Hey people! So yeah this is a preview of a story I am in the process of making. I just wanted to get someone's advice on it. Mai is going to be OOC, warning you about that now.
Naru: No one's going to read this you know
Me: Listen here you-*this has been censored for your protection*
Mai: HEY! Do the disclaimer and get on with the story!
Me: I DON'T OWN ANYTHING! I wish I did though...*evil thoughts*
Mai & Naru: *shivers*
The rain dripped down from the sky, drenching everything it touched. Mai watched Naru's face carefully, for any reaction from his blank face. "Do you love me or Gene?" Naru asked her. Her heart stuttered to a stop and then shattered into a million pieces when his hurtful words registered in Mai's mind. Hot blinding rage took over her in mere seconds. She clenched her fists, pulled her arm back, then punched him straight in the jaw. He fell back on the ground because of the force behind it, force that a petite looking girl like Mai should not have had. "Listen to me and listen to me good." Mai said in a icy voice that commanded Naru's attention instantly. "You know nothing about how I feel. I knew that you and Gene were two different people from the first time he appeared to me. One that acts like a complete ass to everyone he meets and one that smiles so freely to a stranger cannot be the same person. I also knew that you weren't using your real name when you told me it. You still had a little accent when you talked to me at the schoolhouse when Lin was injured. I know a lot of things about you mister Oliver Davis," She spat his name like it was poison to her, "and you know absolutely nothing about me." Mai turned away from him and walked away. "Mai wait!" Naru called after her but she had already disappeared into thin air.
No one saw Mai after that. Bou-san, Ayako, and even Masako looked everywhere for her but she wasn't anywhere to be found. Mai had completely disappeared without any clues as to where she was going. Everyone blamed Naru for her disappearance, even though no one had any idea as to what happened between them, and he did nothing to tell them otherwise. Hell he blamed himself as well, going so far as to completely bury himself into his work and take more dangerous cases to try to escape the guilt of driving Mai away. After his third collapse from exhaustion Lin and Ayako threatened to send for his parents and Madoka to straighten him out if he didn't take it easier on himself. He relented a little bit, taking more time in between cases and actually going to sleep in his own bed rather than staying at the office overnight. He longed to see Mai again and apologize to her. Naru knew he had been out of line, he just did not want to be second choice from his brother yet again, and wanted to make it right. After all he loved the spunky brunette with all her quirks. Now he just wanted a chance to tell her…
Me: So whatcha guys think? I know it's short! The reason for Mai's randomness is because with many of the Naru/Mai stories I read I always got mad at how Naru treated her and her non-response so I let him have it. Please review and tell me what you think!
Naru: Why did you have Mai hit me?!
Me: Because she was closer to you than I was. *walks away*
Mai: Until next time! Unless Naru and Kat kill each other.
