Here is the final chapter of The Adventures Of Crimson Darkness. Hope you enjoy.
Chapter Thirteen:
Behind Bars:
Previously, on The Adventures of Crimson Darkness...
Laendov: It's not that I believe Femora and Tomro screwed you over at the 2013 Super Bowl, its a fact. When I missed the shot because of that stupid plant, I got kicked out and went back home, only to have an angry fan try to kill me. I finally escape that hospital my parents put me in after that the fans followed me and attacked the place. I killed the real Laendov shortly after escaping and took his appearance, even his race and his job as chief of the north galactic space police. Those officers there were complete idiots as they actually believed me and followed every order that I gave them. I didn't show any respect to you twins cause I saw you for what you really were freaks of nature! I only pick people who were inferior to me, and to those that were worthy enough joined my cause on destroying that plant that I kidnapped to see the super bowl to be ruined, like how they ruined my life! I killed Leon cause he was the only one who cared about you twins hybrids, now you're all gonna die! (Lendov starts laughing out loud, and so does Crimson, which made Laendov stop laughing and look confused) Huh? What are you laughing at? I told you my plot, it's not like anyone else can hear or see it right? (Crimson grin widened)
Crimson: Oh? (He show many insect-bots which made Laendov pale as chalk, his eyes widened in horror and his jaw dropping to the floor)
Laendov: H-H-How long were they recording that!?
Rose: Oh, since day one. (Whistle innocently)
Laendov: WHAT?!
Crimson: Yeah and even right now, so now everybody of the universe heard about what you said, hook line and sinker.
Laendov: (Growl and roar as his eyes glows, and glared at the twins and pointed at them) YOU TWO! I ALWAYS KNEW YOU'D GET ME FOR THIS AND I WAS THIS CLOSE! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! I'LL KILL YOU!
His hands created a big huge energy ball blast as Crimson blocked it, but it got some at the twins' chest very fast as sent them flew to the ground injured badly from the explosion make crimson eyes widened.
Crimson: RUBY! ROSE! (He run into them and begin healing them as he shakes them) Come on girls! Wake up!
Laendov: Before I kill you Crimson, allow me to show you a gift that the Hybrid Company gave me, a gift that no other hybrid has ever gotten.
Laendov started powering up, and a yellow aura started surrounding him, his eyes turned red, and his skin began turning blue. As he continued to power up, the ground began to shake, and the fortress was getting destroyed, as it couldn't handle the energy that Laendov's was giving. Just then, Laendov's let out a loud scream, and there was a burst of light which temporally blinded Crimson. When Crimson's vision came back, he saw Laendov's new form. Laendov was now a demon boar. He had blue skin and blank red eyes and long red hair. He also had white demon horns sticking out of his forehead. He was now 15'5 feet tall and weighed 800 pounds. Ripped.
Laendov:(Evil Grin) Now Crimson, you're playing with the big boys now!
And now, the conclusion of The Adventures Of Crimson Darkness...
Crimson: (Growls) Carlson! I'll make you regret this!
Laendov: I'm sorry, didn't you get the memo?! I don't go by that name anymore. (Shoots a fire beam at Crimson from his mouth,
Crimson dodges the beam, but suddenly Laendov knee his stomach but Crimson teleported and roundhouse kicked Laendov, they both glared as they burst in speed punching and kicking each other and also dodging each other beam attacks. Then Laendov grabbed him and slammed him down much time as Crimson shot a lightning beam, but Laendov got hit, but it was a decoyed a he fired a beam from his hand a full blast at Crimson sent him flying and crashed down and getting up then Laendov zoom in punching him a lot and impale his stomach, making Crimson grunt a little, but then headbutt him and Laendov sent flying, but got up and glared at him.
Laendov: Why won't you just die already Crimson!? You can't win!
Crimson: You of all people should know, I don't get down by no one!
Laendov: (His hands created a bigger energy ball blast, the same blast that knocks Rose and Ruby out) I WILL BE FIRST THEN! (Throws the energy ball only for Crimson to dodge it) Looks like you care more about your life then your girlfriends' lives Crimson. (Crimson turns his head and sees the energy ball is headed towards The Twins)
Then suddenly, everything went into slow motion, and Crimson's eyes widen in shock, his pupils' extent. Suddenly a big explosion happens as Laendov laugh crazy.
Laendov: HAHAHAHAHA! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR MESSING WITH ME, YOU FREAK! (The smoke cleared to show Crimson shielded the girls, his body was still okay and healing up, he was painted) Looks like your quicker then I thought.
Crimson: (His eyes are now all black but narrowed) Why would try to kill them? They were knocked out! AND YOU TRY TO KILLED THEM! (A dark aura slowly starts rising from his body) ALL THEY WANTED TO BE TREATED RIGHT! NOT A MONSTER! I MAY FEEL SORRY OF YOUR PAST A BIT, BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN YOU CAN GO THIS FAR! HOW CAN YOU TO SUCH INNOCENT PEOPLE?! (Laendov flinch of his shout but keep his act together as he laughs and grins while crossing his arms)
Laendov: Why are you so concerned about them, they're only girls.
Crimson: (Ripped off his cloak) Just because they're girls, it doesn't mean every man should treat them like nothing. I don't care which gender they are, (His head is down) they are family to me, they're the only family I have! And I won't lose them... (Then he begins to cackle insanely) THERE IS NO WAY IN HELL OR SPACE THAT IM GONNA LOSE THEM TO A GUY LIKE YOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
Crimson roaring screams our of pure rage and hatred, this makes the whole planet to shake, cause a thunderstorm, wind blowing everywhere which makes Lednov absolute shocked.
Laendov: WHAT THE HELL?! What is this?! (Crimson started glowing, a burst of black and red like marking appeared all over him as his skin and body are covered in black. He grew a tail, and his horns grew to the back and show an emotionless but astern look with yellow lightning dancing around him as his finger become deadly claws as the fog aura swift like flames around him) What is this?! Did he just transformation?!
Crimson didn't respond at all busy glaring at him. Just then, he heard The Twins begin to wake up from being knocked out, they sense absolutely huge power.
Ruby: What happened?
Rose: I think we were blasted by Laendov and then...
Crimson: (Barley able to keep his anger in check, but his voice sounds a little deep, demonic and emotionless) Girls, take Femora and get out of here to safety.
The Twins looked at Crimson with absolute shocked, they felt a chill that went up to their spines, and the atmosphere felt so cold, and the air suffocates a bit later, they nodded their heads and begin to go.
Laendov: Oh no you don't!
Laendov speeds at the girls, but to his shock, Crimson is in front of him. Crimson grabs Laendov's hand, and he began to crush every bone of it make him scream, then punch his face too hard, it almost shattered his skull, which sent him flying into the wall.
Crimson: What are you two waiting for, take the plant and get out of here!
They nodded as they took Feroma with them and flew toward outside. Crimson turn to see Laendov get up as his face is bleeding.
Laendov: I have to admit, I never thought you had it in you. (Crimson still didn't respond) What's the matter Darkness? Too lost for words to even crack some jokes? (He then charges in at him)
But what he didn't know was Crimson's hands pop out as katana blades, but covered in ice. Then Laendov throws so many punches and kicks very fast, but to his surprise, Crimson was like a ghost, dodging his attacks so fast, that it made him look like his attacks were going right through him. H then unleashes a fury of energy blast at him, but not one of them were able to hit. After firing the two-hundred unsuccessful energy blasts, Laendov falls down to his knees and starts catching his breath. Crimson slashed Laendov by moving his hand to give him a nasty cut, then his back. He quickly stabs him in the chest which made him scream. It felt like his energy was getting drain. Crimson then lift him up and smashed him at the ground. While in mid-air, Crimson spin his arms like a helicopter very fast to deliver a rapid damage blade cut to Laendov, which made him scream for mercy. Crimson suddenly vanished in a light speed punched him multiple times, crunching all of his bones. Crimson sent one punch to his stomach which made him cough out blood and sent him to the wall. While he gets up, Crimson walks to him, but Crimson turn around as shot a black flame ball at the real Laendov as he dropped down rolling screaming very loud.e
Laendov: IT BURNS! IT BURNS! WHY CAN'T THIS FLAME BE PUT IT OUT?! WHAT THE HELL IS THIS FLAME?! MY BONES FEEL LIKE ITS BEING MELTED BY LAVA! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?!
Crimson tilts his head as he snaps his finger and the flames are put out. Then Laendov suddenly turns back to normal which surprise him.
Laendov: W-w-w-what's going on? What did you do to me!? Why can't I transformed again?!
Crimson: I burn out your transformation.
Laendov: WHAT?! How the hell did you do that?!
Crimson: Because what I am is beyond the hybrid company (This makes Laendov shocked, and Crimson tendrils, and now grew tentacles with sharp blade pointer) Tell me Laendov, are you really good with math? (He show his sharp teeth like a jack o lantern sadist grin very wider strike fear in Laendov as he begins to shake like a leaf)
Laendov: What are you talking about?
Crimson: ANSWER ME! (This makes Laendov flinched)
Laendov: I'm... I'm, g-good?
Crimson: Well then... (Crimson kicked Laendov to the back as his tentacle blade tip spin like a drill burst of ice and flames together jabbing Laendov's back leg)
Laendov: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Crimson: Why don't you answer this math question, what's 829,735 * 961,527? I'll wait. (He then stabbed his shoulder, making Laendov scream in agony) However, the longer I wait, the longer you'll suffer, don't worry you won't die. Death is too easy for someone like you. Well, I'm waiting for an answer!
Laendov: It's 797,812,605,345!
Crimson: Ah...(Crimson blinks honestly he didn't expect him to get it right) Your so damn smart! You better give it up right now, or I'll make another math question so hard you'll lose some more body parts! (He dug deep to his nestle hole wound with his foot make Laendov scream in fear as he shook up in tears) am I clear?
Laendov: You're going to have to kill me!
Crimson: Worst, I'll show you something horrifying?
Then his torso opens a moth of sharp teeth show tentacles and tendrils while sharp spikes roaring and hissing as it has mouth waiting to eat him as Laendov scream like a little girl and shit himself due to fear.
Laendov: (In tears) I GIVE! I GIVE! IM SORRY FOR EVERYTHING! JUST PLEASE MAKE THIS NIGHTMARE STOP!
Crimson: Good! (Turn back to normal, but he almost stumbles a little) Phew, what a day, (He then opened his mouth and started webbing him) now up you go. (Carries him to the girls)
Ruby was holding the plant, and Rose was waiting for Crimson as they see him coming to them holding the horrible injured Laendov who seemed webs down as Crimson grin and laugh crazy.
Crimson: Hey girls, did somebody order a webbed up bad guy? (The girls giggle, and then the police ships arrive which show the South, East, and West galactic space police) Ah, the cavalry has arrived.
Laendov: Oh no!
The Twins: Oh yes.
The three chief officers came in, the first officer chief of the West is a female who has silver and darker blue hair, had nice curves, and D-cup size and yellow eyes. The second is a bull-man who skin color darker red and have an exoskeleton and a ring the nose and the last one is a robotic-like person who is yellow and red lines which is color purple.
Crimson: Hey they're chiefs of the South, West, and East.
South Chief: We came here as soon as we saw the video that you gave us.
East Chief: We should've to know Laendov would do something like this, my name is Eve, the West is Ariel, and South is Bilve
Crimson: Nice to meet you three. As you can see, the Twins and I solved the case on who stole the missing plant. And if it weren't for The Twins who cared about the mascot being stolen, Laendov, no Carlson, would've gotten away with it.
South: Thanks for the report, we'll take it from here. (Takes Laendov) Come on Laendov, its time to put you behind bars.
Laendov: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (Gets carried away)
Crimson: Hold on, chief, I know some cellmates who will keep him company! (Grins as he snaps his finger, groups of plant-like monster beast came by which surprise them and Rose to seem to be amazed)
Crimson: Everyone, say hello to Femora's oldest cousin's, Flora, Viner, Weeden, Chompy, and Veggie.
Veggie: Pleasure to meet Y'all.
Laendov: Oh God, please no!
Weeden: (Glared at the frighten Laendov) So, plants are dumb, huh?
Chompy: Think we're nothing but leaves which don't talk and move? At least our cousin or any plants keep the thing running and living for beings like you
Flora: Yeah and did your mommy ever teach how to treat a lady as a gentleman before?
South: It would seem they'll keep him company for now until their ready to go.
Veggie: (Grins while showing his sharp teeth) Yahoo! Come on guys let's show Laendov a time he'll never forget!
Laendov: (The police carry Laendov and the plants away) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (The Twins then start laughing)
Crimson: Well, talk about what goes around comes around.
East: Also, we are in your debt, we'll pay you 5000 Dragos for solving the case, for stopping the two criminals, and the government along the high council who won't tell who or what you are, they will consider you a myth and legend.
Crimson: Well I couldn't have done it without the girls, they're freaking awesome when we're a team. (This made The Twins blush)
South: Very well then.
West: Well, it was nice meeting you Crimson Darkness, keep up the good work staying in the shadows.
All the police left while taking Laendov away.
Crimson: Come on girls, let's drop Femora to the team.
Rose & Ruby: Right!
Later, at the stadium, where both teams were getting ready for the super bowl.
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen, before we start today's game, the Coach of the Piranhas just want to say a few words before we kick things off. (Passes the mic off to the Coach)
Coach: (Sigh) Ladies and gentlemen, I'm afraid that we...
Crimson: Can't start without us?
Everybody turn to see Crimson and The Twins showing the Femora which make the Coach shocked and happy.
Coach: Oh my God, Femora! (The Coach and the Piranha team run towards Crimson and The Twins) Oh my God! I can't believe it! You three have Femora!
Crimson: Yep.
Ruby: We kept our promise Coach.
Rose: And now here she is, ready for her teammates.
Coach: Oh thank you, we were just starting to give up hope. Thank you, thank you very much.
Crimson: It was nothing.
Coach: How can I ever repay you three?
Crimson: (He smirk along with The Twins as he looks at them) You girls thinking what I'm thinking?
Rose & Ruby: Yep. (This makes the Coach raise an eyebrow)
Coach: What is it you three are thinking about? (The rest of the team look at them)
Crimson: Well let's just we be an honor guess for the super bowl and watch the game while free food.
The Twins: Not to mention our singing and dancing.
Coach: (Grin) Of course! Anything since you bring home Femora.
Crimson: Alright! (Look at Ruby and Rose) Come on you two, TIME TO GO WILD!
Ruby and Rose: YEAH!
And so, Crimson and The Twins celebrated their victory at the Superbowl, and they all had a good time.
The End.
Author's Note: And that concludes our story ladies and gentlemen. Crimson and The Twins saved Femora and celebrated their victory at the Superbowl. This was a fun origin story to write with Lewamus Prime. It may not have explained all of Crimson's past, but I did want to reveal how Crimson met his girlfriends. Crimson Darkness may be a side character in my story Drogons for now, but later on, he will become a third main male protagonist. So stay tuned for that. I hope you all enjoy this short story because I had a blast writing it with Lewamus Prime, who was mostly the brains of the whole thing.
Will I write any more stories in the future? I'm not sure yet, but I have been brainstorming some ideas for stories, I just haven't written them yet. I also have to think about the main plot of the story and what the protagonist(s) goals should be and make sure they're clear. Having an unclear plot and unclear goal can ruin a story, and we don't want that. I know I don't want that, that's for sure. Also, I would like to thank Axel Emiya for proofreading the final chapter of this story. Normally, I don't need a proofreader, but this chapter had some problems while it was made, so I really needed his help. When you are finished reading this, go check out his story, Shiro's Tale. It's a good read and my OC, Xyaqom appears in it, so go check him out when you get the chance.
Anyways, if you liked this chapter, please let me know in the review section. Also, if you have any questions about my other story so far, please PM me, but keep in mind that I will not spoil any future updates to the story. Also, if the questions are good enough, I will post them into this chapter as well as me answering them, that way, everyone else will know a little bit more about the story and what else this chapter has to offer in case if there are those that may have missed it. With that said, my name is Xyaqom, and I'm signing out! (The screen then fades to black)
?: Hey! Who says we're done here, come back I still got an announcement to make! (Turns on the camera, you the audience sees a man with short messy red hair and droopy blue eyes due to a lack of sleep) I hope you all enjoyed the final chapter The Adventures of Crimson Darkness. But even still, his adventures are far from over, ah! (He snaps his fingers and scratches the back of his head and pointed to himself) Oh right, my name is Axel Emiya, the beta for this chapter.
Axel: Xyaqom has been kind enough to lend me permission for the use of his own OC's in my story: Shiro's Tale. As such, it's been an entire year since I wrote this story, I've put a lot of work into it. I'm happy to announce a crossover story event between our story's Drogon and Shiro's Tale, and you guys will get see a sneak preview. Enjoy!
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A figure sat down looming over the tallest building of Sainan city. "This town is oddly familiar? It really peaceful, I wouldn't mind living in a place like this." The figure mumbled under his breath and let out sighed. "What rotten E-rank luck I must have, to be stuck on an unknown plant, and losing contact with the girls! Man, this sucks!"
The man sat up stand roughly 178cm tall. He had dark red skin with matching red stripes all around his body. His eyes were full on black with yellow pupils giving the appearance of a demon. The rest of his body was mostly covered up in a black clock. A tiny little mechanical insect fly landed on this man's shoulder. "Oh, little buddy back already. What do you get for me?"
The nanobot projected an image of a young boy with white hair ferociously clashing blades with another man with short spiky black hair. "Good grief looks like I stumbled upon something interesting!" the figured grind. "Xyaqom, that bastard is still alive, and Mashiro Yuuma both of my targets are in one place! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
"Maybe things won't be so boring after all!" The figure shouted before leaping off the building. Those two better watch out because Crimson Darkness has come to Sainan to play.
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Axel: This project is still early in development but it will be a part of Shiro's Tale as a special chapter when it's done. Well that's I got, oh before I go, a special shout to Xyaqom who finished his second story, congratulation. I'll see you guys later. As Xyaqom would say, I'm signing out
The Adventures of Crimson Darkness:
The End!
