Three-Dog: Hello, Children, it is I, Three-Dog owwwww! And you're reading the story of the Commonwealth's Supa Soldiers!

Me: Thanks, Three-Dog. You can go back to the Capital Wasteland and do your radio show, now.

Three-Dog walks out of the building and tosses a Signal Grenade

Me: Hey, peeps, so glad you all like the story. I only have one review so far, but I won't get it get to me. I can't remember who wrote it, but you know who you are, and as for your question about Shaun being a cyborg, that will not be the case, but I will say that he will not be Father, nor a Synth copy of his ten year old self either. Also I got an idea from a DC animated movie called Flashpoint which is that if someone crosses universes they have broken the universal barrier resulting in a universal boom which will result in some changes to certain characters, and events. I do hope you enjoy the next chapter and as always read and review.

Chapter One: A Brave New World...er Hellscape

2277 AD, Vault 111

A bald scarred man wearing leather armor along with two people dressed in what appeared to be hazmat suits materialized inside the vault's Overseer's office and found a skeleton slumped over the desk in the middle of the room as if he, at least that's what the three living people thought his sex was when living, were sitting at the desk when he died or was killed, though they left it alone as they were on a mission, and that was to take the son of the Pre-War American general, Alexandre C. Oeder, who's name was Shaun, the bald one didn't really want to know why he had to kidnap an infant, but he really care what he had to do, so as long as he got paid. He had been like that ever since his own family was slaughtered by Raiders, back in the Hub, which was a part of the NCR, he also would have liked to work alone, but the old man had been insistent about it, but now he was starting to be thankful for the eggheads working under him. After walking around the corridors they finally got to the cryopods which housed the Oeder family, and their target, one of the eggheads got into the terminal and deactivated the cryosleep on the pods as the bald one and the second egghead walked down to pod C7 to get the kid hopefully without resistance, as the cueball didn't want to have to kill anyone, but he was willing to if he had to.

"This is the one, Mr. Kellogg," the egghead said to the cueball known as Kellogg who responded, "Open it and grab the kid so that we can get out of this icebox." The egghead did as Kellogg asked since she didn't want to risk earning Kellogg's murderous wrath, though she did have to admit that the woman in the pod was actually quite beautiful, but pushed it aside as she started to breathe heavily, due to suddenly coming out of cryostasis, and took a hold of Shaun, while Mrs. Oeder asked if the decontamination was over, that made the woman in the hazmat suit think that Vault-Tec lied to the 'residents' telling them that the pods were for decontamination rather than for cryostasis to get them inside for the experiment, those poor people, she thought, as she lied to Mrs. Oeder and telling her that it was almost over but that they needed to hold Shaun for her to help her walk and reorient herself without the risk of hurting her son. The lie worked, although they didn't know that Mrs. Oeder and she let them take Shaun, but instead of letting her out, Kellogg and his crew knocked Mrs. Oeder out and closed the pod she was in then sabotaged all the rest of the pods save for the general's as he was the backup. Before they left, though, Kellogg looked at the understandably pissed off man attempting to break out of his pod to get to his son, as Kellogg was about to taunt the general however the glass on the pod's window broke which scared the crap out of Kellogg, but luckily for the crew he was working with they managed to tranquilize the angry father, and repair the glass before reinstating the cryostasis.

2287 AD, Vault 111

Alexandre and Nora's pods activated the emergency safety features which released them from their pods leaving them gasping for air as Nora said through her breaths and teary eyes, as even though she knew that Shaun would get kidnapped, she was still a decent mother, "So, now what...do we do?"

"Why, Dear, we get out of here and go find that bastard, Kellogg, after we head home and go get my bag from Codsworth. I'm sure your brother Nick will want to get involved as well," Alex said in a comforting tone even though he was extremely pissed off as the husband and wife duo got up and got out of the vault, looting the place clean and forcing every cryopod open, as they wanted to at least give all of their now deceased neighbors a proper grave instead of being eternally sealed in their icy tombs.

2287 AD, Sanctuary Hills, 10:00 Day one outside the vault

After a few hours and a lot of digging Alex and Nora managed to bury everyone else in the vault, including the skeletons of the employees, since the married couple weren't completely heartless to the Vault-Tec employees even though they tricked the entire neighborhood save for them; Alex and Nora went to their house and saw Codsworth who was caring for the house and had even repaired the holes in it, which was obvious due to the differently colored patches on the sides of the house, when the robotic butler noticed them and said, "As I live and breathe, Sir, Mum, is that really you?" Alex nodded saying, "Yeah, Buddy, it is us."

The Mr. Handy then says, "Should I get you two a snack, or something? Since you two have been in that vault for 210 years, ha ha!" Alex and Nora nod and then told him that Shaun had been kidnapped then asked if in the last sixty years he had seen a group of three people, two of which were wearing white and red hazmat suits, one which was dressed in leather and carrying a crying baby, to which he said that he had not seen such a group within the specified time then floated off to go get some irritated non-perishables to eat as well as a couple of Nuka-Colas. While Codsworth was doing that Alex and Nora stepped inside the house and repositioned the furniture to their former spots and positions then sat on the couch and cuddled with each other silently sobbing for their losses.

Me: Well that was a dark chapter, and yes, in this fic Nora's maiden name is Valentine, and everyone's favorite Synth detective was (and is) Nora's brother! Also, Kellogg got a taste of what his fate will be once the Oeder family catches up to him... also, I never got why the cryopods which contained the rest of your neighbors couldn't be opened, and allowed you to bury them, nor why Kellogg just simply decided to knock Nora/Nate out and then take Shaun? If anyone has any constructive criticism or any suggestions, feel free to review the chapter, you may also submit any OCs to me via email or PM but your submission must be in the format below.

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