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Chapter-6


After getting apt confirmation from Jagat Abhijeet started his new job which was of a delivery boy in a mediocre street restaurant... Jagat was also working their as cashier...

Abhijeet after sorting all the orders of similar locality fill up his delivery box of bike with the packed food and was about to move when heard a voice from his back as Abhijeet ye menu cards bhi lekr jaa...order k sath dete aana...

OK sir...he grabbed those menu cards,sat on his bike and moved on while humming sweetly...

Ik raasta hai jindagi

Jo tham gye to kuch nahi

Ik raasta hai jindagi

Jo tham gye to kuch nahi

Ye kadam kisi makaam pe

Jo jam gye to kuch nahi

Ik raasta hai jindagi...

Abhijeet parked his bike after identifying the first address and instantly pressed the bell...

Kaun hai...

Abhijeet slapped himself in mind as he was unable to give instant reply due to confusion in the name of restaurant so he peep inside the packet glance at menu card and replied *Khana Khazana*...order hai...

Door got opened and an angry woman came out... itna late kr Dia lane me bhaiya...nahi mtlb abi aapko bol do ki free me dekr jao... doge kya tum... nahin na...

Abhijeet was looking at him bewilderedly...as how he can give the order in free... he opened his mouth to say something but close it next minute getting no words to speak in front of the angry bhartiya naari...a small smile crept in his lips on his thought...

Lady again came in anger seeing him smiling...aye bhaiya ab hus kyu rahe Ho... (suspiciously) chor uchakke to nahi Ho... (seeing him from head to toe)...lagte to nahi... (snatching the packet) lao idhr do... kitna hua... Abhijeet took out his bill receipt and after checking the order number he said 200 rupay... and he teared first copy from the receipt book, hand it over to the lady who after checking it keenly comparing it with the food...paid the bill...either Abhijeet tried hard to hand over her menu card but she threw it declaring bekar Khana hai tumhare yahan ka... (explaining) wo to paas h to manga Lia... muje nahi chiye ye khane ka bahikhata...tum hi rakkho...and she closed the door on his face...

Here on the other pole of this city a person was struggling hard with the doctor...

Dekho Daa mai ab aur yahan nahi reh skta... (irritatingly)bola to (stressing) khyl rkkhunga apna...time pr dawaiyan lunga(carelessly) uncle ki sab baat manunga...bus ab theek h na...

Doctor: nahin abi theek nahin hai...

Daya looked at him angrily but seeing the angry face of the Doc he moved his head down...

Doctor smiled secretly seeing him...

He sat beside him holding his both the hands in his hand...Dayaa...(softly) dekho meri trf...

Daya looked at him stubbornly...Doctor in smile said ab tumhare ghr me koi nahi hai...he took a pause seeing pain covering the latter's face...

He again initiated after placing one hand on his shoulder... Tumhe buht himmat se kaam Lena hoga...tumhe milaya tha na maine Aarush se...

Daya nodded his head in yes...

Hmmmm to usme or Daya me kitna age difference hai...

Daya said in shy: 11 years...pr (looking at the tease shade of Doctor) haan haan yaad hai mujhe...wo apne dar ko overcome kr leta hai...aur merre jeise rota bhi nahi hai...(connecting) aur mai to kitna sharp hu...intelligent hun...office ab..(shambling words) A..b Daddy ki jagah...(sad tone) Daddy k bina sambhalna hoga...(determined) mai kr lunga Daa...(asking) aap sunday sunday to aaoge na mujhse milne...

Doctor nodded his head in yes...While Daya again: kabi kabi free time me phone b kar hi lena...(Doc smiled and Daya asked again) Uncle rahenge na mere sath...raat ko

Doctor nodded his head in yes...and said maine Uncle jee se kaha hai guard ko aur Munshi kaka ko rejoin kra den...(seeing displease on his face)Daya kisi bi jroorat k lie risk nhi le skte naa...

Daya nodded understandably...

Doctor in jolly tone wese suna hai...(tease) jiske yahan tum ruke hue the us se khasi dosti hogyi thi...

Daya nodded in smile...haan na Daa...wo buht accha hai...mujhe(low tone) bhai bhi kaha...ghar bhi laya...pr (laughing) usne ek baar mujhe chor bhi smajh lia...(smilingly) accha hai wo Daa...

Doctor smiled and asked mujhse bhi acha...

Daya hugging him: aapse thoda kum accha h Abhijeet...

Doctor looked at him and asked: kya naam hai uska...

Daya seperating: Abhijeet Daa...Accha ab mai discharge na...

Doctor nodded his head in yes and Daya stood up instantly collecting his belongings leaving Doctor in trance and his own dreamy world...

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Are Abhijeet chal niklte hain...sham Ho gyi hai...

Abhijeet cleaning his delivery box: haan yaar bus ek minute...he locked his bike on its parking place locked the delivery box and leave with Jagat...

Jagat: aur kesa laga aaj ka din

Abhijeet:pet bharne k lie jitne peise chiye wo mil hi jayenge is mahine...us hisaab se dekha jaye to aaj ka din buht accha tha... Kum se Kum thakaan k chalte hi(smiling) raat ko neend to ayegi naa...

Jagat looked at his friend sadly and said: yaar Abhijeet tu itna socha mut kr...dekhna ek din jroor sab theek Ho jaiga...(showing him pao bhaji stall) chal na pao khate hn...

Abhijeet: are nahi na Jagat ghr jakr Abi Khana banana hai...looking at the watch 8 bj rahe hain chal na ghr chalte hain...

Jagat making annoyed face: tu na buht boring hai...

Abhijeet made an O face...mai boring... kyu bhala

Jagat: to aur nahi to kya kabi bahar ka khana khata hi nahi kuch...

Abhijeet smiled on his silly antics and says: to bahar ka khana koi acchi baat thode hai...pet dekh apna islie hi abi 23-24 ki umar mein itna bahar aa gya hai...40 ki umar tak to (dramatically joining hands) bhagwan hi malik hai...

Jagat stood in front of him,joined his hands bow his head down and says salam h Baba Abhijeet Nand ko...buht hi badiya pravachan dete hain...(sadly) par kisi kaam ka nahin...

Abhijeet looked at him in fake anger and said: abeee...and he pushed him lightly resulting a small laughter session among them and rest of the journery spending in silence as Jagat was driving the bike anD Abhijeet was lost in a beautiful memory lane...

Chalo Na Abhijeet

Bola na Nahin(tease) janab ko baat samajh nahi aa rahi h

Aa rahi hai...pr tumhe nahi aa rahi hai...mai kabse bol rha hun chalo...(getting angry) ek to itne din baad milte ho tum...(eyes getting teary) aur mai ek cheez mangta hun wo bhi nahi dete

Abhijeet realising his friend's sad tone: to tujhe ye Maa k hath ka bana khana raas nahi aa raha kya(grumbling under his teeths) ye sahab ko doctor ban na hai...patients ko kya advice kroge...jam k golgappe khayein...pet bhr k chaat chat kr jayein...aur meethe ko to chodna hi nahi hai...waah waah kya doctree hai...(looking at the sky)aise doctor se to bhagwan bachaye

His friend got angry on this and hit him a punch: Abhijeet tu chalta hai ya mai wapas Dehradun jaun

Abhijeet carelessly: shauk se...(searching here and their) Maa ne jo laddoo bnayein hain wo mai fridge me...he stopped as his friend leapt over him in order to took that sweet box first while Abhijeet keep shouting as hut jaa muj pr se(warn tone)Rahul...abe hut jaa...nahi le rha tera mithai ka dabba...bhukkad...

Rahul laughing loudly taking him in his lap ab to Abhijeet ko chalna hi parega...and he run taking him outside on his shoulders where Abhijeet hitting him madly and laughing at last seeing his friend's pagalpan for roaming in the galli's of Allahabad eating so much tikki-chaat...

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Daya aaj office nahi jana tha na tumne...(tiredly)beta kabhi to meri koi baat suna kro...hospital se to jaldi discharge le lia tumne...ghr bi nhi ruke...aur ab raat k 10 bj rhe hain...(strict)kahan ho tum...

Daya in low tone: mai ek dost k yahan ruka hun uncle...raaste me mil gya tha na...ghr le aaya...

Pradyuman jee: accha...and he cuts the call at that very instant...

Daya keep looking at the phone heaved a sigh and sat on the cold sand spread all over while touching his feets to the waves which was giving so much sooth to him...

He lay down at the same place looking at the stars...he reminds something and started counting those stars with small smile...

Aasman mein sau(100) taare hain

Nahin Daa...99 hain

Are maine khud gina tha kl poore sau hain

Soon someone hold the little boy from his back while his Daa smiled broad with a scream Pradyuman Uncle

Little boy turned and hugs the man,although start complaining Uncle itne din baad aaye aap btaiye...Daya ne to kitna saara wait Kia...

Ohooo Daya ne buht Sara wait Kia...hmmmm kya kren Uncle ko buht sara kaam tha...aur fir Daya ko surprise bhi to krna tha na

Daya: hmmmmm chaliye maaf Kia... accha uncle batayein aasman me kitne taare hain...Daa keh rahe hain ki 100 hain pr nahi na Uncle ek moon bhi to hai to 99 taare or ek chanda...(giving victory smile) haan na uncle...

Both Daa and uncle looked at him with open mouth and soon both bursts one in angry murmur as he lost the conversation and other in laughter thinking that these small kids knows the maximum number of counting as 100 so decided the number of stars to be 100 too and what Daya has done was just mind-blowing(wink)... where Daya seems to be asking continuously dekha sahi kaha na uncle...(looking at the other boy)dekha Daa

One person driving car at late night and was trying to reach toward his son where his mind was completely occupied with past flashes...

Samajh me nahi aa raha hai Pradyuman Mai kya krun Jahnvi ki haalat din pr din bigardti ja rahi hai...doctors ne bola hai ki waqt dun mai use... kahan se laun waqt yaar tu to janta hai na...itne kaam sr pr rakh lie hain maine ki chah kr bhi in se door nahi jaa sakta...

Pradyuman: Raghu Jhanvi se shadi krte waqt bhi tujhe apne aane wale future k baare me acche se pata tha...pr tune uske sath saat phere lekr humesha sath rehne ka waada kia tha...mai humesha kehta raha apni family ko waqt de...akelapan buht khatarnak hota hai Raghu...ya to insaan usme jeena seekh leta hai ya jeena chor deta hai...Jhanvi ne jeena hi chod dia hai Raghu...ab to sambhal ja...ab to apni gltiyon ko sudhar

Raghu(Raghuvendr Shetty): kr to raha hun mai Pradyuman...yaar tu ek baar haan kr de...(in pain) mai Jhanvi ko nahi kho skta yaar...tu please us bacche ko

Pradyuman in anger: o shut up Raghu...bachpan se janta hu mai tujhe...tune kabi apne parivar ko apne kaam k aage apni success k aage waqt nahi dia...aur ab ye chahta hai ki ek anaath baccha jiska pehle se hi sb kuch bikhar chuka hai mai uski zindagi teri wajh se barbaad hota dekhun...(strong)no never...tere apne bacche ki maut ho gyi Jhanvi ki kokh me...kitne sapne sajaye te us ladki ne apne pehle bacche ko lekr pr tune to uske dukh me bi sath nahi dia apni biwi ka...aur tu chahta hai mai teri is wahiyat khwahish me tera sath dunga...kabi nahi dont even expect...he turned and saw his friend sitting on his knees in tears folding hands in front of him asking for his small help to save the life of his beloved wife...

Car stopped with a jerk leaving the mam inside the car in complete sweat...who slowly wiped his face and murmurs in dreamy tone: kaash us din maine teri baat na maani hoti (in complete pain)kaash...


To keisa raha...

kuch mysteries unfold huin...yaaa confusion increased...*wink*

Milte hain kahani k agle episode mein...

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