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Doctor wo abi abi kisika landline pr phone aaya tha...They were saying that Pradyuman sir is met with an accident...
Doctor: whattt...my god...sister please aap concerned doctor se immediate basis pr sare arrangements karwaiye...mai wahin reception pr aa rha hun...
After disconnecting the call he hardly placed the receiver and dialed a number after removing his cell phone from his pocket...
Switch off...(pressing his teeths)fir gayab hoga ye ghar se...samajh me nahi aata kya kru is ladke ka...(dialing a number on his phone) itna smjha k bheja fir bhi wahi (murmuring under his teeths while moving out from his cabin and attaching the phone on his ears)...
Call got attended after two three bells...
Munshi Kaka Daya kahan hai...
Kaun...
Mai Doct...
Haan beta...Daya baba to ghr pr nahi hain...Sahab unhi ko lene gye the...
Doctor took a painful sigh and says: theek hai Kaka Daya aaye to kahiyega mujhse baat kare...buht jada jroori kaam hai...
Munshi Kaka: theek hai beta...mai jroor bata dunga unhe...
After reaching toward the reception he straight made his way toward the receptionist...sister aapne sari arrangements krwa di hai na...
Jee Doctor...(signalling toward the entrance) stretcher bi ready hai...
Doctor nodding his head move toward the entrance and freeze at his place...
Clearing the crowd Hutiye please jaldi hutiye...dekiye buht khoon beh rha hai inhe aap log...
Soon ward boys joined them and helped them to lay down the injured person on the stretcher...Abhijeet keep pressing the hankerchief on his forehead whereas Jagat moved inside in search of the doctor...
He saw one standing in freeze posture just at the entrance...he called: Doctor...
Noticing no movement in the latter he again tried a little loud : Doctor...
The man jerked and looked with lost gaze toward the caller...
Doctor wo Pradyuman jee...
(Coming out from the trance)Ha..Haan...Pradyuman uncle...turning his face toward the sister...Doctor Prabhas kahan hain...
Sister: Wo bus aa rahe hain...(signalling to Jagat)in logon ko late hua aane me to wo ek patient ki reading krne chale gye the...
Okay...and as he turned he become shocked after seeing one pair of eyes looking at him in disbelief...
A low sound escaped from his mouth: Rahul
Doctor just ignored him completely after giving a teasing glance moved behind the stretcher leaving behind the stunned man looking at him with fixed gaze...
Ye...yahan...kab ye to Dehradun mein...
Mujhe btaya tak nahin...
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Kya hua Abhijeet
Jagat ye...(signalling toward the person moving away)ye Rahul...ye Mumbai...
Jagat in confusion: kya bol raha hai Abhijeet...kya ho gya...(tired tone) chal na yaar ab chalte hain...yahan ye log...
Sister speak in mid after listening their conversation...sorry pr please aap log abi mut jaiye...accident case hai...kuch hospital formalities poori krni hongi...please aap log...
Abhijeet nodding and says: Jagat tu nikal...mai kl seedha restaurant me milta hun theek hai...
Jagat: nahi yaar koi nahi sath mein..
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Abhijeet: maine kaha na...tu jaa(pleading tone)please
Jagat was confused on his behaviour but doesn't want to drag the issue so silently left after giving bike keys to Abhijeet...tu bike se aa jana...buht raat ho gyi hai...mai auto se nikl jaata hu...ok
Abhijeet nodded to him and after bidding bye instantly moved to the reception...ye jo Doctor abi gye hn...ye kahan hote hain...
Receptionist: wese to ye room no.22 me hote hain first floor doctors wing...pr abi to emergency ward me honge...Pradyuman sir k saath...
Abhijeet hurridely: kahan pr h emergency ward
Receptionist: yahan se straight and then left...first room hai
Abhijeet nodded and moved toward that area...
Suniye Mr...
Abhijeet
Receptionist nodding her head:Jee Mr. Abhijeet aap please pehle humari formalities complete kr lijiye...fir aap...(seeing Abhijeet displeased face)dekiye duty hours change ho jayenge to mushkil hogi...please cooperate...
Abhijeet nodded in yes and sister start giving him papers with a satisfied smile..
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Here Daya back at home at around 12'o' clock...he pressed the door bell which soon get opened by a tense figure...
Daya baba aap kahan chale gye the...(looking behind him)are sahab kahan hain...
Daya in confusion: sahab...(realising) Pradyuman Uncle...pr wo...wo to nahin hn mere sath...
Munshi Kaka: pr Daya baba wo to aapko hi lene gye hn do ghante ho gye unhe gye hue...
Daya: Whatt...are pr muje to nahi mile wo...kahan jaa skte hain uncle...(he was lost in his thoughts when heard more)
Doctor saheb ka bhi phone aaya tha bol rahe the ki aap jese hi ayein main apko unse baat krne ka kahun...
Daya: Daa ka itni raat gye...theek hai Munshi Kaka mai krta hun Daa ko call...
Daya removed his cell phone...the battery was dead so he moved toward the landline,grabbed a telephone diary from the drawyer...
He first searched for P alphabet from the side of the diary and dialed the number after reading as Pradyuman Uncle...
The call get attended after three bells...
Uncle aap kahan hain...Mera phone band ho gya tha uncle...(guilt tone)aap please jaldi se ghar...
A soft call of his name stopped him in mid: Daya
Number to sahi lagaya tha...kaun bol rahe hain aap...Pradyuman Uncle...
Wo Hospital mein hain...Mai Abhijeet bol raha hun...
Daya loud shocked tone: Hospital...aur Abhijeet tum wahi Abhijeet...
Abhijeet: haan mai wahi Abhijeet hun...Uncle jee ka accident ho gaya tha...maine tumhe phone try kia pr tumhara phone band tha...tum jaldi se city hosp...
He stopped feeling no response comimg from the other side...
Daya...you Okay...(loud tone) Dayaa...tum sun rahe ho mujhe...Dayaaa...the cell phone got snatched by a hand and Abhijeet looked at the snatcher in shock whereas a low scream hey came out from his mouth due to that sudden snatch but he completely shuts after seeing the face...
Dayaa...bacche kuch nahin hua Uncle ko...Mai Rahul...mai hu yahan uncle k sath...Daya...bacche...(insisting)kuch to bol...
Rahul heard low gasps from the other side which increase his tension bar while he really passed an angry look to Abhijeet who was looking at him like a statue having a beating heart only as his eyes were stopped,lips were slight opened due to shock and confusion while eye brows are little up from their original position whereas the neck was a bit tilted...
Dayaa...bacche shant...accha sun aas paas koi chair ho to baith jaa pehle...chal shabaash...take deep breaths...(getting no response again he tried in a loud tone) Dayaaa...please...
Soon he heard a low tone coming from distance as Daya baba khana khaa len
Daya...Munshi kaka ko phone de...Daya please try once...Dayaaa
Mu...n..shii...Kaaka...(Daya tried with his full strength and succeeded) Kaaakaaaa...
Munshi Kaka almost run toward him seeing him dipped in his own sweat taking deep breathes...
Daya baba aap aap aiye...(taking him toward the couch)aap baithiye yahan...
Daya just followed him like a dumb while his sinus was still irregular...
Munshi Kaka looked at the receiver still hanging down from the shelf...he moved toward it and attached on his ear...
Hello...kaun
Munshi Kaka mai Rahul
Doctor Sahib...(in tention) Doc sahib ye Daya baba...
Rahul: haan wo darasal uncle ka accident ho gya hai...maine us waqt bataya nahi aapko...aap preshan ho jaate...yahi soch kr...abi(glaring at Abhijeet who is totally engaged in listening the convo either confused at that time to time glare)Daya ko pata chal gaya...islie wo aise...aap use shant kraiye...mai khud dekne aata hu use abi...
Munshi Kaka just nodded and placed the receiver on the clip while Rahul also disconnects the call and barged over Abhijeet...
Tumhari problem kya hai haan...har time pr har kaam ki jaldi kyu rehti hai...
Kya jroorat thi Daya ko ye sab batane ki...aur jaante keise ho tum Daya ko...oh accha accha...kahin tum wahi Abhijeet to nahi ho na jiske ghr pr Daya ruka hua tha...(complete teasing tone) kyu bhai ehsaan karne ka bada shauk hai lene mein kyu saans rukti hai...Aur wo bi jab ehsaan (low painful tone) koi apna kare...
Rahul tu...
Doctor Rahul...Senior Psychatrist...(strong)call with respect...
Abhijeet in same tease tone: Jee Doctor Rahul...aur respect se bolunga keise...mujhe kaun si hawa lagne di janab e ki doctor bn gaye hain...aur to aur Mumbai bhi shift ho gaye hain...
Rahul: tumhe btane se faida kon sa hone wala tha...tumhe matlab kya hai mujhse...mai hun hi kaun tumhara...bus (stressing) ek dost...
Abhijeet in anger: Rahul
Rahul: Bola na Doc. Rahul(loudly in rash) samajh me nahi aa raha kya...
They stopped after hearing strict tone of a elder aged nurse
Aap log kya kar rahe hain...emergency ward k bahar itna shor...(turning toward Rahul) Aap Doctor...
Rahul: sorry sister...(embarassed tone)really
Abhijeet hide his smile with difficulty while Rahul passes a ready to eat look to him...
After nurse departure...Abhijeet started: maine to pehle hi warn kia tha...
Rahul after passing him a burning glance started moving away toward the entrance of hospital followed by Abhijeet as till than he had completed all the formalities...
Rahul after coming out from the hospital stopped at a corner and smiled broadly after gasping so much air while tears also come up in his eyes...he was so much happy seeing Abhijeet after a long span of time...oh damn yes he is in front of his eyes his all time best buddy...whom he missed a lot...he is in front of his eyes...he want to dance/cry/laugh and what not...
A soft pressure on his shoulder took him out from the trance...yes till today he can recognize that touch...after 4 long years...he wiped his face and covered it with mask of anger...he turned but his breathes stopped in his wind pipe as the figure leapt and hugged him tightly not giving him any chance to escape/jerk or push that man...he was standing like a statue not hugging him back but also not want to be left by him any how...while Abhijeet was silently shedding so many tears...the moments he missed his friend badly in the struggling life of Mumbai...the tears of guilt of making his friend that much angry that he totally cut him off from his life...yes him without talking to whom once he can't live...both enjoyed the movement of sooth one with overwhelmed emotions and one composing himself to make himself strong enough for coming days...
Abhijeet leave him softly and wipe the eyes of the shivering figure totally silent at that time...
Chalo Daya ko dekhne nahin jana...
Rahul stubbornly: Mai akele jaunga
Abhijeet in complete tease either still rubbing his back: to maine kab kaha baraat lekr jao...
Rahul looked at him angrily and just moved toward his bike stamping his foots on the ground but internally trying to relax his emotions as he was happy and angry at the same time but after seeing Abhijeet he just don't want to be angry with him...
Rahul release the stand of the bike and was about to sit when one hand came in front of his face demanding the key...
Rahul again passed a burning glance ignored by Abhijeet who quickly put hand in his pocket and removed the key...
Abhijeet tum...but he shuts with a fiery glare followed by an angry taunt...is thithurte(shivering) hue shareer se bike chalaoge na to kal hi pohnchoge...hunh aya bada pagalo ka doctor khud hi pagal hai...
Rahul now coming in the ring: Haan tabhi tumse dosti ki hai...
Abhijeet looked at him in anger but soon a cute smile crept on his lips as he ignited the bike...
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Bus Abhijeet yahan se left...saamne hi ghar hai...
Abhijeet took the left turn and soon they are in front of a big bungalow...
Daa...aapne itni der laga di...(gasping hard)aap...Pradyuman Uncle ...he shuts receiving an angry look from his Daa while Abhijeet was confused with this DAA...
Rahul looked him for once and went inside with harsh steps while Daya just followed him in head down mode...
Abhijeet squeezed him on the way while comforting too...Daya...kya hua...uncle theek hain...main khud unhe hospital le gaya tha...jada chote nahi aayi hain...
Daya looked at him with hope whereas Abhijeet assured him with eyes...
He again bow down his head and stood in hall where Rahul was already busy with First Aid box...
Abhijeet was totally out from the scenario so he just keep silent analysing the actions of all...
Lo beta...paani pee lo...
Abhijeet thanked to the man in his late 60's and gulped down the water looking at Rahul side by side who was in real anger...
Ye lo dawaiyaan khao...
Daa...Uncle
Dayaa...jo keh raha hun wo karo...
Daya gulped down his medicines after taking water from the hands of Munshi Kaka...
Rahul: chalo ab apne room me jaak...
Cut in mid by Daya in a loud tone: Daa aapne kaha tha aap uncle ke paas le jayenge...
Rahul nearly shouted at him: kyu jana hai unke paas...nahi kya jaroorat kya hai...kitna(frustrated)kitna samjhaya tumhe maine ki khayal rakkho apna...wo bichare 24 ghante tumhare aage peeche tumhari chinta ki tokri lie phirte rehte hain...tumhe kuch padi hi nahin hai unki...unki kya tumhe kisi ki bhi nahi padi...
Abhijeet was so shocked on this sudden outburst as Daya was weeping now so he steps quickly toward him scolding Rahul...Rahul ye kis tarah se baat kr rahe ho tum is se...dekh nahi rahe wo weise hi kitna preshan hai(reminding his condition when he first time meet with him)he sit near Daya and started rubbing his back while saying some consoling lines as...Daya tum please ro mut...ye doctors na(chuckled) aise hi hote hain...(in between his hand touched with that of Daya)...are tumhe to phir se bukhaar hai...
Rahul cutting him angrily: to aur kya hoga...janab ko iske siwa aur aata kya hai...bus apni manmaani karo aur kuch ho jaaye to bukhar chara lo,tabiyat kharab kar lo...iske siwa aata...
Rahul stop it yaar...
YOU MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS ABHIJEET...jab tum kuch jaante nahi ho to kyun beech...he stopped as feeling hurt covering his buddy's face so turned his face and left the place after realising his words...
Abhijeet felt insult but he can't ignore Daya who was sitting just beside him weeping silently after holding his palm in his tight grip...
He separate Daya's palm with him and says in smile: shant ho jao Daya...mai keh raha hun na sab theek hai...please shant ho jao...mai (signalling outside the main door)yahin bahar hun okay...
Daya looked at him with worried eyes but Abhijeet got up and started leaving but stopped at door due to a tight grip on his shoulders...
TERA MUJHSE HAI PEHLE KA NAATA KOI...
YUNHI NAHI DIL LUBHATA KOI...
He turned and Daya soon hide himself behind him...Abhijeet looked at him in confusion who murmured slowly Abhijeet Daa ko kaho na injection nahin dein
Abhijeet tuned and saw Rahul standing in shock having syringe in his hand whereas Daya added in teary tone...Uncle se milne jaane dein...please Abhijeet Daa ko bol do na...
TERA MUJHSE HAI PEHLE KA NAATA KOI...
YUNHI NAHI DIL LUBHATA KOI...
Rahul realising the situation signalled Abhijeet to took Daya in his bed room...
JAANE TU YA JAANE NAAA...
Abhijeet nodded slightly and says in strict tone Rahul Daya ko injection nahi do...grabbing icy cold hands of Daya who was passing a teary smile to Abhijeet, took Daya inside with slow steps while Rahul was seeing both of them in wonder!
MAANE TU YAA MAANE NAAAA...!
To kesi Rahi...
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Guest: Thanks a lot that you find it interesting...dekiye dear long update karna to mushkil hai mere lie...as I get very less time fir bhi mai try karti hu ki maximum 2000-2500 words tak ka chappy ho jaaye...is se long...:(...mushkil hai mere lie dear hope you understand...keep reading :)
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AD Fan: very happy that you find the Flashback nice...glad that you like the mother and Daya sir meeting...ooo...haan dear actually scene ki demand me abi duo nahin aaye the naa...rest to whole story will be duo...bus thoda wait haann...thanks a lot:)
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luvcidduodosti: glad that you liked the whole flashback...aapko cute laga...chalo ye to buht hi accha hai...hmmmm Acp sir ka accident hua so bad naaa...mujhe bi buht bura laga ye dekh kar :D :D...keep reading...thanks a lot :)
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Priya: thanku so much dear...ab to aap happy naa...apko apka next chapter bhi mil gaya...keep reading dear :)
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JS Abhi: glad that you like it dear...writer happy to get so much praise...thanks a lot...keep reading :)For ajnabee...I can't promise but will try for sure...thanks dear :)
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Abhigyaan: are baap re...itna saara praise...this chotu writer is really happy with this...glad that you are liking the story to this extent...keep reading dear...a bone crushing hug to you too :)
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Guest: thanku so much...and yes I tried to get stealed this chappy by Daya sir...thanks that you have stamped my success in it...keep reading dear :)
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Priyanka: thanks for the detailed review dear...means a lot to me...please review like this only...give so much strength to this writer...glad that you like most of the turns and ups downs...thanks a lot Pri(may i call you that?)...keep reading dear :)
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Shikha: to aapko pasand aaya...mysterygetting solved...o no...mujhe uljhana padega ab :D :D hehehehehe...*evil smile*...and yes destiny hi hai jo jinhein milna hota hai mila deti hai...thanks a lot shikhu...keep reading :)
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Dada: yeeeeeeeeeee...elder pallot is back to chotu malbosh...Dada bimar hain kyun...Dada ko kya ho gaya ek dum se hi...Malbosh really happy seeing Dada's individual reviews in all the three chappies...means world to me...as my favu Dadu is reviewing on baccha's story that too with full of praise/claps/appreciation...malbosh sitting on floor with legs hand flat mouth in mid of front hands...:))happy ki you are clear with the things...ohoooooo Dada ko DAA acche lag rahe hain...kya baat hai...cheater Dada apne same name wale Dada ko acche lag rahe hain... hehehhehe(kidding after all ur small baccha)hmmmm wo loophole reh gaya...wo cheez meko chappy me clr karni chiye thi ki ACP sir ne Daya sir ko kahan kahan dhoonda...chaliye maafi de dijiye:)aur bhagiye mut...pallot bimar hai...haan betu beta gussa to pr aap dheere chal k bhi ja sakte hain ;))oh Malbosh really feeling dancing on its toes...Dada not getting critical points...sach me kya Dadu...malbosh shant...abi garbar ho jayegi to Dada will come with seengs...(smile)hmmmm aapko lagta hai ye Rahul, Daa hai...chaliye dekhte hain...and Abhi related to someone...hmmm lets see...thank u so so so much Dadu...for your amazing FB as always...love you Daa...:))
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sifa: I will try for Ajnabee...not promising...thank u so much dear :)keep reading :)
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Geetu: koi nahi dear...but reviews are the strength of writer naa...happy that you like the development of relationship b/w duo...glad that you like the flashback dear...liked that you like the flashbacks...nice that you find Daya sir innocent and pure heart...lets see aage kya hota hai...keep reading :)thanks dear
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Abhi-ya-fan: buri hun main...un un un un un un un un...dekho dear...long chapters nahi likh sakti mai...time ka problem hai...but mainly 2000-2500 words kahr chappy likhne ki koshish karti hu mai...is se long mushkil hai but yes I'll try...cliff hanger me to mza aata hai betu beta ko...hehe ...thanks dear...keep reading :)
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BFF:HMMMM...boss...liked it dear...and happy that you like cute daya...ab Abhijeet Rahul se milega ya nahi ye to aage hi pata chalega...mujhe bhi hehehehe...take care dude...keep reading :)
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Duosun: no sorry dear thanks for reviewing in fact :) and here is the update too...keep reading :)
