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Chapter-18
Daya move toward his bro with small steps,sit near him and started rubbing his back with a low tone: Maaji preshan ho rahi hain na...dekho...
Abhijeet move his head up and look at his mother's face...her lips were not currently able to say anything but her eyes were shedding precious drops seeing her baby in such bad state and her pupils were dancing in the cavity of eyes due to the urge of comforting her child which she was not able to do now...
Abhijeet innocently look at Daya like asking what to do next who smoothly seperated Abhijeet's already loosen grip from the mother pulled him up and made him sit near the waist of the mother after making a little space...
Rahul smiled in tears seeing them and really thanked god for sending such a lovely person among them...
Here Vrinda jee settled a bit after seeing Abhi little relaxed who was slowly rubbing her head and caressing her hairs...
Here Daya went to next room and back with a nurse which he had appointed for giving proper medical aid to his MAAJI...
Vrinda jee smiled a bit seeing Rahul...
Rahul too moved near her join his hands together and nod his head once slowly showing a Namaste gesture to her which she accepted blinking her eyes and put her right hand with difficulty on his cheeks as he was now sitting on his knees near her bed...
Nurse: Excuse me...dekiye inki dawai ka waqt ho gaya hai...aap log please ab inhe aram krne dijiye...inke lie abi neend buht jroori hai...
Abhijeet stubbornly: nahi mai yahin Maa k paas rukunga...
Nurse strictly: wo preshan ho sakti hain..please aap bahr jaiye...
Abhijeet rash: wo meri Maa hain...aap kaun hoti hain mujhe seekhane wali...
Nurse really came in anger and was about to say something harshly when Daya intervened: Abhijeet hum thodi der me Maaji k paas aate hain...Nurse ko apna kaam krne do...
Sister please proceed...with this he hold Abhijeet's hand tightly and drag him out who was really angry on Daya but keep mum that time...
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Abhijeet was sittinb on the sofa with closed eyes in the guest room when Daya entered with chilled Roofhafza and crackers...
Rahul removed his shoes and place them on their place and sit opposite to Abhijeet after folding his sleeves...
Daya grab Rahul a glass and signalled him to offer it to Abhi too...
Rahul with a positive nod: Abhijeet...Aaaji...But he get no response from his side...
Daya really took a deep breathe and said in tease: sunayi nahi de raha ya ignore kr rahe ho...
Abhijeet with same closed eyes: yahan keise aaye...or ghr ka address(now opening his eyes) wo kahan se mila...
Daya with same teasing tone: ud k aaya hoon or ghar ka address raaste ke panchiyo(birds) se poocha hai...
Abhijeet harshly: seedha jawab nahi de skte...
Daya too in same tone: tum seedhe se koi baat nahi sun skte...kbse bula rahe hain Daa...
Abhijeet rash: nahi khana hai mujhe kuch na peena hai samjhe...seedha seedha btao keise aaye yahan...raste maloom the...subah se khaya piya hai kuch...nahi bus lage hue ho...kya jroorat thi...hum log aa rahe the na...tabyt khrb ho jati to...jaante ho na itna stress theek nahi tumhare lie...bus nikal pade akele...
Daya: to yahan kaun khayal rkhta Maaji ka...ek bhi to rishtedaar nahi jis se accha relation bana k rkkha ho tumne...sabpe to rob jhadte firte ho...train itni late ho gayi tum logon ki...yahan Maaji kiske sahare rehti(tease tone) Maaji se mera rishta unhone abi tk khtm nahi kia hai...jo mai unke paas na aaun...hum dono k beech na aao tum...jis din wo rishta khtm kr dengi mai...
Abhijeet warn tone: Dayaa...
Daya standing up in anger: haan haan saari ghalti meri hai...mujh pr hi chillao...(he moved inside a room and closed the door with a bang)...
Abhijeet in extreme rage: dekha Rahul tune dekha...
Rahul who was relaxly drinking his roohafza speak up after placing the empty glass on the tray: haan dekha...ek khoobsurat rishte ko janm lete hue dekha maine...
Abhijeet just keep silence and again sit back on the sofa throwing his head on the head rest...
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Rahul was really worried for Abhijeet as he was again pressing his head side by side but not in a mood to listen him as he already informed him to take medicine change his wears take a nap but Abhijeet was stubbornly waiting for his mother to wake up...
Daya came out after feeling a knock over the door...he know who was on the door so he opened it...
Daa...
Rahul placing hand on his cheek: theek hai tu...
Daya hugged him: Maaji ki halat buht khrab thi jab mai aaya...mujhe mujhe shivering hone lagi...
Rahul shocked: fir se
Daya: haan...pr mai sb medicines sath laya tha jaldi se kha li...kyuki Maaji ka khayal bhi to rkhna tha na...
Rahul while sitting on the bed: Or humse pehle keise pohncha...
Cyber jaake check kia ki Allahabad k paas koi hellypad hai ya nahi...wo Pradyuman Uncle aaj kl US me hain na...kuch govt aircrafts ki hi deal me part lene gaye hain...bus unhone wahan apne link se ek private chopper arrange krwa dia tha...yahan Abhijeet k ghar se 50km door ek chota sa gaon hai...gaon thoda height pr hai wahan pr ek chota da hellypad hai...kuch industrialists or politicians k lie reserve hai...bus wahan hi land kr k wahan se bus li or fir taxi...aap logon ki train late hote ja rhi thi...mujhe buht dr laga kahin Maaji ko kuch...(sadly) bichari akeli thin...yahan buht acche log hain Daa...sabne Maaji ko hospital pohnchaya pr wo buht dari huin thin...(lovingly)jab mai mila na unse...wo mujhe jhat se pehchan gayin...(looking at Rahul startled face)haan maine unhe kaha mai Mumbai se aya hoon bus unhone ne mera hath tham lia or chupke chupke rone lagin...(teary) Abhi ko yaad krke...Maine unhe btaya wo aa raha hai...bus fir wo relax ho gayin...(cutely)muje buht sara pyar bhi kia...Daa Abhi theek to hai na...dekiye na kitna gussa ho raha hai mujh pr...
Rahul: to tum bhi to barabar se lad rahe ho us se...
Daya: to mai to naraz hoon na...aur wo bina matlab gussa kr rha hai...
Rahul: wo aisa hi hai Daya...apni preshani ko gusse k neeche daba leta hai...dekh na kabse keh raha hoon ki change kr le dawai kha le sun hi nahi raha hai...
Daya: dawai keisi Daa...
Rahul: theek se to pata nahin pr shayd Migraine ka problem hai use...
Daya shocked
Rahul: bachpan mein ek baar school me jhagda ho gaya tha ek ladke se...us ladke ne Aaji ko achanak hi ek din tution k bahar gher lia...buht mara tha use...agle din Bade Baba(Daya look at him in confusion) Abhi k papa...(Daya nodded understandably while Rahul connecting the conversation) Baba ne shikayat ki thi uski school me... ladke ko restricate kia gaya par Abhi k sar pr buht gehri chot aayi thi...15 din lage the taanke khulne mein...waqt k sath ghaw bhar gaya tha pr dard kabhi kabhi uth jata tha...
Doctor ne kaha ki stress ki wajh se kabhi kabhi dard uth skta hai ise...
Jab preshani hoti thi tb ise dard uth jata tha...kl bhi taxi mein achanak dard hua tab janab ne bataya wo bhi aadha adhoora...(dissapointed tone) meri to sun nahi raha hai...tu keh na ek baar...
Daya: meri kon si sun lenge...unhe to bus apni chalani hai...mai kya kahun...
Rahul all hopes boiled up and he left the place with a dissapointed glance...
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Lo yahin baithe baithe so gaya...hunh sunta kb hai kisi ki...
He slowly move near his bro whose face was fallen on the head rest...
He shook him a bit whose sleep disturbed with that shake...
He look at the person and asked: kya hai...
Daya softly: jao hath muh dho kar aao...wiping his sweat from towel (as he was sleeping without switching on the fan even)...buht exhausted lg rahe ho...
Abhijeet look at his mother's room...
Daya: so rahin hain abi sham me uthengi...Sister ne injection dia hai...unke samne aise jaoge kya...
Abhijeet without a word or look move inside the washroom while Daya smiled...
Abhijeet back after wiping his face and was pressing his head side by side...
Daya handover him a glass of chilled nimbu pani which he took without any argument and again sit down on his previous place...
Daya sat down on floor near him and started removing his shoes...
Abhijeet: are kya kr rahe ho...
Daya signalled him to concentrate on lemon water and himself started opening the laces with murmurs: pehle sun lete to mai kyu krta ye sab kaam...pr nahi shaan jo ghat jaati tumhari...sun na to kabi hota hi nahin hai na tumhe...(pulling one shoe off and moving to other one) or ab jab mai chup chap apna kaam kr rha hoon tab b taang adani jroor hai...
Daya place his shoes and socks which Abhijeet pulled himself after showing his fiery eyes to Daya who stood away with grumpy face...
He again move forward and forcefully removed his coat too with an angry comment: itni gharmi me iski kya jroorat hai...utaro chalo...
Abhijeet was following all with silence as he was really enjoying his brother's care in this tense atmosphere and bad phase of life...his brother's scold was soothing his heart,he was feeling like somebody is humming a melodious lullaby in his ears in the shape of fingers of Daya which were now caressing his hairs as he was now lying on his bed on the order of his pal and soon his tired eyes closed drifting him into a sound sleep...
To keisi rahi...
btaiyega jroor...
Aab milte hain...kab milun hmmmm...Wednesday...😎theek...
Tab k lie kya wo haan Bye shye...see u soon aisa kuch..(squirrel ye tumhare lie)...aur baki sb k lue Sayonnaaraaa...have a happy day...and daysss...
