOT condone abusive relationships.

However, I also believe given the chance, people can change for the better. And these are fictional characters.

Anyway, I hope to have the next chapter up by tonight. I wish you all well and I appreciate the feedback I received years ago!

-Eddie