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Chapter-5
A well dressed man appeared from the gate of the mohalla having a grace on his face and walking style looking really worried asked: Abhijeet
Abhijeet nodded
Pradyuman jee: Kahan h wo
Abhijeet: ander hai pehle se relaxed hai...
Pradyuman jee released a sigh of relief and started moving with Abhijeet while grumbling angrily: samajh me nahi aata kya krun is ladke ka...(lovingly)ek to h bhi itna pyara ki soorat dekh kr hi dil pighal jata hai...
Abhijeet smiled slowly
Pradyuman jee entered in the home looking the surroundings...says Daya apko keise...(Abhijeet was about to start) khair pehle ise hospital le jaata hu...he came near Daya who was sitting facing his back toward them...
Pradyuman jee slowly placed hand om his shoulder due to which Daya turned...
He angrily: aap...(moving back)mai nahin jaunga kahin bus...
Pradyuman jee strictly: pehle hi bohot preshan kr chuke ho tum mujhe aur mera dimag khrab mut kro smjhe(forwarding him strips of tablets after taking out it from his pocket)...lo ye dawaiyan khao...
Daya jerked his face to the other side...
Pradyuman jee again in a bit loud tone Dayaa...dekho ye jroori h tumhare lie...(sitting in front of him said painfully) jaante ho na tum...
Tears again made his way from latter's eyes who hide himself in the warmth of of his uncle...wo chale gaye uncle...mai kuch nahi kr paya...wo chale gaye...(now weeping)
Pradyuman jee pressed his eyes in order to stop his tears...he seperated Daya from him wipe his tears and forwarded tablets to him which Daya put in his mouth and looked toward Abhijeet who quickly forwarded water to him...
Pradyuman jee was looking toward Daya in amaze...
He hold him lovingly and lie him down while Abhijeet displaced the water glass till then...
Kya baat h ye mai kya dekh rha hun...humara Daya baccha dosti krne laga hai...
Daya slowly: Uncle usne mujhe bhai kaha...bina jaane bina pehchaane...Maaji aur Daddy bhi dekh parakh kr laaye the na mujhe...(sleepy tone) wo mujhe ghr bhi...ghr bhi laa..ya...(and he drifted into deep sleep)
Pradyuman jee sighed and dialed a call after pressing few buttons on his phone... haan Daya ko hospital shift kr do... so gaya h abi...
Hospital staff standing outside the home slowly came inside and shifted Daya in stretcher while listening to Pradyuman jee : doctors se kehna ki use behoshi me hi dekh len...check up k baad ghr le Jana use mai khud b wahin aa raha hun or baat b kr Leta hun...
Staff nodded and depart with Daya...
Pradyuman jee looked at Abhijeet who was already looking at him...
Pradyuman jee: Thank u so much Mr. Abhijeet aap ne buht madad ki...mai to buht preshan tha ki akhir kahan chala gaya ye ladka...
Abhijeet: Maafi chahunga uncle jee pr baat kuch smjh me nahi aayi... Daya kl raat se mere sath ya yun keh lijiye subh se hi...pr wo theek lag rha tha... matlab kuch ajeeb h wo... pr achaanak uska aisa behaviour...
Pradyuman jee avoiding haan wo thoda preshan hai...(sadly)uske pita ki achaanak maut Ho gyi teen din pehle... Daya unke paas b nhi tha... bus islie... (hurry) accha mai chlta hun...Daya k doctor se bhi milna hai...(shaking hand with him) apka buht shukriya mere bacche ka dhyan rkhne k lie...thanku so much... he settled his coat took Daya's belongings which Abhijeet gave to him including his wallet,cell phone and a strip of tablets...he was about to leave when Abhijeet stopped him... Uncle jee...
Pradyuman jee turned and asked jee kahiye
Abhijeet in hesitation: wo aap Daya ya apna number de sakte hain mujhe...
Pradyuman jee: haan pr koi khaas wajah...
Abhijeet (in embarrassing tone): wo darasal Daya ne kuch madad ki thi meri...kuch paise udhar die the... wo lautaane k lie aapse ya Daya se rubaru hona hoga...bus islie hi...
Pradyuman jee smiled and gave him Daya and his own number which he noted in his diary and after that Pradyuman jee left for hospital...
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Maine aapko Kitni baar smjhaya h Pradyuman jee ki Daya ki dose miss nhi honi chiye... apko pta h na...wo bachpan se hi kitna sensitive hai... uske oopr se uske sath ye problem... apko nahi pata wo kese apne aap ko sambhal rha hai...(strong) sambhalta aaya h aaj tk...buht mushkil hota h aise logon k lie ek normal insaan ki trh zindagi jeena...pr Daya ye kr rha hai...aap please use thoda to support kriye...
Pradyuman Jee: Mai khud chahta hun ki wo sahi rahe...pr wo meri nahi sunta hai... mera sath use wo satisfaction nahi deta h Doctor... Mai uske sath b rahun tb bhi...mai saamne rahun to Chup chap rehta hai...jitni baat krun utna jawab deta hai... wo mere uske sath hote hue bhi akela hi feel krta hai khud ko... (dejectedly folding his both hands in a fist and placing them on his head)kya krun muje khud bhi samajh nhi aata...
Doctor come near him and placed hand on his shoulder... I am sorry Uncle jee...
Pradyuman jee just nodded his head in assurance from his side having so much pain in his eyes...
Doc looking at his watch: chaliye Daya ko hosh aane wala hi hoga... uske sabhi tests kr lie hain...kl subh tk reports aa jayengi...
Pradyuman jee nodded and loved ahead followed by the Doctor...
Daya woke up and was looking much fresh and better...
Doctor came inside with a decent smile and asked: so young man.. kesa feel kr rhe ho ab...
Daya just smiled at him hiding his eyes from the stern gaze of his uncle...
Doctor sitting beside Daya says while holding his both the hands on which Daya bowed his more down...tumhe tumari condition ka pata h na...
Daya nodded while a dark shade covered his face...(Doctor added) lekin tum to buht bahadur ho na...(rubbing his back as he was sobbing now) tum to bachpan se ladte aye Ho na apni saari problems se...haan...
Daya look at Pradyuman and Doctor signalled him to move out... he nodded and move out of the room...
Doctor again initiated: Daya tum ab humara secret khol skte Ho...
Daya hugged him and started crying loudly...
Doctor wiped his moist eyes and keep rubbing Daya's back...Daya bus chup ab... aur nahi rona hai na... bus chup
Daya calmed himself down and separated himself from Doctor...
Doctor signalled him to speak up...
Wo chale gye Daa ... Daddy bhi chale gye... unhone buht buht yaad Kia mujhe...(explaining) pr mai to office mein tha na... (jerking his head) Daddy ki bhi to buri adat thi na bina bataye apne farmhouse Jane ki... wo akele tadapte rahe Daa... (lost tone) Mai kuch bhi nahi kr paya...chahe wo mujhe khareed k...
Dayaaaaa...
Daya stopped by warn tone of Pradyuman Jee who was just standing outside the room...
Daya loudly: to aur kya... laaye the mujhe khareed k apne faide k lie... (shouting)pyar dia kya kabi... Maaji k Jane k baad kyu pyar jaag gya...
Pradyuman jee look away... while Daya continued...kyuki wo bi mere aur Maaji jese akele ho gye the na...(looking at Doctor)pr Daa the to mere Daddy na... jab tk mai gaya na unke paas wo...wo... ch..ale gye the... Maaji ne kaha tha... khayal rkhna Daddy ka... Mai kisi ko bi nahi bacha pata Daa...
Doc just keep rubbing his back and lay him down as he had became a bit drowsy during the whole so Doctor injected him and soon he drift into deep sleep...
Tears rolled down from the eyes of the old man who sit near Daya caressing his hairs while Doctor come near him patting his back...nahi uncle jee please aap shant ho jaiye...please
Pradyuman jee while wiping his eyes...buht galat kia Raghu ne is bacche k sath...zindagi bhr ka Dard de dia h ise...pata nahi kabi ye is Dard se ubhar bhi payega ya nahi...(telling to the doctor)dekha na apne mere samne apni dil ki baat bhi aapse share nahi krta...aur aap kehte hain mai uske saath rahu...mai uske sath hokr bhi uska sath nahi de paata...bus ganeemat itni h ki meri baat maan leta hai...thoda buht sun leta hai...pr apne ird gird isne jo diwar bana li hai usme kisi k bhi jaane k lie koi jagah nahi hai...
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Abhijeet on landline: Jagat tum kl jahan naukri k lie keh rhe the...mai tayyar hun yaar...
Abhijeet yaar soch le maine pehle bhi btaya tha ye job tere layak nahi hai...
Abhijeet in sad smile: filhaal to koi naukri mere layak nahi h yaar...tu please aaj hi baat kr lena apne maalik se...muje jald se jald ye job chiye...
Jagat: theek h Abhijeet fikr mut kr yaar...mai aaj hi baat krta hun...
Abhijeet: hmmmm theek hai...accha sun Jagat...tere paas koi do hazaar rupay honge kya...
Jagat: haan hain to kyun...
Abhijeet: ek mahine ka udhar dega kya...kisi ko urgent lautane hn...
Jagat: haan theek h Abhijeet aaj sham aata hun tere ghr...apne hath ki badhiya si chai pila dena...done naa...
Abhijeet in smile: 100%
Both bid bye to each other and Abhijeet heaved a relieved sigh...he hand over RS.10 to the PCO wala moved on...
First he went to ATM,draw a mini statement and checked his balance...reading the balance as RS.4203/- he bite his lips...teen hazar nikal leta hun...gullak me paanch sau to honge hi...baaki aaj Jagat de dega...(confirming) haan ye theek rahega...
He withdraw the decided amount and made his way towards his home...
First he opened his trunk,took out his piggy bank out of it and started counting so many coins,degraded notes of 10 rupees/20 rupees even of 2 rupees too...he was smiling throughout after counting his only treasure...ye to bus do sau hain(200/-)...he again searched his baksa and took out a small but heavy potli...he opened and some big notes came out of it...he counted and took a sigh of relief...he took out three hundred out of them and recounted the remaining...Hmmm...Barah Sau(1200/-) bache hn...Maa ko is baar kum bhej dunga...(convincing himself)keh dunga na ki (sad smile)Jagat ko udhar dia hai...he bow down his head and murmurs sorry Baba...apka beta ab jhoot bolna seekh gaya hai...aap waqt se pehle muje chod k jo chale gye...apka bete ko khud hi chlna pada...aur baba aap glt kehte the...is duniya me hunar se jada paise ki kadr h...pyar se jada daulat ka sikka hai...(smiled) ab apka Abhi sach me bada ho gya...
Baba Baba ye dekhiye maine kya bnaya
Taking the small innocent soul in his lap...ale mele bete ne kya bnaya h dekhun to
The little soul presented a small drawing in front of him who look at his baby lovingly...and says aur ye kyu bnaya h mere bete ne...(asking)kiske lie bnaya hai...
The little boy looks down and slowly one precious drop fall down on his cheeks
Father asked in tention: kya hua mera baccha
The little soul confessed after rubbing his nose: Baba wo kl jab mai khelne gya tha to Rahul na out ho gya tha...wo keh rha tha ki wo out nahin hai... mai to (proudly) captain hun na...sabne mujhse poocha ki sach btana hai Rahul out hai ya nahin...(crying tone) mai kya krta Baba...maine sach bola...par...(few more tears escaped from his eyes) Rahul na buht jada saara naraz ho gaya mujhse...(crossing his small finger of one hand to other hand's small finger)mitthi bhi nahi kr raha...aur aaj school me bhi baat nahi kari...islie maine ye bnaya hai...(in tention) baba wo maan to jayega na ab...
Father in smile looked at the drawing consisting two boys standing together holding each others hand where his son has coloured the clothes of one boy in the same color which he was wearing that time followed by a SORRY written beautifully in different colors spreading a broad smile on his face...
Mera beta to ab big boy ho gya hai...apne dost ko bachane k lie bhi jhoot nahi bolta...(wiping sweat from his forehead)...buht samjhdar beta h mera...itne pyar se bnaya h Abhi ne to... Rahul jroor maan jayega
The kid smiled and quickly jumped from his fathers lap and ran with: Mai abi ye Rahul ko de kr ata hu Baba
Abhijeet was smiling and says painfully: ab apka beta khud ko bachane k lie jhoot bolta h Baba...kya krun Maa seh nahi paigi na...(looking at himself)uske bete ka ye haal...
Hmmmm...To kesa raha...
Jaroor bataiyega...
Milte hain is kahani k agle episode mein...
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